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"Mitaka" had lost to her despite having two Apples half a year ago. Now, using his and Mitaka's weak body, only possessing the standard soul of a living being, how was he going to be victorious over her?
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'Mitaka' had lost to her despite having two Apples half a year ago. Now, using his and Mitaka's weak body, only possessing the standard soul of a living thing, how was he going to be victorious over her?
   
 
“Gankyū – Eguriko –”
 
“Gankyū – Eguriko –”
   
"Mitaka's" whole body trembled and the fear from half a year ago was awakened again. His pupils dilated, and his body stiffened.
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'Mitaka's' whole body trembled and the fear from half a year ago was awakened again. His pupils dilated, and his body stiffened.
   
 
Someone to his side blocked the silver spoon thrust toward him.
 
Someone to his side blocked the silver spoon thrust toward him.
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"Hey –”
 
"Hey –”
   
With a sound of shock and terror that was completely contrary to her usual happy tone, Mitsuki asked: "Sis, was what Mi-chan said actually real?"
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With a sound of shock and terror that was completely contrary to her usual happy tone, Mitsuki asked: "Sis, was what Mi-chan said was actually real?"
   
 
"Hehe," Mitsuki laughed evilly.
 
"Hehe," Mitsuki laughed evilly.
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"Is she really, truly, Gankyū Eguriko?"
 
"Is she really, truly, Gankyū Eguriko?"
   
The tram kept moving. A few passengers looked this way with confusion. However, as no disturbances so far required timely intervention, they remained as onlookers. After all, no one would think the spoons in the girl's hand were actually weapons capable of murder.
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The tram kept moving. A few passengers looked this way with confusion. However, there were no disturbances so far that required timely intervention, they remained as onlookers. After all, no one would think the spoons in the girl's hands were actually weapons capable of murder.
   
 
Clang, clang, clang.
 
Clang, clang, clang.
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"Aaaah – "
 
"Aaaah – "
   
Perhaps noticing the ruckus, Tatsue half-opened her eyes. However, her mind was perhaps still muddled, and she grasped the rim of "Mitaka's" uniform tightly.
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Perhaps noticing the ruckus, Tatsue half-opened her eyes. However, her mind was perhaps still muddled, and she tightly grasped the rim of 'Mitaka's' uniform.
   
 
Mitsuki started to shiver slightly as she looked at the two of them: "Ahh, I can't hold it back, I can't. Aaaah, haaaahhhh, Gankyū – Eguriko? You made Sis's body like this and made her suffer. Unforgivable. Sis is somebody that I absolutely need, but you wanted to kill her. Unforgivable. Unforgivable."
 
Mitsuki started to shiver slightly as she looked at the two of them: "Ahh, I can't hold it back, I can't. Aaaah, haaaahhhh, Gankyū – Eguriko? You made Sis's body like this and made her suffer. Unforgivable. Sis is somebody that I absolutely need, but you wanted to kill her. Unforgivable. Unforgivable."
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Just briefly, Mitsuki shook her head and resumed her innocent visage. However, she soon put on a ferocious expression again and glared at Guriko, whose countenance was full of incomprehension.
 
Just briefly, Mitsuki shook her head and resumed her innocent visage. However, she soon put on a ferocious expression again and glared at Guriko, whose countenance was full of incomprehension.
   
"It's all your –" She stood up and moved Guriko in a speed faster than the eye could see.
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"It's all your –" She stood up and moved Guriko in a speed faster than the eye can see.
   
 
"It's all your faaaauuuulllllt!"
 
"It's all your faaaauuuulllllt!"

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