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Just as she expected, Haruomi was unsettled. Every attack from her, conducted with feigned naturalness, were striking right on target. There was no better description than "Just as planned!"
 
Just as she expected, Haruomi was unsettled. Every attack from her, conducted with feigned naturalness, were striking right on target. There was no better description than "Just as planned!"
   
Asya was certain that the two of them, leaning close together on the escort ship's deck, definitely looked like a young and inexperienced couple to the eyes of outsiders!
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Asya was certain that the two of them,, leaning close together on the escort ship's deck, definitely looked like a young an inexperienced couple to the eyes of outsiders!
   
 
Of course, they might feel that it would be unseemly for them to be acting lovey-dovey just before a crucial and decisive battle.
 
Of course, they might feel that it would be unseemly for them to be acting lovey-dovey just before a crucial and decisive battle.

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