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"By the way, may I ask why you wanted to see me?" said Asya while smiling fearlessly.
 
"By the way, may I ask why you wanted to see me?" said Asya while smiling fearlessly.
   
Elite dragons were very strong. Soth's combat power was undoubtedly above that of Rushalka and hers. Even so, Asya still smiled. This was to apply self-suggestion of "victory is mine."
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Elite dragons were very strong. Soth's combat power was undoubtedly above that of Rushalka and hers. Even so, Asya still smiled. This was to apply the self-suggestion of "victory is mine."
   
 
If she admitted defeat in her heart, that would mean the battle had ended before it even started!
 
If she admitted defeat in her heart, that would mean the battle had ended before it even started!
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It was as though the scales had lost their luster after being scorched by super-high temperature flames.
 
It was as though the scales had lost their luster after being scorched by super-high temperature flames.
   
"''Imitations'' they may be, but they do closely resemble female dragons of my race. With your blood, my stone tower will be able to acquire enough splendor. I offer you my thanks for this!"
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"''Imitations'' though they may be, but they do closely resemble female dragons of my race. With your blood, my stone tower will be able to acquire enough splendor. I offer you my thanks for this!"
   
 
Soth reached for Minadzuki that was coiled around the blood-red mini-Monolith and violently pulled off the unconscious serpentine dragon's giant body, tossing the leviathan away casually.
 
Soth reached for Minadzuki that was coiled around the blood-red mini-Monolith and violently pulled off the unconscious serpentine dragon's giant body, tossing the leviathan away casually.
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Rushalka's full-powered attack was blocked, but Asya nodded.
 
Rushalka's full-powered attack was blocked, but Asya nodded.
   
Since the enemy was elite, this outcome was predictable but Asya still insisted on going head to head with brute force.
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Since the enemy was an elite, this outcome was predictable but Asya still insisted on going head to head with brute force.
   
 
This was for the sake of using strategy and skill to craftily strike at enemy openings after the contest of strength.
 
This was for the sake of using strategy and skill to craftily strike at enemy openings after the contest of strength.
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Using a mystic technique originating from lunar divinity to erase her appearance and presence, Rushalka successfully teleported from darkness to darkness—
 
Using a mystic technique originating from lunar divinity to erase her appearance and presence, Rushalka successfully teleported from darkness to darkness—
   
Soth had apparently focused too much on the grand contest of strength, thus exposing an opening. While he was reacting a moment too slow, Asya gave permission to attack.
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Soth had apparently focused too much on the grand contest of strength, thus exposing an opening. While he reacted a moment too late, Asya gave permission to attack.
   
 
"Rushalka! Bite and sever Soth's throat!"
 
"Rushalka! Bite and sever Soth's throat!"
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"Fighting... is probably okay. Although I'm not too sure what to do exactly, that child—Akuro-Ou—will protect me and she even told me to leave everything to her."
 
"Fighting... is probably okay. Although I'm not too sure what to do exactly, that child—Akuro-Ou—will protect me and she even told me to leave everything to her."
   
"But that 'serpent' is just a newborn!?"
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"But that 'serpent' is just a newborn!"
   
 
Asya was shocked after hearing her junior's report but understood at the same time.
 
Asya was shocked after hearing her junior's report but understood at the same time.
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Soth's target was said to be Haruga Haruomi. For this purpose, Soth had used strange magic to create a mini-Monolith and captured Orihime's cousin and her "serpent."
 
Soth's target was said to be Haruga Haruomi. For this purpose, Soth had used strange magic to create a mini-Monolith and captured Orihime's cousin and her "serpent."
   
Of course, since Hinokagutsuchi was the one who said it, total veracity was as yet unconfirmed.
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Of course, since Hinokagutsuchi was the one who said it, the total veracity was as yet unconfirmed.
   
 
Even so, Hal was feeling even more unpleasant than if he had an eel stuck in his throat. Also, if a girl younger than himself were to be sacrificed—
 
Even so, Hal was feeling even more unpleasant than if he had an eel stuck in his throat. Also, if a girl younger than himself were to be sacrificed—
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"Quiet, just shut up..."
 
"Quiet, just shut up..."
   
(Fufu, do know that I am praising you. Men need to be a little idiotic in order to be adorable.)
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(Fufu, you do know that I am praising you. Men need to be a little idiotic in order to be adorable.)
   
 
The girl who called herself the devil was chuckling while exaggerating things on purpose.
 
The girl who called herself the devil was chuckling while exaggerating things on purpose.
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Hal gazed into the girl's delicate and proper face.
 
Hal gazed into the girl's delicate and proper face.
   
She was someone who shared her life with a "dragon" or its close relative. In that case, surely she must be able to hear his voice.
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She was someone who shared her life with a "dragon", or its close relative. In that case, surely she must be able to hear his voice.
   
 
Because for dragonkind, I am—we are—their natural enemy, a tyrant and a hated existence as well as being the target of their fear, loyalty and betrayal.
 
Because for dragonkind, I am—we are—their natural enemy, a tyrant and a hated existence as well as being the target of their fear, loyalty and betrayal.
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"I've heard about you."
 
"I've heard about you."
   
After Hal brought up Orihime's name to reassure her and gain her trust, Hazumi sat up straight in seiza posture.
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After Hal brought up Orihime's name to ease her worries and earn her trust, Hazumi sat up straight in seiza posture.
   
 
She was sitting formally on the bed, gazing at her cousin's acquaintance. Feeling such an honest gaze, Hal instantly felt a little timid.
 
She was sitting formally on the bed, gazing at her cousin's acquaintance. Feeling such an honest gaze, Hal instantly felt a little timid.
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Finding Hazumi quite unfamiliar with knowledge in this area, Hal decided to explain.
 
Finding Hazumi quite unfamiliar with knowledge in this area, Hal decided to explain.
   
Speaking of which, the incidence of the magic-wielding elite dragons was relatively low in East Asia.
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Speaking of which, incidents involving the magic-wielding elite dragons were relatively low in East Asia.
   
 
Hence, it was only natural for her not to have crossed paths with such knowledge.
 
Hence, it was only natural for her not to have crossed paths with such knowledge.
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Kuohhhhhhhhhhh! The fox-wolf roared vigorously in response.
 
Kuohhhhhhhhhhh! The fox-wolf roared vigorously in response.
   
Orihime seemed to have gotten used to controlling a "serpent." The nine serpentine tails began to ignite at their tips. The pseudo-divinity of Fire was releasing fireballs from each tail.
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Orihime seemed to have gotten used to controlling her "serpent." The nine serpentine tails began to ignite at their tips. The pseudo-divinity of Fire was releasing fireballs from each tail.
   
 
These fireballs flew towards Soth again, but—
 
These fireballs flew towards Soth again, but—
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The incandescent Soth casually made a thrust with the sword.
 
The incandescent Soth casually made a thrust with the sword.
   
Akuro-Ou showed no intent to resist, like a traitor kneeling before the former master after challenging the king and unfortunately meeting defeat. Orihime yelled, "Akuro-Ou!?"
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Akuro-Ou showed no intent to resist, like a traitor who was kneeling before his former master after challenging the king and unfortunately being defeated. Orihime yelled, "Akuro-Ou!?"
   
 
In addition, Asya was also shocked by a new discovery.
 
In addition, Asya was also shocked by a new discovery.
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But no matter how Asya communicated telepathically, Rushalka still had no response at all. The situation was clearly quite urgent.
 
But no matter how Asya communicated telepathically, Rushalka still had no response at all. The situation was clearly quite urgent.
   
Hence, Orihime's face went tense and she said slowly, "In that case, Asya-san, I will do my best for a while. I might not last very long but please take this opportunity to confirm her... confirm Rushalka's condition!"
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Hence, Orihime's face tensed up as she said slowly, "In that case, Asya-san, I will do my best for a while. I might not last very long but please take this opportunity to confirm her... confirm Rushalka's condition!"
   
The junior witch's care and consideration was forcing Asya to think rapidly. She originally intended to give Orihime orders to retreat to the back and provide cover fire.
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The junior witch's care and consideration was making Asya's brain spin rapidly. She originally intended to give Orihime orders to retreat to the back and provide cover fire.
   
 
But if she could make her way to Rushalka's side, it might be possible to bring out her last power and invoke pseudo-divinity.
 
But if she could make her way to Rushalka's side, it might be possible to bring out her last power and invoke pseudo-divinity.
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He committed himself decisively. The one who needed him most right now was somewhere else.
 
He committed himself decisively. The one who needed him most right now was somewhere else.
   
Staring at Hazumi, Hal was thinking it would be bad if he made her cry. The younger girl nodded lightly. After seeing Hal's serious expression, she seemed able to sympathize.
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Staring at Hazumi, Hal was thinking it would be bad if he made her cry. The younger girl nodded lightly. After seeing Hal's serious expression, she seemed to be able to sympathize.
   
 
"I-I understand. Then where are you going, Haruga-san...!?"
 
"I-I understand. Then where are you going, Haruga-san...!?"
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"Not everything. Rather, I hope you'll give me what's the most important."
 
"Not everything. Rather, I hope you'll give me what's the most important."
   
"H-Haruomi! Please don't joke around in this kind of emergency. Y-You need to pick the right timing and location for this type of confession. No common sense at all. You're such a big jerk!"
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"H-Haruomi! Please don't joke around in this kind of emergency. Y-You need to pick the right timing and location for this type of confession. Yon have no common sense at all. You're such a big jerk!"
   
 
Asya suddenly closed in.
 
Asya suddenly closed in.
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Hal embraced Asya in his bosom. This was to get a deeper experience of the bond connecting him with Asya.
 
Hal embraced Asya in his bosom. This was to get a deeper experience of the bond connecting him with Asya.
   
Her body, as delicate as a fairy's, felt even softer and warmer than imagined. Held in Hal's arms, Asya changed her expression in alarm.
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Her body, as delicate as a fairy's, felt even softer and warmer than he had imagined. Held in Hal's arms, Asya changed her expression in alarm.
   
 
"Magical power! Haruomi, why are you able to—"
 
"Magical power! Haruomi, why are you able to—"
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Embracing Asya with his left arm, Hal pushed his other hand forward.
 
Embracing Asya with his left arm, Hal pushed his other hand forward.
   
Compared to last time, Hal understood more clearly the method of usage. Aiming the Rune of the Bow, carved on his right palm, towards Soth in the sky, he prayed silently for Rushalka who served as the medium.
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Compared to last time, Hal understood more clearly the method of usage. Aiming the Rune of the Bow carved on his right palm towards Soth in the sky, he prayed silently to Rushalka who served as the medium.
   
 
—Using this rune, perform the magic of the Bow.
 
—Using this rune, perform the magic of the Bow.

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