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The fox-wolf's demeanor was proper and dignified, looking very pretty. Indeed, among specimens of this type of beast, she could be considered a "beauty" perhaps.
 
The fox-wolf's demeanor was proper and dignified, looking very pretty. Indeed, among specimens of this type of beast, she could be considered a "beauty" perhaps.
   
Praised so strongly by the girl who was her covenantee, the white beast raised her head proudly, her solemn face brightening up.
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Praised so strongly by the girl who was her convenantee, the white beast raised her head proudly, her solemn face brightening up.
   
 
===Part 2===
 
===Part 2===
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As a bronze dragon, his giant body was enveloped in white—platinum-colored—flames.
 
As a bronze dragon, his giant body was enveloped in white—platinum-colored—flames.
   
Hal had seen this type of flame before. A few days ago when Hinokagutsuchi had saved Hal in Tokyo Station, these were the same flames that had surrounded her remains.
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Hal had seen this type of flame before. A few days agao when Hinokagutsuchi had saved Hal in Tokyo Station, these were the same flames that had surrounded her remains.
   
 
===Part 5===
 
===Part 5===
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The junior witch's care and consideration was forcing Asya to think rapidly. She originally intended to give Orihime orders to retreat to the back and provide cover fire.
 
The junior witch's care and consideration was forcing Asya to think rapidly. She originally intended to give Orihime orders to retreat to the back and provide cover fire.
   
But if she could make her way to Rushalka's side, it might be possible to bring out her last power and invoke pseudo-divinity.
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But if she could make her way to Rushalka's side, it might be possible to bring out her last power and invoke pseduo-divinity.
   
 
More importantly—
 
More importantly—
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(Indeed. The technique of dragonbane allowing one's followers to become "dragonslayers"... The magic of Soth's ilk is merely an imitation after all. Confirm with your own hands the true power I have entrusted to you!)
 
(Indeed. The technique of dragonbane allowing one's followers to become "dragonslayers"... The magic of Soth's ilk is merely an imitation after all. Confirm with your own hands the true power I have entrusted to you!)
   
Hinokagutsuchi goaded Hal by the side of his ear.
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Hinokagutuschi goaded Hal by the side of his ear.
   
 
(Now issue orders to your rune, the Bow Stars of the Southern Sky, to fire the dragonslaying bow!)
 
(Now issue orders to your rune, the Bow Stars of the Southern Sky, to fire the dragonslaying bow!)
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(This brat named Soth definitely studied the path of unorthodoxy diligently.)
 
(This brat named Soth definitely studied the path of unorthodoxy diligently.)
   
Hinokagutsuchi sneered lightly.
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Hinokagutuschi sneered lightly.
   
(But ultimately, it is mimicry of limited knowledge without the possession of flint. Although this side is an ''imitation'' as well... Thinking that an attack of this level could destroy the Bow would be truly underestimating the Bow's force of will!)
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(But ultimately, it is mimcry of limited knowledge without the possession of flint. Although this side is an ''imitation'' as well... Thinking that an attack of this level could destroy the Bow would be truly underestimating the Bow's force of will!)
   
 
Almost at the same time as the queen's shout, Rushalka finished exhaling her Frost Breath.
 
Almost at the same time as the queen's shout, Rushalka finished exhaling her Frost Breath.

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