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"...Oh dear, although this is normally a female bath, it'd be too ungentlemanly to engage in obscene delusions here. I've got to be careful."
 
"...Oh dear, although this is normally a female bath, it'd be too ungentlemanly to engage in obscene delusions here. I've got to be careful."
   
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Despite his self-awareness as a closet pervert, Hal still wanted to exercise gentlemanly restraint. Due to the vast amount of imagined scenes surfacing in his mind, Hal had to convince himself in this manner.
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Despite his self-awareness as a repressed pervert, Hal still wanted to exercise gentlemanly restraint. Due to the vast amount of imagined scenes surfacing in his mind, Hal had to convince himself in this manner.
   
 
Then just as he was getting out of the bath, Hal heard an unexpected voice.
 
Then just as he was getting out of the bath, Hal heard an unexpected voice.
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"No no no, I can't possibly do such unspeakable things to Shirasaka. That's what I believe. Essentially. Probably."
 
"No no no, I can't possibly do such unspeakable things to Shirasaka. That's what I believe. Essentially. Probably."
   
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"See? Although your assertions cannot be trusted seeing as you are the self-styled closet pervert, the case is even more evident now that you have failed to make an assertion. Don't you agree, Hazumi?"
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"See? Although your assertions cannot be trusted seeing as you are the self-styled repressed pervert, the case is even more evident now that you have failed to make an assertion. Don't you agree, Hazumi?"
   
 
"I-I think that... S-Senpai is the one person who won't do such things, Nee-sama!"
 
"I-I think that... S-Senpai is the one person who won't do such things, Nee-sama!"
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Consequently, Hal and Asya rushed over in haste.
 
Consequently, Hal and Asya rushed over in haste.
   
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Under the gazes of four people including Hazumi and Orihime, President M slowly began to speak, "Two full days of training has led to my ascension to a new realm. The way I am now, I feel that I can even oppose the Great Old Ones and phantasmal demons from the macrocosm's abyss..."
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Under the gazes of four people including Hazumi and Orihime, President M slowly began to speak, "Two full days of training has led to my ascension to a new realm. The way I am now, I feel that I can even oppose elder gods and phantasmal demons from the macrocosm's abyss..."
   
 
"A-Amazing..."
 
"A-Amazing..."

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