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She meant of the days that she had spent before she woke up, in the forest.
 
She meant of the days that she had spent before she woke up, in the forest.
   
Mimizuku didn't have an answer. She shook her head again, but slowly, and with very a different feeling.
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Mimizuku didn't have an answer. She shook her head again, but slowly, and with very different feeling.
   
 
Orietta kneeled down on the carpet next to the bed and met eyes with Mimizuku.
 
Orietta kneeled down on the carpet next to the bed and met eyes with Mimizuku.
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His voice was deep enough to be felt in the ground.
 
His voice was deep enough to be felt in the ground.
   
"Indeed. I am the king of this country, Red Ark."
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"Indeed. I a the king of this country, Red Ark."
   
 
For a moment, a flicker of emotion seemed to appear in Fukurou's eyes. It was something close to disdain or disgust.
 
For a moment, a flicker of emotion seemed to appear in Fukurou's eyes. It was something close to disdain or disgust.
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It was the first question asked by the king of monsters to the king of humans. The king of humans scowled and gave a response with no hesitation.
 
It was the first question asked by the king of monsters to the king of humans. The king of humans scowled and gave a response with no hesitation.
   
"That question is meaningless, demon king. Those two things are incomparable. I will, at any time, choose my country. So long as I am myself, I will choose my country."
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"That question is meaningless, demon king. Those two things are incomparable. I will, at anytime choose my country. So long as I am myself, I will choose my country."
   
 
So long as he had the will, he wouldn't even put them in the same league.
 
So long as he had the will, he wouldn't even put them in the same league.
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The crowd was shocked by Mimizuku's utterance of the name.
 
The crowd was shocked by Mimizuku's utterance of the name.
   
"What? Are you an acquaintance of Lady Orietta? The candidate for Maiden of the Temple, is it...?"
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"What? Are you an acquaintance of Lady Orietta? The candidate for maiden of the temple, is it...?"
   
 
An old woman then walked up to Mimizuku.
 
An old woman then walked up to Mimizuku.
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"Look, your mouth is a mess. Hold on a moment, I'll wipe it off for you."
 
"Look, your mouth is a mess. Hold on a moment, I'll wipe it off for you."
   
Extending her gentle, wrinkly hand, she wiped the area around Mimizuku's mouth. She had eaten so quickly that bits of food were all over her face. Everyone gave her kind smiles.
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Extending her wrinkly gentle hand, she wiped the area around Mimizuku's mouth. She had eaten so quickly that bits of food were all over her face. Everyone gave her kind smiles.
   
 
"There, now you're all clean. Oh my, what's this? On your forehead..."
 
"There, now you're all clean. Oh my, what's this? On your forehead..."
   
The old woman moved Mimizuku's bangs to the side. What appeared was the strange pattern.
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The old woman moved Mimizuku's bangs out of the way. What appeared was the strange pattern.
   
 
"You... it can't be..."
 
"You... it can't be..."
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"Young lady... are you a princess...?" the old lady asked, her finger trembling.
 
"Young lady... are you a princess...?" the old lady asked, her finger trembling.
   
"Hm? I do live in the castle, but I'm not a princess."
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"Hm? I live in the castle, but I'm not a princess."
   
 
The crowd stirred.
 
The crowd stirred.
   
"No, that's not what I meant. You, who was saved in the demon king's subjugation, are the princess of the Forest of Night...?"
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"No, that's not what I meant. You, who was saved in the demon king's subjugation, are the princess of the forest of night...?"
   
 
"Huh? Um, maybe? I..."
 
"Huh? Um, maybe? I..."
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''Well...''
 
''Well...''
   
Mimizuku knocked on the door three times, copying what the castle dwellers did whenever they entered her own room.
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Mimizuku knocked on the door three times, copying what the castle dwellers did whenever they passed by.
   
 
"Who is it?"
 
"Who is it?"

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