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Theodore gave another sigh. He felt the pressure of the coming fight.
 
Theodore gave another sigh. He felt the pressure of the coming fight.
   
In the past several days, triple-six squadron had been mobilised to check a large-scale BETA assault from the eastern shore of the Neisse river, their mission being Laserjagd <ref group="1A"> It's what the furigana says (and it took me a long time to figure out). 'Jagd' being German for 'hunt', naturally.</ref> - penetration deep into enemy territory with the objective of taking out laser-class units that constituted the main firepower and core of the enemy force. At this time, the squadron, using NOE flight <ref group="1A"> Nap-of-the-earth flight, a method of avoiding detection by hugging the landscape (so at very low altitude). Also "flying under the radar". Note that the arrowhead formation is much more difficult to maintain at low altitudes. </ref> and maneuvering with their jump boosters, was quickly but stealthily proceeding along the shortest route to the predicted objective location, along the left flank of a large group that was advancing west. In the clouds charged with heavy metal particles that had been put in place by preliminary bombardment with AL shells <ref group="1A"> Anti-Laser shells.</ref> , the threat of detection and exposure to laser fire was diminished; however, it was not an ideal method either, something akin to taking about a couple of bullets from the revolver when playing of Russian roulette. The heavy metal clouds brought their own problems for TSFs operating under them: increased communications interference meant that data links through which the tactical information sharing system worked were now useless, except at close range. Pilots were only able to maintain communications with their wingmen, and there was no link with the four rear-guard machines that had been trailing four kilometres behind.
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In the past several days, triple-six squadron had been mobilised to check a large-scale BETA assault from the eastern shore of the Neisse river, their mission being Laserjagd <ref group="1A"> It's what the furigana says (and it took me a long time to figure out). 'Jagd' being German for 'hunt', naturally.</ref> - penetration deep into enemy territory with the objective of taking out laser-class units that constituted the main firepower and core of the enemy force. At this time, the squadron, using NOE flight <ref group="1A"> Nap-of-the-earth flight, a method of avoiding detection by hugging the landscape (so at very low altitude). Also "flying under the radar". Note that the arrowhead formation is much more difficult to maintain at low altitudes. </ref> and manoeuvring with their jump boosters, was quickly but stealthily proceeding along the shortest route to the predicted objective location, along the left flank of a large group that was advancing west. In the clouds charged with heavy metal particles that had been put in place by preliminary bombardment with AL shells <ref group="1A"> Anti-Laser shells.</ref> , the threat of detection and exposure to laser fire was diminished; however, it was not an ideal method either, something akin to taking about a couple of bullets from the revolver when playing of Russian roulette. The heavy metal clouds brought their own problems for TSFs operating under them: increased communications interference meant that data links through which the tactical information sharing system worked were now useless, except at close range. Pilots were only able to maintain communications with their wingmen, and there was no link with the four rear-guard machines that had been trailing four kilometres behind.
   
 
The blizzard only seemed to get stronger, and consequently the visibility got worse by the minute. The situation was so bad he got a queer, hollow feeling in the pit of his stomach. His nervousness must have shown in his handling of the machine, for moments later a new comm window appeared on his display, from which a pilot's face regarded him sternly.
 
The blizzard only seemed to get stronger, and consequently the visibility got worse by the minute. The situation was so bad he got a queer, hollow feeling in the pit of his stomach. His nervousness must have shown in his handling of the machine, for moments later a new comm window appeared on his display, from which a pilot's face regarded him sternly.
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" Roger!!"
 
" Roger!!"
   
All four machines of the lead unit instantly put forward huge assault shields, in a maneuver reminiscent of the hoplite phalanxes of Ancient Greece. All the machines of the squadron except one carried the standard load out of the NVA's tactical fighters: a multipurpose assault shield "Shürzen" <ref group="1A"> The assault shields' name remains elusive. Furigana says "scherzen", but that would mean "joke" in German, and unless the shieldfs developers had a weird sense of humour, I doubt this would be its real name. Judging by the fact that they can't into German anyway, I chose the closest possible option - "Shurzen" being armoured side skirts widely used on panzers during WW2. Its kanji also read "multipurpose supplementary armour". </ref> in the left hand, a WS-16C assault rifle in the right, plus an additional weapon on the gun mounts.
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All four machines of the lead unit instantly put forward huge assault shields, in a manoeuvre reminiscent of the hoplite phalanxes of Ancient Greece. All the machines of the squadron except one carried the standard load out of the NVA's tactical fighters: a multipurpose assault shield "Shürzen" <ref group="1A"> The assault shields' name remains elusive. Furigana says "scherzen", but that would mean "joke" in German, and unless the shieldfs developers had a weird sense of humour, I doubt this would be its real name. Judging by the fact that they can't into German anyway, I chose the closest possible option - "Shurzen" being armoured side skirts widely used on panzers during WW2. Its kanji also read "multipurpose supplementary armour". </ref> in the left hand, a WS-16C assault rifle in the right, plus an additional weapon on the gun mounts.
   
 
Infrared sensors showed enemy signatures approximately a thousand metres ahead and behind the unit. As far as they could see on their radars, the snowy plains were crawling with BETA, a picture reminiscent of tsunami waves coming one after the other.
 
Infrared sensors showed enemy signatures approximately a thousand metres ahead and behind the unit. As far as they could see on their radars, the snowy plains were crawling with BETA, a picture reminiscent of tsunami waves coming one after the other.
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" Tactical considerations are within my competence. Continue diversion." was Irisdine's cold reaction to Gretel overstepping her authority.
 
" Tactical considerations are within my competence. Continue diversion." was Irisdine's cold reaction to Gretel overstepping her authority.
   
It was clear that she was planning to draw as many BETA as possible to one place, and then quickly outmaneuver them, striking at the soft underbelly of the enemy forces and wiping out the laser-class.
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It was clear that she was planning to draw as many BETA as possible to one place, and then quickly outmanoeuvre them, striking at the soft underbelly of the enemy forces and wiping out the laser-class.
   
 
" Right now on the front line, men are dying to buy us some time! The fact alone that you're ignoring that can be considered treason! Do you understand or not that the party speaks through me?!"
 
" Right now on the front line, men are dying to buy us some time! The fact alone that you're ignoring that can be considered treason! Do you understand or not that the party speaks through me?!"
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''...Being a target for the lasers kinda seems easier...''
 
''...Being a target for the lasers kinda seems easier...''
   
Making an effort not to curse into the open comm channel, Theodore saw bright dots on the radar - a group of grapplers, only eight hundred metres in front. He pulled hard on a control stick, maneuvering just in time, managed to swerve and avoid losing speed.
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Making an effort not to curse into the open comm channel, Theodore saw bright dots on the radar - a group of grapplers, only eight hundred metres in front. He pulled hard on a control stick, manoeuvring just in time, managed to swerve and avoid losing speed.
   
 
''Scheisse, will you ever end?!..''
 
''Scheisse, will you ever end?!..''
   
Another group in front of him - this time, in much closer formation. He was coming in fast, and a crash seemed an all too real possibility, - he yanked the joysticks towards himself, swooping up to perform an extreme breaking maneuver over the heads of the BETA, - all in less than 2.35 seconds, which was the maximum time he could stay up before being hit by lasers.
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Another group in front of him - this time, in much closer formation. He was coming in fast, and a crash seemed an all too real possibility, - he yanked the joysticks towards himself, swooping up to perform an extreme breaking manoeuvre over the heads of the BETA, - all in less than 2.35 seconds, which was the maximum time he could stay up before being hit by lasers.
   
 
''Goddamn it, just give us the new MiG-23s already, or some of the western kites!''
 
''Goddamn it, just give us the new MiG-23s already, or some of the western kites!''
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Theodore shouted in reply, feeling despair encroach upon his soul. It might have been the same for the others, too.
 
Theodore shouted in reply, feeling despair encroach upon his soul. It might have been the same for the others, too.
   
" Then, on my order, we will begin the breakthrough maneuver. Do not, I repeat, do not break your element<ref group="1A"> To remind you – an element is the smallest unit of TSFs, two machines. </ref> ! If we stop them, they’re not a threat anymore!"
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" Then, on my order, we will begin the breakthrough manoeuvre. Do not, I repeat, do not break your element<ref group="1A"> To remind you – an element is the smallest unit of TSFs, two machines. </ref> ! If we stop them, they’re not a threat anymore!"
   
 
The trembling of the ground was becoming more and more noticeable, and their TSFs shook.
 
The trembling of the ground was becoming more and more noticeable, and their TSFs shook.
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''Dammit, they still haven’t finished?! We’ll get wiped out at this rate!.. ''
 
''Dammit, they still haven’t finished?! We’ll get wiped out at this rate!.. ''
   
From the corner of his eye he could see Annette’s machine, now without assault rifle or even shield, holding her sword with both hands and hacking away, while Inghild still covered her partner – her own ammo count must have been low as well, since she was giving very economical, precise bursts. The BETA were pressing them, but Inghild cleverly used it to her advantage, not letting them get close with a combination of quick maneuvers and short bursts of fire. He didn’t think it was his job to support them – after all, they wasted ammo themselves, and if he went in, he’d probably end up spending the little he had left.
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From the corner of his eye he could see Annette’s machine, now without assault rifle or even shield, holding her sword with both hands and hacking away, while Inghild still covered her partner – her own ammo count must have been low as well, since she was giving very economical, precise bursts. The BETA were pressing them, but Inghild cleverly used it to her advantage, not letting them get close with a combination of quick manoeuvres and short bursts of fire. He didn’t think it was his job to support them – after all, they wasted ammo themselves, and if he went in, he’d probably end up spending the little he had left.
   
 
Checking the time again, he realised they had three minutes left, and scowled.
 
Checking the time again, he realised they had three minutes left, and scowled.
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''Just like Irisdine predicted!.. ''
 
''Just like Irisdine predicted!.. ''
   
The TSFs were still not in sight, but their presence in the city was a certainty, since the combat was taking place there. They could search the area from the air, but since this was BETA-controlled territory, there was still a risk of exposure to a surviving laser-class, which made any aerial maneuvers reckless.
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The TSFs were still not in sight, but their presence in the city was a certainty, since the combat was taking place there. They could search the area from the air, but since this was BETA-controlled territory, there was still a risk of exposure to a surviving laser-class, which made any aerial manoeuvres reckless.
   
 
" We split, and search the area! You take the east, I’ll go west. When you find them, report!"
 
" We split, and search the area! You take the east, I’ll go west. When you find them, report!"

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