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All men will die. This was a commonsensical truth recorded in the Bible.
 
All men will die. This was a commonsensical truth recorded in the Bible.
   
The only immortals were saints and inhumans beings whom we call witches.
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The only immortals were saints and inhumans we call witches.
   
 
In medieval Europe, which was taken over by the viral Witch Hunt movement, mortality was used to separate witches from humans. The accused were placed into boiling cauldrons. Those who died were humans. Those who lived were witches.
 
In medieval Europe, which was taken over by the viral Witch Hunt movement, mortality was used to separate witches from humans. The accused were placed into boiling cauldrons. Those who died were humans. Those who lived were witches.
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Death and misfortune always emanated from her person.
 
Death and misfortune always emanated from her person.
   
She didn’t have any memories of where she was born. She was already living with a foster family when she was old enough to have memories. Those family members were soon all killed by the Mushi. Not a single one of them were left.
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She didn’t have any memories of where she was born. She was already living with a foster family when she was old enough to remember her life. Those family members were soon all killed by the ‘Mushi’. Not a single one of them were left.
   
The Apple holders who traveled with her also left her behind and disappeared.
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The Apple Holders who traveled with her also left her behind and disappeared.
   
 
And now she had also killed her most important person due to her own negligence.
 
And now she had also killed her most important person due to her own negligence.
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“Itsuwara Eguriko-san?”
 
“Itsuwara Eguriko-san?”
   
A young female voice was calling out. ''Wait, I am Itsuwara. I gave the hospital that name when I came here with Hino. Hino… Although I care about Hino’s condition, I must find Rinne’s killer first. I’ll make that person remember my vengeance.''
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A young female voice was calling out. ''Wait, I am Itsuwara. I gave the hospital that name when I came here with Hino. Hino… Although I care about Hino’s condition, I must find Rinne’s killer first. ’I’ll make that person remember my vengeance.''
   
 
''Although I won’t be able to change anything by doing this, I can’t just walk away without my revenge.''
 
''Although I won’t be able to change anything by doing this, I can’t just walk away without my revenge.''
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“Oh. Hello.”
 
“Oh. Hello.”
   
Guriko glared at her, replying casually. The other woman had a strange aura. Or rather, she had no aura. It was as if she was not alive.
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Guriko glared at her, replying casually. The other woman had a strange aura. Or rather, she had no auras. It was as if she was not alive.
   
 
Guriko shook her head and spoke, trying to gauge the other’s intention: “How can I help you? I’m in a bit of a hurry.”
 
Guriko shook her head and spoke, trying to gauge the other’s intention: “How can I help you? I’m in a bit of a hurry.”
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Judging from her looks, Hino was veritably on the verge of death. Guriko understood her life was about to end. Guriko was anxious because of this understanding.
 
Judging from her looks, Hino was veritably on the verge of death. Guriko understood her life was about to end. Guriko was anxious because of this understanding.
   
She knew all humans will die. Humans will always die. It was just a matter of time.
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She knew all humans will die. Humans will always die. It was just a matter of sooner or later.
   
 
Someone close to her was going to die once again.
 
Someone close to her was going to die once again.
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“Hino –“
 
“Hino –“
   
Guriko didn’t get an answer when she called out Hino’s name. She didn’t expect one. That was the road Guriko chose.
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Guriko didn’t get an answer when she called out Hino’s name. She didn’t expect one anyways. That was the road Guriko chose.
   
 
She was so stubborn and refused them just because of fear.
 
She was so stubborn and refused them just because of fear.
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''I was so afraid. This fear made me detached, and it hurt you.''
 
''I was so afraid. This fear made me detached, and it hurt you.''
   
Remembering those ordinary days spent with Hino and Kio, when everyday was so mediocre and only the most mundane things ever happened – those were the important things Guriko left behind a thousand years ago. But now, thanks to those two, Guriko knew how to smile again.
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Remembering those ordinary days spent with Hino and Kio, when everyday was so mediocre and only the most mundane things ever happened – those were the important things Guriko left behind since a thousand years ago. But now, thanks to those two, Guriko knew how to smile again.
   
 
It was something more tender than what her real parents and her foster parents ever gave her a millennium ago.
 
It was something more tender than what her real parents and her foster parents ever gave her a millennium ago.
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This was the last immortal Apple Guriko had. If she gave it to Hino, then the other woman would certainly escape death. She might even live out the rest of her days with Kio. Guriko can then entrust everything to Sakaki and allow herself to disappear.
 
This was the last immortal Apple Guriko had. If she gave it to Hino, then the other woman would certainly escape death. She might even live out the rest of her days with Kio. Guriko can then entrust everything to Sakaki and allow herself to disappear.
   
''I've lived for a thousand long years.''
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''I lived for a thousand long years.''
   
 
''It is enough. Although I didn’t end up getting anything out of it, it is enough.''
 
''It is enough. Although I didn’t end up getting anything out of it, it is enough.''
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''What?''
 
''What?''
   
Itsuwara Hino jumped up as if she was a jack-in-a-box on a spring and yelled loudly as she grabbed the shoulders of Guriko, who was prepared to end everything. “No! This is a trap!”
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Itsuwara Hino jumped up as if she was a jack-in-a-box on a spring and yelled loudly as she grabbed Guriko’s shoulders, who was prepared to end everything. “No! This is a trap!”
   
 
“Hino?”
 
“Hino?”
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“But this is resistance, no? This is unadulterated betrayal, no? Could you not imagine what would happen – to a doll who disobeyed its creator?”
 
“But this is resistance, no? This is unadulterated betrayal, no? Could you not imagine what would happen – to a doll who disobeyed its creator?”
   
The nurse muttered as the space around her began to melt. No, it was a white mist emitting out of her body like steam. Was it the nurse uniform that was melting away? Something like a membrane then momentarily concealed her figure.
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The nurse muttered as the space around her began to melt. No, it was a white mist emitting out of her body like steam. Was the nurse uniform that was melting away? Something like a membrane then concealed her figure momentarily.
   
 
The white angel shed her skin and the nightmarish white demon showed herself.
 
The white angel shed her skin and the nightmarish white demon showed herself.
   
She had a long braid and was wearing a tank top with angel wing prints. She also donned a pair of shorts that ended mid-thigh, wore colorful bracelets and wristbands on her arms, and her mouth was covered by a hard dust mask with a primitive design.
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She had a long braid and was wearing a tank top with angel wing prints. She also donned a pair of shorts that ended mid-thigh, wore colourful bracelets and wristbands on her arms, and her mouth was covered by a hard dust mask with a primitive design.
   
 
Her pristine white hair danced as the woman pronounced her name.
 
Her pristine white hair danced as the woman pronounced her name.

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