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Zeki-kun? Katsumi only shuddered without pause.
 
Zeki-kun? Katsumi only shuddered without pause.
   
- Behind her stood the girl who remained innocent looking and kept a happy face.
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--ehind her stood the girl who remained innocent looking and kept a happy face.
   
 
She was too far away and out of reach even if Katsumi stretched out her hands. She was the terrifying Long-Armed Demon that completely annihilated Katsumi’s ordinary life in the cover of this darkness.
 
She was too far away and out of reach even if Katsumi stretched out her hands. She was the terrifying Long-Armed Demon that completely annihilated Katsumi’s ordinary life in the cover of this darkness.
   
She pouted unhappily, “But still, what exactly is your name? You have an Apple right? I was looking forward to this since I thought you’d be pretty strong, but this is boring. Zeki-kun’s a liar, this isn’t fun at all!”
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She pouted unhappily, “But still, what exactly is your name? You have an Apple right? I looked forward to this since I thought you’d be pretty strong, but this is boring. Zeki-kun’s a liar, this isn’t fun at all!”
   
 
Like a child disappointed with a toy recently bought, she said: “Whatever, I don’t want something this boring. I’ll throw it away.”
 
Like a child disappointed with a toy recently bought, she said: “Whatever, I don’t want something this boring. I’ll throw it away.”
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Contrary to the New Year’s bell that was sounded to welcome the New Year and to pray for the elimination of malevolent spirits, this was the bell of the night of prologue that suggested the end of Katō Katsumi’s boring and beloved daily life and proclaimed the arrival and rampage of demons.
 
Contrary to the New Year’s bell that was sounded to welcome the New Year and to pray for the elimination of malevolent spirits, this was the bell of the night of prologue that suggested the end of Katō Katsumi’s boring and beloved daily life and proclaimed the arrival and rampage of demons.
   
Her blood splattered everywhere. Her bones were long since crushed to smithereens and mashed together with pieces of flesh —
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Her blood splattered everywhere. Her bones were long since crushed to smithereens and mashed together with pieces of flesh—
   
 
When Katsumi was smashed against the wall for the last time, Long-Armed Demon squirted out a laugh, “Hee hee”.
 
When Katsumi was smashed against the wall for the last time, Long-Armed Demon squirted out a laugh, “Hee hee”.
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Long-Armed Demon stopped singing and used her invisible fingers to prod Katsumi’s body.
 
Long-Armed Demon stopped singing and used her invisible fingers to prod Katsumi’s body.
   
Then she showed confusion — this was the first time Long-Armed Demon revealed a perplexed expression — as she incessantly felt Katsumi’s body, her face turning deadly white.
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Then she showed confusion—this was the first time Long-Armed Demon revealed a perplexed expression—as she incessantly felt Katsumi’s body, her face turning deadly white.
   
 
“Eh, eh eh? Eh eh eh?” That was the expression of the child after a grave error, “N-n-no Apple? Why? How, How? But… but she died? She died but didn’t have an Apple? Eh, eh eh?”
 
“Eh, eh eh? Eh eh eh?” That was the expression of the child after a grave error, “N-n-no Apple? Why? How, How? But… but she died? She died but didn’t have an Apple? Eh, eh eh?”
   
Then she noticed.
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Then, she noticed.
   
 
Beside the lump of flesh that used to be Katō Katsumi, there was a book.
 
Beside the lump of flesh that used to be Katō Katsumi, there was a book.
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“Oops, hehehe. Long-Armed Demon made a little mistake!” Then she realized it was a bad time to laugh. She thought seriously: “Wh-what do I do now. I-i-it’s so troublesome. Zeki-kun will scold me, I’ll be, I’ll be, I’ll be punished. Waah, this sucks, what do I do, what do I do, what do I do?”
 
“Oops, hehehe. Long-Armed Demon made a little mistake!” Then she realized it was a bad time to laugh. She thought seriously: “Wh-what do I do now. I-i-it’s so troublesome. Zeki-kun will scold me, I’ll be, I’ll be, I’ll be punished. Waah, this sucks, what do I do, what do I do, what do I do?”
   
Long-Armed Demon felt flustered as she worried. Suddenly, she thought of a wonderful plan and jumped up, “That’s right.” She laughed, “Tee hee”, and used her bright voice to mumble to herself in a harsh tone, “That’s right. It’s alright if I can find that girl from before. She’ll definitely have the right name. What was that name again? And then, and then, I just need to get that person’s Apple before Zeki-kun gets here and I’ll be fine. I'm so smart!”
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Long-Armed Demon felt flustered as she worried. Suddenly, she thought of a wonderful plan and jumped up, “That’s right.” She laughed, “Tee hee”, and used her bright voice to mumble to herself in a harsh tone, “That’s right, it’s alright if I can find that girl from before, she’ll definitely have the right name. What was that name again? And then, and then, I just need to get that person’s Apple before Zeki-kun gets here and I’ll be fine. I'm so smart!”
   
Then, with a presumptuous expression, “But I don’t really know what she looks like. Oh… ah, that’s right, killing all the girls of this age in this town should be fine! As long as I kill them it’ll be alright, cos the one who doesn’t die would have the Apple! Yeah!”
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Then, with a presumptuous expression, “But I don’t really know what she looks like. Oh… ah, that’s right, killing all the girls that in this town that’s of this one’s age should be fine! As long as I kill them it’ll be alright, cos the one who doesn’t die would have the Apple! Yeah!”
   
 
With this thought, she believed she might succeed.
 
With this thought, she believed she might succeed.
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And so, Long-Armed Demon did not even look at Katō Katsumi’s corpse as she faded into the darkness.
 
And so, Long-Armed Demon did not even look at Katō Katsumi’s corpse as she faded into the darkness.
   
How many girls of Katsumi’s age did she think there were in this town?! But her steps were both light and full of hope as she walked away.
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How many girls of Katsumi’s age did she think there were in this town?! But her steps was both light and full of hope as she walked away.
   
 
“In—the—clear—night—”
 
“In—the—clear—night—”
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Moreover, I want to reflect on this event involving Long-Armed Demon. For that, unloading the facts onto someone else is an effective tool.
 
Moreover, I want to reflect on this event involving Long-Armed Demon. For that, unloading the facts onto someone else is an effective tool.
   
Perhaps for you, who are about to be killed, this isn’t something interesting —but how do you feel about it? I wish to hear the opinions of you normal people who live inside the normality of life, unlike existences such as me who live on the other side.
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Perhaps, for you who are about to be killed, this isn’t something interesting—but how do you feel about it? I wish to hear the opinions of you normal people who live inside the normality of life, unlike existences such as me who live on the other side.
   
 
Ah, you think this was nonsense? I guess I can’t blame you for that. Maybe these things are indeed unbelievable for those of you living inside normality.
 
Ah, you think this was nonsense? I guess I can’t blame you for that. Maybe these things are indeed unbelievable for those of you living inside normality.
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What? My name? Hahaha, how can I tell it to people about to die? I can’t handle it if you curse me! You’re so foolish~
 
What? My name? Hahaha, how can I tell it to people about to die? I can’t handle it if you curse me! You’re so foolish~
   
But, if it’s my name over on '''this side''', then there’s no harm in telling you. It’s your choice whether or not to believe that it’s my real name. Whether or not you may curse me is also your choice.
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But, if it’s my name over on this side, then there’s no harm in telling you. It’s your choice whether or not to believe that it’s my true name. Whether or not you may curse me is also your choice.
   
 
Because this is a name that would shine even brighter when cursed.
 
Because this is a name that would shine even brighter when cursed.
   
My name is Sterilization Disinfection. I'm the digestive organ ——
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My name is Sterilization Disinfection. I'm just a digestive organ——
   
   

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