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First of all, one must introduce the miraculous properties of the QX metal serving as the power source.
 
First of all, one must introduce the miraculous properties of the QX metal serving as the power source.
   
Just by exposing molten QX metal to special radiation then letting it come into contact with "copper," the copper would start flying away at super-high speed in a straight line.
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Just by exposing molten QX metal to special radiation then letting it come into contact with "copper," the copper would start flying away at super high speed in a straight line.
   
 
This allowed for impressive flight capabilities, sufficient to escape the Earth's surface, break past the atmosphere and fly to the farthest reaches of the universe.
 
This allowed for impressive flight capabilities, sufficient to escape the Earth's surface, break past the atmosphere and fly to the farthest reaches of the universe.
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He offered positive comments for the overall story but concluded with that sentence.
 
He offered positive comments for the overall story but concluded with that sentence.
   
"If I had to use modern Japan as analogy, it'd be like a fantasy novelist at M● Bunko J criticizing a peer's romantic comedy 'using a school as the stage is too lowbrow.' His own novels were clearly published in pulp magazines, in particular, the horror magazine ''Weird Tales'' as well as ''Amazing Stories'' and ''Astounding Stories'' both of which specialized in publishing science fiction novels."
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"If I had to use modern Japan as analogy, it'd be like a fantasy novelist at M● Bunko J criticizing a peer's romantic comedy 'using a school as the stage is too lowbrow. His own novels were clearly published in pulp magazines, in particular, the horror magazine ''Weird Tales'' as well as ''Amazing Stories'' and ''Astounding Stories'' both of which specialized in publishing science fiction novels."
   
 
"I don't quite follow, but it does sound a bit strange."
 
"I don't quite follow, but it does sound a bit strange."

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