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However, Ida, who had returned just as Takeshi was talking on the phone, had no idea what was going on.
 
However, Ida, who had returned just as Takeshi was talking on the phone, had no idea what was going on.
   
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"So... What were you talking about?"
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"So... What were they talking about?"
   
 
Based on his demeanor, he didn't seem to have run into the guys chasing them anywhere in the park. Takeshi didn't say anything and just apologized to him as he walked with Kurumi out of the park as it was too complicated to explain the matter to Ida at that moment.
 
Based on his demeanor, he didn't seem to have run into the guys chasing them anywhere in the park. Takeshi didn't say anything and just apologized to him as he walked with Kurumi out of the park as it was too complicated to explain the matter to Ida at that moment.
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In fact, Ida was interested to know the reason why Takeshi had such a varied personality. Was he just pretending to be gentle, or was his attitude towards the guy who was going to run over his sister just because he had some pent-up anger? Whatever the case, he wanted to know. Takeshi didn't suspect any of that, and had no idea what to say to Ida, so he simply headed for the school in order to put an end to the pursuit of those guys once and for all.
 
In fact, Ida was interested to know the reason why Takeshi had such a varied personality. Was he just pretending to be gentle, or was his attitude towards the guy who was going to run over his sister just because he had some pent-up anger? Whatever the case, he wanted to know. Takeshi didn't suspect any of that, and had no idea what to say to Ida, so he simply headed for the school in order to put an end to the pursuit of those guys once and for all.
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===Part 3===
 
===Part 3===

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