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=== LeitMeritz ===
== Chapter 2 - Leitmeritz ==
 
 
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He was having a bad dream.
 
He was having a bad dream.
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The other followers expressed their approval one after another. Tigre grit his teeth in anger.
 
The other followers expressed their approval one after another. Tigre grit his teeth in anger.
   
In the Kingdom of Brune, their complaints were acceptable.
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In the Brune Kingdom, their complaints were acceptable.
   
 
''“The bow is the weapon of a coward who does not have the courage to expose his body before a naked blade.”''
 
''“The bow is the weapon of a coward who does not have the courage to expose his body before a naked blade.”''
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The aristocrat didn't look resentful. He was simply grumbling in dissatisfaction.
 
The aristocrat didn't look resentful. He was simply grumbling in dissatisfaction.
   
Duke Ganelon was one of the most influential nobles of the Kingdom of Brune, on par with Thenardier. There were many powerful aristocrats amongst his relatives as well. His power, too, was something not even the king could ignore.
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Duke Ganelon was one of the most influential nobles of Brune Kingdom, on par with Thenardier. There were many powerful aristocrats amongst his relatives as well. His power, too, was something not even the king could ignore.
   
 
When it came to territory, Brune nobles were allowed to govern pieces of land, but for certain privileges, such as setting taxes, the permission of the king was necessary.
 
When it came to territory, Brune nobles were allowed to govern pieces of land, but for certain privileges, such as setting taxes, the permission of the king was necessary.
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The owner of this sword was a woman with golden hair, who he had never seen before.
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The owner of this sword was a woman with golden hair whom he had never seen before.
   
“... Where should I start?
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“... Where should I start.
   
 
“By the way, this is my first time waking a person in such a way.”
 
“By the way, this is my first time waking a person in such a way.”
   
She returned with a look and frosty words. Tigre was at a loss and tried greeting her for the time being.
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She returned with a gaze and frosty words. Tigre was at a loss and tried greeting her for the time being.
   
 
“... Good morning.”
 
“... Good morning.”
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“It is one koku (two hours) through the day.”
 
“It is one koku (two hours) through the day.”
   
Tigre sat up and looked at the woman while scratching his head.
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Tigre set up and looked at the woman while scratching his head.
   
She wore a skirt and short-sleeved shirt. She had long gloves, which reached to her elbows, and boots up to her knees. At her waist was her sheathed sword. It was possible that she was taller than Tigre, and seemed to be two or three years older than him.
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She wore a skirt and short-sleeved shirt. She had long gloves which reached to her elbows and boots up to her knees. At her waist was her sheathed sword.
   
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She was possibly taller than Tigre, and seemed to be two or three years older.
She was an unmistakably beautiful woman. However, her scarce expressions gave her face a hard look, leaving her with an unsociable impression.
 
   
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She was unmistakably a beautiful woman, but her scarce expressions gave her face a hard look, leaving her with an unsociable impression.
There were three particularly eye-catching features:
 
   
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There were three particularly eye-catching features.
Her long golden hair, tied up on the left side of her head.
 
   
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Tied on the left side of her head was long, golden hair.
Her azure eyes, which were as cold as marble.
 
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Her azure eyes were as cold as marble.
   
 
And though she was tall and well balanced, she had ample bosoms which did not match her slender build.
 
And though she was tall and well balanced, she had ample bosoms which did not match her slender build.
   
 
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Tigre inadvertently stared at the two bulges from underneath her clothes. The woman flashed her sword and threw an unkind remark at him.
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Tigre inadvertently stared at the two swellings which bulged from beneath her clothes. The woman flashed her sword and threw an unkind remark.
   
 
“--- If you don't wake up properly, I will skewer you.”
 
“--- If you don't wake up properly, I will skewer you.”
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Blushing, Tigre apologized properly.
 
Blushing, Tigre apologized properly.
   
He looked about the room. It was small, containing only the bed he slept on. Sunlight shined through the window, brightly lighting the room. The stone floor was bare, and the only door led to the hallway. His bow leaned against the wall.
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He looked about the room. It was small, containing only the bed he slept on.
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Sunlight shined through the window, brightly lighting the room. The stone floor was bare, and the only door led to the hallway. His bow leaned against the wall.
   
“Really, even with the soldiers shouting for your death, even though you are a prisoner... how can you sleep so well?
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“Really, even with the soldiers shouting for your death, even though you are a prisoner... How can you sleep so well.
   
 
“It's one of my special skills.”
 
“It's one of my special skills.”
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She answered without turning around, her voice clearly rejecting him.
 
She answered without turning around, her voice clearly rejecting him.
   
“My name is Limalisha. It is not necessary for you to remember it.”
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“My name is Limlisha. It is not necessary to remember it.”
   
   
Leitmeritz was a principality under Eleanora's rule, and was located in the Kingdom of Zhcted.
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LeitMeritz was a principality located in the Kingdom of Zhcted, under Eleanora's rule.
   
Eleanora's troops had arrived at the capital the day before, ten days since they had departed from Dinant. After giving a word of thanks to the soldiers, Eleanora then left the men to her adjutant, Limalisha, and left for the king's capital with several men. It was necessary to report her victory to the king.
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Eleanora's troops arrived at the capital yesterday. It had been ten days since they departed from Dinant.
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After giving a word of thanks to the soldiers, Eleanora left the men to her adjutant, Limlisha, and returned to the King's capital with several men.
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It was necessary to report her victory to the King.
   
 
During the return to the public capital, Tigre asked the guards a few times, and each time the response was the same.
 
During the return to the public capital, Tigre asked the guards a few times, and each time the response was the same.
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Even if he asked to meet Eleanora, it wouldn't be possible for them to accept. And regardless, there was no way for him to meet with Eleanora when she had departed for the kingdom's capital to meet the king.
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Even if he asked to meet Eleanora, it would not be possible for them to accept. Regardless, there was no way to do it since she departed for the kingdom's capital to meet the King.
   
Left with no other options, Tigre remained obediently quiet.
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Since he had no other options, Tigre remained quietly obedient.
   
 
“... Guess I'll just go with the flow.”
 
“... Guess I'll just go with the flow.”
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Tigre followed Limalisha down the passage of the household.
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Following Limlisha, Tigre walked down the passage of the household.
   
 
“What are you looking about so restlessly for?”
 
“What are you looking about so restlessly for?”
   
Limalisha gazed back at him in amazement, as Tigre looked about like a child.
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Limlisha gazed back at him in amazement as Tigre looked about like a child.
   
“I was just thinking that this is a splendid building.”
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“Yes, I just thought it is a splendid building.”
   
“You are an earl. An aristocrat.”
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“You are an Earl, an aristocrat.”
   
“I am a poor noble. There is no point comparing my small mansion to this one," Tigre replied without a hint of shame. He continued to look about, admiring the ceiling and floor.
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“I am a poor noble. There is no point comparing my small mansion to this one.
   
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He responded without any shame. Tigre looked about, admiring the ceiling and floor.
Until now, Tigre had never left the Kingdom of Brune. Now, he was in the province's imperial palace. The mosaics which decorated the floor were new to him.
 
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Until now, Tigre had never left Brune Kingdom, and now he was in the province's Imperial Palace. The mosaics which decorated the floor were new to him.
   
 
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The side facing the courtyard was bathed in a column of soft sunlight. In that spacious area, soldiers were training hard. It was vibrant.
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The side facing the courtyard was bathed in a column of soft sunlight. In the vast area, soldiers were working hard, training. It was vibrant.
   
 
“It's a good atmosphere.”
 
“It's a good atmosphere.”
   
“That is because this is Eleanora-sama's official palace," Limalisha answered, as if it were natural.
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“That is because this is Eleanora-sama's official palace.
   
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Limlisha answered as if it were natural.
Soldiers patrolled the corridors, and what he assumed were maids and chamberlains strolled about, likely performing their jobs.
 
   
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Soldiers patrolled the corridors, and what he assumed were maids and chamberlains strolled about, likely performing their job.
Tigre thought about the girl who was like his younger sister house-sitting his mansion in his absence.
 
   
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Tigre thought about the girl who was like a younger sister house-sitting his mansion in his absence.
''--- Titta must be worried.''
 
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''--- Teita must be worried.''
   
 
When he saw her off, he did not expect such a thing to happen.
 
When he saw her off, he did not expect such a thing to happen.
   
''--- Bertrand, and everyone else as well, I hope you all made it back safely.''
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''--- Batran, and everyone else as well, I hope you made it back safely.''
   
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In his chest, there was impatience.
He was impatient. He wished to return to Alsace as quickly as possible. However, attempting to escape as a prisoner could be punished by death, so he could only remain silent.
 
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He wished to return to Alsace as quickly as possible. However, a prisoner who escapes is punishable by death, so he could only remain quiet.
   
 
They finally left the palace.
 
They finally left the palace.
   
 
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He walked for a while before Limalisha stopped her feet.
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He walked for a while before Limlisha stopped her feet.
   
 
“... We are here.”
 
“... We are here.”
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Eleanora stood with three armed soldiers amongst the forty. She was clothed in shades of blue with her longsword in its argent sheathe at her waist.
 
Eleanora stood with three armed soldiers amongst the forty. She was clothed in shades of blue with her longsword in its argent sheathe at her waist.
   
“If you make any strange movements... no, please do so. It would save us quite a bit of time and effort," Limalisha said as she let the sound of her sword escaping its sheath at her waist be heard.
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“If you make any strange movements... No, please do so. It would save quite a bit of time and effort.
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Limlisha spoke as she let the sound of her sword escape its sheathe at her waist.
   
 
Though there was an obvious hostility, Tigre simply ignored it.
 
Though there was an obvious hostility, Tigre simply ignored it.
   
''--- It can't be helped. I'm a prisoner now. We were enemies just ten days ago.''
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''--- It can't be helped. I'm a prisoner now; we were enemies just ten days ago.''
   
“Hm. You came.”
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“Hm, you came.”
   
Eleanora noticed Tigre and walked up to him cheerfully. She smiled to Tigre first, then Limalisha.
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Eleanora noticed Tigre and walked up to him cheerfully. She smiled to Tigre first, then Limlisha.
   
 
“You've worked hard. Still, it took you quite some time to come here.”
 
“You've worked hard. Still, it took you quite some time to come here.”
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“Tigrevurmud Vorn, it's quite a long name for a person of Brune. Does it have an origin?”
 
“Tigrevurmud Vorn, it's quite a long name for a person of Brune. Does it have an origin?”
   
“It is an ancestral name that I was given. If you find it difficult, you may call me Tigre.”
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“I received an ancestral name. If you find it difficult, you may call me Tigre.”
   
 
Tigre cited the phrase he was accustomed to. He felt odd being called Earl Tigrevurmud Vorn.
 
Tigre cited the phrase he was accustomed to. He felt odd being called Earl Tigrevurmud Vorn.
   
Eleanora's face suddenly glowed. Her dignity as a Vanadis the soldiers knew was gone; she held the expression appropriate of a girl her age instead.
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Eleanora's face suddenly glowed. The dignity as a Vanadis the soldiers knew was gone; she held the expression appropriate of a girl her age.
   
“In that case, Elen is fine as well. I would prefer it if you use that name.”
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“In that case, Ellen is fine as well. I would prefer it if you use that name.”
   
Tigre stared at her involuntarily. She spoke intimately with one who was supposed to be her prisoner. To put it another way, she was being overly familiar.
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Tigre stared at her involuntarily. She spoke in an intimate manner with a prisoner. Saying it poorly, she was being overly familiar.
   
 
“Eleanora-sama.”
 
“Eleanora-sama.”
   
Though Limalisha reproached her, she showed no sign of fear.
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Though Limlisha reproached her, she showed no sign of fear.
   
 
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“Lim?”
 
“Lim?”
   
Hearing the name, Tigre looked at Limalisha in surprise.
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Hearing the name, Tigre looked at Limlisha in surprise.
   
“I'll tell you now, she is one of my escorts whose horse you shot down, and she was the girl who took you here from Dinant.”
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“I'll tell you now. She is one of my escorts whose horse you shot down, and she was the girl who took you here from Dinant.”
   
 
Certainly, her physique matched.
 
Certainly, her physique matched.
   
Although he wasn't certain how he should react, he thanked her honestly anyway.
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Though puzzled as to how he should react, Tigre thanked her honestly.
   
 
“Though it may be strange of me to say this, thank you for bringing me here safely.”
 
“Though it may be strange of me to say this, thank you for bringing me here safely.”
   
Tigre had heard stories of prisoners being mocked and assaulted or killed by torture in a convoy. Some died without having a single meal. However, on their way back from Dinant, Tigre had never been abused. He had even been given proper food. Though it may have been because he was Elen's captive, Limalisha -- that is, Lim -- had been the one who properly took care of him.
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Tigre had heard stories of prisoners being mocked and assaulted or killed by torture in a convoy. Some died without having a single meal.
   
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However, on the way back from Dinant, Tigre was never abused. He was even given proper food.
Lim did not respond to Tigre. She did what she had to. She hid her anger as she was being thanked by Tigre by ignoring him and facing Elen.
 
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Though it may have been because he was Ellen's captive, Limlisha – that is, Lim, was the one who properly managed him.
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She did not respond to Tigre. What had to be done was done.
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However, Lim hid her anger as she was thanked by ignoring Tigre and facing Ellen.
   
 
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“Eleanora-sama, there is still work to be done today. You should finish your minor errands early."
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“Eleanora-sama, there is still work to be done today. You should finish your trivial errands early, correct?”
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“I know, I know.”
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Ellen smiled bitterly and waved. She faced Tigre and smiled deliberately.
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“I would like to clarify things first, Tigre... no, Lord Vorn. As per the treaty between our countries, you will be treated as a prisoner of war. If, in fifty days time, the demanded ransom has not been delivered by the Kingdom of Brune, that is, if a ransom has not been paid to me, you will formally become mine as per the agreement. What binds this contract is the name and honor of the God, Radegast. Is this acceptable?”
   
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Though hardly suitable, Tigre nodded reluctantly.
“I know, I know.” Elen smiled bitterly and waved her hand. She faced Tigre and smiled deliberately. “I would like to clarify things first, Tigre... no, Lord Vorn. As per the treaty between our countries, you will be treated as a prisoner of war. If in fifty days time the demanded ransom has not been delivered by the Kingdom of Brune -- that is to say, if a ransom has not been paid to me -- you will formally become mine as per the agreement. What binds this contract is the name and honor of the god Radegast. Is this acceptable?”
 
   
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It was a contract held between every country on the treatment of prisoners of war.
Though it was hardly suitable, Tigre nodded reluctantly.
 
   
It was a contract held between every country on the treatment of prisoners of war. It was made to avoid abuse, humiliation, and, frankly, murder. It was a rule which allowed for negotiations between countries to advance efficiently.
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It was made to avoid abuse, humiliation, and, frankly, murder. It was a rule which allowed for negotiations between countries to advance efficiently.
   
 
“Well, you might be a bit worried about the ransom, though.”
 
“Well, you might be a bit worried about the ransom, though.”
   
Tigre heard the number come from Elen's mouth and stood rooted to the spot with his mouth agape.
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Tigre heard the number come from Ellen's mouth and stood rooted to the spot with his mouth agape.
   
 
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It was a number close to three times Alsace's total yearly tax revenue.
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It was a number close to the total tax revenue raised by Alsace in three years time.
   
 
He felt dizzy from the impact.
 
He felt dizzy from the impact.
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In many cases, the goal of taking an enemy captive was to retrieve a ransom. It was unlikely she would decrease it so easily.
 
In many cases, the goal of taking an enemy captive was to retrieve a ransom. It was unlikely she would decrease it so easily.
   
“You will live here in the imperial palace. Needless to say, any attempt to escape will be met with the death penalty.”
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“You will live here in the Imperial Palace. Needless to say, any attempt to escape will be met with death penalty.”
   
 
He was like a fish dying out of water. Tigre desperately searched his memory for the savings within his territory.
 
He was like a fish dying out of water. Tigre desperately searched his memory for the savings within his territory.
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It amounted to approximately one year's worth of tax revenue, so it was hardly enough.
 
It amounted to approximately one year's worth of tax revenue, so it was hardly enough.
   
''--- If I could speak to Titta or Bertrand, or perhaps Sir Mashas, who is more widely known, they might be able to raise the money.''
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''--- If I can speak to Teita or Batran, or perhaps Sir Mashas, who is more widely known, they may be able to raise the money.''
   
 
The preparations for the ransom were, simply put, hopeless.
 
The preparations for the ransom were, simply put, hopeless.
   
He felt a pain between his eyes as he thought about his gloomy future. He nearly fainted, but before it happened, Tigre somehow managed to gather strength in his legs. Supporting his body and limbs with all the strength he could muster, he looked back at Elen.
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He felt a pain between his eyes as he thought about his gloomy future. He nearly fainted, but before it happened, Tigre somehow managed to gather strength in his legs.
   
 
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Supporting his body and limbs with all the strength he could muster, he looked back at Ellen.
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''--- I must return to Alsace.''
 
''--- I must return to Alsace.''
   
''I was born and raised there. It is an important land that I inherited from my father.''
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''I was born and raised there. It is an important land I inherited from my father.''
   
 
''I'm worried about the soldiers' safety as well. I'm certain my people are worried.''
 
''I'm worried about the soldiers' safety as well. I'm certain my people are worried.''
   
''And above all else, I promised Titta I would return.''
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''Above all, I promised Teita I would return.''
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''I wish to answer their desires.''
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“So... What business do you have to call me to such a place?”
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Tigre spoke with impudent words and a tone to match. Ellen's crimson eyes smiled happily as she looked at him with admiration.
   
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“Of course, that is not all I called you here for.”
''I want to respond to their wishes.''
 
   
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Ellen pointed to a training bow sitting along the wall.
“So... what business do you have calling me to a place like this?” Tigre spoke with impudent words and a tone to match. Elen's crimson eyes danced happily as she looked at him with admiration.
 
   
“Of course, that was not all I called you here for.” Elen pointed to a training bow sitting along the wall. “Shoot an arrow from here and hit that target over there.”
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“Shoot an arrow from here and hit that.”
   
 
“Is that it?”
 
“Is that it?”
   
Tigre felt that it was rather anti-climactic.
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Tigre, who was on the defensive, felt it was rather anti-climactic.
   
The target was three hundred alsin (approximately three hundred meters) away. Even for those skilled with the bow, that distance would seem like a bad joke. Shooting an arrow that far was already a challenge in and of itself; to also hit the target would make it nothing short of impossible.
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The distance to the target was three hundred alsin (approximately three hundred meters). Even for those skilled with the bow, the distance would seem like a bad joke.
   
 
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Shooting an arrow at that distance is already in itself a challenge; to also hit the target would make it nothing short of impossible.
But for Tigre, that distance was not a big deal.
 
   
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However, the distance was not a big deal for Tigre.
Although he didn't know what she was planning, he decided to do this quickly.
 
   
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Though he did not know what she was plotting, he decided to do it quickly.
One of the soldiers brought a bow and four arrows. The man had delicate features and beautiful, shiny black hair that reached down to his shoulders.
 
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One of the soldiers brought a bow and four arrows. The man had delicate features and beautiful, shiny black hair reached down to his shoulders.
   
 
After Tigre received the bow and arrow from him, his eyebrows knitted slightly.
 
After Tigre received the bow and arrow from him, his eyebrows knitted slightly.
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“What a terrible bow...”
 
“What a terrible bow...”
   
The material was hardly suitable for a bow, and the condition of the grip was poor as well. The stringing, too, was badly done. There was also some warping. It was clear what their intention was.
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The material was hardly suitable, and the condition of the grip was poor. The stringing, too, was poorly done. There was also some warping. It was clear what his intention was.
   
Elen was looking at him from a distance, and, like a child, was filled with expectation.
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Ellen glanced at him at a distance like a child, filled with expectation. ''Is she not involved? If that's the case, it's unlikely this is a standard bow for the Zhcted Army.''
   
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He was unsure if she knew of this.
''Is she not involved?'' Tigre wondered. ''If that's the case, it's unlikely that this is a standard bow for the Zhcted Army.''
 
   
He wasn't sure if she knew about this. An unpleasant thought crossed his mind then. Thinking back, the bows in Brune were not that great either.
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An unpleasant thought crossed his mind. Thinking back, the bows in Brune were not that good, either.
   
 
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''--- It can't be an issue of the maker's ability... in the first place, there is no such profession as a bow craftsman.''
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''--- It can't be an issue of the maker's ability... In the first place, there is no such profession as a bow craftsman.''
   
Tigre's bow was made by his father when he was small. The materials were chosen according to the knowledge and technology of other countries, such as Zchted.
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Tigre's bow was made by his father when he was small. The choice of materials, as well, was made according to the knowledge and technology of other countries, such as Zhcted.
   
The accuracy of his arrow was not solely due to Tigre's skill, but the quality of the tool as well.
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The accuracy of his arrow was not due to just Tigre's skill but the quality of the tool as well.
   
While pretending to check the condition of the bow, he glanced peripherally at the soldier who passed him the bow, and saw him and several other soldiers grinning.
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While pretending to check the condition of the bow, he looked at the soldier who passed him the bow in his peripheral vision and saw several soldiers grinning.
   
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“Such a petty trick.”
Angered, a murmur leaked from Tigre's mouth.
 
   
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Because he was angry, a murmur leaked from his mouth.
“Such a petty trick," he said.
 
   
 
“What is it?”
 
“What is it?”
   
Lim was standing nearby, looking at him dubiously. Apparently, she had not heard his words. Still, complaining about the quality of the bow as a prisoner of war was cumbersome.
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Lim, who stood nearby, looked at him dubiously. Apparently she had not heard his words. Still, complaining about the quality of the bow as a prisoner of war was cumbersome.
   
“I wish to confirm something," said Tigre. "It is not necessary for me to hit the target with all four arrows; only one, correct?”
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“I wish to confirm something. It is not necessary for me to hit the target with all four arrows, only one, correct?”
   
“That is a rather timid remark for a person who killed my horse with a single arrow.”
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“That is a rather timid remark for a person who killed my horse with one arrow.”
   
Though she thought Tigre was being sarcastic, she remained expressionless. There was no sign of malice. It seemed that she had not yet noticed that the bow was inferior.
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Though she thought Tigre was being sarcastic, she remained expressionless. There was no sign of malice. It seems she had not noticed the bow was inferior.
   
 
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“If your physical condition is poor, I can tell Eleanora-sama to do this another day.”
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“If your physical condition is poor, I can tell Eleanora-sama to hold this another day.”
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“No, I will do it.”
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He answered with a strong tone. Tigre set the bow in his hand.
   
“No, I will do it," Tigre answered in a strong tone. He set the bow in his hand. “However, please allow me to hit the target with only one arrow. I am not as confident with an unfamiliar bow.”
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“However, please allow me to hit the target with only one arrow. I am not as confident with an unfamiliar bow.”
   
Lim bowed in assent and walked over to Elen. After speaking a few words, Elen looked at him without any dissatisfaction, as though she were saying, "Please begin."
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Lim bowed in assent and immediately walked to Ellen. After speaking a few words, Ellen looked at him devoid of any dissatisfaction, as if saying “Please begin.
   
 
Tigre nocked the first arrow and released it.
 
Tigre nocked the first arrow and released it.
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The hum of the arrow sounded as it flew in an arc. It hit the castle wall, far from the target.
 
The hum of the arrow sounded as it flew in an arc. It hit the castle wall, far from the target.
   
The soldiers laughed loudly. Some shook their shoulders; others looked at him with pity or contempt. Many eyes were piercing Tigre.
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The soldiers laughed loudly. Some shook their shoulders, others looked at him with pity or contempt. Many gazes pierced Tigre.
   
“Are you doing this seriously?” Lim said irritably. She looked at Elen.
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“Are you doing this seriously?”
   
 
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Lim, speaking in an irritated voice, looked to Ellen.
Elen appeared troubled as she watched Tigre, like a student who had been scolded by a teacher, though she was trying to properly solve the problem.
 
   
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Ellen looked troubled. Though she was trying to properly solve a problem, she looked at him as if she were scolded by a teacher.
“I'll do it,” Tigre replied and nocked the third arrow.
 
   
  +
“I'll do it.”
“Hey, are you going to keep going? You're really willing to keep making a spectacle of yourself?”
 
   
  +
Tigre eagerly replied and nocked the third arrow.
“Maybe you'd like a replacement. Even though you can reach the target, you can't even shoot straight.”
 
  +
  +
“Hey, are you still continuing? You're really willing to make a spectacle of yourself, still?”
  +
  +
“Maybe you'd like a replacement. Though he can reach the target, he can't even shoot straight.”
   
 
“Vanadis-sama, did you really make a man like this your captive?”
 
“Vanadis-sama, did you really make a man like this your captive?”
   
“This is quite a splendid show. I wonder if something new will be shown tomorrow?
+
“This is quite a splendid show. I wonder if something new will be shown tomorrow.
   
Although the soldiers deliberately spoke ill of him, Tigre was not bothered by it. He was accustomed to such abuse. He had been harassed much worse than this many times before.
+
Though the soldiers deliberately spoke ill, Tigre was not bothered.
   
  +
He was accustomed to such abuse. He had received mental abuse incomparable to this many times.
Tigre took a deep breath, and looked up at the sky for a change of pace, moving his neck around.
 
   
  +
He took a deep breath and looked at the sky for a change of pace, moving his neck around.
That was when he saw a black shadow.
 
  +
  +
In Tigre's vision was a black shadow.
   
 
''--- What is that?''
 
''--- What is that?''
   
His neck stopped moving and he looked more closely.
+
His neck stopped moving and he looked closely.
   
 
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In an instant, he understood the identity of the shadow. Chills ran down Tigre's spine as he screamed at Elen:
+
In an instant, he understood the identity of the shadow. Chills ran down Tigre's spine as he screamed at Ellen.
   
 
“Get down!”
 
“Get down!”
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''--- An arbalest...!''
 
''--- An arbalest...!''
   
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It was different from the bow Tigre used. It was a mechanical bow; the bowstring was pulled by a winch and shot with a trigger.
The arbalest was a mechanical bow. Unlike the one that Tigre used, its bowstring was pulled by a winch and shot with a trigger. Although it was difficult to maintain and prone to failure, it was a powerful weapon that could fire a bolt up to 350 alsin (approximately 350 meters) away, and with enough force that it could punch through shields and armor and come out the other side.
 
  +
  +
It was difficult to maintain and prone to failure, but it could reach three-hundred-fifty alsin (approximately three-hundred-fifty meters) at maximum and could easily pass through shields and armor with enough force for the bolt to come out the other side.
  +
  +
The black shadow on the rampart held one.
   
  +
A thick bolt was released from the arbalest.
The black shadow on the rampart was holding one.
 
   
A thick bolt was released from the arbalest, speeding through the air straight towards Elen. She had no time to avoid it.
+
The roar of air sped straight toward Ellen. She had no time to avoid it.
   
However, Elen did not panic, nor did she move from her spot.
+
However, Ellen did not panic, nor did she move from her spot.
   
 
“--- Arifal!”
 
“--- Arifal!”
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''--- What just happened?''
 
''--- What just happened?''
   
Tigre stared in blank surprise at Elen.
+
Tigre stared in blank surprise at Ellen.
   
 
It was not a coincidence; that was impossible.
 
It was not a coincidence; that was impossible.
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''--- This has nothing to do with me.''
 
''--- This has nothing to do with me.''
   
Tigre muttered to himself. Though he shouted on reflex, he was not Elen's subordinate, nor was he a man of this city.
+
Tigre muttered to himself. Though he shouted on reflex, he was not Ellen's subordinate, nor was he a man of this city.
   
While thinking that, suddenly, Tigre remembered his first meeting with Elen.
+
While thinking that, suddenly, Tigre remembered his first meeting with Ellen.
   
 
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She smiled as she said so.
 
She smiled as she said so.
   
''Titta, Bertrand and his men, my late father, when was I last praised for my bow arm?''
+
''Teita, Batran and his men, my late father, when was I last praised for my bow arm?''
   
 
“Should I capture him alive?”
 
“Should I capture him alive?”
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“Is this really a situation where you can say that...?”
 
“Is this really a situation where you can say that...?”
   
Grasping the sword with her hand until it went white, Lim stared at the shadow on the rampart in chagrin. She wanted to lead the soldiers, but could not leave Elen's side.
+
Grasping the sword with her hand until it went white, Lim stared at the shadow on the rampart in chagrin. She wanted to lead the soldiers, but could not leave Ellen's side.
   
 
The shadow ran quickly across the wall. Once he reached the tower, he could quickly escape outside.
 
The shadow ran quickly across the wall. Once he reached the tower, he could quickly escape outside.
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The fourth arrow remained in his hand. Though Lim had seen it before, she did not look any differently than the other soldiers. When his eyes met hers, he understood her body was tense.
 
The fourth arrow remained in his hand. Though Lim had seen it before, she did not look any differently than the other soldiers. When his eyes met hers, he understood her body was tense.
   
He looked back at Elen.
+
He looked back at Ellen.
   
 
“I'll ask you now. What about the fourth shot?”
 
“I'll ask you now. What about the fourth shot?”
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“It's enough with this. I'd rather not lose this.”
 
“It's enough with this. I'd rather not lose this.”
   
Elen's argent hair moved gently as she shook her head.
+
Ellen's argent hair moved gently as she shook her head.
   
 
“You did well.”
 
“You did well.”
   
Elen smiled at Tigre with sincerity, her sword still sheathed at her waist. A wind blew from somewhere, tickling Tigre's hair.
+
Ellen smiled at Tigre with sincerity, her sword still sheathed at her waist. A wind blew from somewhere, tickling Tigre's hair.
   
 
''--- Just now...''
 
''--- Just now...''
   
Tigre placed his hand in his hair involuntarily. He thought Elen had somehow used her longsword to produce the wind.
+
Tigre placed his hand in his hair involuntarily. He thought Ellen had somehow used her longsword to produce the wind.
   
 
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