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“I won’t let the Long-Armed Demon kill you or Sakaki, or Kio and Hino and these people at school.”
 
“I won’t let the Long-Armed Demon kill you or Sakaki, or Kio and Hino and these people at school.”
   
As if she just realized something, Guriko said with a weaker voice and a face full of embarrassment: “Kio and Hino – I probably shouldn’t worry about them. They invade my bedroom every night, reading bedtime stories and singing lullabies. It’s quite ridiculous, especially when I’m older than them… seriously, do they have no manners, or do they simply not understand shame?”
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As if she just realized something, Guriko said with a weaker voice and a face full of embarrassment: “Kio and Hino – I probably shouldn’t worry about them. They invade my bed every night, reading bedtime stories and singing lullabies. It’s quite ridiculous, especially when I’m older than them… seriously, do they have no manners, or simply did not understand shame?”
   
 
Rinne felt this was quite incredulous, and she tilted her head as she looked like Guriko, who was mumbling to herself.
 
Rinne felt this was quite incredulous, and she tilted her head as she looked like Guriko, who was mumbling to herself.
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Was it inevitable? The shops, which were usually cluttered with students after school, were now rather desolate. The Long-Armed Demon was the murderer that appeared in Kannonsakazaki at the beginning of January. It had already killed ten people in less than a month.
 
Was it inevitable? The shops, which were usually cluttered with students after school, were now rather desolate. The Long-Armed Demon was the murderer that appeared in Kannonsakazaki at the beginning of January. It had already killed ten people in less than a month.
   
It was thought that there was only one common thing among all victims: they were all young girls.
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There was only one common thing among all victims: they were all young girls.
   
But then, the news pointed out a few days ago that wayward boys and male police officers were also counted among the victims.
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However, the news pointed out a few days ago that wayward boys and male police officers were also counted among the victims.
   
 
It had been explained that the officers were killed when they discovered the Long-Armed Demon and attempted to arrest the culprit – but that explanation did not work for the boys.
 
It had been explained that the officers were killed when they discovered the Long-Armed Demon and attempted to arrest the culprit – but that explanation did not work for the boys.
   
However, they were only rare exceptions. The main targets were high-school girls. Girls of Rinne’s age were most scared of the Long-Armed Demon. In fact, apart from Rinne and Guriko, the majority of the girls chose not to go school. They probably thought they might be killed by the Long-Armed Demon if they left their houses, and they either voluntarily took days off or were forced to stay home by their parents. There were even those who indicated they’d like to leave this place until things calmed down, and had left for the countryside. After all, the Long-Armed Demon only killed in the township of Kannonsakazaki, and leaving it would be a wise way to stay alive.
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However, they were only rare exceptions. The main targets were high-school girls. Girls of Rinne’s age were most scared of the Long-Armed Demon. In fact, apart from Rinne and Guriko, the majority of the girls chose not to go school. They probably thought they might be killed by the Long-Armed Demon if they left their houses, and they either voluntarily took days off or were forced to stay home by their parents. There were even those who indicated they’d like to leave this place until things calm down, and had left for the countryside. After all, the Long-Armed Demon only killed in the township of Kannonsakazaki, and leaving it would be a wise way to stay alive.
   
 
The Long-Armed Demon had therefore stirred up a mighty ripple in Kannonsakazaki’s formerly calm atmosphere.
 
The Long-Armed Demon had therefore stirred up a mighty ripple in Kannonsakazaki’s formerly calm atmosphere.
   
TV stations, news reporters, and various media had all swarmed into town for the past few days. Those curious onlookers were also roaming around and taking pictures. Inky bloodstains still remained at the murder scenes that the police hadn't cleaned in time, and officers dressed in their navy blue uniform patrolled those places day and night.
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TV stations, news reporters, and various media had all swarmed into town for the past few days. Those curious onlookers were also roaming around and taking pictures. Inky bloodstains still remained at the murder scenes that the police didn’t get to clean in time, and officers dressed in their navy blue uniform patrolled those places day and night.
   
Since she felt uneasy when she was alone, Rinne slept and ate with the big-sister-figure young lady next door now. Though it wasn’t helping much, it was better than being anxious on her own. She kept going to school, not because she wasn't scared, but because she was immortal. She still felt, more or less, that she would not be killed though she still retained the sense of pain.
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Since she felt uneasy when she was alone, Rinne slept and ate with the big-sister-figure young lady next door now. Though it wasn’t helping much, it was better than being anxious on her own. She kept going to school, not because she was not scared, but because she was immortal. She still felt, more or less, that she would not be killed though she still retained the sense of pain.
   
 
That was completely different from Guriko’s confidence, her belief that she will not lose to the Long-Armed Demon, and her complete lack of fear towards the murderer.
 
That was completely different from Guriko’s confidence, her belief that she will not lose to the Long-Armed Demon, and her complete lack of fear towards the murderer.
   
''Ahh, I hate this feeling.'' Rinne thought to herself. She was weak. She was so weak.
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''Ahh, I hate that feeling.'' Rinne thought to herself. She was weak. She was so weak.
   
 
She owed Katsumi. Katsumi often worried about Rinne; wouldn’t she find it hard to leave for Heaven then?
 
She owed Katsumi. Katsumi often worried about Rinne; wouldn’t she find it hard to leave for Heaven then?
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“Sorry for the wait.”
 
“Sorry for the wait.”
   
Guriko poked her head out of the make-up shop and looked emotionlessly towards Rinne, all the while holding on to a small paper bag.
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Guriko poked her head out of the make-up shop and looked emotionlessly towards Rinne, all the time holding on to a small paper bag.
   
 
“Ah, right.” Rinne, who was lost in her thoughts and was startled, blinked at Guriko: “What did you buy?”
 
“Ah, right.” Rinne, who was lost in her thoughts and was startled, blinked at Guriko: “What did you buy?”
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Rinne gave him one glance and realized he was gazing at the ceiling with an empty look in his eyes, apparently deep in thought. She decided not to bother him, and moved her eyes to the menu instead. Feeling rather cold, she ordered a cup of hot coffee.
 
Rinne gave him one glance and realized he was gazing at the ceiling with an empty look in his eyes, apparently deep in thought. She decided not to bother him, and moved her eyes to the menu instead. Feeling rather cold, she ordered a cup of hot coffee.
   
Rinne still retained some feelings toward temperature. Guriko mumbled “hot chocolate”, then added “to stay awake” as if she was defending herself.
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Rinne still retained some feelings toward temperature. Guriko mumbled “hot chocoloate”, then added “to stay awake” as if she was defending herself.
   
 
There wasn’t much caffeine in hot chocolate. Rinne knew the that. Guriko’s sense of taste could only come alive when she was eating or drinking something sweet.
 
There wasn’t much caffeine in hot chocolate. Rinne knew the that. Guriko’s sense of taste could only come alive when she was eating or drinking something sweet.
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“However, I’ve come to dislike those interesting – or rather, tumultuous – days. I began to be afraid that our ordinary lives may be disrupted.”
 
“However, I’ve come to dislike those interesting – or rather, tumultuous – days. I began to be afraid that our ordinary lives may be disrupted.”
   
"I’ve become weaker" – she said through gritted teeth. Rinne didn’t think so. Compared to the person Guriko was when they first met – that girl who had nothing, sought nothing, and only lived like a machine and a monster – a willpower tenfold more powerful now sparkled in Guriko’s eyes.
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"I’ve become weaker." – she said through gritted teeth. Rinne didn’t think so. Compared to the person Guriko was when they first met – that girl who had nothing, sought nothing, and only lived like a machine and a monster – a willpower tenfold more powerful now sparkled in Guriko’s eyes.
   
 
As if speaking to herself, Guriko spoke while she gazed at the sparkling silver spoon.
 
As if speaking to herself, Guriko spoke while she gazed at the sparkling silver spoon.
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She became weak and began to fear losing things important to her.
 
She became weak and began to fear losing things important to her.
   
However, she now had a heart, and could seriously consider others.
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However, she now has a heart, and can seriously consider others.
   
 
Did she become such a human –
 
Did she become such a human –
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“You can die excited.”
 
“You can die excited.”
   
Guriko threw out her spoon with those cold words. The silver light swiftly sliced through the sky in a straight line.
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Guriko throw out her spoon with those cold words. The silver light swiftly sliced through the sky in a straight line.
   
 
However, the spoon was deflected by an invisible hand before reaching Long-Armed Demon, and landed with a small clank. Though it handled Mushi, it was far too weak for a monster. Guriko had such thoughts a month ago already.
 
However, the spoon was deflected by an invisible hand before reaching Long-Armed Demon, and landed with a small clank. Though it handled Mushi, it was far too weak for a monster. Guriko had such thoughts a month ago already.
   
But this was different.
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But it was different.
   
The merciless personality that could only be restrained with a weapon as fragile as a spoon was released one month ago. Guriko had immediately turned into a terrifying monster. She became a monster who drew pleasure from killing, a monster who belonged to humanity in neither body nor soul.
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The merciless personality that could only be restrained with a weapon as fragile as a spoon was released one month ago. Guriko had immediately turned into a terrifying monster. She became a monster who drew pleasures from killing, a monster who belonged to humanity in neither body nor soul.
   
 
That event made Guriko’s millennium-old Apple disappear into nothingness. She shouldn’t be able to change into such a monster anymore. However, even though the Apple disappeared, her strength – which should have decreased as well – remained unaltered within Guriko’s body –
 
That event made Guriko’s millennium-old Apple disappear into nothingness. She shouldn’t be able to change into such a monster anymore. However, even though the Apple disappeared, her strength – which should have decreased as well – remained unaltered within Guriko’s body –
   
She didn’t know what changes had occurred in her body.
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She didn’t know what changes occurred in her body.
   
 
She didn’t know the truth behind the red monster that she metamorphosed into.
 
She didn’t know the truth behind the red monster that she metamorphosed into.
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However – aaaah, the headstone didn’t even move an inch. Long-Armed Demon could easily move the headstone, why? As she thought of this, Long-Armed Demon’s attack flew toward her, and Guriko had to move away.
 
However – aaaah, the headstone didn’t even move an inch. Long-Armed Demon could easily move the headstone, why? As she thought of this, Long-Armed Demon’s attack flew toward her, and Guriko had to move away.
   
''Am I really physically weaker than Long-Armed Demon?!'' Such a headstone could be shattered with enough force, but Guriko was simply unable to uproot it from the ground and throw it.
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''Am I really physically weaker than Long-Armed Demon?'' But a headstone could be shattered with enough force. Somehow, Guriko was simply unable to uproot it from the ground and throw it.
   
 
And there was one more incredulous thing.
 
And there was one more incredulous thing.
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''How did this happen? This is so weird. I told her not to follow me. Rinne isn’t a stupid girl; she should know she would only be problematic for me here. But why?
 
''How did this happen? This is so weird. I told her not to follow me. Rinne isn’t a stupid girl; she should know she would only be problematic for me here. But why?
   
''Did she become careless because she knew she couldn’t die? – No, no way''.
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''Did she become careless because she knew she couldn’t die? – No, no way.
   
 
''Rinne, why?''
 
''Rinne, why?''

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