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Mina once again turned toward the Meat Doll after she finished saying something incomprehensible.
 
Mina once again turned toward the Meat Doll after she finished saying something incomprehensible.
 
 
The fragmented cluster of flesh with no determinable gender, which was destroyed by the Long-Armed Demon, had already completely recovered. Mina's expression was impassive despite facing that hideous visage. She ignored Rinne, who was lying by her feet and shivering with fear, and spoke to the Meat Doll: "Alright, Meat Doll, let me hear your explanation. Why did you disregard my orders and protected Usagawa Rinne? Based on your response, I will -- no, haha, you should know even if don't say it, right?"
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The fragmented cluster of flesh with no determinable gender, which was destroyed by the Long-Armed Demon, had already completely recovered. Mina's expression was impassive despite facing that hideous visage. She ignored Rinne, who was lying by her feet and shivering with fear, and spoke to the Meat Doll: "Alright, Meat Doll, let me hear your explanation. Why did you disregard my orders and protected Usagawa Rinne? Based on your response, I will--no, haha, you should know even if don't say it, right?"
 
 
 
Her words brought immeasurable fear to the Meat Doll. The Meat Doll startled with fright, and surprisingly responded with human speech.
 
Her words brought immeasurable fear to the Meat Doll. The Meat Doll startled with fright, and surprisingly responded with human speech.
 
 
"My reason was, since the Long-Armed Demon's target also seemed to be Usagawa Rinne's Fragment, I believed the Fragment might be taken away if I do not first eliminate Long-Armed Demon."
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"My reason was, since the Long-Armed Demon's target also seemed to be Usagawa Rinne's Fragment, I believed the Fragment may have been taken away if I did not first eliminate Long-Armed Demon."
 
 
"Oh?" Mina showed a look of surprise. "She was after the Fragment? There are people beside us who want those things? It seems Long-Armed Demon should have a Fragment... But even if she gets more than two Fragments, she'd just destroy her sensory organs and die. Then again -- maybe she mistook the Fragments' function?"
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"Oh?" Mina showed a look of surprise. "She was after the Fragment? There are people beside us who want those things? It seems Long-Armed Demon should have a Fragment... But even if she gets more than two Fragments, she'd just destroy her sensory organs and die. Then again--maybe she mistook the Fragments' function?"
 
 
 
Mina seemed to accept the Meat Doll's words. Perhaps from habit, she once again started talking to herself.
 
Mina seemed to accept the Meat Doll's words. Perhaps from habit, she once again started talking to herself.
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Why didn't Rinne notice this abnormality upon sight?
 
Why didn't Rinne notice this abnormality upon sight?
 
 
She was -- extremely dangerous.
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She was--extremely dangerous.
 
 
 
More dangerous than Snake, more dangerous than Long-Armed Demon, more dangerous than just about anybody.
 
More dangerous than Snake, more dangerous than Long-Armed Demon, more dangerous than just about anybody.
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Ah. She would never see them again. She couldn't go back.
 
Ah. She would never see them again. She couldn't go back.
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''I just had to meet her.''
 
   
   
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''I just had to meet her.''
   
 
Aizawa Ume was a girl whose hands weren't skilled.
 
Aizawa Ume was a girl whose hands weren't skilled.
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"Ah."
 
"Ah."
 
 
When she was fully awake, the sunlight was slanted and a crimson sunset dyed the world in bright shades. Long-Armed Demon felt pain in her legs and stomach, wondering if she was defeated yet again. As she started to get up --
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When she was fully awake, the sunlight was slanted and a crimson sunset dyed the world in bright shades. Long-Armed Demon felt pain in her legs and stomach, wondering if she was defeated yet again. As she started to get up--
 
 
 
"Huh?"
 
"Huh?"
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Until now it had always been like this; it was Long-Armed Demon's only and greatest joy.
 
Until now it had always been like this; it was Long-Armed Demon's only and greatest joy.
 
 
However --
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However--
 
 
 
These arms that lost feeling quietly rejected her.
 
These arms that lost feeling quietly rejected her.
 
 
-- Arms.
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--Arms.
 
 
 
"My arms are gone."
 
"My arms are gone."
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"I'm sorry, I"m sorry, don't abandon me, please don't abandon me."
 
"I'm sorry, I"m sorry, don't abandon me, please don't abandon me."
 
 
"This world --"
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"This world--"
 
 
 
Suddenly.
 
Suddenly.
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Looking at the person, it seemed to be someone she had seen somewhere before. The man's side fringe made his face seem like a monster's. He took out a cell phone and began dialing.
 
Looking at the person, it seemed to be someone she had seen somewhere before. The man's side fringe made his face seem like a monster's. He took out a cell phone and began dialing.
 
 
"-- Really has too many melancholic things."
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"--Really has too many melancholic things."
 
 
"You --"
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"You--"
 
 
 
Even though she called out to him to address him, he lazily asked her without even giving his name: "Long-Armed Demon, can you really not use your arms now?"
 
Even though she called out to him to address him, he lazily asked her without even giving his name: "Long-Armed Demon, can you really not use your arms now?"
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"Ah..."
 
"Ah..."
 
 
Struck at her weak point, Long-Armed Demon gritted her teeth and pushed back tears. But she couldn't hold them back and she started crying.
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Struck at her weak point, Long-Armed Demon grit her teeth and pushed back tears. But she couldn't hold them back and she started crying.
 
 
Seeing her like this, the man nodded his head as if in understanding and spoke formally into his phone. "Ah -- Hello, sorry to trouble you. I'm Nageki, Nageki Kurukiyo. Ah, right, right, I'll tell you the place now, so please come quickly. What? We need an ambulance for this, though it's probably already too late."
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Seeing her like this, the man nodded his head as if in understanding and spoke formally into his phone. "Ah-- Hello, sorry to trouble you. I'm Nageki, Nageki Kurukiyo. Ah, right, right, I'll tell you the place now, so please come quickly. What? We need an ambulance for this, though it's probably already too late."
 
 
 
Long-Armed Demon understood.
 
Long-Armed Demon understood.
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"Eh?" Dead? She wasn't dead yet, so who died?
 
"Eh?" Dead? She wasn't dead yet, so who died?
   
"Right, it looks like -- her arms were snapped off, and her shoulders were crushed."
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"Right, it looks like-- her arms were snapped off, and her shoulders were crushed."
 
 
Who was --
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Who was--
 
 
 
"She was murdered by having her heart torn out."
 
"She was murdered by having her heart torn out."
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The night was filled with nightmares, and falling asleep was impossible.
 
The night was filled with nightmares, and falling asleep was impossible.
 
 
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It was during a night like this, a night when sleep was impossible.
 
It was during a night like this, a night when sleep was impossible.
 
 
Gankyū Eguriko woke up in her dark room in the home where she lived together with the Itsuwara couple. Her bed was soft, and she used a sky-patterned quilt. She glanced at the clock with spoons as its hands; it pointed at 2:00am.
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Gankyū Eguriko woke up in her dark room in the home where she lived together with the Itsuwara couple. Her bed was soft, and she used a sky-pattered quilt. She glanced at the clock with spoons as its hands; it pointed at 2:00am.
 
 
 
"......"
 
"......"
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''If I ask them, they'll just laugh and say it's easy.''
 
''If I ask them, they'll just laugh and say it's easy.''
 
 
''"-- These "parents", that's us."''
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''"--These "parents", that's us."''
 
 
 
They were truly idiots without common sense. Since it was too ridiculous, Guriko decided to stop thinking about it and just learn, bit by bit. Living with them wouldn't be unpleasant.
 
They were truly idiots without common sense. Since it was too ridiculous, Guriko decided to stop thinking about it and just learn, bit by bit. Living with them wouldn't be unpleasant.
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She noticed them speaking softly in the living room.
 
She noticed them speaking softly in the living room.
 
 
The voices were filled with sorrow, completely unlike the frenzied excitement from before. They seemed to be sad.
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The voices were filled with sorrow, completely unlike the frenzied excitement from before. They seemed to be sad
 
 
"-- I.. can't do it, I can't stand it anymore."
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"--I.. can't do it, I can't stand it anymore."
 
 
That was Hino's voice. Was taking care of Guriko, a child who was both human and monster, a burden for her after all? Guriko thought it over, and an empty feeling that even she could not understand assaulted her heart.
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That was Hino's voice. Was taking care of Guriko, a child who was both human and monster, a burden for her after all? Guriko thought it over, and an empty feeling even she could not understand assaulted her heart.
 
 
"-- But...
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"--But...
 
 
"-- I can't kill her."
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--I can't kill her."
 
 
 
Hino murmured, and Kio replied.
 
Hino murmured, and Kio replied.
 
 
"-- Hino, that won't do. If we refuse to kill her, we will be killed by that person."
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"--Hino, that won't do. If we refuse to kill her, we will be killed by that person."
 
 
"-- Being killed is fine; either way, Kio, you definitely can't kill Guriko-chan either. You obviously care about her more than I do."
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"--Being killed is fine; either way, Kio, you definitely can't kill Guriko-chan either. You obviously care about her more than I do."
 
 
 
Hino's voice sounded almost like she was crying.
 
Hino's voice sounded almost like she was crying.
 
 
"-- Besides, you say we'll be killed, but for a long time we've already --"
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"--Besides, you say we'll be killed, but for a long time we've already--"
 
 
 
Then, she woke up.
 
Then, she woke up.
 
 
It seemed like a scene concocted in a dream. Thanks to this, she did not have a nightmare in its place. But those half-digested, nauseating thoughts kept floating in her mind and she felt terrible. Like in her dream, Guriko woke in the darkness.
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It seemed like a scene concocted in a dream. Thanks to this, she did not have an nightmare in its place. But those half-digested, nauseating thoughts kept floating in her mind and she felt terrible. Like in her dream, Guriko woke in the darkness.
 
 
 
Her mind was heavy.
 
Her mind was heavy.
 
 
''That conversation -- that night, what did that couple's conversation mean? Saying things like killing me, or being killed -- I don't understand it.'' In short, feeling an indescribable nausea, Guriko unhappily stared at the ceiling.
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''That conversation--that night, what did that couple's conversation mean? Saying things like killing me, or being killed--I don't understand it. '' In short, feeling an indescribable nausea, Guriko unhappily stared at the ceiling.
 
 
 
She didn't go to school and even refused to pick up the phone when Rinne called.
 
She didn't go to school and even refused to pick up the phone when Rinne called.
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"My being near them will create danger?"
 
"My being near them will create danger?"
 
 
''I know how cruel I am. I'm no different from Long-Armed Demon who killed ten people. In fact, I am worse than her. I have a twisted heart that wants to hurt others' bodies. My true identity is that of an eyeball-gouging monster.''
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''I know how cruel I am. I'm no different from Long-Armed Demon who killed ten people. In fact, when I am worse than her. I have a twisted heart that wanted to hurt others' bodies. My true identity is that of an eyeball-gouging monster.''
 
 
 
''There's no way I can talk about this with people like Rinne; if they knew these things, they would despise me and fear me. The number of eyeballs that I've gouged out is probably even greater than what they ever imagined.''
 
''There's no way I can talk about this with people like Rinne; if they knew these things, they would despise me and fear me. The number of eyeballs that I've gouged out is probably even greater than what they ever imagined.''
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"I like you."
 
"I like you."
 
 
''Go somewhere far away. Being here is too painful. This happy world is suffocating me. School, home, all this happiness of a normal life --It's too painful for a monster like me.''
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''Go somewhere far away. Being here is too painful. This happy world is suffocating me. School, home, all this happiness of a normal life--It's too painful for a monster like me.''
 
 
 
''I can't depend on them.''
 
''I can't depend on them.''
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Therefore, Gankyū Eguriko would choose that option.
 
Therefore, Gankyū Eguriko would choose that option.
 
 
Her only necessities would be spoons. She would once again walk that old path. Wandering from place to place, looking for those with Apples, keeping them far away from Mushi --
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Her only necessities would be spoons. She would once again walk that old path. Wandering from place to place, looking for those with Apples, keeping them far away from "Mushi"--
 
 
 
Drunk with self-satisfaction, she would gradually cease to think.
 
Drunk with self-satisfaction, she would gradually cease to think.
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''That would be good. Only that would be acceptable, I'm already tired. I wanna become a monster again.''
 
''That would be good. Only that would be acceptable, I'm already tired. I wanna become a monster again.''
 
 
Opening the door, she found no one in the darkness. Perfect. Though she felt sorry toward Hino and Kio, she took this opportunity to leave. An ending like this would be a bit cold or perhaps hurt them, and she felt apologetic for it. However, the whole thing was impossible from the start.
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Opening the door, she found no one in the darkness. Perfect. Though she felt sorry toward Hino and Kio, she took this opportunity to leave. An ending like this would be a bit cold or perhaps hurt them, and she felt apologetic for it. However, the whole thing was impossible from the start .
 
 
Guriko apologized in her heart. Thinking that "I'll at least leave a note so they won't worry", she reached out to the notepad next to the telephone.
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Guriko apologized in her heart. Thinking that , "I'll at least leave a note so they won't worry", she reached out to the notepad next to the telephone.
 
 
 
It was then that she finally noticed Hino collapsed on the floor.
 
It was then that she finally noticed Hino collapsed on the floor.
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Guriko would face the worst possible truth soon in the hospital.
 
Guriko would face the worst possible truth soon in the hospital.
 
   
 
 

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