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Gekkou, who was the younger brother, and Takeshi were born one year apart and were very close to each other.
 
Gekkou, who was the younger brother, and Takeshi were born one year apart and were very close to each other.
   
However, there was an incident that marked a turning point which caused Gekkou to avoid Takeshi, his mother and father also dealt with it in the same way. From that date everything changed, every time his mother saw him she was indifferent, his father would return every day, and his younger brother completely hated him now.
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However, there was an incident that marked a turning point which caused Gekkou to avoid Takashi, his mother and father also dealt with it in the same way. From that date everything changed, every time his mother saw him she was indifferent, his father would return every day, and his younger brother completely hated him now.
   
Takeshi could not even remember the last time he laughed in this house.
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Takashi could not even remember the last time he laughed in this house.
   
 
Just to get along with his family, he had to breathe quietly so he didn't meet anyone.
 
Just to get along with his family, he had to breathe quietly so he didn't meet anyone.
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“I really wish tomorrow would come quickly.”
 
“I really wish tomorrow would come quickly.”
   
He looked out the window towards the Isoshima Residence, planted in the garden there was an unknown broadleaf tree whose leaves swayed in the breeze, a large shadow jumped from the leaves and branches. “What an eerie looking shadow,” murmured Takeshi.
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He looked out the window towards the Isoshima Residence, planted in the garden there was unknown broadleaf tree whose leaves swayed in the breeze, a large shadow jumped from the leaves and branches, “What an eerie looking shadow,” murmured Takeshi.
   
 
“It would be nice if time would go by faster.”
 
“It would be nice if time would go by faster.”
   
The tree branches moved slightly as if it nodding in agreement.
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The tree branches moved slightly as if it nodded in agreement.
   
 
“If I could leave this house, anywhere would be better, even hell itself.”
 
“If I could leave this house, anywhere would be better, even hell itself.”

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