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Could it be? From the very beginning –
 
Could it be? From the very beginning –
   
The Meat Doll nodded with a lonely expression. “Do you understand it now? Guriko… I am sorry. Itsuwara Hino and Itsuwara Kio were dead. More accurately, we encountered Sterilization Disinfection when we were strolling on the street on the night after we first met you. She killed us, gave us Apples, and made us into Meat Dolls.”
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The Meat Doll nodded with a lonely expression. “Do you understand it now? Guriko… I am sorry. Itsuwara Hino and Itsuwara Kio were dead. More accurately, we encountered Sterilization Disinfection when we were strolling on the street in the night after we first met you. She killed us, gave us Apples, and made us into Meat Dolls.”
   
''It was all to take away my Apple. Once they have an opportunity, such as what happened today with Hino fainting, they plan to take away my Apple through coercion, right? Alternatively, they can take out my heart while I was asleep. It was an effective strategy –''
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''It was all to take away my Apple. Once they have an opportunity, such as what happened today with Hino fainting, they plan to take away my Apple through coercion, right? Alternatively, they can take out my heart while I was asleep. It is an effective strategy –''
   
 
''But I can’t believe this. I don’t want to believe this.''
 
''But I can’t believe this. I don’t want to believe this.''
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When she remembered this, Guriko gave a glare at Sterilization Disinfection, who was still smiling in glee. Guriko then said: “Dad.”
 
When she remembered this, Guriko gave a glare at Sterilization Disinfection, who was still smiling in glee. Guriko then said: “Dad.”
   
As if confirming something, Guriko said briskly: “I had a life where there was Dad and Mom, where I went to school, where I had Rinne, where I went to Sakaki’s lessons and talked about pointless things. I like that life even though I won’t be going back to it again. Dad –”
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As if confirming something, Guriko said briskly: “I had a life where there was Dad and Mom, where I went to school, where I had Rinne, where I went to Sakaki’s lessons and talked about pointless things. I like that life, although I won’t be going back to it again. Dad –”
   
 
She stretched out her arms and stood there as if protecting them.
 
She stretched out her arms and stood there as if protecting them.
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“Guriko.”
 
“Guriko.”
   
“Squelch.” The Meat Doll stabbed its hand into its own chest and dug out its own heart. Guriko widened her eyes in horror. ''What is he doing – if he does this, if he does this to himself…!''
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“Squelch.” The Meat Doll stabbed its hand into its own chest and dug out its own heart. Guriko widened her eyes in horror. ''What was he doing – if he does this, if he does this to himself…!''
   
 
“Use this Fragment. This power will more or less contribute to defeating her.”
 
“Use this Fragment. This power will more or less contribute to defeating her.”
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“No, Guriko.”
 
“No, Guriko.”
   
His voice was already coarse beyond recognition, but that voice was indeed Kio’s. It was the voice of that good father, that man whom Guriko considered silly, innocent, energetic, and foolish at the same time.
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His voice was already coarse beyond recognition, but that voice was indeed Kio’s. It was the voice of that good father, that man whom Guriko considers silly, innocent, energetic, and foolish at the same time.
   
 
Even a monster seemed to be able to cry. Guriko cried as she hugged Kio, who was losing his human form. She wanted to put his heart back in, but she didn’t know how. He had no mouth. She couldn’t feed it back to him. However, just placing it back into his chest didn’t work either.
 
Even a monster seemed to be able to cry. Guriko cried as she hugged Kio, who was losing his human form. She wanted to put his heart back in, but she didn’t know how. He had no mouth. She couldn’t feed it back to him. However, just placing it back into his chest didn’t work either.
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Guriko used her wings to blow away the mist with a storm, keeping her distance with her.
 
Guriko used her wings to blow away the mist with a storm, keeping her distance with her.
   
Due to her elongated torso, Guriko was about as tall as Sakaki and holding him in her arms was an easy feat. Lying in Guriko's arms, Sakaki quietly said: “Guriko, listen to me.”
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Due to her elongated torso, Guriko was about as tall as Sakaki and holding him in her arms was an easy feat. Lying in Guriko arms, Sakaki quietly said: “Guriko, listen to me.”
   
 
Guriko knew this was the severe tone he used at school to teach the important stuff. She paid attention to him instinctively. As if it was the easiest thing in the world, Sakaki said: “As you cannot damage her by scattering her around, you should condense her back into her original form. Guriko – you are really stupid. You have such a power, but you have no idea how to use it. You get a zero out of a hundred. Are you sure you are Sakaki Guryū’s student?”
 
Guriko knew this was the severe tone he used at school to teach the important stuff. She paid attention to him instinctively. As if it was the easiest thing in the world, Sakaki said: “As you cannot damage her by scattering her around, you should condense her back into her original form. Guriko – you are really stupid. You have such a power, but you have no idea how to use it. You get a zero out of a hundred. Are you sure you are Sakaki Guryū’s student?”
   
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“Ermmm…”
“Ahhh…”
 
   
 
Guriko drew in a sharp breath, but she also suddenly understood what she must do upon hearing those words.
 
Guriko drew in a sharp breath, but she also suddenly understood what she must do upon hearing those words.
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“– is you, Sterilization Disinfection!”
 
“– is you, Sterilization Disinfection!”
   
Guriko dexterously vibrated her wings. For a brief second, she channeled the power of her Apple by manipulating the surrounding air, sending a compact and violent blast of wind into the center of the tornado.
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Guriko dexterously vibrated her wings. For a brief second, she channelled the power of her Apple by manipulating the surrounding air, sending a compact and violent blast of wind into the centre of the tornado.
   
 
“Ah?!”
 
“Ah?!”
   
The other woman screamed wordlessly, perhaps realizing Guriko’s intent. But it was too late. She was already caught. Since she could be blown apart by the wind, it meant she can also be pressed down by the wind. Then Guriko will just increase air pressure in all directions and force the other woman to be immobile. She increased the air pressure, forcing the ball of air containing Sterilization Disinfection into the center, solidifying the spreading mist that was Sterilization Disinfection.
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The other woman screamed wordlessly, perhaps realizing Guriko’s intent. But it was too late. She was already caught. Since she could be blown apart by the wind, it meant she can be pressed down by wind. Then Guriko will just increase air pressure in all directions and force the other woman to be immobile. She increased the air pressure, forcing the ball of air containing Sterilization Disinfection into the centre, solidifying the spreading mist that was Sterilization Disinfection.
   
 
Yes. Since she could be spread, she can be compressed.
 
Yes. Since she could be spread, she can be compressed.
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“Is that going to be your last words? You won’t be able to talk again – you better think about what you want to say.”
 
“Is that going to be your last words? You won’t be able to talk again – you better think about what you want to say.”
   
“That’s true.” It was a slightly sarcastic and yet calm voice. “Am I not good enough to achieve perfection? That… I… I always stayed inside that white room, hoping to lose certain things, and single-mindedly seeking the perfect emptiness.”
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“That’s true.” It was a slightly sarcastic and yet calm voice. “Am I not good enough to achieve perfection? That … I… I always stayed inside that white room, hoping to lose certain things, and single-mindedly seeking the perfect emptiness.”
   
 
She smiled at the end.
 
She smiled at the end.

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