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At the same time, Sakaki Guryū was plunged into shock and disbelief.
 
At the same time, Sakaki Guryū was plunged into shock and disbelief.
   
He followed Guriko out of Rinne’s room, but ended up losing her. Casually, Sakaki looked into a room.
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He followed Guriko out of Rinne’s room, but ending up losing her. Casually, Sakaki looked into a room.
   
 
He felt strange. He had been feeling rather strange ever since he arrived here.
 
He felt strange. He had been feeling rather strange ever since he arrived here.
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“No way…”
 
“No way…”
   
Sakaki screamed and moved towards another room. ''No way. No way. Something terrible is happening.'' A great malice that Sakaki could not predict was spreading itself.
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Sakaki screamed and moved towards another room. ''No way. No way. Something terrible was happening.'' A great malice that Sakaki could not predict was spreading itself.
   
 
He went to the room across the corridor. There were no sounds and no scents.
 
He went to the room across the corridor. There were no sounds and no scents.
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“Ha, ha…”
 
“Ha, ha…”
   
His breath quickened. His heart beat furiously. Sakaki shook his head and sprang out of the in-patient building, heading towards the administration area in the center of the complex. ''What is this? What's going on? Is everyone dead? Everyone!? Did anyone survive?'' He looked for survivors, but couldn’t find any.
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His breath quickened. His heart beat furiously. Sakaki shook his head and sprang out of the in-patient building, heading towards the administration area in the centre of the complex. ''What was this? What was going on? Was everyone dead? Everyone!? Did anyone survive?'' He looked for survivors, but couldn’t find any.
   
 
He walked towards the offices where the doctors, nurses and other staff should be.
 
He walked towards the offices where the doctors, nurses and other staff should be.
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It was pitch black. The room was pitch black.
 
It was pitch black. The room was pitch black.
   
There were only body parts left. There were hands, feet, and heads.
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There were only body parts left. There were hands, feet, heads.
   
 
He needed no more proofs.
 
He needed no more proofs.

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