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"Commander, here they come again! BETA herd, five hundred units or more!"
 
"Commander, here they come again! BETA herd, five hundred units or more!"
 
 
"Goddamn them!.."
 
"Goddamn them!.."
   
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Crawling along the bloody, grimy floor of the trench, she desperately looked up, trying to find her saviours in the morning sky... and a second later, she saw them. Eight MiG-21s, main tactical fighters of the NVA, their silhouettes clear against the pale sky, cruising above. Graceful and unperturbed, they went on, soon disappearing into the blizzard, unmoved by the tragedy below.
 
Crawling along the bloody, grimy floor of the trench, she desperately looked up, trying to find her saviours in the morning sky... and a second later, she saw them. Eight MiG-21s, main tactical fighters of the NVA, their silhouettes clear against the pale sky, cruising above. Graceful and unperturbed, they went on, soon disappearing into the blizzard, unmoved by the tragedy below.
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" How... why... why?! - a desperate cry came from her throat, - Why aren't you helping us? Why?!.."
 
" How... why... why?!" - a desperate cry came from her throat,
 
 
" Why aren't you helping us? Why?!.."
 
   
 
In the next instant, powerful jaws closed on Claudia's neck.
 
In the next instant, powerful jaws closed on Claudia's neck.
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'''+++1110 hours'''
 
'''+++1110 hours'''
   
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As usual, the steady stream of new requests for reinforcement and cries for help went on, as constant as the whining roar of the aircraft's engines. Unterleutnant Theodore Eberbach, a pilot of the 666th TSF squadron "Schwarzesmarken", grimaced and pushed on the control pedals, making his "Balalaika"<ref group="1A"> Codename for Alternative's MiG-21, believe it or not. It’s a Russian string instrument, a really cliché way to namea vehicle. </ref> lurch forward and gain a little speed. Minute after minute, landscapes projected onto his retinae changed: white fields under grey skies, burnt forests, abandoned fields strewn with BETA corpses... and if he looked behind his shoulder, he would have been able to see the vicious battle with the BETA on the front lines. And the only thing he could permit himself was a deep sigh, - he had long since learned not to think too much about what was happening around them.
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As usual, the steady stream of new requests for reinforcement and cries for help went on, as constant as the whining roar of the aircraft's engines. Unterleutnant Theodore Eberbach, a pilot of the 666th TSF squadron "Schwarzesmarken", grimaced and pushed on the control pedals, making his "Balalaika"<ref group="1A"> NSV (Nikitin-Sokolov-Volkov), a 12.7×108mm calibre heavy machine gun.</ref> lurch forward and gain a little speed. Minute after minute, landscapes projected onto his retinae changed: white fields under grey skies, burnt forests, abandoned fields strewn with BETA corpses... and if he looked behind his shoulder, he would have been able to see the vicious battle with the BETA on the front lines. And the only thing he could permit himself was a deep sigh, - he had long since learned not to think too much about what was happening around them.
   
 
"Achtung! Schwarz one to all."
 
"Achtung! Schwarz one to all."
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" Get ready for enemy engagement. Comms may be spotty under the heavy metal clouds, maintain formation."
 
" Get ready for enemy engagement. Comms may be spotty under the heavy metal clouds, maintain formation."
   
"Eight, copy that "
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''Eight, copy that, ''
 
 
His toneless reply drowned in a chorus of acknowledgement from the other pilots.
 
His toneless reply drowned in a chorus of acknowledgement from the other pilots.
   
 
The 666th consisted of eight MiGs, and though they were supposed to have twelve machines, by now there were very few units in the entire NVA which had a full contingent. For the same reason, they were now flying in arrowhead formation, four including the commander's machine leading, four following. The commander's MiG-21 was outfitted with additional sensory and communications equipment. The entire head of the machine was slightly different, with the main antenna brought forward, so that it bore a distant resemblance to the legendary unicorn.
 
The 666th consisted of eight MiGs, and though they were supposed to have twelve machines, by now there were very few units in the entire NVA which had a full contingent. For the same reason, they were now flying in arrowhead formation, four including the commander's machine leading, four following. The commander's MiG-21 was outfitted with additional sensory and communications equipment. The entire head of the machine was slightly different, with the main antenna brought forward, so that it bore a distant resemblance to the legendary unicorn.
   
''Eight kites against the whole bloody BETA force?.. Suicide job as usual...''
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"Eight kites against the whole bloody BETA force?.. Suicide job as usual..."
 
 
Theodore gave another sigh. He felt the pressure of the coming fight.
 
Theodore gave another sigh. He felt the pressure of the coming fight.
   
In the past several days, triple-six squadron had been mobilised to check a large-scale BETA assault from the eastern shore of the Neisse river, their mission being Laserjagd <ref group="1A"> It's what the furigana says (and it took me a long time to figure out). 'Jagd' being German for 'hunt', naturally.</ref> - penetration deep into enemy territory with the objective of taking out laser-class units that constituted the main firepower and core of the enemy force. At this time, the squadron, using NOE flight <ref group="1A"> Nap-of-the-earth flight, a method of avoiding detection by hugging the landscape (so at very low altitude). Also "flying under the radar". Note that the arrowhead formation is much more difficult to maintain at low altitudes. </ref> and maneuvering with their jump boosters, was quickly but stealthily proceeding along the shortest route to the predicted objective location, along the left flank of a large group that was advancing west. In the clouds charged with heavy metal particles that had been put in place by preliminary bombardment with AL shells <ref group="1A"> Anti-Laser shells.</ref> , the threat of detection and exposure to laser fire was diminished; however, it was not an ideal method either, something akin to taking about a couple of bullets from the revolver when playing of Russian roulette. The heavy metal clouds brought their own problems for TSFs operating under them: increased communications interference meant that data links through which the tactical information sharing system worked were now useless, except at close range. Pilots were only able to maintain communications with their wingmen, and there was no link with the four rear-guard machines that had been trailing four kilometres behind.
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In the past several days, triple-six squadron had been mobilised to check a large-scale BETA assault from the eastern shore of the Neisse river, their mission being Laserjagd <ref group="1A"> It's what the furigana says (and it took me a long time to figure out). 'Jagd' being German for 'hunt', naturally.</ref> - penetration deep into enemy territory with the objective of taking out laser-class units that constituted the main firepower and core of the enemy force. At this time, the squadron, using NOE flight <ref group="1A"> Nap-of-the-earth flight, a method of avoiding detection by hugging the landscape (so at very low altitude). Also "flying under the radar". Note that the arrowhead formation is much more difficult to maintain at low altitudes. </ref> and manoeuvring with their jump boosters, was quickly but stealthily proceeding along the shortest route to the predicted objective location, along the left flank of a large group that was advancing west. In the clouds charged with heavy metal particles that had been put in place by preliminary bombardment with AL shells <ref group="1A"> Anti-Laser shells.</ref> , the threat of detection and exposure to laser fire was diminished; however, it was not an ideal method either, something akin to taking about a couple of bullets from the revolver when playing of Russian roulette. The heavy metal clouds brought their own problems for TSFs operating under them: increased communications interference meant that data links through which the tactical information sharing system worked were now useless, except at close range. Pilots were only able to maintain communications with their wingmen, and there was no link with the four rear-guard machines that had been trailing four kilometres behind.
   
 
The blizzard only seemed to get stronger, and consequently the visibility got worse by the minute. The situation was so bad he got a queer, hollow feeling in the pit of his stomach. His nervousness must have shown in his handling of the machine, for moments later a new comm window appeared on his display, from which a pilot's face regarded him sternly.
 
The blizzard only seemed to get stronger, and consequently the visibility got worse by the minute. The situation was so bad he got a queer, hollow feeling in the pit of his stomach. His nervousness must have shown in his handling of the machine, for moments later a new comm window appeared on his display, from which a pilot's face regarded him sternly.
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Theodore, startled, barely stopped himself from clicking his tongue in frustration and glanced at the speaker, seeing the unmistakeable black hard peppered with grey. The voice belonged to Oberleutnant Walter Krueger, who, a veteran officer at 29, rumoured to be a survivor of Operation Palaiologos, was much more experienced than the 18-year-old Theodore. Being the most senior pilot in the squadron, he was Irisdine's adjutant, responsible for all personnel-related matters.
 
Theodore, startled, barely stopped himself from clicking his tongue in frustration and glanced at the speaker, seeing the unmistakeable black hard peppered with grey. The voice belonged to Oberleutnant Walter Krueger, who, a veteran officer at 29, rumoured to be a survivor of Operation Palaiologos, was much more experienced than the 18-year-old Theodore. Being the most senior pilot in the squadron, he was Irisdine's adjutant, responsible for all personnel-related matters.
   
''When will they stop treating me like a kid?..''
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"When will they stop treating me like a kid?.."
   
 
...but Theodore answered as levelly as he could:
 
...but Theodore answered as levelly as he could:
 
 
"Eight, roger that."
 
"Eight, roger that."
   
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"Ma'am, the 721st's requesting backup--"
 
"Ma'am, the 721st's requesting backup--"
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" Request denied" answered Irisdine immediately, without a hint of emotion.
 
" Request denied" - answered Irisdine immediately, without a hint of emotion.
 
 
 
" Any distractions from our main objective will have to be set aside. These aren't the first or the last that we will have to ignore, but we have a mission, a responsibility to save many more lives "
 
" Any distractions from our main objective will have to be set aside. These aren't the first or the last that we will have to ignore, but we have a mission, a responsibility to save many more lives "
 
 
" Shwarz three copy. Everybody heard that? We're proceeding on course."
 
" Shwarz three copy. Everybody heard that? We're proceeding on course."
   
 
Feigning impassiveness, Theodore felt disgust somewhere deep down. No, it wasn't the coldness of the two officers towards their allies, - what bothered him much more were the pretty words coming out of Irisdine's mouth. "A responsibility to save many more lives ", bah! Theodore had a good reason to think that way about his commanding officer that way.
 
Feigning impassiveness, Theodore felt disgust somewhere deep down. No, it wasn't the coldness of the two officers towards their allies, - what bothered him much more were the pretty words coming out of Irisdine's mouth. "A responsibility to save many more lives ", bah! Theodore had a good reason to think that way about his commanding officer that way.
   
''Because of them, I--''
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"Because of them, I--"
 
 
"Feindkontankt! BETA group, at 010! Heading 170! I read at least fifteen thousand!"
 
"Feindkontankt! BETA group, at 010! Heading 170! I read at least fifteen thousand!"
   
 
Walter's sudden shout interrupted his thoughts and made everyone check their radars.
 
Walter's sudden shout interrupted his thoughts and made everyone check their radars.
 
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The monsters were indeed heading west. Most of them were tank-class BETA, with a few warriors and grapplers scattered about. The distinct shapes of the laser-class targets were nowhere in sight, though according to intelligence reports, they would be at the back of the horde.
 
The monsters were indeed heading west. Most of them were tank-class BETA, with a few warriors and grapplers scattered about. The distinct shapes of the laser-class targets were nowhere in sight, though according to intelligence reports, they would be at the back of the horde.
   
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During the briefing, they were told that this particular enemy formation totalled around thirty thousand. If the radar, however, had already picked up more than half of that number, it was safe to double the predicted total.
 
During the briefing, they were told that this particular enemy formation totalled around thirty thousand. If the radar, however, had already picked up more than half of that number, it was safe to double the predicted total.
   
''Damn them, they get the numbers wrong every bloody time...''
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"Damn them, they get the numbers wrong every bloody time..."
   
 
" By the way, Walter, you know that joke?" Irisdine spoke in a level tone, as if she hadn't noticed the enemy at all and was asking about the weather.
 
" By the way, Walter, you know that joke?" Irisdine spoke in a level tone, as if she hadn't noticed the enemy at all and was asking about the weather.
 
 
" Which one?"
 
" Which one?"
 
 
" Someone sends a question to the Berlin radio: are the BETA edible at all?"
 
" Someone sends a question to the Berlin radio: are the BETA edible at all?"
 
 
" ...And?"
 
" ...And?"
 
 
" They answer: of course not. Unless you're an Engländer."
 
" They answer: of course not. Unless you're an Engländer."
   
 
Several muffled laughs could be heard in the comms. The dreadfulness of the rations distributed to the British army, stationed in the DDR under UN command, was legendary even among East German personnel, and Walter chuckled appreciatively:
 
Several muffled laughs could be heard in the comms. The dreadfulness of the rations distributed to the British army, stationed in the DDR under UN command, was legendary even among East German personnel, and Walter chuckled appreciatively:
   
" Yes, and there's so many of them here... we should export them to those Inselaffe, they'd probably thank us."
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" Yes, and there's so many of them here... we should export them to thoseInselaffe, they'd probably thank us."
 
 
" Right, - so first, let's turn those over there into paste."
 
" Right, - so first, let's turn those over there into paste."
   
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" Schwarz one to all, we'll cut off this group in front of us first!"
 
" Schwarz one to all, we'll cut off this group in front of us first!"
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" Jawohl! - answered the chorus of pilots' voices"
 
" Jawohl! " - answered the chorus of pilots' voices.
 
 
 
" Ready! Down we go!"
 
" Ready! Down we go!"
   
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"Deploy shields!"
 
"Deploy shields!"
 
 
" Roger!!"
 
" Roger!!"
   
All four machines of the lead unit instantly put forward huge assault shields, in a maneuver reminiscent of the hoplite phalanxes of Ancient Greece. All the machines of the squadron except one carried the standard load out of the NVA's tactical fighters: a multipurpose assault shield "Shürzen" <ref group="1A"> The assault shields' name remains elusive. Furigana says "scherzen", but that would mean "joke" in German, and unless the shieldfs developers had a weird sense of humour, I doubt this would be its real name. Judging by the fact that they can't into German anyway, I chose the closest possible option - "Shurzen" being armoured side skirts widely used on panzers during WW2. Its kanji also read "multipurpose supplementary armour". </ref> in the left hand, a WS-16C assault rifle in the right, plus an additional weapon on the gun mounts.
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All four machines of the lead unit instantly put forward huge assault shields, in a manoeuvre reminiscent of the hoplite phalanxes of Ancient Greece. All the machines of the squadron except one carried the standard load out of the NVA's tactical fighters: a multipurpose assault shield "Shürzen" <ref group="1A"> The assault shields' name remains elusive. Furigana says "scherzen", but that would mean "joke" in German, and unless the shieldfs developers had a weird sense of humour, I doubt this would be its real name. Judging by the fact that they can't into German anyway, I chose the closest possible option - "Shurzen" being armoured side skirts widely used on panzers during WW2. Its kanji also read "multipurpose supplementary armour". </ref> in the left hand, a WS-16C assault rifle in the right, plus an additional weapon on the gun mounts.
   
 
Infrared sensors showed enemy signatures approximately a thousand metres ahead and behind the unit. As far as they could see on their radars, the snowy plains were crawling with BETA, a picture reminiscent of tsunami waves coming one after the other.
 
Infrared sensors showed enemy signatures approximately a thousand metres ahead and behind the unit. As far as they could see on their radars, the snowy plains were crawling with BETA, a picture reminiscent of tsunami waves coming one after the other.
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"Here they come!.."
 
"Here they come!.."
 
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" Draw them towards us - fire and retreat!"
 
" Draw them towards us - fire and retreat!"
   
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Even concentrated fire could not stop the BETA advance, though it did slow them down, and now red waves of tank-class creatures started flowing around the TSFs in an attempt to flank and surround them.
 
Even concentrated fire could not stop the BETA advance, though it did slow them down, and now red waves of tank-class creatures started flowing around the TSFs in an attempt to flank and surround them.
   
''We're running out of space, won't be able to retreat for much longer...''
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"We're running out of space, won't be able to retreat for much longer..."
   
 
No sooner had the thought crossed Theodore's mind that a clear voice broke through the tense silence:
 
No sooner had the thought crossed Theodore's mind that a clear voice broke through the tense silence:
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" We have standing orders - take those Lux down by 1200 hours! I demand that we stop these foolish diversions and proceed to our objective!"
 
" We have standing orders - take those Lux down by 1200 hours! I demand that we stop these foolish diversions and proceed to our objective!"
 
 
''Ugh... there she goes again... ''
 
''Ugh... there she goes again... ''
   
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" Our mission is to destroy the laser-class! The more we wait, the more troops we lose! It could end in them breaking through our front line!"
 
" Our mission is to destroy the laser-class! The more we wait, the more troops we lose! It could end in them breaking through our front line!"
   
''Yeah, and she doesn't think for a sec that if we followed everything to the letter, we wouldn't ever stand a chance of making it?..''
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"Yeah, and she doesn't think for a sec that if we followed everything to the letter, we wouldn't ever stand a chance of making it?.."
   
 
" Aren't we supposed to complete this mission no matter the cost, comrade captain?!"
 
" Aren't we supposed to complete this mission no matter the cost, comrade captain?!"
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" ...Comrade lieutenant." Irisdine's voice was calm. Only she, as the squadron commander, could speak with Gretel as an equal. " The enemy numbers are considerably higher than forecasted. Have you considered the fact that this may impede our progress towards the main objective?"
 
" ...Comrade lieutenant."
 
 
Irisdine's voice was calm. Only she, as the squadron commander, could speak with Gretel as an equal.
 
 
" The enemy numbers are considerably higher than forecasted. Have you considered the fact that this may impede our progress towards the main objective?"
 
 
 
" We don't have time for this! I think we've done enough to divert some BETA here!"
 
" We don't have time for this! I think we've done enough to divert some BETA here!"
 
 
" Tactical considerations are within my competence. Continue diversion." was Irisdine's cold reaction to Gretel overstepping her authority.
 
" Tactical considerations are within my competence. Continue diversion." was Irisdine's cold reaction to Gretel overstepping her authority.
   
It was clear that she was planning to draw as many BETA as possible to one place, and then quickly outmaneuver them, striking at the soft underbelly of the enemy forces and wiping out the laser-class.
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It was clear that she was planning to draw as many BETA as possible to one place, and then quickly outmanoeuvre them, striking at the soft underbelly of the enemy forces and wiping out the laser-class.
   
 
" Right now on the front line, men are dying to buy us some time! The fact alone that you're ignoring that can be considered treason! Do you understand or not that the party speaks through me?!"
 
" Right now on the front line, men are dying to buy us some time! The fact alone that you're ignoring that can be considered treason! Do you understand or not that the party speaks through me?!"
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However, Irisdine still didn't answer, and Gretel's face betrayed some confusion and suspicion. The tension was broken by Walter's shout:
 
However, Irisdine still didn't answer, and Gretel's face betrayed some confusion and suspicion. The tension was broken by Walter's shout:
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" Commander! Multiple enemy signatures to the rear! Grappler reinforcements!.. Reading... over two hundred! Distance 1200... 1000... contact in sixty seconds!"
 
" Commander! Multiple enemy signatures to the rear! Grappler reinforcements! ..Reading... over two hundred! Distance 1200... 1000... contact in sixty seconds!"
 
   
 
''Damn their timing!.. ''
 
''Damn their timing!.. ''
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" Lead flight, move to engage the grapplers! Rear-guard - set up behind them, get ready to provide covering fire!" ordered Irisdine without a hint of hesitation in her voice.
 
" Lead flight, move to engage the grapplers! Rear-guard - set up behind them, get ready to provide covering fire!" ordered Irisdine without a hint of hesitation in her voice.
 
 
" What the hell, comrade captain?! This position has no tactical value, why are we still defending it?! I told you--"
 
" What the hell, comrade captain?! This position has no tactical value, why are we still defending it?! I told you--"
 
 
" These need to be destroyed to ensure the success of the operation. All units, schneller! Do not waste time or ammo!"
 
" These need to be destroyed to ensure the success of the operation. All units, schneller! Do not waste time or ammo!"
 
 
" We don't have time--"
 
" We don't have time--"
 
 
" We mustn't let them turn back towards our own lines! And they might pursue us and strike from the back when we attack the Lux! We will destroy them here and now!"
 
" We mustn't let them turn back towards our own lines! And they might pursue us and strike from the back when we attack the Lux! We will destroy them here and now!"
   
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''Scheisse! Not like we have many options now, ''- Theodore thought, gripping the joysticks tightly in a bid to stop his hands from shaking. It was a first for him, too - this many BETA, in such poor visibility. One couldn't even predict how effective the squadron's fire would be.
''Scheisse! Not like we have many options now, ''
 
 
Theodore thought, gripping the joysticks tightly in a bid to stop his hands from shaking. It was a first for him, too - this many BETA, in such poor visibility. One couldn't even predict how effective the squadron's fire would be.
 
   
 
In the next moments, a horde of grapplers emerged from the storm and closed in, - the distance to the first ones was already less than eight hundred metres.
 
In the next moments, a horde of grapplers emerged from the storm and closed in, - the distance to the first ones was already less than eight hundred metres.
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" Die!! Die, you monsters, diiiiiee!!!" Gretel was shouting, wildly spraying the mist, apparently relieving some of her frustration from the previous incident. She was interrupted by a warning shout from Irisdine:
 
" Die!! Die, you monsters, diiiiiee!!!" Gretel was shouting, wildly spraying the mist, apparently relieving some of her frustration from the previous incident. She was interrupted by a warning shout from Irisdine:
 
 
" Careful! There are still live ones!.."
 
" Careful! There are still live ones!.."
 
 
" ...Eh?!"
 
" ...Eh?!"
   
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"If I missed, we both would've bought it right here..."
 
"If I missed, we both would've bought it right here..."
 
 
" L-lieutenant Eberbach!.."
 
" L-lieutenant Eberbach!.."
   
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Meanwhile, the horde continued their assault, and by now there was at least a thousand already within visible range. It was clear that despite their losses, they wouldn't stop.
 
Meanwhile, the horde continued their assault, and by now there was at least a thousand already within visible range. It was clear that despite their losses, they wouldn't stop.
   
" Achtung, squadron!" Irisdine's voice came through the cannonade.
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" Achtung, squadron!" Irisdine's voice came through the cannonade. " We're stopping our diversion! Prepare for jump on our original course, NOE, arrowhead formation! And don't get your head above thirty metres! "
 
" We're stopping our diversion! Prepare for jump on our original course, NOE, arrowhead formation! And don't get your head above thirty metres! "
 
 
 
" Roger! " came the reply from all pilots.
 
" Roger! " came the reply from all pilots.
   
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"We knew, Marai."
 
"We knew, Marai."
 
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"M-major?! " Marai, startled, turned around and saw Major Hannibal Hölzer, commander of the special composite air group 'Hannibal', based in Cottbus<ref group="1A"> Note: groups (or wings – depending on the country) are usually led by a more senior-ranking officer, Colonel or even Brigadier General for bigger units; however the NVA’s equivalent (Jagdfliegergeschwader) were frequently commanded by officers holding the rank of Major or even Hauptmann (captain). </ref> . Right now three of its squadrons were in combat, along with the 666th, which ordinarily had been a unit under the direct command of Eastern HQ, in reserve until recently, then transferred to the Oder-Neisse defence line and temporarily attached to the special task force. Marai was also a pilot herself, but was temporarily serving as a staff officer on Cottbus base. She would be commanding a unit on the front lines right now, but her MiG-21's maintenance was falling behind schedule, and she had to switch to staff functions.
 
"M-major?! " Marai, startled, turned around and saw Major Hannibal Hölzer, commander of the special composite air group 'Hannibal', based in Cottbus<ref group="1A"> Note: groups (or wings – depending on the country) are usually led by a more senior-ranking officer, Colonel or even Brigadier General for bigger units; however the NVA’s equivalent (Jagdfliegergeschwader) were frequently commanded by officers holding the rank of Major or even Hauptmann (captain). </ref> . Right now three of its squadrons were in combat, along with the 666th, which ordinarily had been a unit under the direct command of Eastern HQ, in reserve until recently, then transferred to the Oder-Neisse defence line and temporarily attached to the special task force. Marai was also a pilot herself, but was temporarily serving as a staff officer on Cottbus base. She would be commanding a unit on the front lines right now, but her MiG-21's maintenance was falling behind schedule, and she had to switch to staff functions.
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" And what do you yourself think of this situation, Marai?"- he asked, raising his voice, but keeping a soft, paternal tone. Clearly, through this conversation with her, Hannibal was trying to show the rest of the staff decision-making at the tactical level, since most officers present had little experience.
 
" And what do you yourself think of this situation, Marai?"- he asked, raising his voice, but keeping a soft, paternal tone. Clearly, through this conversation with her, Hannibal was trying to show the rest of the staff decision-making at the tactical level, since most officers present had little experience.
   
" Sir. The success of the Laserjagd will depend on their location," - she answered without hesitation, silently thanking Hannibal for an opportunity to save face.
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" Sir. The success of the Laserjagd will depend on their location," - she answered without hesitation, silently thanking Hannibal for an opportunity to save face. - At this point the situation on the Neisse river line is critical. Mechanised infantry are bearing the heaviest losses.
 
"At this point the situation on the Neisse river line is critical. Mechanised infantry are bearing the heaviest losses."
 
   
 
On the projected map were clearly visible the outlines of the three main fortified sectors - Cottbus, Spremberg and Boxberg, covering an area approximately 60 kilometres from north to south, 15 kilometres deep. Practically speaking, the fortified line had been erected between the Neisse river, former border with Poland, and the Spree, 20-30 kilometres to the west. The line ran along the entire border of the country, and was meant to be its shield against the BETA threat.
 
On the projected map were clearly visible the outlines of the three main fortified sectors - Cottbus, Spremberg and Boxberg, covering an area approximately 60 kilometres from north to south, 15 kilometres deep. Practically speaking, the fortified line had been erected between the Neisse river, former border with Poland, and the Spree, 20-30 kilometres to the west. The line ran along the entire border of the country, and was meant to be its shield against the BETA threat.
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"Of course, even now we're already losing two squadrons..."
 
"Of course, even now we're already losing two squadrons..."
 
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Marai could only pray for a successful hunt - otherwise, the only result of this accumulation of casualties would be a complete defeat.
 
Marai could only pray for a successful hunt - otherwise, the only result of this accumulation of casualties would be a complete defeat.
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In the raging snowstorm, the eight MiGs of "Schwarzesmarken" were finding their way through gaps between the BETA, flying at only five metres above ground - one false move, and they would be ploughing those snowy fields. Their engines were blasting up massive plumes of snow and dirt behind the machines. Their cockpits were filled with the shrill TAWS alarm <ref group="1A"> Terrain Avoidance Warning System - generic term for any system that warns pilots of dangerous proximity of terrain. Also known as Bitching Betty. </ref> , - a result of them having to disable the auto balancing system, as it would be too sensitive for this kind of flight.
 
In the raging snowstorm, the eight MiGs of "Schwarzesmarken" were finding their way through gaps between the BETA, flying at only five metres above ground - one false move, and they would be ploughing those snowy fields. Their engines were blasting up massive plumes of snow and dirt behind the machines. Their cockpits were filled with the shrill TAWS alarm <ref group="1A"> Terrain Avoidance Warning System - generic term for any system that warns pilots of dangerous proximity of terrain. Also known as Bitching Betty. </ref> , - a result of them having to disable the auto balancing system, as it would be too sensitive for this kind of flight.
 
''...Being a target for the lasers kinda seems easier...''
 
   
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" ...Being a target for the lasers kinda seems easier... "
Making an effort not to curse into the open comm channel, Theodore saw bright dots on the radar - a group of grapplers, only eight hundred metres in front. He pulled hard on a control stick, maneuvering just in time, managed to swerve and avoid losing speed.
 
   
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Making an effort not to curse into the open comm channel, Theodore saw bright dots on the radar - a group of grapplers, only eight hundred metres in front. He pulled hard on a control stick, manoeuvring just in time, managed to swerve and avoid losing speed.
''Scheisse, will you ever end?!..''
 
   
  +
"Scheisse, will you ever end?!.."
Another group in front of him - this time, in much closer formation. He was coming in fast, and a crash seemed an all too real possibility, - he yanked the joysticks towards himself, swooping up to perform an extreme breaking maneuver over the heads of the BETA, - all in less than 2.35 seconds, which was the maximum time he could stay up before being hit by lasers.
 
   
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Another group in front of him - this time, in much closer formation. He was coming in fast, and a crash seemed an all too real possibility, - he yanked the joysticks towards himself, swooping up to perform an extreme breaking manoeuvre over the heads of the BETA, - all in less than 2.35 seconds, which was the maximum time he could stay up before being hit by lasers.
''Goddamn it, just give us the new MiG-23s already, or some of the western kites!''
 
  +
  +
"Goddamn it, just give us the new MiG-23s already, or some of the western kites!"
   
 
His face, tense because of the G stress, had a singularly fierce expression.
 
His face, tense because of the G stress, had a singularly fierce expression.
   
''The 21's not made for these bloody acrobatics!!''
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"The 21's not made for these bloody acrobatics!!"
   
 
Breaking formation now, among the BETA, would have meant certain death, - after all, in this situation the other machines wouldn't waste time saving their wingman. Theodore himself had to abandon more than a few hapless pilots who made the mistake of getting separated. However, it could have been even worse. If the diversion hadn't worked, they wouldn't even have a gap to squeeze into.
 
Breaking formation now, among the BETA, would have meant certain death, - after all, in this situation the other machines wouldn't waste time saving their wingman. Theodore himself had to abandon more than a few hapless pilots who made the mistake of getting separated. However, it could have been even worse. If the diversion hadn't worked, they wouldn't even have a gap to squeeze into.
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" Negative, sir! Just got rid of a few buggers in my way! Did not forget, sir!" fiercely replied second lieutenant Annette Hosenfeld, piloting the last machine of the rear-guard. Her short hair shook a little with every burst she fired. " I said move, you filthy octopus!!"
 
" Negative, sir! Just got rid of a few buggers in my way! Did not forget, sir!" fiercely replied second lieutenant Annette Hosenfeld, piloting the last machine of the rear-guard. Her short hair shook a little with every burst she fired. " I said move, you filthy octopus!!"
   
''That idiot... how dumb d'you have to be to ignore Walter's orders...''
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"That idiot... how dumb d'you have to be to ignore Walter's orders..."
   
 
Annette continued firing on all grapplers in sight. Several muzzle flashes later, her MiG-21, thrusters at full, swept above the gory mess left of the grapplers she was attacking. Perfect control and flawless execution of the attack, - but if one looked at the bigger picture, it became clear that even without being delayed by such reckless actions, getting through the BETA was not easy.
 
Annette continued firing on all grapplers in sight. Several muzzle flashes later, her MiG-21, thrusters at full, swept above the gory mess left of the grapplers she was attacking. Perfect control and flawless execution of the attack, - but if one looked at the bigger picture, it became clear that even without being delayed by such reckless actions, getting through the BETA was not easy.
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This time almost no one laughed, but it was a fact that this short exchange did relieve some of the tension after the incident with Annette.
 
This time almost no one laughed, but it was a fact that this short exchange did relieve some of the tension after the incident with Annette.
 
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" Canister shot, two volleys! Feuer!!" finally came the captain's order.
 
" Canister shot, two volleys! Feuer!!" finally came the captain's order.
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" Schwarz one to four and eight! Secure sector 05-8!"
 
" Schwarz one to four and eight! Secure sector 05-8!"
 
 
" Roger!! I'm going in, eight!"
 
" Roger!! I'm going in, eight!"
   
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This time it was Theodore and Gretel's turn to make a fast jump towards their target. In their sector were a dozen grapplers and fifty tank-class BETA, the latter already being chewed up by covering fire from the rear-guard unit, - but the grapplers, noticing the threat, began to move in.
 
This time it was Theodore and Gretel's turn to make a fast jump towards their target. In their sector were a dozen grapplers and fifty tank-class BETA, the latter already being chewed up by covering fire from the rear-guard unit, - but the grapplers, noticing the threat, began to move in.
   
''Hah, as if we'd stop here!..''
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"Hah, as if we'd stop here!.."
   
Theodore, giving several bursts from his rifle, almost without aiming, rushed onwards. Annihilation of the BETA was secondary to securing the marked coordinates, so they paid no heed to the enemy, and not a minute later, they landed at their designated point, crushing some grappler corpses under their iron boots.
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Theodore, giving several bursts from his rifle, almost without aiming, rushed onwards. Annihilation the BETA was secondary to securing the marked coordinates, so they paid no heed to the enemy, and not a minute later, they landed at their designated point, crushing some grappler corpses under their iron boots.
   
 
" Four and eight, you got incoming at three o'clock! Vorsicht!"
 
" Four and eight, you got incoming at three o'clock! Vorsicht!"
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" L-lieutenant Eberbach?!"
 
" L-lieutenant Eberbach?!"
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"Please stay back! I will stop them! "Theodore quickly cut her before she could say anything. He normally found having to address her politely very annoying, but in this situation it was the last thing on his mind. - Support fire, lieutenant!..
 
"Please stay back! I will stop them! "Theodore quickly cut her before she could say anything. He normally found having to address her politely very annoying, but in this situation it was the last thing on his mind.
 
 
"Support fire, lieutenant!.."
 
   
 
" Roger!!"
 
" Roger!!"
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" Bastard!!.."
 
" Bastard!!.."
 
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He glanced at the system monitors - it looked like the pressure on the left elbow joint had spiked beyond critical. Not even waiting for the machine to recover from the blast, he changed his posture, anticipating the movements of the grappler, whose left arm was still functional. In the next moment, with another triumphant cry, he dashed forward, slicing clean through the beast's other joint - his blade rent the membranous skin, and the beast's arm was cut off, flailing feebly.
 
He glanced at the system monitors - it looked like the pressure on the left elbow joint had spiked beyond critical. Not even waiting for the machine to recover from the blast, he changed his posture, anticipating the movements of the grappler, whose left arm was still functional. In the next moment, with another triumphant cry, he dashed forward, slicing clean through the beast's other joint - his blade rent the membranous skin, and the beast's arm was cut off, flailing feebly.
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He glanced at his shield, scorched by the explosions of the blocks of reactive armour, and frowned. It wouldn’t be able to save him from the laser anymore.
 
He glanced at his shield, scorched by the explosions of the blocks of reactive armour, and frowned. It wouldn’t be able to save him from the laser anymore.
   
" Schwarz one to four and eight! Move to 05-0!" he heard Irisdine’s urgent voice in his headset.
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" Schwarz one to four and eight! Move to 05-0!" he heard Irisdine’s urgent voice in his headset. " Visual on Lux, repeat, visual on main target! Me and Walter are going to draw other BETA from them! Make it fast you two!!"
 
" Visual on Lux, repeat, visual on main target! Me and Walter are going to draw other BETA from them! Make it fast you two!!"
 
   
 
''Finally! We got them… ''
 
''Finally! We got them… ''
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" Rear-guard! Cover four and eight!"
 
" Rear-guard! Cover four and eight!"
 
 
" Roger that!"
 
" Roger that!"
   
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" Roger!! Comrade lieutenant, I’m going in! We’ll use the grapplers on our eight as a shield, and give a volley of canister shot!"
 
" Roger!! Comrade lieutenant, I’m going in! We’ll use the grapplers on our eight as a shield, and give a volley of canister shot!"
 
 
"Roger!"
 
"Roger!"
   
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The thought that at this point Annette was accumulating a lot of fatigue and stress didn’t leave her mind. The time granted to her was clearly coming to an end, and soon she would be sent back to the base to recover her mental stability. Cases of shellshock were common on this terrible field of battle. What awaited those whose mind broke was a stay in a special military hospital – which, in this country, was little different from a labour camp, where they would meet their end as a human being. The current administration of the DDR did not even want to admit the existence of soldiers whose spirit was broken.
 
The thought that at this point Annette was accumulating a lot of fatigue and stress didn’t leave her mind. The time granted to her was clearly coming to an end, and soon she would be sent back to the base to recover her mental stability. Cases of shellshock were common on this terrible field of battle. What awaited those whose mind broke was a stay in a special military hospital – which, in this country, was little different from a labour camp, where they would meet their end as a human being. The current administration of the DDR did not even want to admit the existence of soldiers whose spirit was broken.
 
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''But then if this war ends, and she survives, maybe there’ll be time for her to recover… so I have to keep trying, for her sake!.. ''
 
''But then if this war ends, and she survives, maybe there’ll be time for her to recover… so I have to keep trying, for her sake!.. ''
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◊◊◊
 
◊◊◊
   
"Destroyer-class?! " Theodore whispered, looking at the same graph as Inghild, as if unwilling to believe his own eyes,
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"Destroyer-class?! "Theodore whispered, looking at the same graph as Inghild, as if unwilling to believe his own eyes, - We’re in the bloody middle of the BETA herd!
 
''We’re in the bloody middle of the BETA herd!''
 
   
 
" No mistake, this is their signature!" shouted Inghild " Around seventy units, distance 2500, speed… over a hundred and fifty kilometres an hour?! In visual range in less than sixty seconds! Proceeding in close formation!"
 
" No mistake, this is their signature!" shouted Inghild " Around seventy units, distance 2500, speed… over a hundred and fifty kilometres an hour?! In visual range in less than sixty seconds! Proceeding in close formation!"
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" Then what, are you planning to meet them here?! Impossible!.."
 
" Then what, are you planning to meet them here?! Impossible!.."
   
" Listen up, squadron! Fire by rank, switch your 120mm to sabot or squash head <ref group="1A"> She’s referring to: APFSDS - Armour-Piercing Fin-Stabilized Discarding Sabot rounds, modern AP shells that use kinetic energy to penetrate the target’s armour, with the penetrator being made of dense materials, such as tungsten or depleted uranium alloys; and HESH - High explosive squash head shells, designed to “squash” a layer of plastic explosive on the armour and detonate it, transmitting the shock wave through the layer of armour (or concrete) instead of penetrating it. Effective against fortifications and older tank armour (non-composite).</ref> ammo!" she ordered, ignoring Gretel completely.
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" Listen up, squadron! Fire by rank, switch your 120mm to sabot or squash head <ref group="1A"> She’s referring to: APFSDS - Armour-Piercing Fin-Stabilized Discarding Sabot rounds, modern AP shells that use kinetic energy to penetrate the target’s armour, with the penetrator being made of dense materials, such as tungsten or depleted uranium alloys; and HESH - High explosive squash head shells, designed to “squash” a layer of plastic explosive on the armour and detonate it, transmitting the shock wave through the layer of armour (or concrete) instead of penetrating it. Effective against fortifications and older tank armour (non-composite).
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</ref> ammo!" she ordered, ignoring Gretel completely.
 
 
She was the first ready her assault gun, and Theodore followed reflexively, all the while staring angrily at the commander’s face in the comm window.
 
She was the first ready her assault gun, and Theodore followed reflexively, all the while staring angrily at the commander’s face in the comm window.
   
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" All units, fire on my command. Aim at the legs of the leading destroyers!"
 
" All units, fire on my command. Aim at the legs of the leading destroyers!"
   
  +
" Roger!" – Theodore shouted in reply, feeling despair encroach upon his soul. It might have been the same for the others, too.
" Roger!"
 
  +
" Then, on my order, we will begin the breakthrough manoeuvre. Do not, I repeat, do not break your element<ref group="1A"> To remind you – an element is the smallest unit of TSFs, two machines. </ref> ! If we stop them, they’re not a threat anymore!"
 
Theodore shouted in reply, feeling despair encroach upon his soul. It might have been the same for the others, too.
 
 
" Then, on my order, we will begin the breakthrough maneuver. Do not, I repeat, do not break your element<ref group="1A"> To remind you – an element is the smallest unit of TSFs, two machines. </ref> ! If we stop them, they’re not a threat anymore!"
 
   
 
The trembling of the ground was becoming more and more noticeable, and their TSFs shook.
 
The trembling of the ground was becoming more and more noticeable, and their TSFs shook.
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" Roger!! Moving out!"
 
" Roger!! Moving out!"
   
" Hurensöhne!!!"
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" Hurensöhne!!!}
   
" Raaaaaahhh!!!"
+
- Raaaaaahhh!!!
   
 
Stirred up by the battle cries of his comrades, Theodore charged. In front of them sluggishly moved the devastated destroyer herd, and the eight machines used horizontal boosts to quickly reach and penetrate the group, rushing through this small gap in the enemy before it closed.
 
Stirred up by the battle cries of his comrades, Theodore charged. In front of them sluggishly moved the devastated destroyer herd, and the eight machines used horizontal boosts to quickly reach and penetrate the group, rushing through this small gap in the enemy before it closed.
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However, he didn’t have long to appreciate the strangeness of the situation. As soon as they passed the first rows of destroyer bodies, several dozen of the herd began trying to resume their attack, with one group intent on blocking their breakthrough route.
 
However, he didn’t have long to appreciate the strangeness of the situation. As soon as they passed the first rows of destroyer bodies, several dozen of the herd began trying to resume their attack, with one group intent on blocking their breakthrough route.
 
 
''Damn, they recover fast!.. ''
 
''Damn, they recover fast!.. ''
   
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Theodore looked around to confirm the position of the captain’s machine – and almost gasped in surprise. Her element stayed in the rear, evidently setting up a firing position.
 
Theodore looked around to confirm the position of the captain’s machine – and almost gasped in surprise. Her element stayed in the rear, evidently setting up a firing position.
   
" Me and Walter will deal with the ones coming from three o’clock – you get all the speed you can from those engines and get to the Lux!"
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" Me and Walter will deal with the ones coming from three o’clock – you get all the speed you can form those engines and get to the Lux!"
   
 
''Her, in the rear guard? The commander?!.. ''
 
''Her, in the rear guard? The commander?!.. ''
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It wouldn’t do to lose Irisdine here, as she was the force that kept the squadron together, - no matter how much he may have disliked her, it was only true. But if they managed to destroy their target now, they might be able to escape this hell sooner…
 
It wouldn’t do to lose Irisdine here, as she was the force that kept the squadron together, - no matter how much he may have disliked her, it was only true. But if they managed to destroy their target now, they might be able to escape this hell sooner…
 
 
Meanwhile, the squadron’s machines made their way through the destroyer corpses.
 
Meanwhile, the squadron’s machines made their way through the destroyer corpses.
   
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Gretel was sounding more and more unpleasant, and Pham kept quiet. However, several seconds later, the political officer muttered:
 
Gretel was sounding more and more unpleasant, and Pham kept quiet. However, several seconds later, the political officer muttered:
 
 
" However, it is true that comrade captain is vital to this squadron’s combat effectiveness…"
 
" However, it is true that comrade captain is vital to this squadron’s combat effectiveness…"
   
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''Dammit, they still haven’t finished?! We’ll get wiped out at this rate!.. ''
 
''Dammit, they still haven’t finished?! We’ll get wiped out at this rate!.. ''
   
From the corner of his eye he could see Annette’s machine, now without assault rifle or even shield, holding her sword with both hands and hacking away, while Inghild still covered her partner – her own ammo count must have been low as well, since she was giving very economical, precise bursts. The BETA were pressing them, but Inghild cleverly used it to her advantage, not letting them get close with a combination of quick maneuvers and short bursts of fire. He didn’t think it was his job to support them – after all, they wasted ammo themselves, and if he went in, he’d probably end up spending the little he had left.
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From the corner of his eye he could see Annette’s machine, now without assault rifle or even shield, holding her sword with both hands and hacking away, while Inghild still covered her partner – her own ammo count must have been low as well, since she was giving very economical, precise bursts. The BETA were pressing them, but Inghild cleverly used it to her advantage, not letting them get close with a combination of quick manoeuvres and short bursts of fire. He didn’t think it was his job to support them – after all, they wasted ammo themselves, and if he went in, he’d probably end up spending the little he had left.
   
 
Checking the time again, he realised they had three minutes left, and scowled.
 
Checking the time again, he realised they had three minutes left, and scowled.
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" Roger that!!"
 
" Roger that!!"
   
''It’s finally over…'' Theodore felt a wave of relief wash over him.
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''It’s finally over…'' Theodore felt a wave of relief wash over him. ''If we can just withdraw safely now, I’ll survive this!.. ''
 
''If we can just withdraw safely now, I’ll survive this!.. ''
 
   
 
Trying not to let it show on his face, he pushed the pedal, firing up his jump engines. Now that the laser-class were no longer a threat, simply flying away was a safe option. He turned his attention to the BETA, gathered around them, and—
 
Trying not to let it show on his face, he pushed the pedal, firing up his jump engines. Now that the laser-class were no longer a threat, simply flying away was a safe option. He turned his attention to the BETA, gathered around them, and—
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" Inghi-i-i-ild!!!"
 
" Inghi-i-i-ild!!!"
   
" Hurensohn!! "– Theodore roared together with Annette, reflexively igniting the jump boosters.
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" Hurensohn!! "– Theodore roared together with Annette, reflexively igniting the jump boosters.
 
 
"Dummer Arsch, I told you..!"
 
"Dummer Arsch, I told you..!"
 
 
Evading the tank-class underfoot, he turned towards Inghild’s machine, now lying on the snow. There were now several dozen grapplers in that area. Her comm window was closed, and read “connection failed”.
 
Evading the tank-class underfoot, he turned towards Inghild’s machine, now lying on the snow. There were now several dozen grapplers in that area. Her comm window was closed, and read “connection failed”.
   
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Inghild was stretched on her seat in the dark cockpit. Her limbs were partly crushed, twisted in the wrong direction, bent at impossible angles. Even the pilot suit was broken, and the damage was particularly severe in the cranial area. Her face was unrecognisable, pulverised from the nose up, and bloody froth was on her lips. Her hair was also bloody – sure sign of a crushed skull… not a picture one could bear to look at for long.
 
Inghild was stretched on her seat in the dark cockpit. Her limbs were partly crushed, twisted in the wrong direction, bent at impossible angles. Even the pilot suit was broken, and the damage was particularly severe in the cranial area. Her face was unrecognisable, pulverised from the nose up, and bloody froth was on her lips. Her hair was also bloody – sure sign of a crushed skull… not a picture one could bear to look at for long.
   
''That’s what happens when you get hit by grapplers god knows how many times…''
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“That’s what happens when you get hit by grapplers god knows how many times…” Theodore though, strangely sober. Despite this gruesome sight, he didn’t feel anything – no, rather, he couldn't.
 
Theodore though, strangely sober. Despite this gruesome sight, he didn’t feel anything – no, rather, he couldn't.
 
   
 
Ingild’s face, or what was left of it, twisted in a spasm. Every time she took a breath, pink froth bubbled up. Pham took a moment to catch her breath, and gathered her resolve, stepping towards her to ascertain her condition. After a slight pause, she shook her head gently.
 
Ingild’s face, or what was left of it, twisted in a spasm. Every time she took a breath, pink froth bubbled up. Pham took a moment to catch her breath, and gathered her resolve, stepping towards her to ascertain her condition. After a slight pause, she shook her head gently.
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"…I see. Understood, " - Irisdine nodded, bent over Inghild and whispered something in her ear. Then straightened up, took the commander’s pistol from its holster, and pointed it at Inghild’s forehead.
 
"…I see. Understood, " - Irisdine nodded, bent over Inghild and whispered something in her ear. Then straightened up, took the commander’s pistol from its holster, and pointed it at Inghild’s forehead.
   
" All units, attention, " - her voice was clear, without a hint of emotion.
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" All units, attention, " - her voice was clear, without a hint of emotion. – Second lieutenant Inghild Bronikowski has sustained serious injuries, and does not have long left. She will not make it to the base. Therefore, I will grant her mercy.
 
" Second lieutenant Inghild Bronikowski has sustained serious injuries, and does not have long left. She will not make it to the base. Therefore, I will grant her mercy."
 
   
 
A coup de grace – the captain would shoot her here, in order to relieve her from her suffering.
 
A coup de grace – the captain would shoot her here, in order to relieve her from her suffering.
   
"W-wait, captain!.." Annette’s voice was shaking.
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"W-wait, captain!.." Annette’s voice was shaking. " She’s alive! So... why? We can get to the base—"
 
" She’s alive! So... why? We can get to the base—"
 
   
 
" You do not want her to suffer any more than this, do you?"
 
" You do not want her to suffer any more than this, do you?"
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"Nothing can be done."
 
"Nothing can be done."
 
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" …But—"
 
" …But—"
   
" Lieutenant Hosenfeld!"
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- Lieutenant Hosenfeld!
   
 
" …Yes…"
 
" …Yes…"
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" You’re being a bother. She died quickly. I guess something good came out of her dying pointlessly after all" Sylvia finished coolly. A wave of silver hair framed her noble face that was smeared with something that looked like oil or tar. She looked very worn out by the battle.
 
" You’re being a bother. She died quickly. I guess something good came out of her dying pointlessly after all" Sylvia finished coolly. A wave of silver hair framed her noble face that was smeared with something that looked like oil or tar. She looked very worn out by the battle.
   
" Wha… what did you say?!" Annette’s voice was rising, shaking again
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" Wha… what did you say?!" Annette’s voice was rising, shaking again " How was it – she was protecting me!.."
 
" How was it – she was protecting me!.."
 
   
 
" That is exactly what I meant, pointless. We’d rather do without you."
 
" That is exactly what I meant, pointless. We’d rather do without you."
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"The source is in the former town of Krosno Odrzańskie… I suppose the BETA could’ve reached there. But it’s too far from the UN deployment positions. Could it be one of the retreating TSF squadrons? "
 
"The source is in the former town of Krosno Odrzańskie… I suppose the BETA could’ve reached there. But it’s too far from the UN deployment positions. Could it be one of the retreating TSF squadrons? "
   
" Impossible. We got a confirmation that all units participating in the Laserjagd have crossed the Neisse line" - said Hannibal sharply, turning away from the projector.
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" Impossible. We got a confirmation that all units participating in the Laserjagd have crossed the Neisse line, - said Hannibal sharply, turning away from the projector."
   
 
Though the UN and NVA troops were fighting on the same battlefield, for counter-intelligence purposes they did not fully share information, - this was the reason why Hannibal and the others could only wonder what kind of unit was sending a distress signal, and the projector showed nothing except their coordinates. Moreover, the signal was also distorted by the heavy metal clouds, blown away from the main battlefield. There was, in other words, no way to confirm what was happening except direct observation.
 
Though the UN and NVA troops were fighting on the same battlefield, for counter-intelligence purposes they did not fully share information, - this was the reason why Hannibal and the others could only wonder what kind of unit was sending a distress signal, and the projector showed nothing except their coordinates. Moreover, the signal was also distorted by the heavy metal clouds, blown away from the main battlefield. There was, in other words, no way to confirm what was happening except direct observation.
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"What do you think, Marai?"
 
"What do you think, Marai?"
   
" Sir. Could be a squadron that was engaged in mopping up operations on the Oder" - Marai nodded to the operator, and the projector switched to an image of the former Polish border on the Oder.
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" Sir. Could be a squadron that was engaged in mopping up operations on the Oder, - Marai nodded to the operator, and the projector switched to an image of the former Polish border on the Oder. - When the attack stopped, each army moved a TSF wing to the former border, to confirm that the area was clear and to finish off the stragglers."
 
"When the attack stopped, each army moved a TSF wing to the former border, to confirm that the area was clear and to finish off the stragglers."
 
   
 
An area approximately 70 kilometres wide east of the defensive lines practically became the no man’s land in this war. To observe and control it, the NVA, whose ground troops were tied to the defensive lines themselves, deployed the TSFs.
 
An area approximately 70 kilometres wide east of the defensive lines practically became the no man’s land in this war. To observe and control it, the NVA, whose ground troops were tied to the defensive lines themselves, deployed the TSFs.
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Hannibal was thinking for a few moments, when a voice behind his back said:
 
Hannibal was thinking for a few moments, when a voice behind his back said:
   
"They should be saved, major… This is a unique opportunity to put the UN in our debt. The Party would surely approve."
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- They should be saved, major… This is a unique opportunity to put the UN in our debt. The Party would surely approve.
 
 
This quiet voice, previously silent, brought a hush over the control room. Normally, the political officer had no authority to intervene in tactical matters… Marai looked at Hannibal’s stern profile.
 
This quiet voice, previously silent, brought a hush over the control room. Normally, the political officer had no authority to intervene in tactical matters… Marai looked at Hannibal’s stern profile.
   
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" Lieutenant Lan! Don’t forget your place!" Gretel shouted, cutting her short. " We’re talking about rescuing a UN troop! There needs to be someone of status on our side, not a second-generation immigrant, lieutenant!"
 
" Lieutenant Lan! Don’t forget your place!" Gretel shouted, cutting her short. " We’re talking about rescuing a UN troop! There needs to be someone of status on our side, not a second-generation immigrant, lieutenant!"
   
Her words were practically dripping with disdain for any and all who immigrated to Germany<ref group="1A"> This is either another historical fallacy, or just Gretel being a bitch and acting out her family name (see translator notes). This would go against the doctrine of internationalism, and would be characterised as social chauvinism, unacceptable in the real-world DDR and all Eastern Bloc countries.</ref>.
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Her words were practically dripping with disdain for any and all who immigrated to Germany<ref group="1A"> This is either another historical fallacy, or just Gretel being a bitch and acting out her family name (see translator notes). This would go against the doctrine of internationalism, and would be characterised as social chauvinism, unacceptable in the real-world DDR and all Eastern Bloc countries.
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</ref>.
 
" …Don’t worry, I’ll be careful" Irisdine smiled.
 
 
" There are no laser-class left, I’ll be able to simply fly over the BETA."
 
   
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" …Don’t worry, I’ll be careful" Irisdine smiled. " There are no laser-class left, I’ll be able to simply fly over the BETA."
 
" …Yes, ma’am, but…" Pham didn’t sound too convinced.
 
" …Yes, ma’am, but…" Pham didn’t sound too convinced.
   
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" You didn’t hear me, lieutenant?" Irisdine said sternly. " Get that ammo, now. We’ll depart as soon as we have it. Schnell!"
 
" You didn’t hear me, lieutenant?" Irisdine said sternly. " Get that ammo, now. We’ll depart as soon as we have it. Schnell!"
 
 
Theodore, at a loss for words for an instant, managed to squeeze out a half-hearted acknowledgment.
 
Theodore, at a loss for words for an instant, managed to squeeze out a half-hearted acknowledgment.
   
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He pushed the control pedals, increasing the speed of his machine. Below him were once again the shimmering fields of slaughter around the fortifications, covered with human and BETA bodies. Ten minutes of flight remained until their destination.
 
He pushed the control pedals, increasing the speed of his machine. Below him were once again the shimmering fields of slaughter around the fortifications, covered with human and BETA bodies. Ten minutes of flight remained until their destination.
   
''Why me?!.. She’d normally take old Walter for this kind of stuff!..''
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“Why me?!.. She’d normally take old Walter for this kind of stuff!..
   
 
Restraining a growl of anger and protest, he glared forward, at Irisdine’s MiG. His heart raced, and for a reason unknown to him he kept on thinking this way, as if something pushed him towards the edge.
 
Restraining a growl of anger and protest, he glared forward, at Irisdine’s MiG. His heart raced, and for a reason unknown to him he kept on thinking this way, as if something pushed him towards the edge.
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" Me? Childish?!"
 
" Me? Childish?!"
   
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" Yes. You behave like a spoiled brat." Her face and tone were colder than the weather outside, and each of her words stung like an icy dart <ref group="1A"> Note that she uses “kisama” for the duration of this entire passage – to remind you, a derogatory manner of addressing others, but is perfectly appropriate for military subordinates – however, it adds a lot of strength to her lines, and serves to create contrast later. As there is no equivalent in English, I can only use this rather circumlocutory way to express it, and leave the rest to your imagination. </ref>. " Why didn’t you back up Annette during the previous operation? You understood the state she was in. Walter should’ve warned you to watch her, as well."
" Yes. You behave like a spoiled brat."
 
 
Her face and tone were colder than the weather outside, and each of her words stung like an icy dart <ref group="1A"> Note that she uses “kisama” for the duration of this entire passage – to remind you, a derogatory manner of addressing others, but is perfectly appropriate for military subordinates – however, it adds a lot of strength to her lines, and serves to create contrast later. As there is no equivalent in English, I can only use this rather circumlocutory way to express it, and leave the rest to your imagination. </ref>.
 
 
" Why didn’t you back up Annette during the previous operation? You understood the state she was in. Walter should’ve warned you to watch her, as well."
 
 
[[Image:MuvSch v1 ch1-12.png|250px|thumb]]
 
   
 
" …I realise my responsibility."
 
" …I realise my responsibility."
   
'' …and it doesn’t include looking after others'' – he left that part unspoken. He didn’t care what Irisdine thought about it. She, however, turned her piercing gaze towards him, as if finding something she couldn’t allow, and said sternly:
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''…and it doesn’t include looking after others'' – he left that part unspoken. He didn’t care what Irisdine thought about it. She, however, turned her piercing gaze towards him, as if finding something she couldn’t allow, and said sternly:
   
 
" Be honest. You thought it was not necessary to help a pilot affected by shellshock. Or – perhaps you even kept your distance, just in case? Is that it?"
 
" Be honest. You thought it was not necessary to help a pilot affected by shellshock. Or – perhaps you even kept your distance, just in case? Is that it?"
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''Not worthy of calling yourself an Eishi'' – these words were something Theodore couldn’t bear hearing from traitorous scum like her. He lost his composure, and didn’t even hear the rest of what she said.
 
''Not worthy of calling yourself an Eishi'' – these words were something Theodore couldn’t bear hearing from traitorous scum like her. He lost his composure, and didn’t even hear the rest of what she said.
   
"Not worthy..?! "– his voice was rising, shaking with anger.
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"Not worthy..?! "– his voice was rising, shaking with anger. – And you..! You call yourself worthy, then?!
 
"And you..! You call yourself worthy, then?!"
 
   
 
Those words that drew out his guilty conscience were the spark that ignited all of the fury boiling up in his heart, and his rage finally spilled over.
 
Those words that drew out his guilty conscience were the spark that ignited all of the fury boiling up in his heart, and his rage finally spilled over.
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"Yeah! I didn’t care about what’d happen to Annette, big fucking deal! And you’re trying to pin Inghild’s death on me?!"
 
"Yeah! I didn’t care about what’d happen to Annette, big fucking deal! And you’re trying to pin Inghild’s death on me?!"
 
 
Irisdine was still silent.
 
Irisdine was still silent.
   
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''Just like Irisdine predicted!.. ''
 
''Just like Irisdine predicted!.. ''
   
The TSFs were still not in sight, but their presence in the city was a certainty, since the combat was taking place there. They could search the area from the air, but since this was BETA-controlled territory, there was still a risk of exposure to a surviving laser-class, which made any aerial maneuvers reckless.
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The TSFs were still not in sight, but their presence in the city was a certainty, since the combat was taking place there. They could search the area from the air, but since this was BETA-controlled territory, there was still a risk of exposure to a surviving laser-class, which made any aerial manoeuvres reckless.
   
 
" We split, and search the area! You take the east, I’ll go west. When you find them, report!"
 
" We split, and search the area! You take the east, I’ll go west. When you find them, report!"
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He got out himself, and standing on the palm of the right hand of his MiG, approached the Phantom’s chest console, inputted the standardised emergency unlocking sequence, and the hatch opened. Several seconds later, the control unit slid forward with a heavy metallic sound.
 
He got out himself, and standing on the palm of the right hand of his MiG, approached the Phantom’s chest console, inputted the standardised emergency unlocking sequence, and the hatch opened. Several seconds later, the control unit slid forward with a heavy metallic sound.
 
[[Image:MuvSch v1 ch1-13.png|250px|thumb]]
 
   
 
Theodore’s heart was pounding, - the grim picture from less than an hour before was still too fresh in his mind.
 
Theodore’s heart was pounding, - the grim picture from less than an hour before was still too fresh in his mind.

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