Editing Mimizuku to Yoru no Ou: Prologue

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Looking up through the forest, Mimizuku wondered what they would look like from the top of a tree.
 
Looking up through the forest, Mimizuku wondered what they would look like from the top of a tree.
   
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''They're so pretty.''
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They're so pretty.
   
 
She felt a shiver down her spine. Magnificent. If she were any shorter, she wouldn't have been able to see them at all. Despite this, the poor view she had of them now was enough to paralyze her. Mimizuku lifted her cheeks with her hands and gave a little chuckle. It was almost like a handsome guy was gazing upon her. But it wasn't a man.
 
She felt a shiver down her spine. Magnificent. If she were any shorter, she wouldn't have been able to see them at all. Despite this, the poor view she had of them now was enough to paralyze her. Mimizuku lifted her cheeks with her hands and gave a little chuckle. It was almost like a handsome guy was gazing upon her. But it wasn't a man.
   
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''Not a human, it's different. Different from a human... Well, whatever it is, I hope it's something that would eat me.''
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Not a human, it's different. Different from a human... Well, whatever it is, I hope it's something that would eat me.
   
 
She lifted her hand and tried to touch the moons, but there was no way she could reach. It was okay though, because the moons were places no human could reach.
 
She lifted her hand and tried to touch the moons, but there was no way she could reach. It was okay though, because the moons were places no human could reach.
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Hearing the voice made Mimizuku happy, and she made a large, cheeky grin.
 
Hearing the voice made Mimizuku happy, and she made a large, cheeky grin.
   
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''I'm so happy'', she thought.
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I'm so happy, she thought.
   
 
"Leave. I dislike humans."
 
"Leave. I dislike humans."

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