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Although his choice of words sounded like a joke, Hal's tone was very serious.
 
Although his choice of words sounded like a joke, Hal's tone was very serious.
   
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Once again, he shielded Hazumi behind him and waited for the enemy to announce his intentions. Rather, that was all he could do.
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Once again, he shielded Hazumi bhiend him and waited for the enemy to announce his intentions. Rather, that was all he could do.
   
 
"Shirasaka, tell Minadzuki to retreat first. She'll get taken out at this rate!"
 
"Shirasaka, tell Minadzuki to retreat first. She'll get taken out at this rate!"
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By the time anyone noticed, the sky was filled with dark clouds while lightning descended repeatedly.
 
By the time anyone noticed, the sky was filled with dark clouds while lightning descended repeatedly.
   
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Orihime looked towards the Diet Building, only to see Pavel Galad raising the dragonslaying sword up high. Then a gigantic lightning serpent appeared behind him, raising its scythe-like neck.
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Orihime looked towards the Diet Building, only to see Pavel Galad raising the dragonslaying sword up high. Then a gigantic lightning serpent appeared behind me, raising its scythe-like neck.
   
 
The lightning serpent's head was almost as tall as the roof of a nearby high-rise building!
 
The lightning serpent's head was almost as tall as the roof of a nearby high-rise building!
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"Use pseudo-divinity to change forms. Begin to accelerate!"
 
"Use pseudo-divinity to change forms. Begin to accelerate!"
   
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The injured "serpent" responded to her covenantee's orders with a roar.
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The injured "serpent" responded to her covanantee's orders with a roar.
   
 
Kyuahhhhhhhhh!
 
Kyuahhhhhhhhh!

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