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===<noinclude>X-Mark. </noinclude>Part 1===
 
===<noinclude>X-Mark. </noinclude>Part 1===
   
"How about sticking it on the back of a cat? Like in some sort of sling," Yoshino-san suggested.
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"How about sticking it on the back of a cat? Like in some sort of sling."
   
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Yoshino-san said.
"See, the cat would run away. It'd get scared with everyone chasing after it. So even if they called out to it or offered it food, it wouldn't come. Plus, the cat could go places they couldn't follow, like under the bushes or into small passages between the school buildings."
 
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"See, the cat would run away. It'd get scared with everyone chasing after it. So even if they called out to it or offered it food, it wouldn't come. Plus the cat could go places they couldn't follow, like under the bushes or into small passages between the school buildings."
   
 
As she spoke, she traced a meandering path around the map, highlighting just such a route.
 
As she spoke, she traced a meandering path around the map, highlighting just such a route.
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Their planning meeting was almost cooked. The gentle boil left only the parts that got stuck to the side and burned, so that adding more water wouldn't help.
 
Their planning meeting was almost cooked. The gentle boil left only the parts that got stuck to the side and burned, so that adding more water wouldn't help.
   
"Fun? Are you being serious?" Yumi asked, although whether Yoshino-san was being serious or not didn't change that it was a troublesome idea.
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"Fun? Are you being serious?"
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Yumi asked. Although whether she was being serious or not didn't change that it was a troublesome idea.
   
 
"About half serious."
 
"About half serious."
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Half serious.
 
Half serious.
   
"What do you think, Shimako-san? Want to go with this?"
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"What do you think Shimako-san? Want to go with this?"
   
 
And it wasn't even an idea for her own card, but for Shimako-san's. She'd obviously got bored of the idea, but wanted it to be seriously considered for just a little while longer.
 
And it wasn't even an idea for her own card, but for Shimako-san's. She'd obviously got bored of the idea, but wanted it to be seriously considered for just a little while longer.
   
"Come on, Yoshino-san, when you said a cat, you meant Lunch, right? You know it would be impossible to catch Lunch, let alone stick something on her."
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"Come on, Yoshino-san, when you said a cat, you meant Lunch, right? You know it'd be impossible to catch Lunch, let alone stick something on her."
   
 
If she'd given it more thought, Yumi wouldn't have been drawn into this "half serious" conversation, but she was feeling exhausted so she didn't just let it pass for Shimako-san to judge.
 
If she'd given it more thought, Yumi wouldn't have been drawn into this "half serious" conversation, but she was feeling exhausted so she didn't just let it pass for Shimako-san to judge.
   
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"Oh, but Shimako-san could do it."
"Oh, but Shimako-san could do it," Yoshino-san said, with a serious expression. "Merry-san is Sei-sama's cat, so if Sei-sama's petite s&oelig;ur calls out to her, of course she'll come running."
 
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Yoshino-san said, with a serious expression.
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"Merry-san is Sei-sama's cat, so if Sei-sama's petit soeur calls out to her, of course she'll come running."
   
 
But Shimako-san looked dubious.
 
But Shimako-san looked dubious.
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Yoshino-san would also call it "Lunch," but due to Rei-sama's influence, she'd called it by the name mainly used by the current third-years, "Merry-san."
 
Yoshino-san would also call it "Lunch," but due to Rei-sama's influence, she'd called it by the name mainly used by the current third-years, "Merry-san."
   
Shimako-san used the name "Goronta," which had been used by the previous third-years, now graduated, including Satou Sei-sama.
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While Shimako-san used the name, "Goronta," which had been used by the previous third-years, now graduated, including Satou Sei-sama.
   
 
"Hmm, I guess it won't work then."
 
"Hmm, I guess it won't work then."
   
The Lunch/Merry-san/Goronta line that Yoshino-san had been tracing on the map came to an abrupt halt when the lead in her mechanical pencil snapped, and she abandoned the effort.
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The Lunch/Merry-san/Goronta line that Yoshino-san had been tracing on the map came to an abrupt halt when the lead in her mechanical pencil snapped and she abandoned the effort.
   
". . . How about some tea?" Yumi proposed.
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" How about some tea?"
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Yumi-san proposed.
   
 
It was simple, but she thought they could do with a change of pace. They hadn't had anything to drink yet because they didn't want to get the maps wet, but they'd been talking so much her throat was parched, so it seemed like a good time for a short break.
 
It was simple, but she thought they could do with a change of pace. They hadn't had anything to drink yet because they didn't want to get the maps wet, but they'd been talking so much her throat was parched, so it seemed like a good time for a short break.
   
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"Sounds good."
"Sounds good," Shimako-san concurred and started to gather up the maps.
 
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Shimako-san concurred and started to gather up the maps.
   
 
"Is black tea okay?"
 
"Is black tea okay?"
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"Pardon me."
 
"Pardon me."
   
Shimako-san's s&oelig;ur, Noriko-chan, stepped into the room.
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Shimako-san's soeur, Noriko-chan, stepped into the room.
   
 
"Oh, Noriko-chan's here."
 
"Oh, Noriko-chan's here."
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Using her foot as a stopper so the door wouldn't close, Noriko-chan turned around and bent over, her upper body reaching outside the room.
 
Using her foot as a stopper so the door wouldn't close, Noriko-chan turned around and bent over, her upper body reaching outside the room.
   
"I searched the first-floor storeroom for the cardboard box we used for the tea party. I thought we could re-purpose it for the 'second-chance draw.'"
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"I searched the first-floor storeroom for the cardboard box we used for the tea party. I thought we could re-purpose it for the "second-chance draw.""
   
 
As she spoke, she picked something up and brought it inside.
 
As she spoke, she picked something up and brought it inside.
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After placing the box in the corner of the room, Noriko-chan took a breather. Then, noticing Yumi preparing the tea, she said, "I'll help with that," and bounded over.
 
After placing the box in the corner of the room, Noriko-chan took a breather. Then, noticing Yumi preparing the tea, she said, "I'll help with that," and bounded over.
   
"Even though it was visible, it was like you didn't see it. . . ?"
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"Even though it was visible, it was like you didn't see it…?"
   
 
Yoshino-san asked from behind, so Noriko-chan turned around and answered, "Yeah."
 
Yoshino-san asked from behind, so Noriko-chan turned around and answered, "Yeah."

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