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Whilst they thought a highly motivated inspector focused on his job would nitpick and look for trouble, Fenesis was honestly just observing them.
 
Whilst they thought a highly motivated inspector focused on his job would nitpick and look for trouble, Fenesis was honestly just observing them.
   
Perhaps the words said during the trip to the marketplace worked to some extent, and eased her bias and suspicions against the Alchemists.
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Perhaps the words said during the trip to the marketplace worked to some extent, and eased her bias and suspicions against the alchemists.
   
 
Though Kusla personally thought of it this way, it meant that with reduced bias and vigilance, there would be reduced tension.
 
Though Kusla personally thought of it this way, it meant that with reduced bias and vigilance, there would be reduced tension.
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“I have no idea why you want to be in such a place of suffering.”
 
“I have no idea why you want to be in such a place of suffering.”
   
“So that I can follow God’s teachings, and to me, I have no idea why you Alchemists have such passion.”
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“So that I can follow God’s teachings, and to me, I have no idea why you alchemists have such passion.”
   
 
“Heh, so we are peas in a pod.”
 
“Heh, so we are peas in a pod.”
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Fenesis frowned, ostensibly a little furious at Kusla for start to drink while working in the middle of the day.
 
Fenesis frowned, ostensibly a little furious at Kusla for start to drink while working in the middle of the day.
   
“This is one way of making distilled liquor, and we need to use copper distilling equipment to do this. Though brewers are better at this technique, it is rumored that an Alchemist was the one who invented this technique.”
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“This is one way of making distilled liquor, and we need to use copper distilling equipment to do this. Though brewers are better at this technique, it is rumored that an alchemist was the one who invented this technique.”
   
 
“Eh?”
 
“Eh?”
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Fenesis continued to stare blankly at the brass, at Kusla, and back again; perhaps it was hard to imagine.
 
Fenesis continued to stare blankly at the brass, at Kusla, and back again; perhaps it was hard to imagine.
   
“It is said that this method was a precursor to distillation, and repeated distillation can create liquor. Of course, nobody knows what the fact really is, and this may be just things some people just say randomly. But no matter what, the discovery of a technique in Alchemy is closely related to other skills. Some insignificant discovery may bring about an unexpected outcome, like this.”
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“It is said that this method was a precursor to distillation, and repeated distillation can create liquor. Of course, nobody knows what the fact really is, and this may be just things some people just say randomly. But no matter what, the discovery of a technique in alchemy is closely related to other skills. Some insignificant discovery may bring about an unexpected outcome, like this.”
   
 
Kusla paused for a moment, and sighed harder,
 
Kusla paused for a moment, and sighed harder,
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But Fenesis’ response was still dull.
 
But Fenesis’ response was still dull.
   
“This is something really amazing. All the Alchemists in the world have been revealing the secrets of this world just like this. This is what everyone says, to remove God’s clothes.”
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“This is something really amazing. All the alchemists in the world have been revealing the secrets of this world just like this. This is what everyone says, to remove God’s clothes.”
   
 
Kusla turned his stare towards Fenesis, but the latter protected the front of her robes instinctively. It seemed the experience of suffering at the hands of Wayland was enough to cause a psychological trauma, and to her, not letting her robes get removed was far more important than solving the secrets of the world.
 
Kusla turned his stare towards Fenesis, but the latter protected the front of her robes instinctively. It seemed the experience of suffering at the hands of Wayland was enough to cause a psychological trauma, and to her, not letting her robes get removed was far more important than solving the secrets of the world.
   
“Speaking of which, I think one of the reasons why Alchemists can pursue some radical goals is because they feel they can do anything.”
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“Speaking of which, I think one of the reasons why alchemists can pursue some radical goals is because they feel they can do anything.”
   
The reason why Alchemists were despised by the Church was not simply because they seemed eccentric.
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The reason why alchemists were despised by the Church was not simply because they seemed eccentric.
   
 
The teaching the Church promoted was that the current corrupt world will one day receive its final judgement, and that only those who always did deeds of goodness would enter Heaven.
 
The teaching the Church promoted was that the current corrupt world will one day receive its final judgement, and that only those who always did deeds of goodness would enter Heaven.
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They felt this world was constantly being corrupted by evil, and one day, they would meet their end.
 
They felt this world was constantly being corrupted by evil, and one day, they would meet their end.
   
But the future Alchemists thought of was completely different. Soon in the future, their research would be able to blossom, what they could not do up till this point would become possible, and what they could not understand would be revealed to everyone. It was because they had such a belief that they could continue to indulge in their research.
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But the future alchemists thought of was completely different. Soon in the future, their research would be able to blossom, what they could not do up till this point would become possible, and what they could not understand would be revealed to everyone. It was because they had such a belief that they could continue to indulge in their research.
   
 
But as expected, Fenesis, who was not used to this sort of thinking, continued to remain confounded.
 
But as expected, Fenesis, who was not used to this sort of thinking, continued to remain confounded.
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She never thought of this in the first place.
 
She never thought of this in the first place.
   
“The original owner of this workshop, Thomas, is probably a classic case of the Alchemists I talk about. He was alone, drifting in the sea of knowledge, and through these records alone, I certainly can understand his determination not to give up. I am eager to decipher the things written on these parchments.”
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“The original owner of this workshop, Thomas, is probably a classic case of the alchemists I talk about. He was alone, drifting in the sea of knowledge, and through these records alone, I certainly can understand his determination not to give up. I am eager to decipher the things written on these parchments.”
   
 
Kusla paused, and lamented,
 
Kusla paused, and lamented,
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Kusla brought over the tool beside him.
 
Kusla brought over the tool beside him.
   
Alchemists were just Alchemists, people who were despised for walking down the path of heresy.
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Alchemists were just alchemists, people who were despised for walking down the path of heresy.
   
 
“Is it, really that interesting?”
 
“Is it, really that interesting?”
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It was a fact that Blacksmiths were very popular amongst women.
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It was a fact that blacksmiths were very popular amongst women.
   
 
They had to spend long hours working in front of a sweltering hot furnace, move the fuel, man the bellows, swing a large hammer to crush the ores, and move the refined ingots out. The result of such time-consuming work over a long period of time was a firm body devoid of excess fat, sculpted like iron. However, they did not need to live a vicious life of bloodshed like mercenaries, and one would even feel some poetic sense when viewing into their stares, focused on the furnace silently.
 
They had to spend long hours working in front of a sweltering hot furnace, move the fuel, man the bellows, swing a large hammer to crush the ores, and move the refined ingots out. The result of such time-consuming work over a long period of time was a firm body devoid of excess fat, sculpted like iron. However, they did not need to live a vicious life of bloodshed like mercenaries, and one would even feel some poetic sense when viewing into their stares, focused on the furnace silently.
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Upon hearing the holler from upstairs, Kusla cackled maliciously and continued introducing air into the furnace.
 
Upon hearing the holler from upstairs, Kusla cackled maliciously and continued introducing air into the furnace.
   
The large amount of air entered the large furnace, and it continued to burn inside, the cackling sounds ostensibly from the midst of Hell. The flying sparks flew by the hill of gathered materials, and the flames in the furnace turned from red to yellow, and then to white. There were a lot of superstitious people amongst the Blacksmiths, but this phenomenon was such that even Alchemists, who were deemed eccentric by others, could not help but frown.
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The large amount of air entered the large furnace, and it continued to burn inside, the cackling sounds ostensibly from the midst of Hell. The flying sparks flew by the hill of gathered materials, and the flames in the furnace turned from red to yellow, and then to white. There were a lot of superstitious people amongst the blacksmiths, but this phenomenon was such that even alchemists, who were deemed eccentric by others, could not help but frown.
   
 
But for those who had witnessed it once personally, anyone could understand why.
 
But for those who had witnessed it once personally, anyone could understand why.
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They could use a drip or an hourglass for this purpose, but when doing physical work, nobody would be bothered to observe such minor changes. In this situation, singing would allow one to become happier when working.
 
They could use a drip or an hourglass for this purpose, but when doing physical work, nobody would be bothered to observe such minor changes. In this situation, singing would allow one to become happier when working.
   
Often, there would be Alchemists being reported to the Church for reciting some spells or some strange prayers in front of a furnace, but when dealing with a small fire and a small furnace, it would be better to sing softly.
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Often, there would be alchemists being reported to the Church for reciting some spells or some strange prayers in front of a furnace, but when dealing with a small fire and a small furnace, it would be better to sing softly.
   
 
After that, Kusla conversed with Wayland, who was upstairs, many times, and stopped introducing air at the anticipated moment when unvaporized lead ash would appear. The records Thomas let behind was most probably correct, and though there were some efforts, the firewood and charcoal did burn up at the same rate. After letting the furnace cool for a while, they just needed to obtain the cooled zinc crystals from the roof and the specially designed supply outlet to complete everything.
 
After that, Kusla conversed with Wayland, who was upstairs, many times, and stopped introducing air at the anticipated moment when unvaporized lead ash would appear. The records Thomas let behind was most probably correct, and though there were some efforts, the firewood and charcoal did burn up at the same rate. After letting the furnace cool for a while, they just needed to obtain the cooled zinc crystals from the roof and the specially designed supply outlet to complete everything.
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“…?”
 
“…?”
   
“That’s a Saint who protected Blacksmiths.”
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“That’s a Saint who protected blacksmiths.”
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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Kusla laughed, and said,
 
Kusla laughed, and said,
   
“Turning lead into gold? Hahaha. Lead will never become gold, but we can extract gold from lead ores. That’s probably just some rumors a few vile Alchemists spread about and deliberately exaggerated.”
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“Turning lead into gold? Hahaha. Lead will never become gold, but we can extract gold from lead ores. That’s probably just some rumors a few vile alchemists spread about and deliberately exaggerated.”
   
 
“Though you have to use so—much lead ores just to extract this little bit of gold.”
 
“Though you have to use so—much lead ores just to extract this little bit of gold.”
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He too was infected by Thomas’ excitement.
 
He too was infected by Thomas’ excitement.
   
But what excited him more was that if they could attain a way to purify iron to such an extent, they might be able to find a way to Magdala. This was the biggest reason for Kusla, who betted his entire existence on it; no, the only reason why every Alchemist could insist on being one was to search for Magdala.
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But what excited him more was that if they could attain a way to purify iron to such an extent, they might be able to find a way to Magdala. This was the biggest reason for Kusla, who betted his entire existence on it; no, the only reason why every alchemist could insist on being one was to search for Magdala.
   
 
But one had to note that there had to be no mistakes in this process.
 
But one had to note that there had to be no mistakes in this process.

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