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Guriko muttered to herself. She was still flying in air as she kept thinking of a way to escape her current dilemma. If she were to hit the ground below the elevated tracks, she would likely suffer a severe injury and remain immobile for a while.
 
Guriko muttered to herself. She was still flying in air as she kept thinking of a way to escape her current dilemma. If she were to hit the ground below the elevated tracks, she would likely suffer a severe injury and remain immobile for a while.
   
“If so –” She stared at the train gradually moving away and calculated her position, which was getting further and further from the train. Then, she locked her goal onto a residential building close to the train tracks, a building in her direction of travel.
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“If so –” She stared at the train gradually moving away and comprehended the position of her body, which was getting further and further from the train. Then, she locked her goal onto a residential building close to the train tracks, a building in her direction of travel.
   
 
“Mmmmm.”
 
“Mmmmm.”
   
She moaned as she forcibly changed her body position mid-air and aimed her feet towards the building. She yelled: “Oooooooooh!”
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She moaned as she forcibly changed her body position mid-air and had her feet aimed towards the building. She screamed: “Oooooooooh!”
   
And stomped towards the wall of the building with all her strength.
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And stomped toward the wall of the building with all her strength.
   
The weak walls collapsed. Thanks to it, Guriko escaped the bonds of inertia and directed her flight path once again toward the train. Close to the last car of the rapidly-moving train, she barely managed to grasp onto a protruding part of the carriage. Fortunately, the speed of the train was manageable.
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The weakly-constructed walls collapsed. Thanks to it, Guriko escaped the bonds of inertia and directed her flight path once again toward the train. Close to the last car of the rapidly-moving train, she barely managed to grasp onto a protruding part of the carriage. Fortunately, the speed of the train was manageable.
   
 
“Urk –”
 
“Urk –”
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“Bam” – there was a large and steady shift.
 
“Bam” – there was a large and steady shift.
   
Then, immediately, the back half of the train swiftly left the tracks and tilted sideways, still carrying all its passengers on board.
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Then, immediately, the back half of the train swiftly left the tracks and tilted sideways, still carrying all its passengers onboard.
   
   
   
The shaking and the noise, which felt like heaven and earth cracking open, quickly blew away "Mitaka’s" consciousness. This death-like darkness remained for a long time.
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The shaking and the noise, which felt like heaven and earth cracking open, quickly blew away ‘Mitaka’s’ consciousness. The death-like darkness remained for a long time.
   
 
''Will I die here, without a meaning, without leaving anything behind?''
 
''Will I die here, without a meaning, without leaving anything behind?''
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Death.
 
Death.
   
Only this overwhelming terror mercilessly hounded "Mitaka’s" consciousness as it floated in the darkness.
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Only this overwhelming terror mercilessly hounded ‘Mitaka’s’ consciousness as it floated in the darkness.
   
 
''No, no, I don’t want to die.''
 
''No, no, I don’t want to die.''
   
"Mitaka" struggled and despaired. His unsteady consciousness sought the light of life.
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‘Mitaka’ struggled and despaired. His unsteady consciousness sought the light of life.
   
 
“Mi… taka…”
 
“Mi… taka…”
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''I don’t want to die.
 
''I don’t want to die.
   
''I want to live. But why?'' "Mitaka" always returned to this question at the end. Why did he fear death? Why did he wish for eternal life?
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''I want to live. But why?'' ‘Mitaka’ always returned to this question at the end. Why did he fear death? Why did he wish for eternal life?
   
 
Gankyū Eguriko stood up and fought against the giant Dream-World Beast without fearing death half a year ago. She then distributed her own Apples without hesitation to strangers whom she had only recently met.
 
Gankyū Eguriko stood up and fought against the giant Dream-World Beast without fearing death half a year ago. She then distributed her own Apples without hesitation to strangers whom she had only recently met.
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''I laughed at her then. I really felt she was very foolish, stupid even.''
 
''I laughed at her then. I really felt she was very foolish, stupid even.''
   
However, that girl, who ignored the fear of death and decided to discard her eternal life without hesitation – was very strong. She was far stronger than "Mitaka", who did not even know what he should live for and only wished to escape death.
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However, that girl, who ignored the fear of death and decided to discard her eternal life without hesitation – was very strong. She was far stronger than ‘Mitaka’, who did not even know what he should live for and only wished to escape death.
   
 
Had Gankyū Eguriko found it?
 
Had Gankyū Eguriko found it?
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''What –
 
''What –
   
''Is the point of life? What is its purpose? I don’t understand.''
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Is the point of life? What is its purpose? I don’t understand.''
   
   

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