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I pushed open the thick, acoustic door. On the other side of the door laid... the forbidden garden.
 
I pushed open the thick, acoustic door. On the other side of the door laid... the forbidden garden.
   
The first person I saw was Haruka. That's alright, since she was the one who called me over. I would be in trouble if I hadn't seen her.
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The first person I saw was Haruka. That's alright, since she was the one who called me over. I would be in trouble if I hadn't saw her.
   
 
But...Why were there so many girls around Haruka?
 
But...Why were there so many girls around Haruka?
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"Let's go!"
 
"Let's go!"
   
"Ah, yes."
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"Ah, yes"
   
 
Upon hearing my suggestion, Haruka smiled shyly as her dress fluttered slightly in the wind. That simple action made everyone around her sigh in amazement, because it was.......really really really really really really cute.
 
Upon hearing my suggestion, Haruka smiled shyly as her dress fluttered slightly in the wind. That simple action made everyone around her sigh in amazement, because it was.......really really really really really really cute.
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In response to my question, Haruka squinted playfully at me.
 
In response to my question, Haruka squinted playfully at me.
   
"If we buy it at the beginning of the day, it would mean that our shopping trip has ended. Though it's something that I'm looking forward to... it'll be such a waste to just let it end so quickly. And also..."
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"If we buy it at the beginning of the day, it would mean that our shopping trip has ended. Though it's something that I'm looking forward too... it'll be such a waste to just let it end so quickly. And also..."
   
 
"And also?"
 
"And also?"
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"It's....so tiring..."
 
"It's....so tiring..."
   
I really carried Haruka in my arms while running. Though Haruka wasn't heavy (on the contrary, she was as light as a feather), since the club that I joined in school was the 'go-home club', it was still extremely tiring for the me who never exercises. God, I'm getting older now...Perhaps it's time to consider whether to buy the products from the fourth store. The kind of products that I'm talking about are the products that foreigners advertise to the people in front of the televisions in the wee hours of the morning, products like weird-looking all-enabling indoor track machines - "Hey! Nancy! I have something really nice to give you today!" "Wow! Bill, what's that?" That kind of product. This product can be paid for in installments, only 12800 Yen including taxes...ah, that's just my impression of such advertisements!
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I really carried Haruka in my arms while running. Though Haruka wasn't heavy, on the contrary, she was as light as a feather, as the club that I joined in school was the 'go-home club', it was still extremely tiring for the me who never exercises. God, I'm getting older now...Perhaps it's time to consider whether to buy the products from the fourth store. The kind of products that I'm talking about are the products that foreigners advertise to the people in front of the televisions in the wee hours of the morning, products like weird-looking all-enabling indoor track machines - "Hey! Nancy! I have something really nice to give you today!" "Wow! Bill, what's that?" That kind of product. This product can be paid for in installments, only 12800 Yen including taxes...ah, that's just my impression of such advertisements!
   
 
"Hey, oh!"
 
"Hey, oh!"
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"This is my first time drinking canned red tea."
 
"This is my first time drinking canned red tea."
   
...So that was why. In school, I've really never seen Haruka drinking canned or packet drinks before as she always brought her own teacup and thermos.
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...So that was why. In school, I've really never seen Haruka drinking canned or packet drinks before as she always brought her own teacup and water bottle.
   
 
Looking at Haruka gulping down the red tea, I also started to sip from my can of coffee. A crow that was above me kept making melancholic cries, perhaps it had seven children waiting for it to come home in the mountains!
 
Looking at Haruka gulping down the red tea, I also started to sip from my can of coffee. A crow that was above me kept making melancholic cries, perhaps it had seven children waiting for it to come home in the mountains!
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"...Please take good care of it."
 
"...Please take good care of it."
   
......To be honest, I don't know if that was a good enough answer, but at least I gave an answer.
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......To be honest, I don't know if that was a god enough answer, but at least I gave an answer.
   
 
My first shopping trip with Haruka ended like this.
 
My first shopping trip with Haruka ended like this.

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