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"Um – errr."
 
"Um – errr."
   
'Mitaka' awkwardly thought that he would never be able to stop Mitsuki and her monstrous strength as he yelled: "Mitsuki, stop! She's very dangerous – let's escape!"
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'Mitaka' awkwardly thought that he would never be able to stop Mitsuki and her monstrous strength as he yelled: "Mitsuki, stop! She's very dangerous –let's escape!"
   
 
"Ki-chan, what are you doing?"
 
"Ki-chan, what are you doing?"
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Exhibiting a rare display of genuine emotion, Mina screamed: “No! If Unpleasant Counter-Current, which represents innocence and justice, starts to hate other people – Ki-chan! Calm down! You are not one to deliberately emphasis hate! That’s the personality of the fallen angel, Unpleasant Counter-Current! According to the Bible, the fate of a fallen angel is – “
 
Exhibiting a rare display of genuine emotion, Mina screamed: “No! If Unpleasant Counter-Current, which represents innocence and justice, starts to hate other people – Ki-chan! Calm down! You are not one to deliberately emphasis hate! That’s the personality of the fallen angel, Unpleasant Counter-Current! According to the Bible, the fate of a fallen angel is – “
   
She looked up at ‘Mitaka’ from within the bag and an expression of anguish surfaced on her face: “They will rebel, rebel, and be destroyed! In order to prove God’s justice and omnipotence, fallen angels are created to be evil, villains who will never find happiness!”
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She looked up at ‘Mitaka’ from within the bag and an expression of anguish was on her face: “They will rebel, rebel, and be destroyed! In order to prove God’s justice and omnipotence, fallen angels are created to be evil, villains who will never find happiness!”
   
 
The car door easily broke and snapped.
 
The car door easily broke and snapped.
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“Gulp –”
 
“Gulp –”
   
She collapsed on the spot. Mina screamed upon seeing this. Flustered, ‘Mitaka’ ran to Mitsuki’s side and embraced her, looking at her face, which was devoid of expression. The girl, still wearing the hat with round ears and looking as blank as if her soul left her body, looked up at ‘Mitaka’ with blank trust.
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She collapsed on the spot. Mina screamed upon seeing this. Flustered, ‘Mitaka’ ran to Mitsuki’s side and embraced her, looking at her face, which was devoid of expression. The girl, still wearing the hat with round ears and looking as if her soul had left her body, looked up at ‘Mitaka’ and showed an expression of absolute trust.
   
 
“Mi-chan…”
 
“Mi-chan…”

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