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Rinne, Usagawa Rinne – these words flowed continuously within Sakaki’s mind. He was struggling, trying hard not to be swept away by the torrent of thoughts concerning Usagawa Rinne. After being mercilessly beaten back by the waves of Usagawa Rinne thoughts, Sakaki finally came to his senses as he furiously opened his eyes. He was still under the lamp post, on the uneven path. And the first thing he saw, from the corner of his eye, was a young man cradling a crystal ball.
   
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“Oh, you’ve finally awoken!”
Rinne, Usagawa Rinne – the name echoed continuously within Sakaki’s mind. He was struggling, trying hard to not be swept away by the torrent of thoughts concerning Usagawa Rinne. After being mercilessly beaten back by the waves of thoughts about her, Sakaki finally came to his senses as he furiously opened his eyes. He was still lying under the lamp post on the uneven path. And the first thing he saw, from the corner of his eye, was a young man cradling a crystal ball.
 
   
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“Ugh…”
“Oh, you’ve finally woken up!”
 
   
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The Mushi, whom Sakaki had thought to be a part of his dream, appeared right beside him. Sakaki climbed to his feet, ignoring the aching in his body, and grabbed the Mushi by the front of his robes.
“Ugh...”
 
 
The Mushi, whom Sakaki had thought to be a part of his dream, appeared right beside him. Sakaki climbed to his feet, ignoring the ache of his body, and grabbed the Mushi by the front of his robes
 
   
 
“Where’s Rinne?”
 
“Where’s Rinne?”
   
“Calm down. Shouting isn’t going to do your lower jaw any good, especially since it’s just been punched, literally.”
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“Calm down. Shouting isn’t going to do your lower jaw any good, especially since it’s just been palmed, literally.”
   
“I don’t care what happens to me. Where’s Rinne? And that brat...”
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“I don’t care what happens to me. Where’s Rinne? And that brat…”
   
Seeing Sakaki’s anxious face, the Mushi couldn’t help but let out a smile. “Who knows? I just happened to be passing by and met you here by chance. That’s all!”
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Seeing Sakaki’s anxious face, the Mushi couldn’t help but let out a smile. “Who knows? I just happened to be passing by, and met you here by chance, that’s all!”
   
“How would some random passerby know I was punched? You were hiding somewhere nearright from the start, weren’t you?!”
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“How would some random passerby know I was palmed? You were hiding somewhere here right from the start, weren’t you!”
   
 
The Mushi opened his eyes in awe.
 
The Mushi opened his eyes in awe.
   
“What great deduction! I’m sorry. It’s just that back then I didn’t think I would be of much help. That’s why I didn’t step out to save you! Are you sure you’re not hurt?”
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“What great deduction! I’m sorry. It’s just that back then I didn’t think that I would be of much help. That’s why I didn’t step out to save you! Are you sure you’re not hurt?”
   
 
“I just said that I don’t care what happens to me! Where’s Rinne? And that brat?”
 
“I just said that I don’t care what happens to me! Where’s Rinne? And that brat?”
   
“And I just said I didn’t know, didn’t I? Instead of asking me, why don’t you just go affirm for yourself where the devil is headed – go to Usagawa Rinne’s residence.”
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“And I just said I didn’t know, didn’t I? Instead of asking me, why don’t you just go affirm for yourself where the devil is headed – Usagawa Rinne’s residence.”
   
“You said, Rinne’s... residence.”
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“You said, Rinne’s… residence.”
   
Seeing Sakaki’s face grow paler, the Mushi said coldly, “What did you expect? Hmm… If you hurry over now, you might be able to stop her! Instead of wasting time talking to me here, why don’t you hurry over there instead?”
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Seeing Sakaki’s face grow paler, the Mushi said coldly, “That’s to be expected. Hmm… If you hurry over now, you might be able to stop her! Instead of wasting time talking to me here, why don’t you hurry over there instead?”
   
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“Uh…”
“Uh...”
 
   
 
Sakaki immediately pushed the Mushi aside and sprinted towards Rinne’s house.
 
Sakaki immediately pushed the Mushi aside and sprinted towards Rinne’s house.
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“Oh, and don’t forget this.”
 
“Oh, and don’t forget this.”
   
The Mushi said indifferently as he placed the egg back in Sakaki’s hands. Sakaki accepted it without much thought.
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The Mushi said indifferently, as he placed the egg back in Sakaki’s hands. Sakaki accepted it without much thought.
   
Sakaki’s involuntary feet carried him forward over the uneven gravel ground as the Mushi’s figure slowly melted into the background, like a shadow disappearing behind his back.
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On the uneven, gravel floor, Sakaki’s involuntary feet carried him forward as the Mushi’s figure slowly melted into the background, like a shadow disappearing behind his back.
   
Sakaki ignored him and continued running. ''Run. Keep running.'' That was what his brain was commanding his feet. ''Run like the wind!'' He ran along this long, empty road, reminiscent of hell. Sakaki tried to suppress the urge to puke as he continued clinging on the tiny, almost non-existent sliver of hope, and dashed ahead.
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Sakaki ignored him and continued running. ''Run. Keep running.'' That was what his brain was commanding his feet. ''Run like the wind!'' Along this long, empty road, reminiscent of hell. Sakaki tried to suppress the urge to puke as he continued clinging on the tiny, almost non-existent sliver of hope, and dashed ahead.
   
 
''Usagawa Rinne, Usagawa Rinne, Usagawa Rinne.''
 
''Usagawa Rinne, Usagawa Rinne, Usagawa Rinne.''
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But then – this was reality.
 
But then – this was reality.
   
He initially wanted to wait till Rinne had graduated before they get married. Since he was a teacher and Rinne was a student, he had continuously told himself to just cross his fingers and wait. It was only three years – such a short amount of time. It would go by in the blink of an eye. He had firmly believed that his future lay three years ahead of him, even though God was most likely blind in one eye, even though fate was unnecessarily cruel.
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He initially wanted to wait till Rinne had graduated before they get married. Since he was a teacher and Rinne was a student, he had continuously told himself to just cross his fingers and wait. It was nothing but three years – such a short amount of time, it would go by in the blink of an eye. He had firmly believed that his future lay three years ahead of him, even though God was most likely blind in one eye, even though fate was unnecessarily cruel.
   
 
“Rinne!!”
 
“Rinne!!”
   
He was at the old apartment. Sakaki hammered the ancient wooden door, as if trying to break it down by force. He was yelling her name at the top of his voice all the while.
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He was at the old apartment. Sakaki hammered the old, wooden door, as if trying to break it down by force. All the while, he was yelling her name at the top of his voice. ''Rinne! Rinne! Rinne!!'' There was no reply, no reply at all. That was strange, did she go for a shower perhaps? But how was that possible? He was just being overtly hopeful.
 
''Rinne! Rinne! Rinne!!''
 
 
There was no reply, no reply at all. That was strange. Did she go out for a bath perhaps? But how was that possible? He was just being overtly hopeful.
 
   
 
“Bang!”
 
“Bang!”
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“Ah…”
 
“Ah…”
   
The door to Hell swung open before his eyes.
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The door to hell swung open before his eyes.
   
 
The worst case scenario unraveled before him.
 
The worst case scenario unraveled before him.
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A girl, whose body was covered in blood.
 
 
 
A girl was covered in blood.
 
 
 
 
   
   
   
 
It was Rinne’s corpse.
 
It was Rinne’s corpse.
 
 
 
   
   
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Sakaki’s emotions exploded that instant.
 
Sakaki’s emotions exploded that instant.
   
“...So that’s how it is. I know. You hate me don’t you, God?!
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“…… So that’s how it is. I know, you hate me don’t you, God?”
   
There was no need for explanation. Rinne had died in a locked room. A blood-stained girl was standing next to her. It didn’t take a genius to guess that this person was the criminal, Rinne’s murderer.
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There was no need for explanation. Rinne had died in a locked room. A blood-stained girl was standing next to her. It didn’t take a genius to guess that this was the criminal, Rinne’s murderer.
   
 
If that was the case – she should die too.
 
If that was the case – she should die too.
   
''Go to hell!!''
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Go to hell!!''
   
Sakaki relentlessly opened fire at her. The girl was taken by surprise, as she took a bullet to the chest, followed by one to the head, and to one of her legs - a total of three bullets. Fresh blood splattered everywhere in the dimly lit room with a sickening “swish” as the crimson red fluid trickled down from the walls. Before the girl had the chance to scream, her head was already against the wall. She was dead. He had killed her – killed a human.
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Sakaki relentlessly fired at her on the spot. The girl was taken by surprise, as she took a bullet to the chest, followed by one to the head, and to one of her legs - A total of three bullets. In the dimly lit room, fresh blood splattered everywhere with a sickening “swish” as the crimson red fluid trickled down from the walls. Before the girl had the chance to scream, he head was already against the wall. She was dead. He had killed her – a human.
   
No, she wasn’t a human. That was Rinne’s murderer – a devil.
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No, that wasn’t a human. That was Rinne’s murderer – a devil.
   
 
That was why she deserved to die.
 
That was why she deserved to die.
   
Sakaki mumbled something as he approached the poor, mutilated corpse of Rinne. She was sitting, with her back against the table, her feet facing outwards. He head lay slumped on the table, and she had an absolutely blank look on her face. One of her usually sparkling eyes was now replaced with a spoon, while the other was dully open. Usagawa Rinne had died – just like what the Mushi predicted.
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Sakaki mumbled something as he approached the poor, mutilated corpse of Rinne. She was sitting, with her back against the table, her feet facing outwards. He head lay slumped on the table, and she had an absolutely blank look on her face. One of her usually sparkling eyes was now replaced with a spoon, while the other was laying dully open. Usagawa Rinne had died – just like what the Mushi predicted.
   
Sakaki pointed the gun barrel at his own temple as he fell to his knees, tears pouring down his cheeks. Looking at Rinne’s dead body, he had only one choice left – that of taking his own life. Sakaki didn’t have the strength to keep living in a world without Usagawa Rinne. There was no happiness in a world without her, just a boring, mundane life. That was why Sakaki decided to follow her by committing suicide. He cursed God and fate for being so cruel towards him as he edged towards Rinne and apologized.
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Sakaki pointed the gun barrel at his temple, as he fell to his knees, tears pouring down his cheeks. Looking at Rinne’s dead body, he had only one choice left – taking his own life. Sakaki didn’t have the strength to keep living in a world without Usagawa Rinne. There was no happiness in a world without her, just a boring, mundane life. That was why Sakaki decided to follow her by committing suicide. He cursed God and fate for being so cruel towards him as he edged towards Rinne and apologized. “I’m sorry Rinne. It hurts doesn’t it? Compared to being murdered like this, wasn’t it better if you had perished in the vast sea then? I’m sorry, I’m really sorry…”
 
“I’m sorry Rinne. It hurts doesn’t it? Compared to being murdered like this, wasn’t it better if you had perished in the vast sea then? I’m sorry, I’m really sorry...”
 
   
 
Sakaki mumbled, as his fingers reached for the trigger.
 
Sakaki mumbled, as his fingers reached for the trigger.
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This was when Usagawa Rinne sat up.
   
   
   
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As if waking up from a dream, Rinne slowly stretched her body and observed her surroundings. Her sight finally fell on Sakaki. The spoon was still stuck in her right eye, her tears were still flowing down her cheeks. Usagawa Rinne looked at Sakaki, and asked as if nothing was wrong, “Eh? What’s up, sensei?”
That was when Usagawa Rinne sat up.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
As if waking up from a dream, Rinne slowly stretched her body and observed her surroundings. Her sight finally fell on Sakaki. The spoon was still stuck in her right eye, and her tears were still flowing down her cheeks. Usagawa Rinne looked at Sakaki, and asked as if nothing was wrong, “Eh? What’s up, Sensei?”
 
   
 
There was an unfathomable expression on Rinne’s face.
 
There was an unfathomable expression on Rinne’s face.
   
“Ah, I can’t see from my right eye!”
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“Ah, I can’t see in my right eye!”
   
''That’s strange.'' Rinne thought as she rubbed her right eye. It was as if something was lodged in her eye. She stared at Sakaki as if questioning what it was. Grabbing the spoon, Rinne pulled it out of her eye socket as a thick, gooey liquid oozed out after it. Sakaki was speechless. What was this? This was absurd. Had the world gone crazy after all? Or was he dreaming? Was this a dream? He certainly hoped it was!
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''That’s strange.'' Rinne thought as she rubbed her right eye. It was as if something was lodged in her right eye. She stared at Sakaki as if asking him “Huh? What’s this?” Grabbing the spoon, Rinne pulled it out of her eye socket as a thick, gooey liquid oozed out from it. Sakaki was speechless. What was this? This was absurd. Had the Earth gone crazy after all? Or was he dreaming? Was this a dream! He certainly hoped it was!
   
 
Right then, something strange happened again.
 
Right then, something strange happened again.
   
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“Ugh…”
“Ugh...”
 
   
Rinne’s expression suddenly contorted as she pressed her hands against her right eye, her face twisting in pain.
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Rinne’s expression suddenly contorted as she pressed against her right eye, her face twisting in pain.
   
 
“It’s hot! My eye, it feels so hot! It’s burning!”
 
“It’s hot! My eye, it feels so hot! It’s burning!”
   
“R-Rinne...”
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“R-Rinne…”
   
 
Sakaki was unable to move, even though his most treasured person was suffering right in front of him.
 
Sakaki was unable to move, even though his most treasured person was suffering right in front of him.
   
“Sensei, my eye feels so hot all of a sudden. What’s happening? It’s burning, it hurts. Sensei…”
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“Sensei, my eye feels so hot all of a sudden. What’s happening? It’s burning, it hurts, sensei…”
   
''She is calling for me. Usagawa Rinne is calling for me.''
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''She is calling, Usagawa Rinne is calling for me.''
   
 
''I should go and save her then.''
 
''I should go and save her then.''
   
Sakaki stood up and immediately rushed to Rinne’s side. She was still pressing her hands against her eye.
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Sakaki stood up, and immediately rushed to Rinne’s side. She was still pressing her hand against her eye.
   
 
Sakaki shook her shoulders and asked, “Rinne, are you alright? Rinne!”
 
Sakaki shook her shoulders and asked, “Rinne, are you alright? Rinne!”
   
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“Sensei…”
“Sensei...”
 
   
Rinne mumbled in a soft tone as she removed her hand from her eye.
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Rinne mumbled in a soft tone, as she removed her hand from her eye.
   
 
Sakaki stared at her face, and immediately sensed a shiver travel down his spine.
 
Sakaki stared at her face, and immediately sensed a shiver travel down his spine.
 
 
 
   
   
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Usagawa Rinne’s right eye had completely regenerated. It was previously pierced by a spoon, but now there wasn’t a single scar visible. The only thing that remained was a trail of eye-fluid on her cheeks. But Sakaki was sure she had been hurt! He felt his mind go numb – it was unable to catch up with the rapidly crumbling reality.
   
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He placed an arm around Rinne’s shoulders, as his gaze traveled to a corner of the room.
 
 
Usagawa Rinne’s right eye had completely regenerated. It was previously pierced by a spoon, but now there wasn’t a single scar visible. The only thing that remained was a trail of eye-fluid on her cheeks. But Sakaki was sure she had been hurt! He felt his mind go numb – it was unable to catch up with this rapidly crumbling reality.
 
 
He placed an arm around Rinne’s shoulders as his gaze traveled to a corner of the room.
 
   
 
“Even digging her eyeballs out failed to kill her. Its too late, so stop grieving…”
 
“Even digging her eyeballs out failed to kill her. Its too late, so stop grieving…”
   
Even though her clothes were stained with blood, that other girl continued to look at him with her expressionless, gun-barrel like eyes. There was no trace of emotions on her face, but her voice was surprisingly pure.
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Even though her clothes were stained with blood, the girl continued to look at him with her expressionless, gun-barrel like eyes. There was no trace of emotion on her face, but her voice was surprisingly pure.
   
This girl, who had previously tried to murder Rinne, was poking her finger into the gunshot wound on her head as she withdrew the bullet, in a manner so casual it that would certainly freak most people out. She then proceeded to do the same with the other bullets planted in her! Real bullets! Sakaki stared as three blood-stained bullets fell to the floor, as her wounds instantly regenerated just like Rinne’s eye.
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This girl, who had previously tried to murder Rinne, was poking her finger into the gunshot wound on her head as she withdrew the bullet in a casual manner that would certainly freak most people out. She then proceeded to do the same with her wounds on her chest and legs. Wasn’t it painful? No, before that, shouldn’t she be dead? A bullet was planted in her head! A real bullet! Sakaki stared as three blood-stained bullets fell to the floor, as her wounds instantly regenerated just like Rinne’s eye. ''What in the world is going on?! I’ve had enough of this! I can’t explain this in the least! Please stop, please give me back my normal life; my normal, ordinary life.''
 
''What in the world is going on?! I’ve had enough of this! I can’t explain this in the least! Please stop, please give me back my normal life; my normal, ordinary life.''
 
   
 
The girl ignored Sakaki and continued staring at Rinne. With a sad – no, more like a pitiful - expression, as if trying to say that they were in the same boat now, she explained to Rinne the situation she was currently in.
 
The girl ignored Sakaki and continued staring at Rinne. With a sad – no, more like a pitiful - expression, as if trying to say that they were in the same boat now, she explained to Rinne the situation she was currently in.
   
“You have obtained the Apple. It’s now deeply rooted within your heart, so it’s impossible to give up on it now. The Apple won’t even let you die – it’s in that deep...”
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“You have obtained the Apple. It’s now deeply rooted within your heart, so it’s impossible to give up on it now. The Apple won’t even let you die – it’s that deep…”
   
 
The girl said as she headed towards the door.
 
The girl said as she headed towards the door.
   
“You can never live as a normal human being again.”
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“You can never live on as a normal human being again.”
   
 
The girl suddenly turned back and said, “In order to not be consumed by the Mushi, you better do your best to protect that Apple.”
 
The girl suddenly turned back and said, “In order to not be consumed by the Mushi, you better do your best to protect that Apple.”
   
The girl then walked over to the door and silently vanished beyond it. What was she planning to do? What in the world had just happened? In the midst of confusion, the girl had disappeared, leaving behind two very confused individuals.
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The girl's shadow silently vanished beyond the door. What was she planning to do? What in the world had just happened? In the midst of confusion, the girl had disappeared, leaving behind two very confused individuals.
   
 
A blood-stained world. A messed up room. Mushi. An immortal girl.
 
A blood-stained world. A messed up room. Mushi. An immortal girl.
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Sakaki was totally lost here. He abruptly had this urge to grab on to something, so he chose the nearest target – Rinne. He tightly hugged Rinne, much to her surprise. But she merely closed her eyes and quietly embraced Sakaki.
 
Sakaki was totally lost here. He abruptly had this urge to grab on to something, so he chose the nearest target – Rinne. He tightly hugged Rinne, much to her surprise. But she merely closed her eyes and quietly embraced Sakaki.
   
Rinne felt at peace. The expression on her face suggested that even though she had no idea what was happening, as long as Sakaki was around, everything was fine. It was a face of pure bliss, as if she had entrusted everything to Sakaki.
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Rinne felt at peace. The expression on her face suggested that even though she had no idea what was happening, as long as Sakaki was around, everything was fine. It was a face of pure bliss, as if she had entrusted everything to Sakaki. ''Usagawa Rinne, my most important person.''
 
''Usagawa Rinne, my most important person.''
 
   
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“Sensei…”
“Sensei...”
 
   
 
“Yeah?”
 
“Yeah?”
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Sakaki gently answered Rinne’s call.
 
Sakaki gently answered Rinne’s call.
   
“I suddenly recalled that long lost memory, my final memories before I almost died in the sea. That time, as death was fast approaching… I dreamed of an apple. The moment I ate the apple, I came back to life. I think it’s because I ate that apple that I was able to survive till today. I have this sort of feeling.”
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“I suddenly recalled that long lost memory, my final memories before I almost died in the sea. That time, as death was fast approaching… I dreamed of an apple. The moment I ate the apple, I came back to life. I think it’s because I ate that apple… That I was able to survive till today. I have this sort of feeling.”
   
 
Rinne pressed her palm against her right eye.
 
Rinne pressed her palm against her right eye.
   
“That girl... she could have been here to take back the apple!”
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“That girl, she could have been here to take back the apple!”
   
 
Even if the world was thrust into frenzy, even if the basic laws of nature were broken, life still goes on. The end of today marked the arrival of tomorrow. The first thing that came the next day was the morning dawn. And the morning dawn was synonymous with homeroom. Being the homeroom teacher of Class 1-B, Sakaki Guryū was required to take attendance, as well as brief the students about their duties and responsibilities.
 
Even if the world was thrust into frenzy, even if the basic laws of nature were broken, life still goes on. The end of today marked the arrival of tomorrow. The first thing that came the next day was the morning dawn. And the morning dawn was synonymous with homeroom. Being the homeroom teacher of Class 1-B, Sakaki Guryū was required to take attendance, as well as brief the students about their duties and responsibilities.
   
 
Yesterday, which was also the day Usagawa Rinne’s eyeball was gouged out by a spoon-wielding girl, Sakaki had brought her to a hospital just to be on the safe side. The doctors, however, were unable to find anything wrong with her. That’s why she attended school today, being her usual, cheerful self. As Sakaki Guryū went though the attendance list, though, he noticed, amongst a list of over 40 students, a name which he had never seen before. It wasn’t as though he had never heard the name before. In fact, he had heard it only just recently.
 
Yesterday, which was also the day Usagawa Rinne’s eyeball was gouged out by a spoon-wielding girl, Sakaki had brought her to a hospital just to be on the safe side. The doctors, however, were unable to find anything wrong with her. That’s why she attended school today, being her usual, cheerful self. As Sakaki Guryū went though the attendance list, though, he noticed, amongst a list of over 40 students, a name which he had never seen before. It wasn’t as though he had never heard the name before. In fact, he had heard it only just recently.
 
 
 
   
   
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“…… Eh???”
 
 
 
“...Eh???”
 
   
 
He had a bad feeling about this.
 
He had a bad feeling about this.
   
Sakaki chalked it up to an optical illusion as he took out a bottle of eye drops, applied it, and looked at the list again.
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Sakaki chalked it up to an optical illusion, as he took out a bottle of eye drops, applied it, and looked at the list again.
   
 
Gankyū Eguriko.
 
Gankyū Eguriko.
   
He would never mistake such a wild name. Seat number 11. That seat was still occupied by someone just yesterday! For some reason, however, the person in question was assigned to Seat 12. Sakaki had a very bad feeling about this.
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He would never mistake such a wild name. Seat number 11. That seat was still occupied by someone else yesterday! For some reason, however, the person in question was assigned to Seat 12. Sakaki had a very bad feeling about this. ''What was happening?'' Just as he was wondering, the classroom door was suddenly ripped open.
   
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“Ah…”
''What was happening?'' Just as he was wondering, the classroom door was suddenly open violently.
 
 
“Ah...”
 
   
 
The girl sported a unique, wolf-like haircut, a sailor uniform, white indoor shoes and the same, gun barrel-like eyes. She looked exactly the same as she had yesterday and, standing in the midst of normal high school students, she surprisingly didn’t seem too out of place. She stepped in the classroom matter-of-factly, and proceeded towards the podium.
 
The girl sported a unique, wolf-like haircut, a sailor uniform, white indoor shoes and the same, gun barrel-like eyes. She looked exactly the same as she had yesterday and, standing in the midst of normal high school students, she surprisingly didn’t seem too out of place. She stepped in the classroom matter-of-factly, and proceeded towards the podium.
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Sakaki Guryū stood stiffly at the podium.
 
Sakaki Guryū stood stiffly at the podium.
   
The students shot curious glances at the girl.
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The students shot curious glances at the girl. “What’s happening? Who is she?”
 
“What’s happening? Who is she?”
 
   
 
Sakaki thought of what to say to the girl, but his current state of mind was blank. Even as he was thinking of what to say to her, the girl had taken up a piece of chalk, and scribbled on the blackboard.
 
Sakaki thought of what to say to the girl, but his current state of mind was blank. Even as he was thinking of what to say to her, the girl had taken up a piece of chalk, and scribbled on the blackboard.
 
 
 
   
   
   
 
Transfer Student, Gankyū Eguriko.
 
Transfer Student, Gankyū Eguriko.
 
 
 
   
   
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It was the first time the students had heard of a transfer student transferring into their class. They started discussing among themselves, and Gankyū Eguriko didn’t seem to mind.
 
It was the first time the students had heard of a transfer student transferring into their class. They started discussing among themselves, and Gankyū Eguriko didn’t seem to mind.
   
With a sharp tone that clearly didn’t sound like what a transfer student should have sounded like, she faced the students and said, “I’m a new transfer student, Gankyū Eguriko. You can call me Guriko if you want, but if you don’t want to, then you might as well not approach me at all. As long as you mind your own business, I won’t harm you, so try not to mind me too much, or even bother to talk to me. If you anger me, I’ll dig your eyes out, no matter who you are. So if you treasure your own eyeballs, then don’t provoke me. That goes for you busy-bodies, who can’t seem to keep your mouths shut. I don’t think anyone will miss you guys if you died anyway. That is all.”
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With a sharp tone that clearly didn’t sound like what a transfer student should have sounded like, she faced the students and said, “I’m a new transfer student, Gankyū Eguriko. You can call me Guriko if you want, but if you don’t want to, then you might as well not approach me at all. As long as you mind your own business, I won’t harm you, so try not to mind me too much, or even bother to talk to me. If you anger me, I’ll dig your eyes out, no matter who you are, so if you treasure your own eyeballs, then don’t provoke me. That goes for you busy-bodies, who can’t seem to keep your mouths shut. I don’t think anyone will miss you guys if you died anyway. That is all.”
   
Guriko said all this in one breath as she lifted her head and looked at Sakaki, satisfied.
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Guriko said in one breath, as she lifted her head and looked at Sakaki, satisfied.
   
She requested to be called Guriko because her name was Eguriko? Her sense of naming was actually quite laughable!
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Because she was called Eguriko, that’s why she requested to be called Guriko? Her sense of naming was actually quite laughable!
   
 
Sakaki put up a straight face, and asked her, “What do you plan to do?”
 
Sakaki put up a straight face, and asked her, “What do you plan to do?”
   
Guriko said to Sakaki in a volume that only he could hear, “Don’t worry, I won’t kill her.” Her voice was pure, void of any emotion, as usual. There wasn’t a single smile on her face.
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Guriko said to Sakaki in a volume that only he could hear her, “Don’t worry, I won’t kill her.” Her voice was pure, void of any emotion, as usual. There wasn’t a single smile on her face.
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“Maybe I should say I can’t kill her. The Apple has already rooted within her. All physical attacks will be useless towards her. Since she has an infinite lifespan, I guess you could call her an immortal. And since she’s immortal, I can’t take away the Apple. And that basically means I have no reason to kill her whatsoever. However…”
   
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“The Mushi… They have many.”
“Maybe I should say I can’t kill her. The Apple had already rooted within her. All physical attacks will be useless towards her. Since she has an infinite lifespan, I guess you could call her an immortal. And since she’s immortal, I can’t take away the Apple. And that basically means I have no reason to kill her whatsoever. However... +The Mushi... They have many reasons to kill her.”
 
   
 
Gankyū Eguriko looked at the ceiling.
 
Gankyū Eguriko looked at the ceiling.
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She had used some form of magic to create a space for herself within this school.
 
She had used some form of magic to create a space for herself within this school.
   
Ignoring Sakaki’s furious stares, Guriko turned and glanced at Usagawa Rinne, who was right next to her. Rinne slightly flinched – it was natural. Sakaki told her she was previously murdered by this girl, having had her eyeballs gouged out with a spoon by Guriko. A most brutal method indeed.
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Ignoring Sakaki’s furious stares, Guriko turned and glanced at Usagawa Rinne, who was right next to her. Rinne slightly flinched – it was natural. According to Sakaki, she was previously murdered by this girl before her by having her eyeballs gouged out with a spoon. A most brutal method indeed.
   
 
Guriko said to Rinne, who was rendered speechless, in a pure, innocent voice, “I’m sorry.”
 
Guriko said to Rinne, who was rendered speechless, in a pure, innocent voice, “I’m sorry.”

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