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“Let’s compare how long our arms are!”
 
“Let’s compare how long our arms are!”
   
It was an abandoned building where children who had no place in their families had gathered. The present youths of varying age and gender were currently terrified with a sudden abnormality. It was a night that should have been the same as any other. Unable to sleep and feeling irate, they come here at night to chat and have fun with strangers who dressed in the same way as they did.
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It was an abandoned building where children who had no place in their families had gathered. The youths of varying age and gender currently present were currently terrified with this sudden abnormality. It was a night that should have been the same as any other. Unable to sleep and irritated at home, they had arrived here tonight to chat and have fun with strangers.
   
 
It was their daily life, a life remaining the same day after day that they took for granted.
 
It was their daily life, a life remaining the same day after day that they took for granted.
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A boy, half-mad, rushed at Long-Armed Demon with his bare fists. Those youths had too many enemies: the police, adults who didn’t understand them, violent juvenile derelicts, criminals… therefore, they had armed themselves for their own protection.
 
A boy, half-mad, rushed at Long-Armed Demon with his bare fists. Those youths had too many enemies: the police, adults who didn’t understand them, violent juvenile derelicts, criminals… therefore, they had armed themselves for their own protection.
   
With electric batons and tear gas.
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With stun guns and tear gas.
   
 
With wooden planks, craft knifes, and baseball bats.
 
With wooden planks, craft knifes, and baseball bats.
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The five teenagers who saw this scene gave out sharp shrieks of despair.
 
The five teenagers who saw this scene gave out sharp shrieks of despair.
   
There are very few opportunities to truly come into contact with ‘death’ in modern-day Japan. Corpses were quickly taken away and cremated, turning into dust in the blink of an eye. THe illusions of death, mimicked to such detail by video games and movies and manga, made true death no longer feel real. They took away those teenagers’ fear of death.
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There are very few opportunities to truly come into contact with ‘death’ in modern-day Japan. Corpses were quickly taken away and cremated, turning into dust in the blink of an eye. Those illusions of death, mimicked to such detail by video games and movies and manga, made true death no longer feel real. They took away those teenagers’ fear of death.
   
 
Therefore, true death was like magic for these teenagers; it was an abnormal phenomenon that they could not understand.
 
Therefore, true death was like magic for these teenagers; it was an abnormal phenomenon that they could not understand.
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“Noisy. You’re ruining this quiet night.”
 
“Noisy. You’re ruining this quiet night.”
   
Long-Armed Demon’s expression was evidently displeased, but then she discovered the only young girl among the teenagers. She finally found a young girl! The townspeople were more on guard nowadays, and Long-Armed Demon had found it hard to discover her target – the girl with the Apple.
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Long-Armed Demon’s expression was evidently displeased, but then she discovered the only young girl amongst the teenagers. She finally found a young girl! The townspeople were more on guard nowadays, and Long-Armed Demon had found it hard to discover her target – the girl with the Apple.
   
 
She must find her soon.
 
She must find her soon.
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An uncanny and cruel scene.
 
An uncanny and cruel scene.
   
All four of the girl’s limbs were grasped by invisible arms, and she was lifted into the air with an irresistible force. The girl looked like she was freely floating in air, but in truth she had been robbed of all free movement and could only slightly shift her body. Her pupils were completely dilated with fear, and her teeth cluttered and grind.
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All four of the girl’s limbs were grasped by invisible arms, and she was lifted into the air with an irresistible force. The girl looked like she was freely floating in air, but in truth she had been robbed of all free movement and could only slightly shift her body. Her pupils were completely dilated with fear, and her teeth cluttered and grinded.
   
While she was facing her fatal crisis, all the other teenagers had already run away. The girl despaired. So that was the truth – those people who gathered in this deserted building with her weren’t her family or friends, but only strangers who happened to have similar experiences. How could they possibly want to save her?!
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While she was facing her fatal crisis, all the other teenagers had already run away. The girl despaired. So that was the truth – those people who gathered in this deserted building with her weren’t her family or her friends, but only strangers who happened to have similar experiences as her. How could they possibly want to save her?!
   
When she understood this, the girl asked for help from someone she had not even considered a possibility.
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When she understood this, the girl asked for help from someone she had not considered a possibility.
   
 
“Hel, help me… Dad, Mom…”
 
“Hel, help me… Dad, Mom…”
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“Help me – Dad, Mom!”
 
“Help me – Dad, Mom!”
   
The only time she desired her parents to save her is when she reached this helpless end.
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She only desired her parents to save her when she reached this helpless end.
   
“Hehehe, Long-Armed Demon feels a little like having a dejanew.”
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“Hehehe, Long-Armed Demon feels a little like having a Dejanew.”
   
 
Saying those cryptic words, Long-Armed Demon tilted her head.
 
Saying those cryptic words, Long-Armed Demon tilted her head.

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