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" Roger!! Moving out!"
 
" Roger!! Moving out!"
   
" Hurensöhne!!!"
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" Hurensöhne!!!}
   
" Raaaaaahhh!!!"
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- Raaaaaahhh!!!
   
 
Stirred up by the battle cries of his comrades, Theodore charged. In front of them sluggishly moved the devastated destroyer herd, and the eight machines used horizontal boosts to quickly reach and penetrate the group, rushing through this small gap in the enemy before it closed.
 
Stirred up by the battle cries of his comrades, Theodore charged. In front of them sluggishly moved the devastated destroyer herd, and the eight machines used horizontal boosts to quickly reach and penetrate the group, rushing through this small gap in the enemy before it closed.
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However, he didn’t have long to appreciate the strangeness of the situation. As soon as they passed the first rows of destroyer bodies, several dozen of the herd began trying to resume their attack, with one group intent on blocking their breakthrough route.
 
However, he didn’t have long to appreciate the strangeness of the situation. As soon as they passed the first rows of destroyer bodies, several dozen of the herd began trying to resume their attack, with one group intent on blocking their breakthrough route.
 
 
''Damn, they recover fast!.. ''
 
''Damn, they recover fast!.. ''
   
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It wouldn’t do to lose Irisdine here, as she was the force that kept the squadron together, - no matter how much he may have disliked her, it was only true. But if they managed to destroy their target now, they might be able to escape this hell sooner…
 
It wouldn’t do to lose Irisdine here, as she was the force that kept the squadron together, - no matter how much he may have disliked her, it was only true. But if they managed to destroy their target now, they might be able to escape this hell sooner…
 
 
Meanwhile, the squadron’s machines made their way through the destroyer corpses.
 
Meanwhile, the squadron’s machines made their way through the destroyer corpses.
   
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Gretel was sounding more and more unpleasant, and Pham kept quiet. However, several seconds later, the political officer muttered:
 
Gretel was sounding more and more unpleasant, and Pham kept quiet. However, several seconds later, the political officer muttered:
 
 
" However, it is true that comrade captain is vital to this squadron’s combat effectiveness…"
 
" However, it is true that comrade captain is vital to this squadron’s combat effectiveness…"
   
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" Roger that!!"
 
" Roger that!!"
   
''It’s finally over…'' Theodore felt a wave of relief wash over him.
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''It’s finally over…'' Theodore felt a wave of relief wash over him. ''If we can just withdraw safely now, I’ll survive this!.. ''
 
''If we can just withdraw safely now, I’ll survive this!.. ''
 
   
 
Trying not to let it show on his face, he pushed the pedal, firing up his jump engines. Now that the laser-class were no longer a threat, simply flying away was a safe option. He turned his attention to the BETA, gathered around them, and—
 
Trying not to let it show on his face, he pushed the pedal, firing up his jump engines. Now that the laser-class were no longer a threat, simply flying away was a safe option. He turned his attention to the BETA, gathered around them, and—
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" Inghi-i-i-ild!!!"
 
" Inghi-i-i-ild!!!"
   
" Hurensohn!! "– Theodore roared together with Annette, reflexively igniting the jump boosters.
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" Hurensohn!! "– Theodore roared together with Annette, reflexively igniting the jump boosters.
 
 
"Dummer Arsch, I told you..!"
 
"Dummer Arsch, I told you..!"
 
 
Evading the tank-class underfoot, he turned towards Inghild’s machine, now lying on the snow. There were now several dozen grapplers in that area. Her comm window was closed, and read “connection failed”.
 
Evading the tank-class underfoot, he turned towards Inghild’s machine, now lying on the snow. There were now several dozen grapplers in that area. Her comm window was closed, and read “connection failed”.
   

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