Editing Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa:Volume 3 Chapter 6

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Just when I let down my chest with relief.
 
Just when I let down my chest with relief.
   
I noticed Iris’s body becoming smaller and smaller, changing to human form.
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I noticed Iris’s body becoming smaller and smaller and changing to human form.
   
 
Having lost her wings, Iris, pulled by the gravity, started to drop at a terrific speed.
 
Having lost her wings, Iris, pulled by the gravity, started to drop at a terrific speed.
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From somewhere, came the noise of rubble crumbling.
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From somewhere, it came the noise of rubble crumbling.
   
   

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