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Every "myth" can be classified as one of the above. These seven categories represent God's different personas as He rules this world, sometimes kind, sometimes harsh.
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Every "myth" can be classified under one of these seven categories, each representing one of God's different personas as He rules this world, some kind, some harsh.
   
 
What I fear though is that these seven existences act as "God's personas", not "God" Himself. Earth has long ago lost the conscious being known as "God". We merely see a ghost of "God" through those seven personas.
 
What I fear though is that these seven existences act as "God's personas", not "God" Himself. Earth has long ago lost the conscious being known as "God". We merely see a ghost of "God" through those seven personas.
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Tatsue, who was starting to get full of herself, came back to her senses thanks to the unexpected event. She stared at the object that had fallen - a girl with her limbs outstretched and seeing stars.
 
Tatsue, who was starting to get full of herself, came back to her senses thanks to the unexpected event. She stared at the object that had fallen - a girl with her limbs outstretched and seeing stars.
   
A girl, it was a girl. After Tatsue had assaulted the tree using wind without warning, a girl fell down as if she was a little insect.
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A girl? Yes, it was a girl. After Tatsue had assaulted the tree using wind without warning, a girl had come tumbling down as if she was a little insect dislodged by the windstorm.
   
 
"Waaah. It hurts, it really hurts! Why?"
 
"Waaah. It hurts, it really hurts! Why?"
   
The girl suddenly got up. She wore a conspicuous hat with round ears attached and a curled up tail. With tears in her eyes, she started complaining. "Why? Why, why? What just happened? My afternoon nap was so peaceful, so why'd you bother me? Waaaahh, hyaa!"
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Suddenly, the girl got up. She wore a conspicuous hat with round ears attached and sported a curled up tail. With tears in her eyes, she started complaining. "Why? Why, why? What just happened? My afternoon nap was so peaceful, so why'd you bother me? Waaaahh, hyaa!"
   
Tatsue noticed that her right foot was bent in an unnatural direction. However, with a "crack" she twisted it back in place and easily stood up.
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Tatsue noticed that her right foot was bent in an unnatural direction. However, with a ''crack'' she twisted it back in place and easily stood up.
   
 
"Wah... Mmm? Who are you guys?"
 
"Wah... Mmm? Who are you guys?"
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There was a monster, and a boy.
 
There was a monster, and a boy.
   
The monster glowed with a silver light; it was an ominous being. Generally, it took a form similar to humans, but its body was not made of flesh; rather, it was formed of sharp blades. Only its fiery red tongue looked organic as it stuck out, covered with saliva.
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The monster glowed with a silver light; it was an ominous being. Its form was similar to that of a human, but its body was not made of flesh; rather, it was formed of sharp blades. Only its fiery red tongue looked organic as it stuck out, covered with saliva.
   
Recently, more and more beings called monsters had come to the town, and "Mitaka" knew this. Compared to humans or ordinary snakes, "Mitaka" was an existence much more similar to monsters. He knew that monsters, beings that wait eagerly in the other world invisible to humans and occasionally appear to cause trouble or to endanger humans, were indeed multiplying. Though he wasn't particularly interested, the amount of victims should have increased.
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Recently, more and more beings called monsters had come to the town, and "Mitaka" knew this. Compared to humans or ordinary snakes, "Mitaka" was an existence more like a monster himself. So he knew that monsters, beings that waited eagerly in the other world invisible to humans and occasionally appeared to cause trouble or to endanger humans, were indeed multiplying. Though he wasn't particularly interested, the number of victims was increasing.
   
 
The boy was one of those poor victims.
 
The boy was one of those poor victims.
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Maybe the silver monster was satisfied with its kill, as it made an interesting sound and left.
 
Maybe the silver monster was satisfied with its kill, as it made an interesting sound and left.
   
But it didn't eat him, merely leaving him dead.
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But it didn't eat him, merely leaving him for dead.
   
This was rare for monsters, and it was more akin to human crime, but at the time "Mitaka" didn't find it strange.
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This was rare for monsters, being more akin to human crime, but at the time "Mitaka" didn't find it strange.
   
 
"Mitaka" climbed onto a lamppost, and stared steadily at the teenager.
 
"Mitaka" climbed onto a lamppost, and stared steadily at the teenager.
   
"I don't want to die..." He moaned, and sobbed with grief. "Mitaka" perfectly understood that sentiment, but his wounds reached his internal organs, and he would die for sure.
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"I don't want to die..." the boy had moaned, sobbing with grief. "Mitaka" perfectly understood that sentiment, but knew that the boy's wounds reached his internal organs, and he would die for sure.
   
"I don't wanna die, I don't wanna die..." He struggled in pain.
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"I don't wanna die, I don't wanna die..." Despite what must have been great pain, the boy continued to struggle.
   
 
"Why?"
 
"Why?"
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Was it just as the girl said - did he only want to fulfill his ancestors' dying wish, and gain the praises of those already in Heaven?
 
Was it just as the girl said - did he only want to fulfill his ancestors' dying wish, and gain the praises of those already in Heaven?
   
It seemed the slowly-dying boy did not know the reason either. He kept on enduring the pain, and then died.
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It seemed the slowly-dying boy did not know the reason either. He kept on enduring the pain, until he could no longer, and died.
   
 
Till the end, it seemed he was unable to understand why he wanted to live.
 
Till the end, it seemed he was unable to understand why he wanted to live.
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Not understanding his reason for living, and not knowing why he didn't want to die; just like that, he died in pain.
 
Not understanding his reason for living, and not knowing why he didn't want to die; just like that, he died in pain.
   
In that boy, "Mitaka" - saw his future self.
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In that boy, "Mitaka" saw his future self.
   
 
Anger and confusion rose within him.
 
Anger and confusion rose within him.
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By consuming every bit of flesh, "Mitaka" transformed into Mitaka.
 
By consuming every bit of flesh, "Mitaka" transformed into Mitaka.
   
Taking the form of eaten humans was an ability carried throughout "Mitaka"'s bloodline. Using that ability to repeatedly deceive humanity, each successive generation sought "Apple"'s to the extent of their ability --
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Taking the form of eaten humans was an ability carried throughout "Mitaka"'s bloodline. Using that ability to repeatedly deceive humans, each successive generation sought "Apple"'s to the fullest xtent of their ability --
   
 
The clan of the Original Sin. The last snake was "Mitaka".
 
The clan of the Original Sin. The last snake was "Mitaka".
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Was it for the final wishes of his ancestors who desired immortality? Was it to prevail over the words of that girl who denied him completely? Was it for the boy who pitifully died without understanding why he lived? Even "Mitaka" himself wasn't sure.
 
Was it for the final wishes of his ancestors who desired immortality? Was it to prevail over the words of that girl who denied him completely? Was it for the boy who pitifully died without understanding why he lived? Even "Mitaka" himself wasn't sure.
   
"I will find the meaning of living for me as well as for you."
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"I will find the meaning of living - both for me as well as for you."
   
 
"Mitaka" murmured to himself, and his transformation was complete. He also gained Takamikado Mitaka's thoughts and memories.
 
"Mitaka" murmured to himself, and his transformation was complete. He also gained Takamikado Mitaka's thoughts and memories.
   
His goal to find immortality did not change. Though he would encounter countless amounts of cruelty, this was "Mitaka"'s instinct, his dearest wish. There was no way it could change.
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His goal to find immortality did not change. Though he would encounter endless cruelty, this was "Mitaka"'s instinct, his dearest wish. There was no way it could change.
   
 
But why did he want eternity? Why did he wish to push death aside?
 
But why did he want eternity? Why did he wish to push death aside?
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The girl with the eared hat, a curled tail, and brown hair tied into pigtails remained unmoving in that pose. She wore Kannonsakazaki High School's slightly mundane uniform, and she gave off an air that seemed to clash with her childish voice and movements.
 
The girl with the eared hat, a curled tail, and brown hair tied into pigtails remained unmoving in that pose. She wore Kannonsakazaki High School's slightly mundane uniform, and she gave off an air that seemed to clash with her childish voice and movements.
   
She clapped together her hands that wore giant gloves, and looked over, "Mm, the pain flew away ...Wait? Huh?"
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She clapped together hands encased in giant gloves, and looked over, "Mm, the pain flew away ...Wait? Huh?"
   
 
Then she stared at "Mitaka" and Tatsue, and blushed for no apparent reason.
 
Then she stared at "Mitaka" and Tatsue, and blushed for no apparent reason.
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Like a panicking caged bird, the girl ran into the wall and then the tree, trying to escape while saying strange things.
 
Like a panicking caged bird, the girl ran into the wall and then the tree, trying to escape while saying strange things.
   
But after walking a bit she suddenly stopped and ran over the backpack that was probably hers, which had fallen down with to her.
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But after walking a bit she suddenly stopped and ran over the backpack that was probably hers, which had fallen down with her.
   
 
The girl picked it up and seemed to be at a loss. "Aah, I forgot. Sis, sis are you okay? Are you hurt?
 
The girl picked it up and seemed to be at a loss. "Aah, I forgot. Sis, sis are you okay? Are you hurt?
   
She said so as she nonchalantly took out a head.
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She said so as she nonchalantly took out a head--
   
From the bag.
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--From the bag.
   
She took out a head.
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''She took out a head.''
   
 
"Wh-"
 
"Wh-"
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"Mitaka" gasped, and Tatsue turned pale.
 
"Mitaka" gasped, and Tatsue turned pale.
   
It was the head of a young woman beautiful white hair tied into braids. Wearing her gloves, the girl delicately stroked the head, and her eyebrows dropped as tears started to appear in her eyes. "Are you alright, sis? Do you need me to make the pain fly away?"
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It was the head of a young woman, with beautiful white hair tied into braids. Wearing her gloves, the girl delicately stroked the head, and her eyebrows dropped as tears started to appear in her eyes. "Are you alright, sis? Do you need me to make the pain fly away?"
   
 
"This --" Suddenly, and unbelievably, the head opened its eyes and looked over. They were cold eyes showing neither emotion nor mercy.
 
"This --" Suddenly, and unbelievably, the head opened its eyes and looked over. They were cold eyes showing neither emotion nor mercy.
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The head muttered, "Whatever, my situation isn't important."
 
The head muttered, "Whatever, my situation isn't important."
   
She monotonically said those words ominously.
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She spoke in a monotone, but her words were ominous.
   
"Over there, there's a guy who's similar to a monster, and - though it's incomplete, there's someone with <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span>'s powers."
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"Over there, there's a guy who's similar to a monster, and - though it's incomplete - there's someone with <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span>'s powers."
   
 
The female head looked at "Mitaka" and Tatsue, and hatred twisted her expression. "A dirty monster and the traitor <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span>, today's meeting is the first in a hundred years -- no, it's been longer then that, right?"
 
The female head looked at "Mitaka" and Tatsue, and hatred twisted her expression. "A dirty monster and the traitor <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span>, today's meeting is the first in a hundred years -- no, it's been longer then that, right?"
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It hurt, and -
 
It hurt, and -
   
"Please don't just touch me as you with." Tatsue turned faintly red, and scolded Mitaka who was currently right in front of her face.
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"Please don't just touch me as you wish." Tatsue turned faintly red, and scolded Mitaka who was currently right in front of her face.
   
 
Her mind fell into chaos.
 
Her mind fell into chaos.
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-- "Splat."
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''-- Splat.''
   
   
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"Ahaha, I lost."
 
"Ahaha, I lost."
   
Saibara Mitsuki, who had become a devastated mess thanks to that fall, laughed open-heartedly.
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Saibara Mitsuki, who had become a devastated mess thanks to that fall, laughed whole-heartedly.
   
 
"Hee." She got up as if nothing happened. Her flesh was absolutely squashed, she bled profusely, a number of her bones stuck out of her skin and her face was also deformed.
 
"Hee." She got up as if nothing happened. Her flesh was absolutely squashed, she bled profusely, a number of her bones stuck out of her skin and her face was also deformed.
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"I'm not a cat."
 
"I'm not a cat."
   
Like a mouse who had only ever been hunted and now that she was the hunter, Mitsuki tilted her head with perplexion, and walked over. "Sis, this time I'll beat them up directly."
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Like a mouse who had only ever been hunted and now that she was the hunter, Mitsuki tilted her head perplexedly, and walked over. "Sis, this time I'll beat them up directly."
   
 
"Tatsue, get up! She's coming!"
 
"Tatsue, get up! She's coming!"
   
Though Mitaka was shouting at her, her limp body couldn't easily be put back into action. Tatsue tried to push herself from the ground using her arms, but she slipped on the moss and fell.
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Though Mitaka was shouting at her, her limp body couldn't easily be put back into action. Tatsue tried to push herself up from the ground using her arms, but she slipped on the moss and fell.
   
 
"Uuh --"
 
"Uuh --"
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''Why is he protecting me now? He's clearly frightened, but he's willing to stand up and save me.''
 
''Why is he protecting me now? He's clearly frightened, but he's willing to stand up and save me.''
   
"Bang -" That would normally be a sound made by some innocent child. Mitsuki's pose with clenched fists lacked any sense of coherence. She just swung downwards with her hands spread wide open. If a professional martial artist -- like, say, a karate master -- saq this, he wouldn't be able to stand looking at the mistake-riddled movements.
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"Bang -" That would normally be a sound made by some innocent child. Mitsuki's pose with clenched fists lacked any sense of coherence. She just swung downwards with her arms spread wide open. If a professional martial artist -- like, say, a karate master -- saw this, he wouldn't be able to stand looking at the mistake-riddled movements.
   
 
However, her fist's destructive power belied its clumsy appearance.
 
However, her fist's destructive power belied its clumsy appearance.
   
Mitsuki swung her gloved hand and struck Mitaka directly. He flew like a playground ball and hit the school wall, and then fell down.
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Mitsuki swung her gloved hand and struck Mitaka directly. He flew like a playground ball, hit the school wall, and then fell down.
   
"Mitaka!" Tatsue screamed, and, unsteady both in her movements, crawled up. She thought that just standing up was so difficult... while adjusting her pose.
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"Mitaka!" Tatsue screamed, and, unsteady in her movements, crawled up. She thought that just standing up was so difficult... while adjusting her pose.
   
Mitsuki looked into backpack she carried, still without showing the slightest malice.
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Mitsuki looked into the backpack she carried, still without showing the slightest malice.
   
 
"How was that, sis? Did I -- punch well?"
 
"How was that, sis? Did I -- punch well?"
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Mitsuki stared at Mitaka with her bloody face, and Tatsue also turned to look. Mitaka trembled with his knees on the ground, trying to stand up.
 
Mitsuki stared at Mitaka with her bloody face, and Tatsue also turned to look. Mitaka trembled with his knees on the ground, trying to stand up.
   
His uniform was blown apart at his stomach where Mitsuki punched him, revealing his black skin. To hide the skin that resembled reptilian scales, human skin suddenly covered the black skin.
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His uniform had blown apart at his stomach where Mitsuki had punched him, revealing black skin that resembled a reptile's scales. But even as she watched, human skin suddenly flashed into existence, covering the black skin.
   
 
"What?" Tatsue looked on with a deathly pale face.
 
"What?" Tatsue looked on with a deathly pale face.
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She couldn't understand. What was going on?
 
She couldn't understand. What was going on?
   
Though she may have simply seen wrong, it seemed too implausible that she only missaw this one part of her ridiculous situation. Was there skin like black scales under Mitaka's human skin?
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Though she may have simply seen wrong, it seemed too implausible that she had only mis-seen this one part of her ridiculous situation. Was there truly skin like black scales under Mitaka's human skin?
   
 
"The ones who scattered the Seven Great Fragments, who cast all humanity into damnation, the ultimate sinners on the earth - Snake."
 
"The ones who scattered the Seven Great Fragments, who cast all humanity into damnation, the ultimate sinners on the earth - Snake."
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She grabbed the wind, and rolled it together like she was kneading dough. She took the destructive power of the invisible wind - and rolled it into a ball.
 
She grabbed the wind, and rolled it together like she was kneading dough. She took the destructive power of the invisible wind - and rolled it into a ball.
   
"Begin!" Then, unbelievably, a hole opened on Mitsuki's belly.
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"Begin!" Unbelievably, a hole opened on Mitsuki's belly.
   
Fierce, sharp teeth bit through her uniform, and showed her true form. Dripping with saliva, the teeth clattered. Mitsuki put the dragon's breath that she had rolled into a ball between the teeth.
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Fierce, sharp teeth bit through her uniform, revealing her true form. Dripping with saliva, the teeth clattered. Mitsuki put the dragon's breath that she had rolled into a ball between the teeth.
   
 
"Chomp chomp chomp."
 
"Chomp chomp chomp."
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"Wait - Ki-chan?" From her backpack came the head's voice.
 
"Wait - Ki-chan?" From her backpack came the head's voice.
   
"What are saying all on your own? If you can't beat them with Unpleasant Counter-Current, you can just eliminate them with your bare hands. With your physical strength it would be easy to take them out in a physical fight. "
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"What are saying all on your own? If you can't beat them with Unpleasant Counter-Current, you can just eliminate them with your bare hands. With your physical strength it would be easy to take them out in a fight. "
   
 
"I don't want to do that." Mitsuki murmured, in absolute rejection. "These two don't seem to be Gankyū or <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Ultimate Shield|The Weakest}}</span>; and besides, I just want to be Unpleasant Counter-Current, not Sterilization Disinfection like sis. I can't and don't want to kill people who aren't evil."
 
"I don't want to do that." Mitsuki murmured, in absolute rejection. "These two don't seem to be Gankyū or <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Ultimate Shield|The Weakest}}</span>; and besides, I just want to be Unpleasant Counter-Current, not Sterilization Disinfection like sis. I can't and don't want to kill people who aren't evil."
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"Heehee.
 
"Heehee.
   
"Three years ago, didn't a factory close down due to recession or something? I don't know which factory it was, but it's said that a spirit of death started living there at one point."
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"Three years ago, didn't a factory close down due to the recession or something? I don't know which factory it was, but it's said that a spirit of death started living there at one point."
   
 
"Oh, that's cool."
 
"Oh, that's cool."
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Still in her kicking position, a girl coldly looked over. "What -- it was a monster."
 
Still in her kicking position, a girl coldly looked over. "What -- it was a monster."
   
She had emotionless eyes like the barrel of a gun, and bizarre, wolf-like hair. She wore jeans and a jacket that for some reason had the words "Rock'n Roll" printed on it.
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She had emotionless eyes like the barrels of a gun, and bizarre, wolf-like hair. She wore jeans and a jacket that for some reason had the words "Rock'n Roll" printed on it.
   
 
"Then, let's go." The enemy who had struck the monster - Gankyū Eguriko, thus declared.
 
"Then, let's go." The enemy who had struck the monster - Gankyū Eguriko, thus declared.
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Half a year, it had been half a year.
 
Half a year, it had been half a year.
   
Rinne had been turned into a Meat Doll by Sterilization Disinfection, and Guriko had spent that much time wandering the world, searching in vain for a way to turn her back. Despair started to fill her thoughts, almost driving her mad at times.
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Rinne had been turned into a Meat Doll by Sterilization Disinfection, and Guriko had spent the time since wandering the world, searching in vain for a way to turn her back. Despair started to fill her thoughts, almost driving her mad at times.
   
 
But her imperiled sanity was supported by -
 
But her imperiled sanity was supported by -
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"So, what I was saying was - I will tell you what you wish to know. So you must pay an appropriate price... this will take five of the small Fragments you call 'Apples'. Or, one of the Great Fragments that act as God's personas."
 
"So, what I was saying was - I will tell you what you wish to know. So you must pay an appropriate price... this will take five of the small Fragments you call 'Apples'. Or, one of the Great Fragments that act as God's personas."
   
The savior demanding for equivalent exchange calmly said, "Sterilization Disinfection's goal seems to be collecting all of the pieces, and restore 'God's existence. This goal is quite different from mine or <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Ultimate Shield|The Weakest}}</span>'s. After all, no matter how many fragments you collect it will not be enough. Why? I am the omniscient <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span>. So as long as you pay with Fragments, I can answer virtually any question you have."
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The savior demanding for equivalent exchange calmly said, "Sterilization Disinfection's goal seems to be collecting all of the pieces, and restore 'God's existence. This goal is quite different from mine or <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Ultimate Shield|The Weakest}}</span>'s. After all, no matter how many fragments you collect it will not be enough. Why? I am the omniscient <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span>. So as long as you pay with Fragments, I can answer virtually any question you have."
   
 
Faced with this offer, Guriko thought for a while. <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span> might have been the same kind of being as Sterilization Disinfection, and getting favors from such a being made her feel uncomfortable; she even felt a sense of danger. But Guriko had made an oath, that even if she had to sell her soul to the Devil - she would let Rinne recover.
 
Faced with this offer, Guriko thought for a while. <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span> might have been the same kind of being as Sterilization Disinfection, and getting favors from such a being made her feel uncomfortable; she even felt a sense of danger. But Guriko had made an oath, that even if she had to sell her soul to the Devil - she would let Rinne recover.
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"Fine." Determination shone in Guriko's eyes as she lifted her head and faced the emptiness. "I don't know what your goal is, but as long as you get the information I want I'm fine with it. Five Apples, or a Great Fragment, correct? I currently do not have that, so I will go collect them."
 
"Fine." Determination shone in Guriko's eyes as she lifted her head and faced the emptiness. "I don't know what your goal is, but as long as you get the information I want I'm fine with it. Five Apples, or a Great Fragment, correct? I currently do not have that, so I will go collect them."
   
"Mmm. I have heard that you fought with Sterilization Disinfection. Her heart that you took, that was a Great Fragment!"
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"Mmm. I have heard that you fought with Sterilization Disinfection. Her heart that you took, that is a Great Fragment!"
   
 
Hearing <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span>'s surprised voice, Guriko coldly sneered.
 
Hearing <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span>'s surprised voice, Guriko coldly sneered.

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