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"The shrine worshiping Goddess Hinokagutsuchi apparently holds a ceremony to pay respects to the Dragon Palace once every few years," said Hal while looking at his usual laptop.
 
"The shrine worshiping Goddess Hinokagutsuchi apparently holds a ceremony to pay respects to the Dragon Palace once every few years," said Hal while looking at his usual laptop.
   
Asya, Orihime, Hazumi and Luna Francois—The witches were all gathered in one room too.
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Asya, Orihime, Hazumi and Luna Francois&mash;The witches were all gathered in one room too.
   
 
"It's said that an exceptionally good-looking shrine maiden had to set sail with the signpost in her hand. 'If a shrine maiden sets sail together with this stone, a messenger will greet her as a guide to reach the Dragon Palace...' Hinokagutsuchi seems to be the type to issue divine decrees, I guess."
 
"It's said that an exceptionally good-looking shrine maiden had to set sail with the signpost in her hand. 'If a shrine maiden sets sail together with this stone, a messenger will greet her as a guide to reach the Dragon Palace...' Hinokagutsuchi seems to be the type to issue divine decrees, I guess."
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The laptop was displaying the shrine information he described. In addition, Hal had talked at length with the local priest to obtain all kinds of information.
 
The laptop was displaying the shrine information he described. In addition, Hal had talked at length with the local priest to obtain all kinds of information.
   
"According to records, they apparently held this ceremony during the century from 1602 in the late Sengoku era until the Kyouhou Reforms."
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"According to records, they apparently held thiis ceremony during the century from 1602 in the late Sengoku era until the Kyouhou Reforms."
   
 
After listening to Hal's report, the reserved but inquisitive Hazumi asked incredulously, "May I ask why the ceremony was later discontinued?"
 
After listening to Hal's report, the reserved but inquisitive Hazumi asked incredulously, "May I ask why the ceremony was later discontinued?"
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The attack yesterday had taken place during bath time too. Hal had the magic gun on his lap while he stayed vigilant of surroundings.
 
The attack yesterday had taken place during bath time too. Hal had the magic gun on his lap while he stayed vigilant of surroundings.
   
"Despite liking girls so much, you don't enter the female bath very often."
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"Depite liking girls so much, you don't enter the female bath very often."
   
 
"Pay it no mind. This is simply a principle of mine. Whenever I summon a girl to the bath, I must not stop until I have given every inch of her skin some loving..."
 
"Pay it no mind. This is simply a principle of mine. Whenever I summon a girl to the bath, I must not stop until I have given every inch of her skin some loving..."
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"Hmm, no mistake about it. That there is the Dragon Palace Court... The minion that used to serve as my residence," said Hinokagutsuchi softly.
 
"Hmm, no mistake about it. That there is the Dragon Palace Court... The minion that used to serve as my residence," said Hinokagutsuchi softly.
   
As predicted, it was minion belonging to the same lineage as Genbu-Ou.
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As predicted, it was minion belonging under the same system as Genbu-Ou.
   
 
However, the size difference between them was out of this world. Hal was rendered speechless.
 
However, the size difference between them was out of this world. Hal was rendered speechless.
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Faced with this landslide victory, Hal, Orihime and Luna Francois could not help but stare wide-eyed.
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Faced with this landslide victory, Hal, Orihime and Luna Francois could not hep but stare wide-eyed.
   
 
But at that very instant, the sound of clanging chains appeared. Apart from that, they could hear the chain user's mantra—A dragonslaying incantation.
 
But at that very instant, the sound of clanging chains appeared. Apart from that, they could hear the chain user's mantra—A dragonslaying incantation.

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