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“Mitsuki!”
 
“Mitsuki!”
   
"Mitaka" hurried forward, wanting to help Mitsuki, but Guriko did not hesitate. She viciously kicked out at "Mitaka’s" face. He fell on the ground, groaning.
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‘Mitaka’ hurried forward, wanting to help Mitsuki, but Guriko did not hesitate. She viciously kicked out at ‘Mitaka’s’ face. He fell on the ground, groaning.
   
 
“Urggggg – ahhh, woah, uhhh.”
 
“Urggggg – ahhh, woah, uhhh.”
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“What?”
 
“What?”
   
There was nothing. No light, no sound, and no impact. There was only a gentle wind brushing against "Mitaka’s" face, who was lying on the ground.
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There was nothing. No light, no sound, and no impact. There was only a gentle wind brushing against ‘Mitaka’s’ face, who was lying on the ground.
   
"Mitaka" realized someone was standing near him.
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‘Mitaka’ realized someone was standing near him.
   
 
Forcibly repressing the pain, he scanned his surroundings and discerned the figure.
 
Forcibly repressing the pain, he scanned his surroundings and discerned the figure.
   
It was a silver anthropomorphic monster that looked like a blade. ''I’ve seen it before. That was the existence that butchered Mitaka and ate "me" up.''
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''It was a silver anthropomorphic monster that looked like a blade. I’ve seen it before. That was the existence that butchered Mitaka and ate ‘me’ up.''
   
 
A handsome man stood next to it.
 
A handsome man stood next to it.
   
A perfect and elegant figure, wearing an excessively clean and expensive suit without wrinkles or stains, all his hair brushed back, his gaze sharp and piercing, and his face wearing a faint smile - who was this man?
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A perfect and elegant figure, wearing an excessively clean and expensive suit without wrinkles or stains, all his hair brushed back, his gaze sharp and piercing, and his face wore a faint smile: who was this man?
   
Guriko, blown away, lay lifeless on the ground. Did she faint? Did they manage to finish Guriko off with just one blow? How did they manage that?
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Guriko, blown away, lay there lifeless on the ground. Did she faint? Did they manage to finish off Guriko with just one blow? How did they manage that?
   
 
Did that man do it?
 
Did that man do it?
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“Mitsuki?”
 
“Mitsuki?”
   
"Mitaka" called to Mitsuki, who was slowly falling to the ground. But there was no point. She sank into a pool of blood.
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‘Mitaka’ called to Mitsuki, who was slowly falling to the ground. But there was no point. She sank into a pool of blood.
   
 
“According to the Bible –”
 
“According to the Bible –”
   
The man smiled with satisfaction and walked towards "Mitaka". "Mitaka" wanted to get up and fight, but the wound Guriko gave him was worse than he thought, and he could not move.
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The man smiled with satisfaction and walked towards ‘Mitaka’. ‘Mitaka’ wanted to get up and fight, but the wound Guriko gave him was worse than he thought, and he could not move.
   
 
“– angels never punished animals.”
 
“– angels never punished animals.”
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He looked at the silver monster that was jumping with joy and making a sound of blades scraping together.
 
He looked at the silver monster that was jumping with joy and making a sound of blades scraping together.
   
“– has no evil intention. He is only instinctively killing others. I didn’t know if he was this kind of creature from the start, or if he was modified into this from by <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Ultimate Shield|The Weakest}}</span>. Hehe. It seems the ultimate weapon made to handle Unpleasant Counter-Current did its job. Target B – Unpleasant Counter-Current, eliminated.”
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“– has no evil intention. He is only instinctively killing others. I didn’t know he was this kind of creature from the start, or if he was modified into this from by <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Ultimate Shield|The Weakest}}</span>. Hehe. It seems the ultimate weapon made to handle Unpleasant Counter-Current did its job. Target B – Unpleasant Counter-Current, eliminated.”
   
Then, with an expression as if he was going to lick his lips, he looked at "Mitaka" and Tatsue and Mina lying on the ground, and smiled.
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Then, with an expression as if he was going to lick his lips, he looked at ‘Mitaka’ and Tatsue and Mina lying on the ground, and smiled.
   
 
“Ohhh, there are other treasures here apart from Gankyū Eguriko and Unpleasant Counter-Current, no? Looks like God truly blesses me. I even managed to find the head of Sterilization Disinfection, which <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Ultimate Shield|The Weakest}}</span> has been looking for – hmm? You are…”
 
“Ohhh, there are other treasures here apart from Gankyū Eguriko and Unpleasant Counter-Current, no? Looks like God truly blesses me. I even managed to find the head of Sterilization Disinfection, which <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Ultimate Shield|The Weakest}}</span> has been looking for – hmm? You are…”
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“You, you actually are –”
 
“You, you actually are –”
   
"Mitaka" couldn’t help but burst out.
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‘Mitaka’ couldn’t help but burst out.
   
 
Tatsue’s father? Could… could it be?
 
Tatsue’s father? Could… could it be?
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“The current CEO of the Sakaki Organization – Sakaki Ganhō?”
 
“The current CEO of the Sakaki Organization – Sakaki Ganhō?”
   
"Mitaka" yelled out this name. The other man immediately shook his head.
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‘Mitaka’ yelled out this name. The other man immediately shook his head.
   
 
“That’s not the right title. I’ve cooperated with that devil, <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span> before, and did things worthy of the Messiah under the table.”
 
“That’s not the right title. I’ve cooperated with that devil, <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title|Melodia Noise|Tear Song}}</span> before, and did things worthy of the Messiah under the table.”
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“I am not a devil. I’ve also forbidden you from speaking out of turn, correct?”
 
“I am not a devil. I’ve also forbidden you from speaking out of turn, correct?”
   
Ganhō smiled at the voice of the old man, which really seemed came out of his own mouth. Then, with no expression on his face, he stomped his feet towards "Mitaka’s" head as if squashing an insect. The impact and the pain made "Mitaka" dizzy. His head was all fuddled. Unable to comprehend anything, he screamed: “What? What is this? What is this, just what –?”
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Ganhō smiled at the voice of the old man, which really seemed came out of his own mouth. Then, with no expression on his face, he stomped his feet towards ‘Mitaka’s’ head as if squashing an insect. The impact and the pain made ‘Mitaka’ dizzy. His head was all fuddled. Unable to comprehend anything, he screamed: “What? What is this? What is this, just what –?”
   
He stretched his hand towards Tatsue, who was in Ganhō’s arms. However, as Ganhō pressed his feet down even harder, "Mitaka’s" consciousness soon disappeared.
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He stretched his hand towards Tatsue, who was in Ganhō’s arms. However, as Ganhō pressed his feet down even harder, ‘Mitaka’s’ consciousness soon disappeared.
   
   

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