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== Chapter 2 - Leitmeritz ==
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He was having a bad dream.
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''I had a dream. It was not a good one.''
   
''Our forces were gathered on a small hill.''
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''On a small hill, our forces were gathered.''
   
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''Right now, it is meal time. The fire burned high before the soldiers. A fish was placed in a pot.''
''It was meal time. The soldiers put a pot that was as deep as a barrel on a mound, which had been turned into a stove. They were preparing a fish stew.''
 
   
''There was a slight ridge before the Dinant Plains, which plateaued with no end in sight.''
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''There is a slight ridge before Dinant Plains, which plateaued with no end in sight. There, twenty thousand of Brune's soldiers were located. I was eating as always, five-thousand soldiers around me enveloped in the steam of their meal.''
   
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Tigre and Massas were talking when a number of young men appeared.
''There were twenty thousand Brune soldiers sharing a meal with his own troops. Thousands of streams of heat floated upward, and the soldiers seemed as though they were imprisoned in the steam.''
 
 
Tigre and Mashas were talking while stirring the food in the pot when a few young men appeared in front of their eyes with the colliding sound of their armor.
 
   
 
“So you came as well, Vorn.”
 
“So you came as well, Vorn.”
   
The man who said that with an openly mocking tone was Zion Thenardier.
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The man, Zaien Tenardia, spoke with an openly mocking tone.
 
The Thenardier house held the title of Duke. It was a long and distinguished family incomparable to the Vorn household. It had many aristocrats who held enormous power, and the territory it owned was wide. It was said that the number of soldiers mobilized by their household could reach ten thousand. Even in this war, which had been organized in a haste, they commanded a force four thousand strong. Zion was the Thenardier family's eldest son and heir. He was currently 17 years old. Though he wore decorated armor and bore a splendid sword at his waist in an imposing manner worthy of his lineage, he always had an expression as though he was looking down on others. At his back was an entourage of young men flattering him. Like Zion, they were aristocrats born into families holding the rank of marquis or duke. They wore glittering armor with their respective household's crest. They looked at Tigre with a grimace, and did not seem to harbor any good intentions.
 
   
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The Tenardia house held the title of duke. They were a long distinguished family incomparable to the Vorn household. Many powerful aristocrat's relatives were employed there, and the territory they owned was wide. It is said the soldiers mobilized by the household can number up to ten-thousand.
 
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Tigre could not simply ignore them, and felt obliged to show a minimal courtesy.
 
   
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Even in this war, which was organized in haste, they commanded a force four-thousand strong.
“... I am here to serve as His Majesty's loyal subject, so I came here as quickly as possible.”
 
   
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Zaien was the Tenardia family's eldest son and heir to the household. He was currently 17 years old.
“Though it's quite admirable to say that, I'm not sure how helpful you'll be.”
 
   
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He wore decorated armor and bore a splendid sword at his waist worthy of his lineage. He always had an expression as if looking down on others.
After Zion ridiculed Tigre, the laughter of the other nobles overlapped with his own. Perhaps it was because their ages were similar, but Zion frequently made fun of Tigre in such a manner.
 
   
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Behind him was an entourage of young men.
“I told you before, your family has merely hunted for four or five generations. I can hardly recognize you as a noble.”
 
   
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Zaien was born to the grand family of a duke, wearing glittering armor with an engraved crest. He looked at Tigre with a grin.
He spat out those words arrogantly and immediately tried to stomp Tigre's bow, which was laying on the ground.
 
   
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Tigre could not ignore him. It was unavoidable he should show the minimal courtesy.
Tigre moved reflexively, picking up his bow as quickly as a wild beast.
 
   
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“... I am here to serve as His Majesty's loyal subject. I rally to his flag.”
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“It's admirable to say that, though I'm not sure how helpful you'll be.”
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Zaien ridiculed Tigre, the laughter of the other nobles overlapping his own. Zaien frequently harassed Tigre in such a manner as their age is similar.
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“I told you before, your family has merely hunted for four or five generations. I can hardly recognize you as a noble.”
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He spat out those words and stomped down at Tigre's bow laying on the ground.
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Tigre moved in a reflexive manner, picking up his bow with agile movements, reminiscent of a beast's.
 
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''“Uwah!”''
 
   
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“Uwa!”
Zion stumbled, losing his balance and falling hard on the ground, taking one of his followers down with him.
 
   
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Having lost balance, Zaien and the people nearby fell over.
“How dare you do that to Master Zion!”
 
   
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“What are you doing to Zaien-sama, you!”
To the enraged followers who roared at him, Tigre yelled back:
 
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This enraged his entourage, who began to yell at Tigre.
   
 
“I was protecting my bow!”
 
“I was protecting my bow!”
   
“A bow? If it's a bow, so what, you coward!”
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“Bow? The bow is a weapon of a coward!”
   
“That's right. There's nothing wrong in breaking this crap. You should be on the front lines with a sword!”
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“That's right. You should just break that embarrassing thing. You should be on the front lines with a sword!”
   
“I'm sure that the God of War, Trigraf, would never give his blessings to someone like you!”
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“Someone like you, I'm sure the God of War, Trigraf, would never give you his blessings!”
   
The other followers expressed their approval one after another. Tigre grit his teeth in anger.
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The other people spoke in agreement. Tigre grit his teeth.
   
In the Kingdom of Brune, their complaints were acceptable.
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In this place, in Brune Kingdom, their complaints were appropriate.
   
''“The bow is the weapon of a coward who does not have the courage to expose his body before a naked blade.”''
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“The bow is the arm of a cowardly person who does not have the courage to expose his body before a naked blade.”
   
Such train of thoughts were deeply rooted in the Brune Army, which made little use of the bow. Not only were the achievements of archers disregarded, but archers in general were as well.
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Such ideology was deep rooted in the Brune Army, which made little use of the bow.
   
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The achievement of those seen as excellent archers are considered after others, or perhaps never a subject of evaluation.
''“Archers are all drafted hunters, farmers who do not own land, people who have committed a serious crime as a warrior -- or those who aren't skilled with the sword or the spear, to fill out the ranks."''
 
   
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“The archers, the drafted hunters, and the farmers who do not own land. They are those who have committed a serious crime as warriors. You should choose a sword or a spear, not a weapon those inferior people would use.”
 
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Due to such a status quo, those who used bows, even as soldiers, were regarded as criminals and useless failures that were looked down upon.
 
   
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Due to such a standard, those who used bows, even as soldiers, were abused like criminals or made fun of for the skill they had chosen.
Although Tigre's ancestor had been presented with territory for hunting and the title of earl for his distinguished military services, Mashas had told him, "If he hadn't been a hunter, he'd probably have been promoted to an even higher rank."
 
   
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Though Tigre's ancestor performed distinguished military services and was presented with a territory for hunting and the title of Earl, Massas told him, “he would be more praised if he were not a hunter.”
“Calm down, you guys.”
 
   
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“Calm down, everyone.”
With some help, Zion managed to stand up, and put a stop to his followers' actions. Though they were reluctant, they stopped blaming Tigre.
 
   
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Zaien stood up with help and controlled his followers.
Zion put on an act while getting rid of the dust on his armor. He crossed his arms and laughed scornfully at Tigre.
 
   
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Though reluctant to, he stopped blaming Tigre
"The reason why you stick to the bow is because you can't handle a sword or a spear, right? You probably think that if you head into the battlefield with a bow, it would barely be enough to pretend at being a soldier, right?"
 
   
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The cloud of dust on Zaien's body was unnaturally brushed off. Zaien crossed his arms and laughed at Tigre in scorn.
Tigre remained silent. It was true he was poor with the sword and spear. If he objected here, Zion would ask him to take up a sword or a spear and demonstrate his skills, and laugh at him. This had already happened once before.
 
   
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“The reason you stick to bow is because you can't handle a sword or spear, right? At least, if you head to the battlefield with a bow, you can pretend to be a soldier.”
Zion did not stop taunting him there.
 
   
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Tigre remained silent. It was true he was poor with the sword and spear.
“To begin with, you are an earl of the Kingdom of Brune, yet you can't use a sword or a spear and plan to head to the battlefield without wearing armor. Aren't you ashamed? Guys, look at his shabby appearance. He has a leather plate, leather gauntlets and even leather leggings. All his equipment is made of leather. At most, his mantle is decent, but if that's the only presentable part, then I really feel sad about the financial situation of his territory.”
 
   
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If he objected here and took up a sword or spear, Zaien would simply laugh again. This had happened once before.
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Zaien's taunt continued.
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“To begin with, you are an Earl of the Kingdom of Brune and you can't use a sword or a spear. Isn't it shameful to head to the battlefield without wearing armor? Look, look at his shabby appearance. He has a leather gauntlet, leather armor, and even leather greaves. At most, his mantle is decent. His financial condition must be downright pathetic.”
 
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“--- Lord Zion.”
 
   
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“--- Lord Zaien.”
Mashas, who had remained silent until then, spoke sullenly.
 
   
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Massas, who had remained silent until then, spoke sullenly.
“Your words have been insightful. However, since you said so much at once, surely you have become thirsty.”
 
   
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“Your words are eloquently spoken, however, if you say so much, surely you will become thirsty...”
He continued while pointing in a certain direction.
 
   
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He continued while pointing in a certain direction.
“There's some rayion wine being distributed over there. Why not try drinking some, to relieve your thirst?”
 
   
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“Why not ration out the wine and cure that thirst.”
Using a polite and humble tone, Mashas's attitude pressured the other side.
 
   
The dignity of this old knight, who had just turned 55, was intimidating to Zion.
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Using a polite and humble tone, Massas' attitude put pressure on the other side. The dignity of this old knight, who had just turned 55, made Zaien swallow.
   
Zion grunted and stepped back involuntarily as he became aware that he forgot his manners. He then snorted and turned around.
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Zaien grunted and stepped back involuntarily, right into a pile of dung. He then turned around.
   
“Hey, let's go.”
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“Let's go, everyone.”
   
Tigre watched Zion and the others walk away, and thanked Mashas after checking his bow's condition.
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Watching Zaien and the others walk away, Tigre thanked Massas after checking his bow's condition.
   
 
“Thank you. You saved me.”
 
“Thank you. You saved me.”
   
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“No, no, I'm sorry I couldn't say anything earlier.”
“It's nothing. I should be the one to apologize. It would have been better if I had intervened earlier, but I couldn't find an opportunity to barge in.”
 
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From Zaien's perspective, Massas' small aristocracy was no different from Tigre's. Regarding the timing, their families existed for a similar amount of time. He simply would snort with laughter.
   
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While returning to stir the pan, Massas looked about the area casually.
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From Zion's perspective, Mashas was a weak aristocrat no different from Tigre. If the former didn't get the timing right, he would simply snort with laughter.
 
   
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Soldiers, other aristocrats, all were concentrated on their pots, polishing their armor, or amusing themselves with chatter. There was nothing unnatural to be seen.
While returning to stir the pan, Mashas looked about the area casually.
 
   
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They were afraid of Zaien and avoided relations with Tigre.
Whether soldier or aristocrat, all were concentrated on their pots, or were taking care of their arms while entertaining themselves with chatter. Not a single person looked their way, and that indifference reached an unnatural state.
 
   
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“I know you can handle the sword and spear, but it is not a proof of courage.”
They were all afraid of Zion, so they avoided relations with Tigre.
 
   
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Massas spoke in irony. Tigre moved closer on the log. He listened to the conversation of the nearby aristocrats.
“I now understand that handling the sword and spear is not proof of courage.”
 
   
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“By the way, did you hear about Duke Ganelon?”
Mashas spoke in irony. Tigre wanted to say something to him, but shut his mouth at the end. Not far away, the barely audible voices of nobles gathered together reached his ears.
 
   
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“Are you talking about him increasing taxes on the pretext of preparing for war?”
“By the way, did you hear about what Duke Ganelon did?”
 
 
“Are you talking about him increasing taxes, using war preparations as an excuse?”
 
 
“That's right. If there is a young girl in a house that's not paying taxes, she will be taken away. If there isn't one, then the house is set on fire.”
 
 
“It's really enviable. I'd like to have the authority to place a temporary tax too.”
 
   
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“That's right. If there is a young girl in a house not paying taxes, she is kidnapped and the house set on fire as punishment.”
   
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“It's a bit enviable, having the authority to place a temporary tax.”
 
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The aristocrat didn't look resentful. He was simply grumbling in dissatisfaction.
 
   
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He felt a righteous indignation. The aristocrat complained.
Duke Ganelon was one of the most influential nobles of the Kingdom of Brune, on par with Thenardier. There were many powerful aristocrats amongst his relatives as well. His power, too, was something not even the king could ignore.
 
   
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Duke Ganelon and Tenardia are the major Dukedoms of Brune Kingdom.
When it came to territory, Brune nobles were allowed to govern pieces of land, but for certain privileges, such as setting taxes, the permission of the king was necessary.
 
   
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There were many powerful aristocrats amongst his relatives as well. His power was not something the King could disregard.
Duke Ganelon not only went against this rule and imposed taxes without consulting the king, but also did these inhuman things in his territory. Yet, the king still tolerated it.
 
   
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Regarding the territory, Brune nobles are recognized and allowed to govern a territory, but for setting taxes and a few other privileges, the permission of the King is necessary.
“For a story like that, Duke Thenardier is not inferior. He ordered his people to stop drinking for as long as the war goes on. They had to hand over all of their alcohol as an oath to the gods."
 
   
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Ganelon imposed it, causing an outrage to break out from the people within his territory, but the King seemed to tolerate it.
“I see. But it's not hard to hide or make alcohol. What happens to those who are found guilty of violating the ban?”
 
   
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“For a story like that, Sir Tenardia will not be beaten easily. He has taken an oath for as long as the war continues that not a single drop of alcohol can be sold.”
"The part about kidnapping the family's daughters is similar to Ganelon's method, but as a warning I hear that swords are given to the husband and wife or to the father and son, and they're made to kill each other with it. It seems that they even bet on who will win."
 
   
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“I see. But it's not hard to make it. What happens to those found making alcohol?”
Tigre clenched his fist after hearing the conversation.
 
   
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“Ganelon took to kidnapping the family's daughters. As for this, a sword is given to husband and wife or the father and son and they are made to kill each other. I hear they bet on who wins.”
Mashas placed a wrinkled hand on Tigre's knee as he was about to stand up.
 
   
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Tigre clenched his fist, hearing their conversation.
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Massas placed a wrinkled hand on Tigre's knee as he was about to stand up.
 
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“Calm down.”
 
“Calm down.”
   
“How can I possibly remain calm!?”
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“What, how can I possibly remain calm?”
   
“Though it may be harsh of me to say this, nothing would change, even if you said something.”
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“Though it may be harsh of me to say, but nothing can be done, even if you say something.”
   
He was right. Tigre sat back down, but his rage was still boiling inside him.
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He was right. Tigre sat back down, boiling with anger.
   
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He wished to shout his feelings, but he desperately grit his teeth and remained quiet.
He desperately ground his teeth and held his tongue in order to restrain himself from acting on impulse.
 
   
He was angry because Ganelon and Thenardier did not regard the people within their dominion as humans. They did not hesitate in their cruelty. He was angry at the men who spoke lightly of such cruel matters and those who overlooked such things without any scruple. Finally, he was angry at his own powerlessness, as he knew he could do nothing.
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He was angry because Ganelon and Tenardia did not regard the people within their dominion to be human. They did not hesitate in their cruelty. He was angry at the content of the conversation and at the men who spoke proudly of such things. Finally, he was angry at his helplessness as he knew he could do nothing.
   
“The story just now... is it true?”
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“The story just now, is it true?”
   
“Though it is a rumor, there have been many others similar to this one. Still, the people in question have not denied it. You rarely come to the capital, so it's no wonder you didn't know about this.”
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“Though it is a rumor... there have been many similar rumors. Still, the people in question have not denied it. They do not appear that often, so we have no way of knowing.”
   
Maybe this really couldn't be helped.
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It cannot be helped.
   
 
Tigre hardly left his territory, the land of Alsace.
 
Tigre hardly left his territory, the land of Alsace.
   
He had no desire to rise in the world and gain fame or glory, nor did he have any ambition. That's why he was not interested in his status as an aristocrat.
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He had no desire to rise in the world, nor did he have any ambition. He was not interested in his status as an aristocrat.
   
Plus, in his mind, he had no intention of dealing with Zion, who was one of the sons of the nobles.
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Zaien, as well, was the only son of a large aristocrat, and the only one he met face to face.
 
“His Majesty still tolerates such behavior...?” he asked fearfully.
 
   
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“His Majesty, he is tolerant of such behavior...?”
 
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Fearfully, he asked.
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He did not want to believe it.
 
He did not want to believe it.
   
 
“Certainly, His Majesty has said nothing to them at the present.”
 
“Certainly, His Majesty has said nothing to them at the present.”
   
Mashas's stocky body trembled as he shook his head grumpily.
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Massas' stocky body trembled as he shook his head grumpily.
   
“I believe His Majesty has his own matters to settle. One day, if His Majesty can't control them anymore, at least Prince Regnas should...”
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“I believe it is possible His Majesty does not know... It is certainly possible for both His Highness, Prince Regnas, and our King to not know.”
   
Mashas's eyes clung to the slender hope. Suddenly, he looked up and stared at Tigre. Distracted, Tigre saw Mashas's finger coming towards him, aiming at his mouth, and poking him there.
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Massas' eyes clung to the slender hope. Suddenly, he looked up and saw Tigre. Without thinking, he reached up and thrust his finger into Tigre's mouth.
   
 
“Fue...?”
 
“Fue...?”
   
It was too abrupt. No words could come out from Tigre's mouth.
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It was too abrupt. No words would come out.
   
Furthermore, the hand blocking his mouth was kind of cold, and had an indescribable iron taste.
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Furthermore, the fingers were cold and tasted like iron.
   
   
   
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When he awoke, a dim ceiling was in Tigre's view.
 
When he awoke, a dim ceiling was in Tigre's view.
   
“--- So you finally woke up.”
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“--- So you woke up with this guy.”
   
Tigre heard a voice which lacked intonation. Immediately after that, he felt something withdrawn from his mouth.
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Tigre heard a voice which lacked intonation and felt something withdraw from his mouth.
 
What left his mouth was a sword.
 
 
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The thing than left his mouth was a word and holding it in her hand was a woman with golden hair whom he had never seen.
   
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“... Where should I start.”
The owner of this sword was a woman with golden hair, who he had never seen before.
 
 
“... Where should I start?”
 
   
 
“By the way, this is my first time waking a person in such a way.”
 
“By the way, this is my first time waking a person in such a way.”
   
She returned with a look and frosty words. Tigre was at a loss and tried greeting her for the time being.
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She returned a gaze and frosty words. Tigre was at a loss and tried greeting her for the time being.
   
 
“... Good morning.”
 
“... Good morning.”
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“It is one koku (two hours) through the day.”
 
“It is one koku (two hours) through the day.”
   
Tigre sat up and looked at the woman while scratching his head.
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Tigre set up and looked at the woman while scratching his head.
   
She wore a skirt and short-sleeved shirt. She had long gloves, which reached to her elbows, and boots up to her knees. At her waist was her sheathed sword. It was possible that she was taller than Tigre, and seemed to be two or three years older than him.
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She wore a skirt and short-sleeved shirt. She had long-gloves which reached to her elbows and boots up to her knees. At her waist was her sword in its sheathe.
   
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She was possibly taller than Tigre, and seemed to be two or three years older.
She was an unmistakably beautiful woman. However, her scarce expressions gave her face a hard look, leaving her with an unsociable impression.
 
   
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She was unmistakably a beautiful woman, but her scarce expressions gave her face a hard look, leaving her with an unsociable impression.
There were three particularly eye-catching features:
 
   
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There were three particularly eye-catching features.
Her long golden hair, tied up on the left side of her head.
 
   
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Tied on the right side of her head was long golden hair.
Her azure eyes, which were as cold as marble.
 
   
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Her azure eyes were as cold as marble.
And though she was tall and well balanced, she had ample bosoms which did not match her slender build.
 
   
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And though she was tall and well balanced, she had ample bosoms which did not suit her slender build.
 
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Tigre inadvertently stared at the two bulges from underneath her clothes. The woman flashed her sword and threw an unkind remark at him.
 
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Tigre inadvertently stared at the two swellings which bulged from beneath her clothes. The woman flashed her sword and threw an unkind remark.
   
 
“--- If you don't wake up properly, I will skewer you.”
 
“--- If you don't wake up properly, I will skewer you.”
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Blushing, Tigre apologized properly.
 
Blushing, Tigre apologized properly.
   
He looked about the room. It was small, containing only the bed he slept on. Sunlight shined through the window, brightly lighting the room. The stone floor was bare, and the only door led to the hallway. His bow leaned against the wall.
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He looked about the room. It was small, containing only the bed he slept on.
   
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Sunlight shined through the window, brightly lighting the room. The stone floor was bare, and the only door led to the hallway. His bow leaned against the wall.
“Really, even with the soldiers shouting for your death, even though you are a prisoner... how can you sleep so well?”
 
   
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“Really, even with the soldiers shouting out for your death, even though you're a prisoner... How can you sleep so well.”
“It's one of my special skills.”
 
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“It is one of my special skills.”
   
 
“I suggest you hold back a little. You lack tension.”
 
“I suggest you hold back a little. You lack tension.”
   
Anger was mixed into her cold voice. Tigre looked at her in embarrassment.
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Anger was mixed into her cold voice. Tigre looked at her embarrassed.
   
“Am I really that bad?”
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“Do I really appear that disorganized?”
   
“To the extent that I recall my murderous intent.”
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“To the extent that I remember my murderous intent.”
 
The woman turned about as she threw an answer to Tigre, pushing the door open in the meanwhile.
 
   
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The woman turned about as she threw that answer to Tigre, pushing the door open in the meanwhile.
 
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“Eleanora-sama has called for you. Please follow me.”
 
“Eleanora-sama has called for you. Please follow me.”
   
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“It's nice to meet you. I am ---”
 
“It's nice to meet you. I am ---”
   
“This is not our first meeting, Earl Tigrevurmud Vorn.”
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“This is not our first time, Earl Tigrevurmud Vorn.”
   
She answered without turning around, her voice clearly rejecting him.
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She answered without turning around. In her voice was rejection.
   
“My name is Limalisha. It is not necessary for you to remember it.”
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“My name is Limlisha. It is not necessary to remember it.”
   
   
Leitmeritz was a principality under Eleanora's rule, and was located in the Kingdom of Zhcted.
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Leitmeritz is located in the Principality of Zhcted, under Eleanora's rule.
   
Eleanora's troops had arrived at the capital the day before, ten days since they had departed from Dinant. After giving a word of thanks to the soldiers, Eleanora then left the men to her adjutant, Limalisha, and left for the king's capital with several men. It was necessary to report her victory to the king.
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Eleanora's troops arrived at the capital yesterday. It had been ten days since they departed to Dinant.
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After giving words of thanks to the soldiers, Eleanora left the men to her adjutant, Limlisha, and returned to the King's capital with several men.
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It was necessary to report her victory to the King.
   
 
During the return to the public capital, Tigre asked the guards a few times, and each time the response was the same.
 
During the return to the public capital, Tigre asked the guards a few times, and each time the response was the same.
   
 
“We have no need to respond to a prisoner of our Vanadis-sama.”
 
“We have no need to respond to a prisoner of our Vanadis-sama.”
 
 
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Even if he asked to meet Eleanora, it wouldn't be possible for them to accept. And regardless, there was no way for him to meet with Eleanora when she had departed for the kingdom's capital to meet the king.
 
   
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Even if he asked to meet Eleanora, it would not be possible for them to accept. Either way, there was no method since she departed for the kingdom's capital to meet the King.
Left with no other options, Tigre remained obediently quiet.
 
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Since he had no other options, Tigre remained quietly obedient.
   
 
“... Guess I'll just go with the flow.”
 
“... Guess I'll just go with the flow.”
   
Tigre made that decision and looked at the sky until late at night. During the day, he dozed off on the horse.
+
Tigre decided it and looked at the sky until late at night. During the day, he dozed off on the horse.
   
   
Tigre followed Limalisha down the passage of the household.
+
Following Limlisha, Tigre walked down the passage of the household.
   
 
“What are you looking about so restlessly for?”
 
“What are you looking about so restlessly for?”
   
Limalisha gazed back at him in amazement, as Tigre looked about like a child.
+
Limlisha gazed back at him in amazement as Tigre looked about like a child.
   
“I was just thinking that this is a splendid building.”
+
“Yes, I just thought it is a splendid building.”
   
“You are an earl. An aristocrat.”
+
“You are an Earl, an aristocrat.”
   
“I am a poor noble. There is no point comparing my small mansion to this one," Tigre replied without a hint of shame. He continued to look about, admiring the ceiling and floor.
+
“I am a poor noble. There is no point comparing my small mansion to this one.
   
  +
He responded without any shame. Tigre looked about, admiring the ceiling and floor.
Until now, Tigre had never left the Kingdom of Brune. Now, he was in the province's imperial palace. The mosaics which decorated the floor were new to him.
 
   
  +
Until now, Tigre had never left Brune Kingdom, and now he was in the province's Imperial Palace. The mosaics which decorated the floor were new to him.
 
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  +
The side facing the courtyard was bathed in a column of soft sunlight. In that spacious area, soldiers were training hard. It was vibrant.
 
  +
The side facing the courtyard was bathed in a column of soft sunlight. In the vast courtyard, soldiers were working hard, training. It was vibrant.
   
 
“It's a good atmosphere.”
 
“It's a good atmosphere.”
   
“That is because this is Eleanora-sama's official palace," Limalisha answered, as if it were natural.
+
“That is because this is Eleanora-sama's official palace.
   
  +
Limlisha answered as if it were natural.
Soldiers patrolled the corridors, and what he assumed were maids and chamberlains strolled about, likely performing their jobs.
 
   
  +
Soldiers patrolled the corridors, what he assumed were maids and chamberlains strolled about, likely performing their job.
Tigre thought about the girl who was like his younger sister house-sitting his mansion in his absence.
 
   
  +
Tigre thought about the girl who was like a younger sister house-sitting his mansion in his absence.
''--- Titta must be worried.''
 
  +
  +
''--- Teita must be worried.''
   
 
When he saw her off, he did not expect such a thing to happen.
 
When he saw her off, he did not expect such a thing to happen.
   
''--- Bertrand, and everyone else as well, I hope you all made it back safely.''
+
''--- Batran and everyone else as well, I hope he made it back safely.''
   
  +
In his chest, there was impatience.
He was impatient. He wished to return to Alsace as quickly as possible. However, attempting to escape as a prisoner could be punished by death, so he could only remain silent.
 
   
  +
He wished to return to Alsace as quickly as possible. However, a prisoner who escapes is punishable by death, so he could only remain quiet.
They finally left the palace.
 
   
  +
He left the palace.
 
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  +
He walked for a while before Limalisha stopped her feet.
 
  +
He walked for a while before Limlisha stopped her feet.
   
 
“... We are here.”
 
“... We are here.”
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He was brought to a training ground near the rampart.
 
He was brought to a training ground near the rampart.
   
Eleanora stood with three armed soldiers amongst the forty. She was clothed in shades of blue with her longsword in its argent sheathe at her waist.
+
Eleanora stood amongst three armed soldiers amongst the forty. She was clothed in shades of blue with her long sword in her argent sheathe at her waist.
   
“If you make any strange movements... no, please do so. It would save us quite a bit of time and effort," Limalisha said as she let the sound of her sword escaping its sheath at her waist be heard.
+
“If you make any strange movements... No, please do so. It would save quite a bit of time and effort.
   
  +
Limlisha spoke as she let the sound of her sword escape its sheathe at her waist.
Though there was an obvious hostility, Tigre simply ignored it.
 
   
  +
There was an obvious hostility, Tigre simply ignored it.
''--- It can't be helped. I'm a prisoner now. We were enemies just ten days ago.''
 
   
  +
''--- It can't be helped. I'm a prisoner now; we were enemies just ten days ago.''
“Hm. You came.”
 
   
  +
“Hm, you came.”
Eleanora noticed Tigre and walked up to him cheerfully. She smiled to Tigre first, then Limalisha.
 
  +
  +
Eleanora noticed Tigre and walked up to him cheerfully. She smiled to Tigre first, then Limlisha.
   
 
“You've worked hard. Still, it took you quite some time to come here.”
 
“You've worked hard. Still, it took you quite some time to come here.”
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“I apologize. He did not wake up so easily.”
 
“I apologize. He did not wake up so easily.”
   
“You didn't wake up?”
+
“You did not wake up?”
 
 
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  +
 
Eleanora looked doubtful hearing the story of him waking up only when he had a sword in his mouth. Her shoulders trembled as she held back her laughter.
 
Eleanora looked doubtful hearing the story of him waking up only when he had a sword in his mouth. Her shoulders trembled as she held back her laughter.
   
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“Tigrevurmud Vorn, it's quite a long name for a person of Brune. Does it have an origin?”
 
“Tigrevurmud Vorn, it's quite a long name for a person of Brune. Does it have an origin?”
   
“It is an ancestral name that I was given. If you find it difficult, you may call me Tigre.”
+
“I received an ancestral name. If you find it difficult, you may call me Tigre.”
   
 
Tigre cited the phrase he was accustomed to. He felt odd being called Earl Tigrevurmud Vorn.
 
Tigre cited the phrase he was accustomed to. He felt odd being called Earl Tigrevurmud Vorn.
   
Eleanora's face suddenly glowed. Her dignity as a Vanadis the soldiers knew was gone; she held the expression appropriate of a girl her age instead.
+
Eleanora's face suddenly shined. The dignity as a Vanadis the soldiers knew was gone; she held the expression appropriate of a girl her age.
   
“In that case, Elen is fine as well. I would prefer it if you use that name.”
+
“In that case, Ellen is fine as well. I would prefer it if you use that name.”
   
Tigre stared at her involuntarily. She spoke intimately with one who was supposed to be her prisoner. To put it another way, she was being overly familiar.
+
Tigre stared at her involuntarily. She spoke in a familiar way to a prisoner. Saying badly, she was being over-familiar.
   
 
“Eleanora-sama.”
 
“Eleanora-sama.”
   
Though Limalisha reproached her, she showed no sign of fear.
+
Though Limlisha reproached her, she showed no sign of fear.
 
 
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  +
“He's my prisoner. This much is fine, Lim.”
 
  +
“He is my prisoner. This much is fine, Lim.”
   
 
“Lim?”
 
“Lim?”
   
Hearing the name, Tigre looked at Limalisha in surprise.
+
Hearing the name, Tigre looked at Limlisha in surprise.
   
“I'll tell you now, she is one of my escorts whose horse you shot down, and she was the girl who took you here from Dinant.”
+
“I'll tell you now. She is one of my escorts whose horse you shot down, and she was the girl who took you here from Dinant.”
   
 
Certainly, her physique matched.
 
Certainly, her physique matched.
   
Although he wasn't certain how he should react, he thanked her honestly anyway.
+
Though puzzled as to how he should react, Tigre thanked her honestly.
   
 
“Though it may be strange of me to say this, thank you for bringing me here safely.”
 
“Though it may be strange of me to say this, thank you for bringing me here safely.”
   
Tigre had heard stories of prisoners being mocked and assaulted or killed by torture in a convoy. Some died without having a single meal. However, on their way back from Dinant, Tigre had never been abused. He had even been given proper food. Though it may have been because he was Elen's captive, Limalisha -- that is, Lim -- had been the one who properly took care of him.
+
Tigre had heard stories of prisoners being mocked and assaulted or killed by torture in a convoy. Some had died without having a single meal.
   
  +
However, in the convoy from the battlefield in Dinant, he was never abused. Tigre was even given proper food.
Lim did not respond to Tigre. She did what she had to. She hid her anger as she was being thanked by Tigre by ignoring him and facing Elen.
 
   
  +
Though it may have been because he was Ellen's captive, Limlisha – that is, Lim, was the one who properly managed him.
  +
  +
She did not respond to Tigre. What had to be done was done.
  +
  +
However, Lim hid her anger as she was thanked by ignoring Tigre and facing Ellen.
 
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“Eleanora-sama, there is still work to be done today. You should finish your minor errands early."
 
   
  +
“Eleanora-sama, there is still work to be done today. You should finish your trivial errands early, correct?”
“I know, I know.” Elen smiled bitterly and waved her hand. She faced Tigre and smiled deliberately. “I would like to clarify things first, Tigre... no, Lord Vorn. As per the treaty between our countries, you will be treated as a prisoner of war. If in fifty days time the demanded ransom has not been delivered by the Kingdom of Brune -- that is to say, if a ransom has not been paid to me -- you will formally become mine as per the agreement. What binds this contract is the name and honor of the god Radegast. Is this acceptable?”
 
   
  +
“I know, I know.”
Though it was hardly suitable, Tigre nodded reluctantly.
 
   
  +
Ellen smiled bitterly and waved. She faced Tigre and smiled deliberately.
It was a contract held between every country on the treatment of prisoners of war. It was made to avoid abuse, humiliation, and, frankly, murder. It was a rule which allowed for negotiations between countries to advance efficiently.
 
   
  +
“I would like to clarify things first, Tigre... no, Lord Vorn. As per the treaty between our countries, you will be treated as a prisoner of war. If, in fifty days time, the demanded ransom has not been delivered by the Kingdom of Brune, that is, if a ransom has not been paid to me, you will formally become mine as per the agreement. What binds this contract is the name and honor of the God, Rajikast. Is this fine?”
“Well, you might be a bit worried about the ransom, though.”
 
   
  +
Though hardly suitable, Tigre nodded reluctantly.
Tigre heard the number come from Elen's mouth and stood rooted to the spot with his mouth agape.
 
   
  +
It was a contract held between every country on the treatment of prisoners of war.
  +
  +
It was made to avoid abuse, humiliation, and, frankly, murder. It was a rule which allowed for negotiations between countries to advance efficiently.
  +
  +
“Well, you might be a bit worried about the ransom, though.”
  +
  +
Tigre heard the number come from Ellen's mouth and stood rooted to the spot with his mouth agape.
 
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  +
It was a number close to three times Alsace's total yearly tax revenue.
 
  +
It is a number close to the total tax revenue raised by Alsace in three years time.
   
 
He felt dizzy from the impact.
 
He felt dizzy from the impact.
   
“... Is it possible to reduce the amount?”
+
“... Is it impossible to reduce the amount?”
   
 
“No.”
 
“No.”
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A flat response.
 
A flat response.
   
''--- Well, there's no reason for her to.''
+
''--- Well, there is no reason for her to.''
   
In many cases, the goal of taking an enemy captive was to retrieve a ransom. It was unlikely she would decrease it so easily.
+
In many cases, the goal of taking an enemy captive is to retrieve a ransom. It was unlikely she would decrease it so easily.
   
“You will live here in the imperial palace. Needless to say, any attempt to escape will be met with the death penalty.”
+
“You will live here in the Imperial Palace. It is needless to say, but any attempt to escape will lead to the death penalty.”
   
 
He was like a fish dying out of water. Tigre desperately searched his memory for the savings within his territory.
 
He was like a fish dying out of water. Tigre desperately searched his memory for the savings within his territory.
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It amounted to approximately one year's worth of tax revenue, so it was hardly enough.
 
It amounted to approximately one year's worth of tax revenue, so it was hardly enough.
   
''--- If I could speak to Titta or Bertrand, or perhaps Sir Mashas, who is more widely known, they might be able to raise the money.''
+
''--- If I can speak to Teita or Batran, or perhaps Sir Massas, who is more widely known, they may be able to raise the money.''
   
 
The preparations for the ransom were, simply put, hopeless.
 
The preparations for the ransom were, simply put, hopeless.
   
He felt a pain between his eyes as he thought about his gloomy future. He nearly fainted, but before it happened, Tigre somehow managed to gather strength in his legs. Supporting his body and limbs with all the strength he could muster, he looked back at Elen.
+
He felt a pain between his eyes as he thought about his gloomy future. He nearly fainted, but before it happened, Tigre somehow managed to gather strength in his legs.
  +
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  +
  +
Supporting his body and limbs with all the strength he could muster, he looked back at Ellen.
   
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''--- I must return to Alsace.''
 
''--- I must return to Alsace.''
   
''I was born and raised there. It is an important land that I inherited from my father.''
+
''I was born and raised there. It is an important land I inherited from my father.''
   
 
''I'm worried about the soldiers' safety as well. I'm certain my people are worried.''
 
''I'm worried about the soldiers' safety as well. I'm certain my people are worried.''
   
''And above all else, I promised Titta I would return.''
+
''Above all, I promised Teita I would return.''
   
''I want to respond to their wishes.''
+
''I wish to answer their desires.''
   
“So... what business do you have calling me to a place like this?” Tigre spoke with impudent words and a tone to match. Elen's crimson eyes danced happily as she looked at him with admiration.
+
“So... What business do you have to call me to such a place?”
   
  +
Tigre spoke with impudent words and a tone to match. Ellen's crimson eyes smiled happily as she looked at him with admiration.
“Of course, that was not all I called you here for.” Elen pointed to a training bow sitting along the wall. “Shoot an arrow from here and hit that target over there.”
 
   
  +
“Of course, that is not all I called you here for.”
“Is that it?”
 
   
  +
Ellen pointed at a training bow sitting along the wall.
Tigre felt that it was rather anti-climactic.
 
   
  +
“Shoot an arrow from here and hit that.”
The target was three hundred alsin (approximately three hundred meters) away. Even for those skilled with the bow, that distance would seem like a bad joke. Shooting an arrow that far was already a challenge in and of itself; to also hit the target would make it nothing short of impossible.
 
   
  +
“Is that it?”
  +
  +
Tigre, who was on the defensive, felt it was rather anti-climactic.
  +
  +
The distance to the target was three-hundred alsin (approximately three-hundred meters). Even for those skilled with the bow, the distance would seem a joke.
 
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But for Tigre, that distance was not a big deal.
 
   
Although he didn't know what she was planning, he decided to do this quickly.
+
Although it was difficult to shoot an arrow that far, it was nothing more than annoying to hit a target as well.
   
  +
However, the distance was not a big deal for Tigre.
One of the soldiers brought a bow and four arrows. The man had delicate features and beautiful, shiny black hair that reached down to his shoulders.
 
   
  +
Though he did not know what she was plotting, he decided to do it quickly.
After Tigre received the bow and arrow from him, his eyebrows knitted slightly.
 
   
  +
One of the soldiers brought a bow and four arrows. The man had delicate features and beautiful, shiny black hair down to his shoulders.
“What a terrible bow...”
 
   
  +
Tigre received the bow and arrow from him. His eyebrows moved slightly.
The material was hardly suitable for a bow, and the condition of the grip was poor as well. The stringing, too, was badly done. There was also some warping. It was clear what their intention was.
 
   
  +
“What a terrible bow...”
Elen was looking at him from a distance, and, like a child, was filled with expectation.
 
   
  +
The material was hardly suitable, and the condition of the grip was poor. The stringing, too, was poorly done. There was also some warping. It was clear what his intention was.
''Is she not involved?'' Tigre wondered. ''If that's the case, it's unlikely that this is a standard bow for the Zhcted Army.''
 
   
  +
Ellen glanced at him at a distance like a child, filled with expectation. Was it not her doing? In which case, it is unlikely it was the standard bow for the Zhcted army.
He wasn't sure if she knew about this. An unpleasant thought crossed his mind then. Thinking back, the bows in Brune were not that great either.
 
   
  +
He did not know if she knew of this.
  +
  +
An unpleasant thought crossed his mind. Thinking properly, the bows in Brune were not that good, either.
 
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''--- It can't be an issue of the maker's ability... in the first place, there is no such profession as a bow craftsman.''
 
   
  +
''--- It is not an issue of the maker's ability... There is no such profession as a bow craftsman.''
Tigre's bow was made by his father when he was small. The materials were chosen according to the knowledge and technology of other countries, such as Zchted.
 
   
  +
Tigre's bow was made by his father when he was small. The choice of materials as well was taken from knowledge and technology of other countries, such as Zhcted.
The accuracy of his arrow was not solely due to Tigre's skill, but the quality of the tool as well.
 
   
  +
The accuracy of his arrow was not due just Tigre's skill but the quality of the tool as well.
While pretending to check the condition of the bow, he glanced peripherally at the soldier who passed him the bow, and saw him and several other soldiers grinning.
 
   
  +
While pretending to check the condition of the bow, he looked at the soldier who passed him the bow in his peripheral vision and saw several soldiers grinning.
Angered, a murmur leaked from Tigre's mouth.
 
   
“Such a petty trick," he said.
+
“Such a petty trick.
  +
  +
Because he was angry, a murmur leaked from his mouth.
   
 
“What is it?”
 
“What is it?”
   
Lim was standing nearby, looking at him dubiously. Apparently, she had not heard his words. Still, complaining about the quality of the bow as a prisoner of war was cumbersome.
+
Lim, who stood nearby, looked at him dubiously. Apparently she had not heard his words. Still, complaining about the quality of the bow as a prisoner of war was cumbersome.
   
“I wish to confirm something," said Tigre. "It is not necessary for me to hit the target with all four arrows; only one, correct?”
+
“I wish to confirm something. It is not necessary for me to hit the target with all four arrows, only one, correct?”
   
“That is a rather timid remark for a person who killed my horse with a single arrow.”
+
“For a person who killed my horse with one arrow, it seems a timid remark.”
 
Though she thought Tigre was being sarcastic, she remained expressionless. There was no sign of malice. It seemed that she had not yet noticed that the bow was inferior.
 
   
  +
Though she thought Tigre was being sarcastic, she remained expressionless. There was no sign of malice. It seems she had not noticed the bow was inferior.
 
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“If your physical condition is poor, I can tell Eleanora-sama to do this another day.”
 
   
  +
“If your physical condition is poor, I can tell Eleanora-sama to hold this another day.”
“No, I will do it," Tigre answered in a strong tone. He set the bow in his hand. “However, please allow me to hit the target with only one arrow. I am not as confident with an unfamiliar bow.”
 
  +
  +
“No, I will do it.”
  +
  +
He answered with a strong tone. Tigre set the bow in his hand.
  +
  +
“However, please allow me to hit the target with only one arrow. I am not as confident without my bow.”
   
Lim bowed in assent and walked over to Elen. After speaking a few words, Elen looked at him without any dissatisfaction, as though she were saying, "Please begin."
+
Lim bowed in assent and immediately walked to Ellen. After speaking a few words, Ellen looked at him devoid of any dissatisfaction, as if saying “Please begin.
   
 
Tigre nocked the first arrow and released it.
 
Tigre nocked the first arrow and released it.
   
It stalled before it reached the target, falling to the ground less than two hundred alsin away. Laughter and sneers were heard amongst the soldiers.
+
It stalled before it reached the target, falling to the ground less than two-hundred alsin away. Laughter and sneers were heard amongst the soldiers.
   
 
He did not mind it and released the next arrow.
 
He did not mind it and released the next arrow.
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The hum of the arrow sounded as it flew in an arc. It hit the castle wall, far from the target.
 
The hum of the arrow sounded as it flew in an arc. It hit the castle wall, far from the target.
   
The soldiers laughed loudly. Some shook their shoulders; others looked at him with pity or contempt. Many eyes were piercing Tigre.
+
The soldiers laughed loudly. Some shook their shoulders, others looked at him in pity or contempt. Many gazes pierced Tigre.
 
“Are you doing this seriously?” Lim said irritably. She looked at Elen.
 
   
  +
“Are you doing this seriously?”
 
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Elen appeared troubled as she watched Tigre, like a student who had been scolded by a teacher, though she was trying to properly solve the problem.
 
   
  +
Lim, speaking with an irritated voice, looked to Ellen.
“I'll do it,” Tigre replied and nocked the third arrow.
 
  +
  +
Ellen looked troubled. Though she was trying to properly solve a problem, she looked at him as if she were rebuked by a teacher.
  +
  +
“I'll do it.”
  +
  +
Tigre eagerly replied and nocked the third arrow.
   
“Hey, are you going to keep going? You're really willing to keep making a spectacle of yourself?”
+
“Hey, are you still continuing? You're really willing to make a spectacle of yourself, still?”
   
“Maybe you'd like a replacement. Even though you can reach the target, you can't even shoot straight.”
+
“Maybe you'd like a replacement. Though he can reach the target, he can't even shoot straight.”
   
 
“Vanadis-sama, did you really make a man like this your captive?”
 
“Vanadis-sama, did you really make a man like this your captive?”
   
“This is quite a splendid show. I wonder if something new will be shown tomorrow?
+
“This is quite a splendid show. I wonder if something new will be shown tomorrow.
   
Although the soldiers deliberately spoke ill of him, Tigre was not bothered by it. He was accustomed to such abuse. He had been harassed much worse than this many times before.
+
Though the soldiers deliberately spoke ill, Tigre was not bothered.
   
  +
He was accustomed to such abuse. He had received mental abuse incomparable to this many times.
Tigre took a deep breath, and looked up at the sky for a change of pace, moving his neck around.
 
   
  +
He took a deep breath and looked at the sky for a change of pace, moving his neck around.
That was when he saw a black shadow.
 
  +
  +
In Tigre's vision was a black shadow.
   
 
''--- What is that?''
 
''--- What is that?''
   
His neck stopped moving and he looked more closely.
+
His neck stopped moving and he looked closely.
 
 
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  +
In an instant, he understood the identity of the shadow. Chills ran down Tigre's spine as he screamed at Elen:
 
  +
In an instant, he understood the identity of the shadow. Chills ran down Tigre's spine and he screamed at Ellen.
   
 
“Get down!”
 
“Get down!”
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''--- An arbalest...!''
 
''--- An arbalest...!''
   
  +
It was different from the bow Tigre used. It was a mechanical bow; the bowstring is pulled by a winch and shot with a trigger.
The arbalest was a mechanical bow. Unlike the one that Tigre used, its bowstring was pulled by a winch and shot with a trigger. Although it was difficult to maintain and prone to failure, it was a powerful weapon that could fire a bolt up to 350 alsin (approximately 350 meters) away, and with enough force that it could punch through shields and armor and come out the other side.
 
   
  +
It is difficult to maintain and prone to failure, but it could reach three-hundred-fifty alsin (approximately three-hundred-fifty meters) at maximum and easily pass through shields and armor with enough power for the arrowhead to come out the other side.
The black shadow on the rampart was holding one.
 
   
  +
The black shadow on the rampart held one.
A thick bolt was released from the arbalest, speeding through the air straight towards Elen. She had no time to avoid it.
 
   
  +
A thick bolt was released from the arbalest.
However, Elen did not panic, nor did she move from her spot.
 
  +
  +
The roar of air sped straight toward Ellen. She had no time to avoid it.
  +
  +
However, Ellen did not panic, nor did she move from her spot.
   
 
“--- Arifal!”
 
“--- Arifal!”
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In a moment, the air rapidly swelled, like an explosion. A storm raged about her.
 
In a moment, the air rapidly swelled, like an explosion. A storm raged about her.
 
 
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  +
Her long hair of silver-white danced with the wind. The bolt, entwined in the intense storm, was thrown far off orbit.
 
  +
Her long hair of silver-white danced with the wind. The bolt, entwined in the intense wind, was thrown far off orbit.
   
 
It passed through the empty space away from her and fell to the ground weakly.
 
It passed through the empty space away from her and fell to the ground weakly.
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''--- What just happened?''
 
''--- What just happened?''
   
Tigre stared in blank surprise at Elen.
+
Tigre stared in blank surprise at Ellen.
   
It was not a coincidence; that was impossible.
+
''That was no coincidence. It couldn't be.''
   
While learning the bow, Tigre learned about the arbalest. He was knowledgeable about the power of the thick bolts. A wind could not conveniently blow it out of its orbit.
+
While learning the bow, Tigre learned about the arbalest. He knew the power of the thick bolts well. A wind could not conveniently blow it out of its orbit.
   
 
“Capture that man!”
 
“Capture that man!”
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''--- This has nothing to do with me.''
 
''--- This has nothing to do with me.''
   
Tigre muttered to himself. Though he shouted on reflex, he was not Elen's subordinate, nor was he a man of this city.
+
Tigre muttered to himself. Though he shouted on reflex, he was not Ellen's subordinate, nor was he a man of this city.
 
While thinking that, suddenly, Tigre remembered his first meeting with Elen.
 
   
  +
While thinking that, suddenly, Tigre remembered his first meeting with Ellen.
 
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  +
 
“You're skilled.”
 
“You're skilled.”
   
 
She smiled as she said so.
 
She smiled as she said so.
   
''Titta, Bertrand and his men, my late father, when was I last praised for my bow arm?''
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''Teita, Batran and his men, my late father, when was I last praised for my bow arm?''
   
 
“Should I capture him alive?”
 
“Should I capture him alive?”
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“Is this really a situation where you can say that...?”
 
“Is this really a situation where you can say that...?”
   
Grasping the sword with her hand until it went white, Lim stared at the shadow on the rampart in chagrin. She wanted to lead the soldiers, but could not leave Elen's side.
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Grasping the sword with her hand until it went white, Lim stared at the shadow on the rampart in chagrin. She wanted to lead the soldiers, but could not leave Ellen's side.
   
 
The shadow ran quickly across the wall. Once he reached the tower, he could quickly escape outside.
 
The shadow ran quickly across the wall. Once he reached the tower, he could quickly escape outside.
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''--- At this distance, I won't miss.''
 
''--- At this distance, I won't miss.''
   
Lim looked at him in doubt.
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Lim looked at him with doubt.
 
Then her gaze changed to one of surprise.
 
   
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Then it changed to surprise.
 
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The bowstring trembled.
 
The bowstring trembled.
   
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The other soldiers, too, looked at Tigre in amazement.
 
The other soldiers, too, looked at Tigre in amazement.
   
“Impossible. He shot over three hundred alsin (approximately three hundred meters) from that position to the rampart...”
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“Impossible. He shot over three-hundred alsin (approximately three-hundred meters) from that position to the rampart...”
   
 
“No, if you think about the height of the tower, it could be even more. No way.”
 
“No, if you think about the height of the tower, it could be even more. No way.”
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The soldiers who passed Tigre the bow were pale with fear.
 
The soldiers who passed Tigre the bow were pale with fear.
 
 
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“--- You got me.”
 
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“--- He got us.”
   
 
Tigre shrugged his shoulders. Though he held no emotions in his chest anymore, he was puzzled. He noticed he was bathed in gazes all at once.
 
Tigre shrugged his shoulders. Though he held no emotions in his chest anymore, he was puzzled. He noticed he was bathed in gazes all at once.
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The fourth arrow remained in his hand. Though Lim had seen it before, she did not look any differently than the other soldiers. When his eyes met hers, he understood her body was tense.
 
The fourth arrow remained in his hand. Though Lim had seen it before, she did not look any differently than the other soldiers. When his eyes met hers, he understood her body was tense.
   
He looked back at Elen.
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He looked back at Ellen.
   
 
“I'll ask you now. What about the fourth shot?”
 
“I'll ask you now. What about the fourth shot?”
   
“It's enough with this. I'd rather not lose this.”
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“It's enough with this. I'd rather not taste defeat.”
   
Elen's argent hair moved gently as she shook her head.
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Ellen's silver hair moved gently as she shook her head.
   
 
“You did well.”
 
“You did well.”
   
Elen smiled at Tigre with sincerity, her sword still sheathed at her waist. A wind blew from somewhere, tickling Tigre's hair.
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Ellen smiled at Tigre with sincerity. The sword remained sheathed at her waist. A wind blew from somewhere, tickling Tigre's hair.
   
 
''--- Just now...''
 
''--- Just now...''
   
Tigre placed his hand in his hair involuntarily. He thought Elen had somehow used her longsword to produce the wind.
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Tigre placed his hand in his hair involuntarily. It seems Ellen had somehow used her longsword to produce the wind.
   
 
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