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“Well, it’s just a natural result.”
 
“Well, it’s just a natural result.”
   
"Haa," Takeshi let out an exaggerated sigh, “Well, at least it’s better than being a delinquent.”
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Haa, Takeshi let out an exaggerated sigh, “Well, at least it’s better than being a delinquent.”
   
 
That remark was immediately rejected.
 
That remark was immediately rejected.
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“Wouldn’t that be a life of smooth sailing!”<ref>I guess the easiest understanding would be the easy life</ref>
 
“Wouldn’t that be a life of smooth sailing!”<ref>I guess the easiest understanding would be the easy life</ref>
   
Three people were trying to imagine who would be their wife, Takeshi too, even though he understood it he did not have the willpower to deny it. Besides it’s not like he could, regardless of how many times he repeated it to himself.
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Three people were tried to imagine who would be their wife, Takeshi too, even though he understood it he did not have the willpower to deny it. Besides it’s not like he could, regardless of how many times he repeated it to himself.
   
 
“I’ve said everything I want to say.”
 
“I’ve said everything I want to say.”
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“No no! I am at the limits of envy.”
 
“No no! I am at the limits of envy.”
   
“It’s seriously enviable.”
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“It’s seriously enviable”
   
 
“Oh, but didn't you say you were going to Law School?”
 
“Oh, but didn't you say you were going to Law School?”
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After he failed in that unpleasant situation, what's left in life may only be atonement.
 
After he failed in that unpleasant situation, what's left in life may only be atonement.
Takeshi's future was too far away, what he could see in front and behind him was an abyss that spread out in all directions, it was too realistic and familiar that he became depressed.
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Takeshi's future was too far away, what he could see in front and back of him was an abyss that spread out in all directions, it was too realistic and familiar that he became depressed.
   
 
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