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Takeshi who was walking next to her could not help but notice her features, slender shoulders, raised eyebrows with eyes that gave a look of determination, her tightly closed mouth with pink colored lips and elegant chin line. Except for the light pink chap stick she had no other makeup on, despite this, she still had an attractive figure.
 
Takeshi who was walking next to her could not help but notice her features, slender shoulders, raised eyebrows with eyes that gave a look of determination, her tightly closed mouth with pink colored lips and elegant chin line. Except for the light pink chap stick she had no other makeup on, despite this, she still had an attractive figure.
   
If 10 youths of the same age were asked, all of them would agree she was cute, if pressed any further they would all say that she was a rare beauty in a class by herself.
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If 10 youths of the same age were asked, all of them would agree she was cute, if pressed any further they would all say the she was a rare beauty in a class by herself.
   
 
Kurumi, aware that she was being watched, lifted her head to look at Takeshi.
 
Kurumi, aware that she was being watched, lifted her head to look at Takeshi.
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In Kurumi's world the only worries she had were to be in the same class as Takeshi, eating lunch with him every day, and to be able to rely on him without causing problems, but while that may be true, she should still make friends, even so, there was no reason for her to say that.
 
In Kurumi's world the only worries she had were to be in the same class as Takeshi, eating lunch with him every day, and to be able to rely on him without causing problems, but while that may be true, she should still make friends, even so, there was no reason for her to say that.
   
It would be expected that a boy would need considerable courage to interfere with a girl bonding, but maybe that was Kurumi's inner desire. Maybe it would have been better if someone had always been angry. Even so, while walking next to her, Takeshi would send periodic glances her way, it was hard to believe how many times these feelings would be put away. In some respects, Isoshima was a nice and diligent girl.
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It would be expected that a boy would need considerable courage to interfere with a girl bonding, but maybe that was Kurumi's inner desire. Maybe it would have been better if someone had always been angry, even so, while walking next to her, Takeshi would send periodic glances her way, it was hard to believe how many times these feelings would be put away, in some respects, Isoshima was a nice and diligent girl.
   
There was no way for Takeshi to know of her feelings as Kurumi walked like a puppy, waving her hand with a beaming smile.
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There was no way for Takeshi to know of her feelings as Kurumi walked like puppy waving her hand with a beaming smile.
   
 
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