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“Ah!” Guriko understood.
 
“Ah!” Guriko understood.
   
''I can’t turn my head back. I will be overwhelmed with despair if I look behind me. I understand. Not because of her words, but I understand it instinctively –''
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''I can’t turn my head back. I will be overwhelmed with despair if I look behind me. I understand. Not because of her words, but I understood it instinctively – ’’==''
   
 
She accidentally looked back.
 
She accidentally looked back.
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Then she spoke and repeated her own name over and over.
 
Then she spoke and repeated her own name over and over.
   
“Rinne. Rinne. Rinne. Rinne.”
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“Rinne, Rinne, Rinne, Rinne.”
   
 
Guriko instantly slumped on the ground. She couldn’t believe this. This was a nightmare. Sakaki’s face also paled. How could something so cruel have happened?!
 
Guriko instantly slumped on the ground. She couldn’t believe this. This was a nightmare. Sakaki’s face also paled. How could something so cruel have happened?!
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“Rip rip.”
 
“Rip rip.”
   
Her skin tore apart and her flesh rippled as the skin on her back was ripped to pieces. As if excited, the bonds within her blood were released. This was the demon that rampaged under Guriko’s thin human skin, the monster that vanquished Snake a month before. She originally thought she could only transform when in possession of a ripe and ancient Apple, but that did not seem like the case.
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Her skin tore apart and her flesh rippled as the skin on her back was ripped to pieces. As if excited, the bonds within her blood were released. This was the demon that rampaged under Guriko’s thin human skin, the monster that vanquished the Snake a month before. She originally thought she could only transform when in possession of a ripe and ancient Apple, but that did not seem like the case.
   
 
It must have been her soul that changed, and not the Apple.
 
It must have been her soul that changed, and not the Apple.
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''If so, then it would be impossible to live as a human.''
 
''If so, then it would be impossible to live as a human.''
   
''But I am still lonely. I stuck around with Rinne and Sakaki for more than two months. That was enough – enough for this eyeball gouging monster – all that was left to do was to live and die as a monster.''
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''But I am still lonely. I stuck around with Rinne and Sakaki for more than two months. That was enough – enough for this eyeball gorging monster – all that was left to do was to live and die as a monster.''
   
 
''When everything had ended, I will return to being a monster.''
 
''When everything had ended, I will return to being a monster.''
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She was incredibly calm. There was no fear, no joy, no despair.
 
She was incredibly calm. There was no fear, no joy, no despair.
   
Sterilization Disinfection readied herself for battle and aimed her spray cans towards Guriko. “I didn’t know this, I didn’t know this. What is this? A mere human… no, just how long have you had an Apple for? A few hundred years? A few thousands? Is it because you continued to harbor such a great power within yourself that your body had to grow in order to endure it – no – this is not growth. This is evolution! How wonderful! You’re no longer a human, but something like us –”
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Sterilization Disinfection readied herself for battle and aimed her spray cans towards Guriko. “I didn’t know this, I didn’t know this. What is this? A mere human… no, just how long have you had an Apple for? A few hundred years? A few thousands? Is it because you continued to harbor such a great power within yourself and your body had to grow in order to endure it – no – this is not growth. This is evolution! How wonderful! You’re no longer a human, but something like us –”
   
 
“Silent.”
 
“Silent.”
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That was no longer Guriko’s voice.
 
That was no longer Guriko’s voice.
   
However, Guriko still spread her arms as if protecting Sakaki and Rinne.
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However, Guriko still spread her arms as if protection Sakaki and Rinne.
   
 
“Monsters should not imitate human speech. That would make people misunderstand! Monsters should just slaughter each other on the other side of the world. You and I are both such creatures, so we no longer need speech. You’re being loud and annoying!”
 
“Monsters should not imitate human speech. That would make people misunderstand! Monsters should just slaughter each other on the other side of the world. You and I are both such creatures, so we no longer need speech. You’re being loud and annoying!”
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“Shut up!”
 
“Shut up!”
   
Guriko snapped and rushed towards her enemy as she flapped the wings woven from intertwining threads of meat. Her body was unbelievably light and full of strength. She lifted her elbow powerfully backwards – and delivered a punch just like that.
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Guriko snapped and rushed towards her enemy as she flapped the wings woven from intertwining threads of meat. Her body was unbelievably light and her body was full of strength. She lifted her elbow powerfully backwards – and delivered a punch just like that.
   
 
Sterilization Disinfection’s slender body flew violently out of the corridor, punching a hole in the wall of the hospital in the process. Under the starlit night sky outside, she fell as her body dripped with blood and other unidentifiable body fluids.
 
Sterilization Disinfection’s slender body flew violently out of the corridor, punching a hole in the wall of the hospital in the process. Under the starlit night sky outside, she fell as her body dripped with blood and other unidentifiable body fluids.
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The hospital gardens had verdant paths for patients to stroll in, but the blossoms in the flowerbeds were shut in the darkness. The surroundings were completely silent, and the trees were decorations only to make the dark night even more inky black. This place, illuminated only by the light of the moon and the stars, felt extremely forlorn.
 
The hospital gardens had verdant paths for patients to stroll in, but the blossoms in the flowerbeds were shut in the darkness. The surroundings were completely silent, and the trees were decorations only to make the dark night even more inky black. This place, illuminated only by the light of the moon and the stars, felt extremely forlorn.
   
Sterilization Disinfection stilled her body with <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Jack Jewel|Fixation Mist}}</span> and reduced the speed she was falling with. She seemed able to remove <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Jack Jewel|Fixation Mist}}</span> according to her will, and landed softly on the ground.
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Sterilization Disinfection stilled her body with Jack Jewel and reduced the speed she was falling with. She seemed able to remove Jack Jewel according to her will, and landed softly on the ground.
   
 
There was a hole through her abdomen.
 
There was a hole through her abdomen.
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''But I owe them.''
 
''But I owe them.''
   
As she was contemplating this, the mist suddenly attacked her like a feral beast. Guriko’s right arm was completely erased. There was no pain, no sensation. It was simply destroyed.
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As she was contemplating this, the mist suddenly attacked her like a feral beast. Guriko’s right shoulder was completely erased. There was no pain, no sensation. It was simply destroyed.
   
 
It was eaten.
 
It was eaten.
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That was the legend of Noah’s Ark, the Great Flood. The Bible recorded that the Flood, swarming like a living darkness, soon swallowed the entire world and slaughtered all living creatures, erasing all cultures without leaving a trace.
 
That was the legend of Noah’s Ark, the Great Flood. The Bible recorded that the Flood, swarming like a living darkness, soon swallowed the entire world and slaughtered all living creatures, erasing all cultures without leaving a trace.
   
The world was completely enveloped in the emptiness, as if in a deep night.
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The world was completely enveloped in the emptiness, as if a deep night.
   
 
The disappeared right arm did not regrow. It seemed to be completely eaten. Guriko didn’t regret losing her arm – but she was in real trouble now. If she punched Sterilization Disinfection, her arm would be erased. That ability was the other woman’s invincible spear and shield at the same time.
 
The disappeared right arm did not regrow. It seemed to be completely eaten. Guriko didn’t regret losing her arm – but she was in real trouble now. If she punched Sterilization Disinfection, her arm would be erased. That ability was the other woman’s invincible spear and shield at the same time.

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