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Sakaki had emptied his gun upon hearing this news. He destroyed the phone that delivered the news and rushed out of the school at a speed above human limits. After using his extraordinary skill to beat up the educational director who tried to stop him from leaving before his work was done, he forcibly waved over a car that was passing by. Since his gun was empty, he used the gun itself to knock down the driver and hijacked the car before speeding to the hospital that contacted him.
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Sakaki had emptied his gun upon hearing this news. He destroyed the phone that delivered the news and rushed out of the school at a speed above human limits. After using his extraordinary skill to beat up the educational director who tried to stop him from leaving before his work was done, he forcibly waved over a car that was passing by. Since his gun was empty, he used the gun itself to knock down the driver and hijack the car before speeding to the hospital that contacted him.
 
 
 
Everything that happened afterward was gone from his memory.
 
Everything that happened afterward was gone from his memory.
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It was a completely black room.
 
It was a completely black room.
 
 
Sakaki didn't need to think. He could understand just by looking at the scene in front of him. A wide room, a soft-looking hospital bed, an absence of medical equipment. That was to be expected -- Sakaki's beloved, the young woman Usagawa Rinne, was lying on the bed with a deathly pallor. This was a true death.
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Sakaki didn't need to think. He could understand just by looking at the scene in front of him. A wide room, a soft-looking hospital bed, an absence of medical equipment. That was to be expected--Sakaki's beloved, the young woman Usagawa Rinne, was lying on the bed with a deathly pallor. This was a true death.
 
 
 
"Sakaki."
 
"Sakaki."
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She spoke with a coarse voice.
 
She spoke with a coarse voice.
 
 
With trembling shoulders and a shaking voice, she --
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With trembling shoulders and a shaking voice, she--
 
 
 
"I'm sorry, Sakaki, I'm sorry."
 
"I'm sorry, Sakaki, I'm sorry."
 
 
-- apologized. For some reason, tears flowed down Guriko's expressionless face.
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--apologized. For some reason, tears flowed down Guriko's expressionless face.
 
 
 
"Move."
 
"Move."
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Guriko stood idly in place, clenching her fists with seemingly enough force to draw blood.
 
Guriko stood idly in place, clenching her fists with seemingly enough force to draw blood.
 
 
"Why didn't I notice it... Haha, hahaha, I was too busy anguishing over my own issues to even notice the danger Rinne was in --"
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"Why didn't I notice it... Haha, hahaha, I was too busy anguishing over my issues to even notice the danger Rinne was in--"
 
 
She laughed out loud, staring for a while at Rinne, who did not move at all. Then, she turned to Sakaki, showing no emotion on her face. Those deep black eyes, like gun barrels mixed with red, burned with the desire to bring ruin to everything in the world.
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She laughed out loud, staring for a while at Rinne who did not move at all. Then, she turned to Sakaki, showing no emotion on her face. Those deep black eyes like gun barrels, mixed with red, burned with the desire to bring ruin to everything in the world.
 
 
 
"Sakaki, kill me. Slash off my limbs, snap my neck, dig out my eyeballs, mush my brain... If I'm still alive then grind my entire body to bits and burn it until there's nothing left. Let nothing of this useless body remain in this world!"
 
"Sakaki, kill me. Slash off my limbs, snap my neck, dig out my eyeballs, mush my brain... If I'm still alive then grind my entire body to bits and burn it until there's nothing left. Let nothing of this useless body remain in this world!"
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Seeing Sakaki's expression, Guriko hung her head in defeat.
 
Seeing Sakaki's expression, Guriko hung her head in defeat.
 
 
Silence surrounded them, covering both their spirits and their bodies, so much that the silence itself seemed deafening. Sakaki proceeded to coarsely scream and pounded on the wall.
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Silence surrounded them, covering both their spirits and their bodies, so much that the silence itself seemed deafening. Sakaki proceeded to coarsely screamed and pounded on the wall.
 
 
 
This wouldn't bring redemption, nor would it allow Rinne to return from the dead.
 
This wouldn't bring redemption, nor would it allow Rinne to return from the dead.
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It was even less possible for their mood to improve as a result.
 
It was even less possible for their mood to improve as a result.
 
 
But despite that --
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But despite that--
 
 
 
"Let's go look."
 
"Let's go look."
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With a sharp aura emanating from his eyes, Sakaki placed his hand on Guriko's shoulder.
 
With a sharp aura emanating from his eyes, Sakaki placed his hand on Guriko's shoulder.
 
 
"Let's go look for a way to save Rinne. There should be some way. If we give up here, it will truly be over... God, 'Mushi', Apples of Eden -- this world is filled with incomprehensible things. There must be something that can save milady..."
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"Let's go look for a way to save Rinne. There should be some way. If we give up here, it will truly be over... God, 'Mushi', Apples of Eden -- this world is filled with incomprehensible things. There must be something that can save Her Majesty..."
 
 
 
Even though it was a faint wish less reliable than a spider's web.
 
Even though it was a faint wish less reliable than a spider's web.
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Already, the atmosphere of despair from before had disappeared, replaced with one brimming with hope.
 
Already, the atmosphere of despair from before had disappeared, replaced with one brimming with hope.
 
 
"That's true..." With eyes still shining with brilliance, she said something that would never have escaped her lips in the past. "Sensei, thank you -- I see a little bit of hope now."
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"That's true..." With eyes still shining with brilliance, she said something that would never have escaped her lips in the past. "Sensei, thank you--I see a little bit of hope now."
 
 
"Don't only call me sensei during times like this, idiot."
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"Don't only call me Sensei during times like this, idiot."
 
 
"I apologize. I don't know why, but I suddenly felt like calling you sensei."
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"I apologize. I don't know why, but I suddenly felt like calling you Sensei."
 
 
 
A beautiful smile appeared on Guriko's face.
 
A beautiful smile appeared on Guriko's face.
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She suddenly turned her head.
 
She suddenly turned her head.
 
 
"But, Sakaki, don't come."
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"But Sakaki, don't come."
 
 
 
"Why not?"
 
"Why not?"
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Don't come? Sakaki seemed about to burst. Who did she think she was talking to? No matter who or what stood in his way, if it was for Rinne, he would brave any danger; that was Sakaki Guryū.
 
Don't come? Sakaki seemed about to burst. Who did she think she was talking to? No matter who or what stood in his way, if it was for Rinne, he would brave any danger; that was Sakaki Guryū.
 
 
There was no way Guriko that didn't understand this. Even so, she firmly stared at him.
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There was no way Guriko didn't understand this. Even so, she firmly stared at him.
 
 
 
"Sakaki, please don't make me repeat myself."
 
"Sakaki, please don't make me repeat myself."
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"Don't look. Because from now on I will return to being a monster."
 
"Don't look. Because from now on I will return to being a monster."
 
   
 
 
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Her eye, which was covered with an eye patch to speed its recovery, had all but totally regenerated. Her sight had returned to normal.
 
Her eye, which was covered with an eye patch to speed its recovery, had all but totally regenerated. Her sight had returned to normal.
 
 
This was the room of that detective, who looked like a hair-demon himself and captured Long-Armed Demon. It was a <span id="Tatami size">[[Mushi:Vol2_TLnotes#Tatami size|4-tatami sized]]</span> room with only a bathroom attached to it. The simple kitchen inside the room was stacked full of recently washed dishes. The room was extremely clean. Contrary to his appearance, it seemed that detective was actually quite meticulous.
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This is the room of that detective, who looked like a hair-demon himself and captured Long-Armed Demon. It was a <span id="Tatami size">[[Mushi:Vol2_TLnotes#Tatami size|4-tatami sized]]</span> room with only a bathroom attached to it. The simple kitchen inside the room was stacked full of recently washed dishes. The room was extremely clean. Contrary to his appearance, it seemed that detective was actually quite meticulous.
 
 
 
The room's light was on.
 
The room's light was on.
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"Zeki-kun..."
 
"Zeki-kun..."
 
 
Though she tried to break the collar on her, she couldn't feel her arms. Long-Armed Demon sighed and tears appeared in her eyes out of restlessness. Her one and only pride -- her arms -- were gone. In her sadness, the loss of that which she depended on created a sense of hollowness.
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Though she tried to break the collar on her, she couldn't feel her arms. Long-Armed Demon sighed and tears appeared in her eyes out of restlessness. Her one and only pride--her arms--were gone. In her sadness, the loss of that which she depended on created a sense of hollowness.
 
 
 
Zekiguchi would definitely not need a Long-Armed Demon like this anymore.
 
Zekiguchi would definitely not need a Long-Armed Demon like this anymore.
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When she thought that, she felt even more lonely and even more miserable as tears flooded down her cheeks.
 
When she thought that, she felt even more lonely and even more miserable as tears flooded down her cheeks.
 
 
After losing to that scary woman who was both like an angel and a demon and had her arms were somehow removed, that detective picked up the crying Long-Armed Demon and brought her here. That detective was obviously a law enforcement agent, but he didn't throw her in jail. Instead, he brought Long-Armed Demon to his room after saying some some strange things. Then he bound her with a collar and leash.
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After losing to that scary woman who was both like an angel and a demon and had her arms were somehow removed, that detective picked up the crying Long-Armed Demon and brought her here. That detective was obviously a law enforcement agent, but he didn't throw her in jail. Instead, he brought Long-Armed Demon to his room after saying some some strange things - this place. Then he bound her with a collar and leash.
 
 
 
The leash was randomly attached to a pillar. Though it was a simple restraint, the armless Long-Armed Demon had no ways to escape. But this seemed even weirder than normal restraints. Rather, it seemed as if she were being treated like a dog. Upset, Long-Armed Demon cried and moaned and cursed the detective at the same time.
 
The leash was randomly attached to a pillar. Though it was a simple restraint, the armless Long-Armed Demon had no ways to escape. But this seemed even weirder than normal restraints. Rather, it seemed as if she were being treated like a dog. Upset, Long-Armed Demon cried and moaned and cursed the detective at the same time.
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Long-Armed Demon paled.
 
Long-Armed Demon paled.
 
 
"Aaah, when a person looking like me go shopping for children's clothing, people think I'm a criminal. However, while the housewives wer whispering to each other 'Maybe we should call the police', I managed to buy your underwear and everything else."
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"Aaah, when a person looking like me go shopping for children's clothing, people think I'm a criminal. However, while the housewives were whispering to each other 'Maybe we should call the police', I managed to buy your underwear and everything else."
 
 
 
This person was a pervert.
 
This person was a pervert.
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Long-Armed Demon's back stiffened with fear and she whimpered like a little dog.
 
Long-Armed Demon's back stiffened with fear and she whimpered like a little dog.
 
 
The perverted detective completely ignored her and laughed vulgarly, "Gigigi. Don't be so guarded against me. No matter how cautious you are, I'm stronger than you right now. Since that's the case, I suggest you act cute to keep me in a good mood rather than risk angering me with defiance."
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The perverted detective completely ignored her and laughed vulgarly, "Gigigi. Don't be so guarded against me. No matter how cautious you are I'm stronger than you right now. Since that's the case, I suggest you act cute to keep me in a good mood rather than risk angering me with defiance."
 
 
Yes, the Long-Armed Demon who killed ten people while spreading death and fear throughout Kannonsakazaki no longer existed. The person trembling on the ground was a small child without arms, someone weaker than even an average human.
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Yes, the Long-Armed Demon who killed ten people while spreading death and fear throughout Kannonsakazaki no longer existed. The person trembling on the ground was a smaller child without arms, someone weaker than even an average human.
 
 
 
Long-Armed Demon understood that, but she refused to surrender. She glared angrily at her adversary and bluffed with all her might.
 
Long-Armed Demon understood that, but she refused to surrender. She glared angrily at her adversary and bluffed with all her might.
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"What the hell are you? What are you trying to do to the Long-Armed Demon? D-don't come any closer. Long-Armed Demon will never obey you. If you do anything weird to me, I'll bite you! I'll kick you!"
 
"What the hell are you? What are you trying to do to the Long-Armed Demon? D-don't come any closer. Long-Armed Demon will never obey you. If you do anything weird to me, I'll bite you! I'll kick you!"
 
 
Facing Long-Armed Demon, who angrily tried to hide her fear, the detective looked through a gap in his hair with a seemingly joyful expression.
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Facing the Long-Armed Demon who angrily tried to hide her fear, the detective looked back through a gap in his hair with a seemingly joyful expression.
 
 
 
"Gigigi. Don't worry. Though it's really easy to misunderstand me based on my appearance, I'm actually a normal, kind person. I don't have any supernatural abilities and when it's time for me to die, I'd die quickly."
 
"Gigigi. Don't worry. Though it's really easy to misunderstand me based on my appearance, I'm actually a normal, kind person. I don't have any supernatural abilities and when it's time for me to die, I'd die quickly."
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"Kurukiyo, what are you planning to do?"
 
"Kurukiyo, what are you planning to do?"
 
 
"Plans? Ahh, I wasn't thinking of doing anything bad. It's just that -- this world has too many melancholic things and I want to reduce that melancholy by a little bit, Aizawa Ume-chan."
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"Plans? Ahh, I wasn't thinking of doing anything bad. It's just that--this world has too many melancholic things and I want to reduce that melancholy by a little bit, Aizawa Ume-chan."
 
 
 
Long-Armed Demon's face distorted at suddenly hearing her real name.
 
Long-Armed Demon's face distorted at suddenly hearing her real name.
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"Why?"
 
"Why?"
 
 
"Aizawa Ume was involved in a robbery incident three years ago. It was unclear whether she survived or not and her whereabouts were unknown. She would turn eleven this year if she is still alive. Her parents died during the incident and so did the robber. However, since the sole daughter Ume-chan was nowhere to be found, the police conducted an extensive search. Despite that, no one knows what happened to her even to this day."
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"Aizawa Ume was involved in a robbing incident three years ago. It was unclear whether she survived or not and her whereabouts were unknown. She would turn eleven this year if she is still alive. Her parents died during the incident and so did the robber. However, since the sole daughter Ume-chan was nowhere to be found, the police conducted an extensive search. Despite that, no one knows what happened to her even to this day."
 
 
 
After that detailed statement, Nageki smiled mysteriously: "By researching that tombstone you slept by, I learned of this melancholic event. I have no proof, but it seems that I'm not wrong from your reaction, Aizawa Ume-chan."
 
After that detailed statement, Nageki smiled mysteriously: "By researching that tombstone you slept by, I learned of this melancholic event. I have no proof, but it seems that I'm not wrong from your reaction, Aizawa Ume-chan."
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"Yeah, but this room doesn't have a bath tub, so we have to go to a bath house. Is that okay?"
 
"Yeah, but this room doesn't have a bath tub, so we have to go to a bath house. Is that okay?"
 
 
"Wha --"
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"Wha--"
 
 
 
Bath house - he meant a public bath. That would rather annoying. Her armless body would receive even more strange looks than usual at those sorts of places.
 
Bath house - he meant a public bath. That would rather annoying. Her armless body would receive even more strange looks than usual at those sorts of places.
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She was seen. Everything was seen. She was even scrubbed. Even Zekiguchi had never seen this much. She'd never be able to marry now... She started getting dizzy and couldn't form complete thoughts. She only felt humiliation, frustration, and she wanted to disappear. With a red face, Long-Armed Demon was submerged up to her neck in the steaming water.
 
She was seen. Everything was seen. She was even scrubbed. Even Zekiguchi had never seen this much. She'd never be able to marry now... She started getting dizzy and couldn't form complete thoughts. She only felt humiliation, frustration, and she wanted to disappear. With a red face, Long-Armed Demon was submerged up to her neck in the steaming water.
 
 
"Flavor of Soup" - this was a classical bathing place with a name sounding like a condiment. In this era of theme-park-styled super bath houses, this kind of normal bath was not very popular. Or, perhaps, it would be more accurate to say that the facility was insufficient. The place wasn't anything special. There only the bath itself, which was not particularly large, as well as a sauna to help with aches.
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"Flavor of Soup" - this is a classical place with a name sounding like a condiment. In this era of theme-park-styled super bath houses, this kind of normal bath was not very popular. Or, perhaps, it would be more accurate to say that the facility was insufficient. The place wasn't anything special. there only the bath itself, which was not particularly large, as well as a sauna to help with aches.
 
 
 
Only the unbelievably high ceiling was different from usual, as one could see steam spiraling upward and upward. The sight was exquisite. As a result, Long-Armed Demon silently watched as if trying to forget her shame.
 
Only the unbelievably high ceiling was different from usual, as one could see steam spiraling upward and upward. The sight was exquisite. As a result, Long-Armed Demon silently watched as if trying to forget her shame.
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She thought about Zekiguchi, and then about that woman who took everything away from her and seemed both like an angel and a demon.
 
She thought about Zekiguchi, and then about that woman who took everything away from her and seemed both like an angel and a demon.
 
 
Just thinking about that woman's honey-sweet voice and those eyes that seemed kind while hiding apathetic coldness made the hairs on her back stand up. Such a scary person. As if that person had attacked the public bath, Long-Armed Demon raised her head and gritted her teeth while sighing.
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Just thinking about that woman's honey-sweet voice and those eyes that seemed kind while hiding apathetic coldness inside made the hairs on her back stand up. Such a scary person. As if that person had attacked the public bath, Long-Armed Demon raised her head and gritted her teeth while sighing.
 
 
 
"But, why?"
 
"But, why?"
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Long-Armed Demon saw that face and couldn't help but be surprised.
 
Long-Armed Demon saw that face and couldn't help but be surprised.
 
 
"Um -- Kurikiyo?"
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"Um--Kurikiyo?"
 
 
 
"Mm? That's me. What is it?"
 
"Mm? That's me. What is it?"
 
 
His face --
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His face--
 
 
 
His hair, which always hid his expression, was now tied to the back. The face that was now visible was beautiful enough that Long-Armed Demon was momentarily enchanted.
 
His hair, which always hid his expression, was now tied to the back. The face that was now visible was beautiful enough that Long-Armed Demon was momentarily enchanted.
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She truly wanted to go back to Zekiguchi. Even though Zekiguchi had never gotten this close to her and rarely chatted with her.
 
She truly wanted to go back to Zekiguchi. Even though Zekiguchi had never gotten this close to her and rarely chatted with her.
 
 
Has it been years since she last talked so unguarded with someone else? Not as the Long-Armed Demon, but as a human. She thought to herself -- and then shook her head, reminding herself that she still could not trust this man. The only people she could trust in this world were Zekiguchi and herself. No one else.
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Has it been years since she last talked so unguarded with someone else? Not as the Long-Armed Demon, but as a human. She thought to herself--and then shook her head, reminding herself that she still could not trust this man. The only people she could trust in this world were Zekiguchi and herself. No one else.
 
 
 
Everyone else was scary. They would bare their fangs at her at the most unexpected times, just like that robber who cut off her arms.
 
Everyone else was scary. They would bare their fangs at her at the most unexpected times, just like that robber who cut off her arms.
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Just as Long-Armed Demon thought this, Nageki unbelievably voiced her thoughts.
 
Just as Long-Armed Demon thought this, Nageki unbelievably voiced her thoughts.
 
 
"Ah -- It's been so long since I could relax and simply chat with someone. But you still seem to be on guard against me."
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"Ah--It's been so long since I could relax and simply chat with someone. But you still seem to be on guard against me."
   
 
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"This world -- has too many melancholic things."
 
"This world -- has too many melancholic things."
 
 
Perhaps it was his catchphrase? He uttered this profound sentence for the who-knows-how-many-th time.
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Perhaps it was his catchphrase? He uttered this profound for the who-knows-how-many-th time.
 
 
 
"It's just... should I say it is reminiscing, or is it more like opening up old wounds? Ume-chan, my girlfriend was also inconvenienced by her disabled body."
 
"It's just... should I say it is reminiscing, or is it more like opening up old wounds? Ume-chan, my girlfriend was also inconvenienced by her disabled body."
 
 
Nageki looked at her. Unhappy at being seen naked, Long-Armed Demon lowered herself up to her neck into the murky hot water. Due the Apple's power, her skin had regenerated right over the rough wounds where her arms were cut off. Supposedly,it would normally be possible to regenerate her arms with an Apple, but Long-Armed Demon's Apple for some reason refused to restore those two arms.
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Nageki looked at her. Unhappy at being seen naked, Long-Armed Demon lowered herself up to her neck into the murky hot water. Due the Apple's power, her skin had regenerated right over the rough wounds where her arms were cut off. Supposedly,it would normally be possible to regenerate her arms with an Apple , but Long-Armed Demon's Apple for some reason refused to restore those two arms.
 
 
 
Instead, she received a pair of invisible arms stronger than just about anyone else's.
 
Instead, she received a pair of invisible arms stronger than just about anyone else's.
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"I can't let it go."
 
"I can't let it go."
 
 
Long-Armed Demon couldn't respond. Up until now, she had repeatedly committed acts no different from those of the Dream World Beast. People like Nageki, who had their important others taken away from them without reason, must also harbor regret in their hearts and despise Long-Armed Demon.
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Long-Armed Demon couldn't respond. Up until now, she had repeatedly committed acts no different from those of the Dream World Beast. people like Nageki, who had their important others taken away from them without reason, must also harbor regret in their hearts and despise Long-Armed Demon.
 
 
 
With a face full of grief, Nageki ever-so-slightly smiled. "So that others would not hold the same kinds of regret I do, I want to eliminate unreasonable melancholy -- monsters. That's all. Even though I'm just a weak human, a mouse will bite a cat when forced into a corner. I want to show the strength of us weak humans to the monsters out there."
 
With a face full of grief, Nageki ever-so-slightly smiled. "So that others would not hold the same kinds of regret I do, I want to eliminate unreasonable melancholy -- monsters. That's all. Even though I'm just a weak human, a mouse will bite a cat when forced into a corner. I want to show the strength of us weak humans to the monsters out there."
 
 
How scary. The melancholic detective's terrible gaze looked straight at her.
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How scary. The melancholic detective's terribly gaze looked straight at her.
 
 
 
"I'll get to the point. What are you?"
 
"I'll get to the point. What are you?"
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Though she didn't remember what her name was, she could remember her overwhelming aura that was like both an angel and a demon.
 
Though she didn't remember what her name was, she could remember her overwhelming aura that was like both an angel and a demon.
 
 
"That strangeness... she probably wasn't human or monster. She was something even more abnormal, living in an even stranger plane than the world we monsters stay in..."
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"That strangeness... she probably wasn't human nor monster. She was something even more abnormal, living in an even stranger plane than the world we monsters stay in..."
 
 
 
She was not worried about Kurukiyo.
 
She was not worried about Kurukiyo.

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