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Memories lodge in the flesh, and abilities also accompany the flesh. It may be easier to understand if we use the analogy of a car – even a very powerful car is unable to move without fuel. And the fuel of humans, the power needed in order to move, is the soul.
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Memories lodge in the flesh, and abilities also accompany the flesh. It may be easier to understand we use the analogy of a car – even a very powerful car is unable to move without fuel. And the fuel of humans, the power needed in order to move, is the soul.
   
Takamikado Mitaka's physical body contained memories and knew how to move its arms and feet. He did have childhood memories of fighting, even though those were preciously few. Skills of hitting, attacking, or defending against others had been preserved in the form of memories.
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Takamikado Mitaka's physical body contained memories and knew how to move its arms and feet. He did have childhood memories of fighting even though those were preciously few. Skills of hitting, attacking, or defending against others, had been preserved in the form of memories.
   
Though less proficient than the ordinary person, his physical body did have the ability to move. If "Mitaka" had at least one Apple, those giant crystallization of energy, he could use a strength many time greater than his mundane abilities and battle against this girl in front of him.
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Though less proficient than the ordinary person, his physical body did have the ability to move. If 'Mitaka' had at least one Apple, those giant crystallization of energy, he would be use a strength many time or even tens of times greater than his mundane abilities and battle against this girl in front of him.
   
However, the soul in this body was pitifully sparse.
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Nevertheless, the soul in this body was pitifully sparse.
   
   

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