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"But..."
 
"But..."
   
When Sachiko-sama had said she wanted to talk about the near future, Yumi hadn't expected they would talk about where to go next on the date. But there was a store Sachiko-sama wanted to visit, so she asked Yumi to take her, and here they were.
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When Sachiko-sama had said she wanted to talk about the near future, Yumi hadn't expected they would talk about where to go next on the date. But there was a store Sachiko-sama wanted to visit so she asked Yumi to take her, and here they were.
   
 
"Again, this is the first time in your life you've been to a jeans store.... right? Onee-sama."
 
"Again, this is the first time in your life you've been to a jeans store.... right? Onee-sama."
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"Troublesome, hey."
 
"Troublesome, hey."
   
"If it doesn't happen now, it may not happen. For a while now, I've wanted to try on a set of jeans."
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"If it doesn't happen now, it may not happen. For a while now I've wanted to try on a set of jeans."
   
 
"Ahh"
 
"Ahh"
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(This is bad)
 
(This is bad)
   
Yumi had noticed that Sachiko-sama was coming down. She was relieved that Sachiko-sama's first visit to the fast food shop had taken place more or less without incident, but if her first time shopping in a jeans store didn't also go smoothly, it would probably have huge repercussions for the rest of her life. Trauma, I think they call it. That would be a problem.
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Yumi had noticed that Sachiko-sama was coming down. She was relieved that Sachiko-sama's first visit to the fast food shop had taken place more or less without incident, but if her first time shopping in a jeans store didn't also go smoothly it would probably have huge repercussions for the rest of her life. Trauma, I think they call it. That would be a problem.
   
 
"Hang in there, onee-sama. I'm right here with you."
 
"Hang in there, onee-sama. I'm right here with you."
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"When you've got them on, let me know."
 
"When you've got them on, let me know."
   
Yumi stood in front of the curtain. Planning to act as a guard, just in case. There were a lot of male customers, and the change rooms were self-service, so there were no staff around. It would be a disaster if someone were to mistakenly walk in on her onee-sama as she was changing.
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Yumi stood in front of the curtain. Planning to act as a guard, just in case. There were a lot of male customers, and the change rooms were self-service so there were no staff around. It would be a disaster if someone were to mistakenly walk in on her onee-sama as she was changing.
   
 
At the sound of rustling clothes, her heart beat a bit faster.
 
At the sound of rustling clothes, her heart beat a bit faster.
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Sachiko-sama made a snap decision, without trying the other pair on. They were simple, but they fit her extremely well. It was almost as if they had been made for her.
 
Sachiko-sama made a snap decision, without trying the other pair on. They were simple, but they fit her extremely well. It was almost as if they had been made for her.
   
"Okay, I'll put a clip here to hold the position, then you can take them off."
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"Okay, I'll put a clip here to hold the position then you can take them off."
   
 
Yumi attached two of the large clips to the right leg of the jeans to prevent the fold from moving.
 
Yumi attached two of the large clips to the right leg of the jeans to prevent the fold from moving.
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In the changing room there were instructions saying "Jeans taken up free of charge. Bring them to the register with clips holding it."
 
In the changing room there were instructions saying "Jeans taken up free of charge. Bring them to the register with clips holding it."
   
"That's right. If you take it to the store employee, they'll take them up for you."
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"That's right. If you take it to the store employee they'll take them up for you."
   
 
"Understood."
 
"Understood."

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