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“I am the invincible Unpleasant Counter-Current, Saibara Mitsuki.” She was covered in blood. Her flesh was broken and smashed, and her bones pierced her skin, visible to the outside.
 
“I am the invincible Unpleasant Counter-Current, Saibara Mitsuki.” She was covered in blood. Her flesh was broken and smashed, and her bones pierced her skin, visible to the outside.
   
Her internal organs were showing through the broken tissues. Her foot was fractured and twisted. It was incredible that she could still stand.
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Her internal organs were showing the through broken tissues. Her foot was fractured and twisted. It was incredible that she could still stand.
   
 
“Tatsu-chan. Mi-chan. Sis.”
 
“Tatsu-chan. Mi-chan. Sis.”
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“Mitsuki –”
 
“Mitsuki –”
   
"Mitaka" walked towards Mitsuki, who was smashed beyond recognition and grotesque to behold. A pained expression showed on his face. She threw them out of the car and let them escape even though she was trapped in the derailed tram, and now she was in such a pitiable state.
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‘Mitaka’ walked towards Mitsuki, who was smashed beyond recognition and grotesque to behold. A pained expression showed on his face. She threw them out of the car and let them escape even though she was trapped in the derailed tram, and now she was in such a pitiable state.
   
 
“Drip drop”, her blood dripped to the ground and dyed the gloomy sidewalk black.
 
“Drip drop”, her blood dripped to the ground and dyed the gloomy sidewalk black.
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“Mitsuki, why?”
 
“Mitsuki, why?”
   
"Mitaka" couldn’t understand this. He asked: “Why are you doing this even though you’re –”
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‘Mitaka’ couldn’t understand this. He asked: “Why are you doing this even though you’re –”
   
 
“Aha!” Mitsuki laughed cheerfully and pointed her large glove towards Guriko, who was pulling herself back up: “Mi-chan and Tatsu-chan are both my friends, so I will work hard to protect them.”
 
“Aha!” Mitsuki laughed cheerfully and pointed her large glove towards Guriko, who was pulling herself back up: “Mi-chan and Tatsu-chan are both my friends, so I will work hard to protect them.”
   
Smiling with her smashed face, she added quietly: “I still have some of my memories from when I was still human. Back then, Saibara Mitsuki didn’t have any friends. She liked her big sister, but still called her a degenerate, and didn’t pay attention to her –”
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Smiling with her smashed face, she added quietly: “I still have some of my memories from back when I was still human. Back then, Saibara Mitsuki didn’t have any friends. She liked her big sister, but still called her a degenerate, and didn’t pay attention to her –”
   
 
She looked down with a heavy expression: “It was very lonely. That was all I remember.”
 
She looked down with a heavy expression: “It was very lonely. That was all I remember.”
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“Therefore, hya! Mitsuki is the strongest when she has friends, when she’s happy and has the power of friendship. Oooh, I don’t think I’ll lose to anyone. Although I failed back there – I won’t lose myself and become the fallen angel again this time. I will be VERY ACTIVE in my original form!”
 
“Therefore, hya! Mitsuki is the strongest when she has friends, when she’s happy and has the power of friendship. Oooh, I don’t think I’ll lose to anyone. Although I failed back there – I won’t lose myself and become the fallen angel again this time. I will be VERY ACTIVE in my original form!”
   
He knew she was bluffing. "Mitaka" felt someone had gouged out his heart. She called him a friend, but he had not given her much thought. He more or less regarded her as an unknown enemy currently working with them under duress, and had always been guarded towards her.
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He knew she was bluffing. ‘Mitaka’ felt someone had gouged out his heart. She called him a friend, but he had not given her much thought. He more or less regarded her as an unknown enemy currently working with them under duress, and had always been guarded towards her.
   
 
However, such doubts swiftly vanished.
 
However, such doubts swiftly vanished.
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“Mi-chan!”
 
“Mi-chan!”
   
In front of Guriko, whose eyes were ablaze with anger and walking towards them as she estimated the distance, Mitsuki suddenly called out to him. Confused, "Mitaka" wondered what it was about.
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In front of Guriko, whose eyes were ablaze with anger and walking towards them as she estimated the distance, Mitsuki suddenly called out to him. Confused, ‘Mitaka’ wondered what it was about.
   
 
He soon realized Mitsuki’s intention. Flabbergasted, he frowned and changed his expression, and lifted his hand a little.
 
He soon realized Mitsuki’s intention. Flabbergasted, he frowned and changed his expression, and lifted his hand a little.
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“Mitsu-chan.”
 
“Mitsu-chan.”
   
“Clap,” Mitsuki and "Mitaka" clapped their hands together.
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“Clap,” Mitsuki and ‘Mitaka’ clapped their hands together.
   
 
With a smile, Mitsuki said in her usual innocence: “We’re the strongest.”
 
With a smile, Mitsuki said in her usual innocence: “We’re the strongest.”
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“Mitsuki!”
 
“Mitsuki!”
   
"Mitaka" couldn’t help but yell. Mitsuki also seemed incapable of responding to such a quick movement, and stood where she was.
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‘Mitaka’ couldn’t help but yell. Mitsuki also seemed incapable of responding to such a quick movement, and stood where she was.
   
 
“You – dared to treat me like that!”
 
“You – dared to treat me like that!”

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