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In front of the residence resembling a haunted house, two girls were standing outside the heavy door like imposing temple guardians.
 
In front of the residence resembling a haunted house, two girls were standing outside the heavy door like imposing temple guardians.
   
Asya and Orihime. Casting sharp gazes filled with anger, the two of them eyed Hal from head to foot as though performing an examination.
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Asya and Orhime. Casting sharp gazes filled with anger, the two of them eyed Hal from head to foot as though performing an examination.
   
 
(It's almost like they're mad at me, scolding me for being insensitive.)
 
(It's almost like they're mad at me, scolding me for being insensitive.)
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Hearing a non-human spirit discuss behavior "as a person," Hal felt rather indignant.
 
Hearing a non-human spirit discuss behavior "as a person," Hal felt rather indignant.
   
Looking at Asya and Orihime's expressions of serious anger, Hal hunched his neck.
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Looking at Asya and Orhime's expressions of serious anger, Hal hunched his neck.
   
 
In the worst case, this self-styled Hinokagutsuchi could very well be right...
 
In the worst case, this self-styled Hinokagutsuchi could very well be right...
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"We go way back. By this point, you're not going to cry over something like this, right..."
 
"We go way back. By this point, you're not going to cry over something like this, right..."
   
Hal answered like this precisely because he knew that his childhood friend possessed incomparable courage. However, Asya seemed inexplicably indignant while Orihime chuckled with a smile.
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Hal answered like this precisely because he knew that his childhood friend possessed incomparable courage. However, Asya seemed inexplicably indignant while Orhime chuckled with a smile.
   
 
Hence, the atmosphere relaxed and Hal was finally allowed to enter the house.
 
Hence, the atmosphere relaxed and Hal was finally allowed to enter the house.
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"Then please tell me where the cleaning equipment is kept. If there's anything missing—although this house feels like it's definitely missing something—I'll buy it later."
 
"Then please tell me where the cleaning equipment is kept. If there's anything missing—although this house feels like it's definitely missing something—I'll buy it later."
   
"Orihime-san, why don't you leave matters like purchasing to Haruomi?"
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"Orhime-san, why don't you leave matters like purchasing to Haruomi?"
   
 
"No, Haruga-kun is probably very tired so we must let him rest. If it's okay with you, Asya-san, please head over to Hazumi's side for me."
 
"No, Haruga-kun is probably very tired so we must let him rest. If it's okay with you, Asya-san, please head over to Hazumi's side for me."
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Asya spoke up after accompanying Hal to his study that also served as a bedroom.
 
Asya spoke up after accompanying Hal to his study that also served as a bedroom.
   
Orihime had gone to a nearby supermarket to shop. Although she had told him to rest, Hal still asked 'Need any help?'
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Orhime had gone to a nearby supermarket to shop. Although she had told him to rest, Hal still asked 'Need any help?'
   
 
'It's okay. Judging from this home's tragic state, Haruga-kun, you seem more than likely to be someone who's of no help in cleaning. I can probably handle things on my own, so don't feel obliged, just rest as much as you can.'
 
'It's okay. Judging from this home's tragic state, Haruga-kun, you seem more than likely to be someone who's of no help in cleaning. I can probably handle things on my own, so don't feel obliged, just rest as much as you can.'
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There should not be anything dangerous inside the house. However, the matter of Raak Al Soth remained unresolved, so there was no guarantee that the dragon would not devote his full effort towards locating Hal to launch an attack...
 
There should not be anything dangerous inside the house. However, the matter of Raak Al Soth remained unresolved, so there was no guarantee that the dragon would not devote his full effort towards locating Hal to launch an attack...
   
Worrying about the worst scenario, Hal ran towards the sound—Hal's living room.
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Worrying abou the worst scenario, Hal ran towards the sound—Hal's living room.
   
 
"What happened!?"
 
"What happened!?"
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Although it was a bit anticlimactic, Hal still asked. This home was not only old but had been left neglected until recently.
 
Although it was a bit anticlimactic, Hal still asked. This home was not only old but had been left neglected until recently.
   
It would not be strange for that type of creature to be present but Orihime shook her head. After pondering for a while, she drew herself next to Hal.
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It would not be strange for that type of creature to be present but Orhime shook her head. After pondering for a while, she drew herself next to Hal.
   
 
"Umm, Haruga-kun, you previously mentioned curses and hauntings, isn't that right? I am only asking in light of that... By any chance—Would your home have ''that''?"
 
"Umm, Haruga-kun, you previously mentioned curses and hauntings, isn't that right? I am only asking in light of that... By any chance—Would your home have ''that''?"
   
A question without an explicit subject. Orihime seemed to be taking precautions against something.
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A question without an explicit subject. Orhime seemed to be taking precautions against something.
   
 
Seeing his classmate a little nervous, Hal understood the point of her question. At the same time, another possibility occurred to him.
 
Seeing his classmate a little nervous, Hal understood the point of her question. At the same time, another possibility occurred to him.
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"—Indeed you're correct! Is that a ghost!?"
 
"—Indeed you're correct! Is that a ghost!?"
   
To think she was able to say the word "ghost" so nonchalantly, Orihime certainly belonged to the same generation as Hal.
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To think she was able to say the word "ghost" so nonchalantly, Orhime certainly belonged to the same generation as Hal.
   
 
After all, they were born and raised during times where dragons were matter-of-fact existences. Even when encountering supernatural phenomena, they were still able to quickly calm themselves.
 
After all, they were born and raised during times where dragons were matter-of-fact existences. Even when encountering supernatural phenomena, they were still able to quickly calm themselves.
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What happened last night could not possibly be unrelated to Soth's actions. Rather, it would be the opposite.
 
What happened last night could not possibly be unrelated to Soth's actions. Rather, it would be the opposite.
   
Soth's true target was Hal and Hinokagutsuchi, right? Orihime's cousin was simply caught up in the affair—
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Soth's true target was Hal and Hinokagutsuchi, right? Orhime's cousin was simply caught up in the affair—
   
   
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Since there were enough to go around, everyone took up their own pair of binoculars.
 
Since there were enough to go around, everyone took up their own pair of binoculars.
   
Zoned for redevelopment, the area clearly consisted mostly of empty land.
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Zoned for redevelopment, tha area clearly consisted mostly of empty land.
   
 
Extremely sparse in buildings and people, there was excellent visibility. The familiar Mansion could be seen clearly through binoculars.
 
Extremely sparse in buildings and people, there was excellent visibility. The familiar Mansion could be seen clearly through binoculars.

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