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The crystal was bright with magic power, and a red flame swayed inside of it. With its beautiful handiwork and the magic power, those who looked at it were taken in by its mystique. |
The crystal was bright with magic power, and a red flame swayed inside of it. With its beautiful handiwork and the magic power, those who looked at it were taken in by its mystique. |
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β | "This flame represents your magic power. When the flame changes from red to blue, your magic power will be depleted, your body will dry up, and you will become a mummy representing the power of this country's magic." |
+ | "This flame is represents your magic power. When the flame changes from red to blue, your magic power will be depleted, your body will dry up, and you will become a mummy representing the power of this country's magic." |
The king explained all of this casually, and even though he was giving Fukurou a death sentence, Fukurou did not make a response and remained silent. |
The king explained all of this casually, and even though he was giving Fukurou a death sentence, Fukurou did not make a response and remained silent. |