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"Who are you?" Guriko shouted, aiming spoons in every direction for the purpose of scaring the speaker. But, it seemed - the only ones in the factory were herself and the monster in front of her. Could it have been something like a pre-prepared recording? Or was this monster in front of her speaking with some mysterious method?
 
"Who are you?" Guriko shouted, aiming spoons in every direction for the purpose of scaring the speaker. But, it seemed - the only ones in the factory were herself and the monster in front of her. Could it have been something like a pre-prepared recording? Or was this monster in front of her speaking with some mysterious method?
   
"Taking money, taking lives, taking hearts, taking trust. Stealing, nothing but stealing. What are crimes like that called? What is the ultimate crime that covers every type of crime? Hmm, you should know -- '<span id="Berobōchō">[[Mushi:Vol3_TLnotes#Berobōchō|Berobōchō]]'?"
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"Taking money, taking lives, taking hearts, taking trust. Stealing, nothing but stealing. What are crimes like that called? What is the ultimate crime that covers every type of crime? Hmm, you should know -- '[[Mushi:Vol3_TLnotes#Berobouchou|Berobouchou]]'?"
   
The monster that was called Berobōchō spat out its red tongue, and while laughing it replied to the voice: "Robbery!"
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The monster that was called Berobouchou spat out its red tongue, and while laughing it replied to the voice: "Robbery!"
   
Demonstrating a hominid-like behavior, Berobōchō noisily rubbed its hands together and sliced cardboard boxes apart for no particular reason.
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Demonstrating a hominid-like behavior, Berobouchou noisily rubbed its hands together and sliced cardboard boxes apart for no particular reason.
   
 
"That's right. It's robbery. You over there. This monster's original name was Shigure Benimaru, and he committed the ultimate crime, robbery, for a living. He took lives, he took money, he took jewels, and he took dignity. The evil <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Ultimate Shield|The Weakest}}</span> liked that about him, and changed him into this."
 
"That's right. It's robbery. You over there. This monster's original name was Shigure Benimaru, and he committed the ultimate crime, robbery, for a living. He took lives, he took money, he took jewels, and he took dignity. The evil <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Ultimate Shield|The Weakest}}</span> liked that about him, and changed him into this."
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“Oh –” The intriguing echo reverberated throughout the abandoned factory.
 
“Oh –” The intriguing echo reverberated throughout the abandoned factory.
   
“That’s fine. It’s fine as long as I receive the Fragments. I await your struggles… Berobōchō, let’s get back.”
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“That’s fine. It’s fine as long as I receive the Fragments. I await your struggles… Berobouchou, let’s get back.”
   
 
“Gyah!”
 
“Gyah!”
   
With a roar, Berobōchō charged at Guriko like a wild animal. Though Guriko responded quickly, some of her hair was sliced off.
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With a roar, Berobouchou charged at Guriko like a wild animal. Though Guriko responded quickly, some of her hair was sliced off.
   
 
“Ugh, what are you doing!”
 
“Ugh, what are you doing!”
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Guriko pulled out her spoons and prepared to fight, yet <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span>’s admonishment stayed her actions.
 
Guriko pulled out her spoons and prepared to fight, yet <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span>’s admonishment stayed her actions.
   
“Hey! Berobōchō, do not move without permission!”
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“Hey! Berobouchou, do not move without permission!”
   
 
“Clank, tssss, Katsssss.”
 
“Clank, tssss, Katsssss.”
   
Berobōchō made a metallic rubbing noise as it wriggled its tongue, laughing as it jumped around in provocation. And then, it turned and turned in an all-destroying tornado, bringing ruin to the factory’s equipment.
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Berobouchou made a metallic rubbing noise as it wriggled its tongue, laughing as it jumped around in provocation. And then, it turned and turned in an all-destroying tornado, bringing ruin to the factory’s equipment.
   
 
“Aagh, this person’s unstable right now. Losing Long-Armed Demon was indeed a big loss. She was easy to order around… That vile <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Ultimate Shield|The Weakest}}</span>, dumping on me such a troublesome subordinate!”
 
“Aagh, this person’s unstable right now. Losing Long-Armed Demon was indeed a big loss. She was easy to order around… That vile <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Ultimate Shield|The Weakest}}</span>, dumping on me such a troublesome subordinate!”
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“!”
 
“!”
   
A surge of power burst out. Berobōchō shrieked “Wuah?” like a whipped dog and ran out of the factory as if fearing something. Apparently <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span> did something – but what exactly was done was unclear. Guriko didn’t see anything, but her hair was blown by wind.
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A surge of power burst out. Berobouchou shrieked “Wuah?” like a whipped dog and ran out of the factory as if fearing something. Apparently <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span> did something – but what exactly was done was unclear. Guriko didn’t see anything, but her hair was blown by wind.
   
 
<span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span> seemed to have calmed down for the time being, and continued speaking with the same tone as before. “Then – Gankyū Eguriko, I await your good news. I am the all-knowing sensory organ – if you need anything you may call for me directly.”
 
<span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span> seemed to have calmed down for the time being, and continued speaking with the same tone as before. “Then – Gankyū Eguriko, I await your good news. I am the all-knowing sensory organ – if you need anything you may call for me directly.”

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