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"Why, it is just what it looks like."
 
"Why, it is just what it looks like."
   
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Kuro tossed a live fish into the air with both of his upper arms, cut its tail so that it was the same size as him, and placed it down his pomegranate-like mouth. He swallowed it whole, and then he spoke.
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Kuro tossed a live fish into the air with both of his upper arms, cut its tail so that it was the same size as him, and ran it down with some pomegranate juice. He swallowed it whole, and then he spoke.
   
 
"Might you be hungry? Mimizuku."
 
"Might you be hungry? Mimizuku."

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