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Has there ever been another more exciting combination?
 
Has there ever been another more exciting combination?
   
My classmate Youhei said so. Something like this is the season when chances are the highest for boys and girls in their teens to have their first experience.
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My classmate Youhei said so. Something like that this is the season when chances are the highest for boys and girls in their teens to have their first experience.
   
 
Now that he said it, I have to agree.
 
Now that he said it, I have to agree.
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Currently, we are high school sophomores.
 
Currently, we are high school sophomores.
   
Next year we’ll end up in the front lines preparing for the entrance exams.
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Next year we’ll end in the front lines preparing for the entrance exams.
   
 
Come to that… There’s no way we’ll have time for something like romance.
 
Come to that… There’s no way we’ll have time for something like romance.
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My lodger Zonmi is weak against heat, so she absolutely can’t go out.
 
My lodger Zonmi is weak against heat, so she absolutely can’t go out.
   
My best friend Youhei, having disturbed the firework show at the recent summer festival, has been put under house arrest by the school.
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My best friend Youhei, having disturbed the firework show at the recent summer festival, has been put into house arrest by the school.
   
Having had both my two top choices of people to hang out with cut off, I can’t help but be dragged into the lifestyle of a NEET.
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Having had both my two top choices of people to hang out with shut off, I can’t help but be dragged into the lifestyle of a NEET.
   
 
“… Well, what do I do today?”
 
“… Well, what do I do today?”
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Having Kyouko grown up in a household that couldn’t be said thriving even as flattery is cruelty (being in her undies instead of turning the air conditioner on seems to have been for the sake of saving).
 
Having Kyouko grown up in a household that couldn’t be said thriving even as flattery is cruelty (being in her undies instead of turning the air conditioner on seems to have been for the sake of saving).
   
For that reason, it’s good we have damage insurance.
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For that reason, it’s good we had signed a damage insurance.
   
 
It may be an inconvenience for the insurance company, but from now on we’ll be under their care for a while.
 
It may be an inconvenience for the insurance company, but from now on we’ll be under their care for a while.
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“… Yup. I’m good.”
 
“… Yup. I’m good.”
   
Turning back, I saw my childhood friend dressed in a big sweater the size of regular nightclothes.
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Turning back, I saw my childhood friend dressed in big sweater the size of regular nightclothes.
   
 
“Sorry for having to borrow it. Tomorrow without fail… I’ll wash and return it!”
 
“Sorry for having to borrow it. Tomorrow without fail… I’ll wash and return it!”
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What’s with this… The sight of a woman in oversized clothes is bewitchingly tempting.
 
What’s with this… The sight of a woman in oversized clothes is bewitchingly tempting.
   
And being familiar with the clothes, the destructive power reinforced with the lewdness was doubled.
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And being familiar with the clothes, the destruction power reinforced with the lewdness was doubled.
   
   
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“? Why does it matter?”
 
“? Why does it matter?”
   
“It’s decided… Each and every time, at every opportunity, you show your u-u-u-underwear to my master!”
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“It’s decided… Each and every time, at every opportunity, you show your u-u-u-underwear to my master!”
   
 
“A-are you joking? I-it’s not that I like to sho…”
 
“A-are you joking? I-it’s not that I like to sho…”
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“… To whom, what do I have to convey?”
 
“… To whom, what do I have to convey?”
   
“Come on, it’s vexing you that I took Haru’s first summon. You’re just jealous.”
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“Come on, it’s vexing you that that I took Haru’s first summon. You’re just jealous.”
   
 
“… Fufufu. Those words, I’ll take them as a war declaration. Come out, Nephilim. In the first place, as a rookie tamer, Chiharu is in no need for two partners.
 
“… Fufufu. Those words, I’ll take them as a war declaration. Come out, Nephilim. In the first place, as a rookie tamer, Chiharu is in no need for two partners.
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<nowiki>*THUD</nowiki>*, the sound of the door being closed with force.
 
<nowiki>*THUD</nowiki>*, the sound of the door being closed with force.
   
Manami, who had went to a summertime cram school, had arrived.
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Manami, who had went to a summertime cram school, has arrived home.
   
 
Wow. It’s a godsend.
 
Wow. It’s a godsend.
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Eerrrm. The name of the sender was…
 
Eerrrm. The name of the sender was…
   
“… The heck. It can’t be… Could it be this is a prank of yours?”
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“… The heck. I can’t be… Could it be this is a prank of yours?”
   
 
Grumping because I didn’t believe her, my sister, puffing her cheeks,
 
Grumping because I didn’t believe her, my sister, puffing her cheeks,
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Her character… The heck, couldn’t it be summed up as a freewheeler?
 
Her character… The heck, couldn’t it be summed up as a freewheeler?
   
If one were to say how much of a freewheeler she is, she’s at a level that would make the Mongol nomadic tribes run away barefoot<ref>Very vicious warrior tribes of the past that conquered and pillaged and usually went on horse. The best known of them is Genghis Khan.</ref>.
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If one were to say how much of a freewheeler she is, she’s of a level that would make the Mongol nomadic tribes run away barefoot<ref>Very vicious warrior tribes of the past that conquered and pillaged and usually went on horse. The best known of the is Genghis Khan.</ref>.
   
To tell the truth, even when we were kids, we had no other way to prove the existence of our mother, except the monthly transfer of our living expenses.
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To tell the truth, even when we were kids, we had no other way to tell of the existence of our mother but the monthly transfer of our living expenses.
   
   
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“Yaaaay! A trip with oniichan! It’s a honeymoon for only the two of uuuus!”
 
“Yaaaay! A trip with oniichan! It’s a honeymoon for only the two of uuuus!”
   
Manami entwined herself around my body with the strength of a sea anemone feeding on its prey.
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Manami twined herself around my body with the strength of a sea anemone feeding on its prey.
   
 
“… No. Look better, Manami. With this A-class ticket, it seems that with one, up to five people can join.”
 
“… No. Look better, Manami. With this A-class ticket, it seems that with one, up to five people can join.”
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“But, thinking normally about it, since the ticket covers for five people’s share, doesn’t mom intend for us all to go together?”
 
“But, thinking normally about it, since the ticket covers for five people’s share, doesn’t mom intend for us all to go together?”
   
“Isn’t it? With this, hasn’t mom done it out of concern so that Manami and oniichan can go three times?”
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“Isn’t it? With this, hasn’t mom done it out of concern so that Manami and oniichan can go three times?”
   
 
“Let’s say we could split it in three times, isn’t one person’s share on the last trip not covered?…”
 
“Let’s say we could split it in three times, isn’t one person’s share on the last trip not covered?…”
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For starters, as I know neither where she lives nor what she usually does, would we be able to get along well?
 
For starters, as I know neither where she lives nor what she usually does, would we be able to get along well?
   
Despite embracing that uneasiness, I didn’t find any good reason to oppose it.
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Despite embracing that uneasiness, I didn’t found any good reason to oppose it.
   
 
In the end, we entrusted Manami to make an appointment with Iris to do a single rehearsal and, like that, we parted.
 
In the end, we entrusted Manami to make an appointment with Iris to do a single rehearsal and, like that, we parted.
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… Surprisingly, I feel that up till now we had never gathered these members to go somewhere. At the summer festival, Kyouko didn’t come at first.
 
… Surprisingly, I feel that up till now we had never gathered these members to go somewhere. At the summer festival, Kyouko didn’t come at first.
   
The feeling of the sea breeze brought by the wind was pleasant.
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The feeling of sea breeze brought by the wind was pleasant.
   
It would be the best if there was a young lady here clad in a swimsuit, but regrettably, there was no one apart from us, just some old guys with fishing rods who seemed to be looking afar.
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It would be the best if there was here a young lady clad in a swimsuit, but regrettably, there was no one apart from us, just some old guys with fishing rods who seemed to be looking afar.
   
 
“This is weird. Chiharu, is this the correct place?”
 
“This is weird. Chiharu, is this the correct place?”
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Her age, around the early twenties?
 
Her age, around the early twenties?
   
She was a {woman} with glasses that suited her sharp glance and serious demeanor.
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She was a person [woman] with glasses that suited her sharp glance and serious demeanor.
   
 
Those features were of a breathtaking beauty, but, for good or bad, around me (in the eyes of strangers) there were lots of pretty girls.
 
Those features were of a breathtaking beauty, but, for good or bad, around me (in the eyes of strangers) there were lots of pretty girls.
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<strike>Hoping</strike> Worrying that the buttons on her blouse popped out, my eyes got unintentionally fixed on her glamorous body.
 
<strike>Hoping</strike> Worrying that the buttons on her blouse popped out, my eyes got unintentionally fixed on her glamorous body.
   
What’s with those breasts… Are they at the level where a hamster could shelter itself from the rain below them?
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What’s with those breasts… Are they on the level where a hamster can get shelter from the rain below them?
   
   
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“E-Errrm. What’s the matter?”
 
“E-Errrm. What’s the matter?”
   
“Heh. So Haru likes women with big breasts—. That’s the reason—, so that’s why his reactions towards my body were so lukewarm (monotone)<!--It seems that the “(棒)”is short for 棒読み, which means either "reading lines in monotone" or "reading Chinese text in Japanese following the Chinese order instead of using the ordering marks provided", in this case, the former one. -->”
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“Heh. So Haru likes people [women] with big breasts—. That’s the reason—, so that’s why his reactions towards my body were so lukewaaarm—<!--Here, on the raws there appeared a “(棒), but I think that’s a typo (it means (rod), so it must be a -->”
   
 
“… Hun! Entranced by lumps of meat like those… Thou hast fallen low, monster tamer.”
 
“… Hun! Entranced by lumps of meat like those… Thou hast fallen low, monster tamer.”
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Since Manami was hugging me so tightly I couldn’t escape to the point of suffocation, caught between her breasts, in the end I ended lacking in oxygen.
 
Since Manami was hugging me so tightly I couldn’t escape to the point of suffocation, caught between her breasts, in the end I ended lacking in oxygen.
   
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Oioi.
Oi oi.
 
   
 
If ‘cause of death = suffocation by getting caught between his blood-related little sister’s breasts’ makes it to the morning news… If it makes it.
 
If ‘cause of death = suffocation by getting caught between his blood-related little sister’s breasts’ makes it to the morning news… If it makes it.
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A sheet of spray swelled up from the surface of the sea.
 
A sheet of spray swelled up from the surface of the sea.
   
What appeared in front of us, as if splitting the surface, was a giant fish 20 meters<ref>Around 65’ 7”.</ref> long shining in gold.
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What appeared in front of us, as if splitting the surface, was a giant fish 20 meters<ref>Around 6’ 7”.</ref> long shining in gold.
   
   
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It’s true that it was a surprise attack but, couldn’t this attack from the enemy have been avoided?
 
It’s true that it was a surprise attack but, couldn’t this attack from the enemy have been avoided?
   
It may be me thinking over things too much, it seemed like Zonmi and Iris took the attack without even trying to ward it off.
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It may be me thinking over things too much, it seemed like Zonmi and Iris took the attack without even daring to ward off.
   
 
… But, my thinking ability’s working can’t keep any longer.
 
… But, my thinking ability’s working can’t keep any longer.

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