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“Yes” – Ais, who nodded, looked around at the faces of the other witches in turn.
 
“Yes” – Ais, who nodded, looked around at the faces of the other witches in turn.
“There’s no way for all of us to rest at once, so let’s take turns.”
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“There’s no way for all of us rest at once, so let’s take turns.”
 
“Then, Ais and Nonoeru should be firs-t, then us late-r.”
 
“Then, Ais and Nonoeru should be firs-t, then us late-r.”
 
“In that case I’ll accept your offer. How about Naga-san?”
 
“In that case I’ll accept your offer. How about Naga-san?”
“Me? I…that’s right, should I also take a rest so I can be prepared when the time comes?”
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“Me? I…that’s right, should I also take a rest and so I can be prepared when the time comes?”
 
“There’s a building over there. You can lie down on a mattress inside.”
 
“There’s a building over there. You can lie down on a mattress inside.”
   
Taking along Naga and Nonoeru, Ais headed towards the house building. Meanwhile, Lela, Selena, and Kay split in order to tidy up after the battle and check the damage to the fort.
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Taking along Naga and Nonoeru, Ais headed towards the house building. Meanwhile, Lela, Selena, and Kei split in order to tidy up after the battle and check the damage to the fort.
   
Raibaha, who was preparing his troops to climb the slope, noticed screams coming from above.
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Raibaha, who was preparing his troop to climb the slope, noticed screams coming from above.
 
“What’s happened?” – As he looked up, he saw a small number of his allies tripping over themselves in an effort to escape.
 
“What’s happened?” – As he looked up, he saw a small number of his allies tripping over themselves in an effort to escape.
   
 
Raibaha, who was a commander with lots of experience, quickly drew the conclusion that the vanguard unit had taken flight after being assaulted by the witches.
 
Raibaha, who was a commander with lots of experience, quickly drew the conclusion that the vanguard unit had taken flight after being assaulted by the witches.
He didn’t know their methods, nor the reason why it happened, but he did know that now was not the time to think about it.
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He didn’t know their methods, nor the reason why it had happened, but he did know that now was not the time to think about it.
 
“It’s probably an attack from the witches. Prepare for contact with the enemy! As soon as you have covered these men’s retreat, quickly withdraw down to headquarters!”
 
“It’s probably an attack from the witches. Prepare for contact with the enemy! As soon as you have covered these men’s retreat, quickly withdraw down to headquarters!”
   
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(This way of fighting is unusual for the witches)
 
(This way of fighting is unusual for the witches)
   
Raibaha was a bit concerned and what worried him more was the disappearance of Acclaim from amongst the fleeing soldiers.
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Raibaha was a bit concerned; nevertheless, what worried him more was the disappearance of Acclaim from amongst the fleeing soldiers.
   
 
“Speaking of which, what about Acclaim?”
 
“Speaking of which, what about Acclaim?”
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Rather than being praised by the general, he would likely be held responsible for this.
 
Rather than being praised by the general, he would likely be held responsible for this.
   
(I guess, nothing good comes from getting involved with witches)
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(Guess, nothing good comes from getting involved with witches)
   
 
Sighing, Raibaha spoke towards an adjutant.
 
Sighing, Raibaha spoke towards an adjutant.
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“Oi, go back to Ein fort.”
 
“Oi, go back to Ein fort.”
   
Circling around the 3rd fort several times and confirming the absence of soldiers, Yuuki decided to fly a little distance away from the plain. As this wasn’t the first time she patrolled this vicinity, she could visualize its topography inside her head. However, it was the first time for her to fly in daylight, as before she would do it during daybreak or in the evening, when it was difficult to be spotted.
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Circling around the 3rd fort several times and confirming the absence of soldiers, Yuki decided to fly a little distance away from the plain. As this wasn’t the first time she patrolled this vicinity, she could visualize its topography inside her head. However, it was the first time for her to fly in daylight, as before she would do it during daybreak or in the evening, when it was difficult to be spotted.
 
Looking below, a reddish-brown wasteland unfolded before her. Once it was seen during daylight, the land’s topography would become much clearer.
 
Looking below, a reddish-brown wasteland unfolded before her. Once it was seen during daylight, the land’s topography would become much clearer.
 
This wasteland would continue to stretch on until the fertile lands of humans that wouldn’t be seen unless one went further. Because of that, there were no cities, not to mention villages, around. The reason why the human army advanced up to this place was due to witches inhabiting the black forest.
 
This wasteland would continue to stretch on until the fertile lands of humans that wouldn’t be seen unless one went further. Because of that, there were no cities, not to mention villages, around. The reason why the human army advanced up to this place was due to witches inhabiting the black forest.
 
The humans wanted to take the land from the witches and drive them away from their surroundings.
 
The humans wanted to take the land from the witches and drive them away from their surroundings.
   
The current king of Cassandra that borders near the territory of the Harrigan clan is Cassandra the III. His predecessors weren’t enthusiastic about setting their feet in the black forest.
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The current king of Kasandora that borders near the territory of the Harrigan clan is Kasandora the III. His predecessors weren’t enthusiastic about setting their feet in the black forest.
 
Rather than that, they would be constantly involved in disputes with various other countries, therefore, one could say they had no spare time for planning any conquest.
 
Rather than that, they would be constantly involved in disputes with various other countries, therefore, one could say they had no spare time for planning any conquest.
 
 
However, recently, the situation had changed.
 
However, recently, the situation had changed.
   
Following the conflict between the Old Church the New Church temporarily settling down, the disputes among various countries and Cassandra came to an end as well.
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Following the conflict between the Old Church the New Church temporary settling down, the disputes among various countries and Kasandora came to an end as well.
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The God’s children, newly dispatched to Kassandora from the Old Church, notionally understood as beings close to reverend fathers and pastors, were extremely vehement about the extermination of the witches and seemed to be trying to incite Kassandora III.
 
God’s Children, newly dispatched to Cassandra from the Old Church, notionally understood as beings close to reverend fathers and pastors, were extremely vehement about the extermination of the witches and seemed to be trying to incite Cassandra III.
 
   
Yuuki had learned that much from Harrigan’s explanations. Still, she was unable to comprehend the reason behind the Old Church’s zealousness for the extermination of witches or its desire to expel them.
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Yuki had learned that much from Harrigan’s explanations. Still, she was unable to comprehend the reason behind the Old Church’s zealousness for the extermination of witches or its desire to expel them.
The witches didn’t attack the humans' side nor cause them any problems, they were just leading a secluded life inside the black forest. Despite that, why are they being assaulted by humans? Why do they have to be chased away by humans? Not being able to understand at all, she became furious at this absurdity.
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The witches didn’t attack the human’s side nor cause them any problems, they were just leading a secluded life inside the black forest. Despite that, why are they being assaulted by humans? Why do they have to be chased away by humans? Not being able to understand at all, she became furious at this absurdity.
   
Yuuki had known of Harrigan’s recent headaches caused by the Kingdom’s army, which made her detest those that troubled her beloved sister more and more.
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Yuki had known of Harrigan’s recent headache caused by the Kingdom’s army, which made her detest those that troubled her beloved sister more and more.
   
 
(If only I had more power, I’d murder the entire human army.)
 
(If only I had more power, I’d murder the entire human army.)
   
While floating in the air on her board, Yuuki felt a burning impatience and irritation.
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While floating in the air on her board, Yuki felt a burning impatience and irritation.
 
Even now, it was no different.
 
Even now, it was no different.
They had luckily made it in time, but had Naga and the rest arrived any later, the fort could’ve been burned together with Lela, Kay, and Selena stationed inside. Yuuki bit her lip in frustration, but was still relieved that her comrades had been kept safe
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They had luckily made it in time, but had Naga and the rest been arrived later, the fort could’ve been burned together with Lela, Kei, and Selena stationed inside. Yuki bit her lips in frustration, but was still relieved that her comrades had been kept safe.
   
 
(But….this guy….)
 
(But….this guy….)
   
 
Whenever she thought about how it was thanks to the oddly dressed man, named Naga, that they were able to repel the advancing enemy, she felt great displeasure.
 
Whenever she thought about how it was thanks to the oddly dressed man, named Naga, that they were able to repel the advancing enemy, she felt great displeasure.
The time when she had to make an emergency landing, and even the moment when she displayed her helplessness while being rescued by him, Yuuki was bitter about both.
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The time when she had to make an emergency landing, and even the moment when she displayed her helplessness while being rescued by him, Yuki was bitter about both.
   
 
(He’s vulgar, stupid, and lecherous. Well, I’ll admit that he has good ideas, still, in the first place, he’s a man whose past and origin is unknown. Not to mention, he might be a spy sent by those humans and just pretending to have lost his memories.)
 
(He’s vulgar, stupid, and lecherous. Well, I’ll admit that he has good ideas, still, in the first place, he’s a man whose past and origin is unknown. Not to mention, he might be a spy sent by those humans and just pretending to have lost his memories.)
   
Harrigan, who was a sharp person, should also have considered this. Nevertheless, she had a policy of resolutely dealing with a risk upon acknowledging it. It could also be that she was feigning ignorance. Despite that, is it really fine to place such a risky bet? – Yuuki felt uneasy.
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Harrigan, who was a sharp person, should also have considered this. Nevertheless, she had a policy of resolutely dealing with a risk upon acknowledging it. It could also be that she was feigning ignorance. Despite that, is it really fine to place such a risky bet? – Yuki felt uneasy.
   
 
(That guy, I have to properly keep an eye on him. But, I also have to prioritize monitoring the human army, still….)
 
(That guy, I have to properly keep an eye on him. But, I also have to prioritize monitoring the human army, still….)
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(Even though we haven’t done anything.)
 
(Even though we haven’t done anything.)
   
At least, Harrigan had no plans of leaving the forest. Yuuki also followed that policy. After all, what the witches desired for was to live peacefully inside the forest. Nothing more and nothing less.
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At least, Harrigan had no plans of leaving the forest. Yuki also followed that policy. After all, what the witches desired for was to live peacefully inside the forest. Nothing more and nothing less.
   
 
Won’t the humans even tolerate that modest wish? If they won’t, there’s probably nothing that can stop their aggression. Rather, perhaps it will become more and more violent.
 
Won’t the humans even tolerate that modest wish? If they won’t, there’s probably nothing that can stop their aggression. Rather, perhaps it will become more and more violent.
   
For Yuuki, it was incomprehensible.
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For Yuki, it was incomprehensible.
(Well, if even Ane-sama can’t come up with a solution, then it’s all the more reason for me not to. I’ll do everything in my power…I guess. For the time being, let’s focus on the scouting, which I was entrusted with. I might be shot down with arrows if I fly too close to the fort, so I better be careful.)
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(Well, if even Ane-sama can’t come up with a solution, then it’s all the more reason for me not to. I’ll do everything in my power….. I guess. For the time being, let’s focus on the scouting, which I was entrusted with. I might be shot down with arrows if I fly too close to the fort, so I better be careful.)
   
As she passed through the mountain range, Yuuki further increased her altitude.
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As she passed through the mountain range, Yuki further increased her altitude.
The wind flow carrying her board was a bit unsteady.
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The wind flow carrying her board was a bit unbalanced.
 
Paying attention to her wind control, she flew up while maintaining a higher altitude than usual.
 
Paying attention to her wind control, she flew up while maintaining a higher altitude than usual.
   
If she flies to a higher altitude, the magic will run out faster, however, it should still be fine as long the round-trip is a distance similar to that between theirs and the enemy’s fort.
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If she flies to a higher altitude, the magic will run out faster, however?, it should still be fine as long the round-trip is a distance similar to that between theirs and the enemy’s fort.
   
Finally, the sight of the human’s fort jumped into Yuuki’s view.
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Finally, the sight of the human’s fort jumped into Yuki’s view.
The closer she approached it, the higher the risk of running into the guarding soldiers. While paying more attention to that, Yuuki continued to get closer to the fort. And then, as if doubting her eyes, she screamed without realizing.
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The closer she approached it, the higher the risk of running into the guarding soldiers. While paying more attention to that, Yuki continued to get closer to the fort. And then, as if doubting her eyes, she screamed without realizing.
   
 
“What’s, that?! What is this?!”
 
“What’s, that?! What is this?!”
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Furthermore, lines of horses were drawing near the fort.
 
Furthermore, lines of horses were drawing near the fort.
   
Yuuki couldn’t be sure of the details because of the distance, but there was no doubt that around a thousand soldiers were present there. Furthermore, more troops continued to arrive.
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Yuki couldn’t be sure of the details because of the distance, but there was no doubt that around a thousand soldiers were present there. Furthermore, more troops continued to arrive.
Yuuki felt an icy chill run through her body.
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Yuki felt an icy chill run through her body.
When it comes to this number of soldiers, only one idea can pass through one’s mind. That the military of the Cassandra Kingdom was seriously attempting the capture of the witches’ fort.
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When it comes to this number of soldiers, only one idea can pass through one’s mind. That the military of the Kasandora Kingdom was seriously attempting the capture of the witches’ fort.
(This is serious. I need to report this to Harri-nee quickly!)
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(This is serious. I need to report this to Hari-nee quickly!)
   
 
Having a pale face, she controlled the wind and changed the course of her board.
 
Having a pale face, she controlled the wind and changed the course of her board.
Because she didn’t encounter any soldiers so far, Yuuki judged it was fine to fly at full speed. Once she lowered her height, she flew away as fast as she could.
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Because she didn’t encounter any soldiers so far, Yuki judged it was fine to fly at full speed. Once she lowered her height, she flew away as fast as she could.
   
Yuuki returned back and reported her findings while yelling loudly. Since there were only 7 people inside, the loud yelling was probably unnecessary.
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Yuki returned back and reported her findings while yelling loudly. Since there were only 7 people inside, the loud yelling was probably unnecessary.
   
 
The seven of them, who sat in a circle on folding stools, held a conference for a countermeasure inside the fort’s housing.
 
The seven of them, who sat in a circle on folding stools, held a conference for a countermeasure inside the fort’s housing.
   
Some of the witches leaned forward with pallid faces.
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Some of the witches leaned forward with a pallid faces.
   
 
“What should we do, Ais?”
 
“What should we do, Ais?”
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Selena, who was at loss for words, made a face that showed she wanted to cry.
 
Selena, who was at loss for words, made a face that showed she wanted to cry.
   
“Talking about this and that, I think there’s no other option than to abandon this fort, am I wrong?”
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“Talking this and that, I think there’s no other option than to abandon this fort, but am I wrong?”
   
Saying so, Kay looked around at the faces of her comrades.
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Saying so, Kei looked around at the faces of her comrades.
   
Not even Ais knew what to do. She turned towards Yuuki, who sat next to her.
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Not even Ais knew what to do. She turned towards Yuki, who sat next to her.
   
“Yuuki, their forces were still in the middle of amassing….. right?”
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“Yuki, their forces were still in the middle of amassing….. right?”
 
“Yes that’s right. I think about a thousand soldiers were present at the time I saw them, still, their number is likely to increase.”
 
“Yes that’s right. I think about a thousand soldiers were present at the time I saw them, still, their number is likely to increase.”
 
“Which means that they’re not going to attack us soon. As you might expect, we have to discuss and decide on this once Ane-sama arrives.”
 
“Which means that they’re not going to attack us soon. As you might expect, we have to discuss and decide on this once Ane-sama arrives.”
   
Yuuki, Nonoeru, Lela, and Kay could do nothing but nod silently.
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Yuki, Nonoeru, Lela, and Kei could do nothing but nod silently.
 
Ais shifted her eyes towards Naga to her left.
 
Ais shifted her eyes towards Naga to her left.
 
She wanted for him to say something, wanted for him to say words which could reassure them.
 
She wanted for him to say something, wanted for him to say words which could reassure them.
 
“Naga-san, what do you think?”
 
“Naga-san, what do you think?”
   
Yuuki, who sat to Ais’ right, puffed her cheeks in discontent, but nevertheless, Naga was a vital character, and he stared up into the sky and gave a reply.
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Yuki, that sat to Ais’ right, puffed her cheeks in discontent, but nevertheless, Naga was a vital character, and he stared up into the sky and gave a reply.
   
 
“Hm, that’s right, I’m of the same opinion about them not attacking soon. As you would predict, it has to be decided upon Harrigan’s arrival.”
 
“Hm, that’s right, I’m of the same opinion about them not attacking soon. As you would predict, it has to be decided upon Harrigan’s arrival.”
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Being led by Lela, they left the room at a brisk pace.
 
Being led by Lela, they left the room at a brisk pace.
   
“So good…the unpleasant smell of a man is gone and it’s clean now…”
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“So good…. the unpleasant smell of a man is gone and it’s clean now…”
Being pleased, Yuuki said such things, however, Ais was a bit dejected.
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Being pleased, Yuki said such things, however, Ais was a bit dejected.
   
(To what extent are we going to be at our wits’ end from now on? How much danger will we be facing? I wonder if we can have him understand that. Perhaps….it’s unreasonable for an outsider to share our sense of danger)
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(To what extent are we going to be at our wits’ end from now on? How much danger will we be facing? I wonder if we can have him understand that. Perhaps….it’s unreasonable for an outsider to share our sense of danger.)
   
But, Ais had the feeling that Naga could figure something out. That’s because he gave out the aura of being able to find a breakthrough solution. Despite that, no tension was sensed from his words and conduct now.
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But, Ais had the feeling that Naga could figure out something. That’s because he gave out the aura of being able to find a breakthrough solution. Despite that, no tension was sensed from his words and conduct now.
   
 
“Speaking of which, Ais, what do you plan to do for the time being? I’m, thinking about setting out for scouting again.”
 
“Speaking of which, Ais, what do you plan to do for the time being? I’m, thinking about setting out for scouting again.”
“I wonder about that. No…Ane-sama should be arriving soon, and we might be assigned to new duties by her instructions, so Yuuki, too, should stay here. Just like Naga-san said, the chances for the human army to strike a second time are probably low for the time being.”
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“I wonder about that. No… Ane-sama should be arriving soon, and we might be assigned to new duties by her instructions, so Yuki, too, should stay here. Just like Naga-san said, the chances for the human army to strike a second time are probably low for the time being.”
   
Each time Ais pronounced his name, Yuuki’s face became displeased.
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Each time Ais pronounced his name, Yuki’s face became displeased.
   
 
“Somehow, it feels like we can’t rely on what that guy says.”
 
“Somehow, it feels like we can’t rely on what that guy says.”
   
Even though Yuuki resisted, she acknowledged his explanations inside her heart.
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Even though Yuki resisted, she acknowledged his explanations inside her heart.
   
 
(W-Well, still, that’s just common sense. It’s not like that guy possesses a discerning eye)
 
(W-Well, still, that’s just common sense. It’s not like that guy possesses a discerning eye)
   
“By the way, Yuuki. You’ve been constantly working by supporting the cart, scouting the human troops, and assaulting them. It’s better if you take a short rest. As soon as the day breaks, we will have you fly again.”
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“By the way, Yuki. You’ve been constantly working by supporting the cart, scouting the human troops, and assaulting them. It’s better if you take a short rest. As soon as the day breaks, we will have you fly again.”
“I guess…so. Understood.”
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“I guess… so. Understood.”
“Even if the enemy isn’t going to charge for a second time, there’s still the fear that a small amount of them might draw near. By the time Lela comes back, we will put the barrier back up, and then await for Ane-sama’s arrival. Nonoeru, Selena, you’ve been doing a good job, but I’d like for you to work once more.”
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“Even if the enemy isn’t going to charge for a second time, there’s still the fear that a small amount of them might draw near. By the time Lela comes back, we will put back the barrier[play on words], and then await for Ane-sama’s arrival. Nonoeru, Selena, you’ve been doing a good job, but I’d like for you to work once more.”
   
The three of them, whose faces were colored with visible anxiety, nodded.
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The three of them, whose faces were shaded with visible anxiety, nodded.
   
As there were no particularly notable things in the warehouse, Naga and Lela returned shortly.
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As there were no particularly notable things in the warehouse, Naga and Lela returned back shortly.
   
 
Without speaking to Naga, whose long face showed a feeling contrary to his expectation, Ais called out to Lela.
 
Without speaking to Naga, whose long face showed a feeling contrary to his expectation, Ais called out to Lela.
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Without a moment of hesitation, Naga asked.
 
Without a moment of hesitation, Naga asked.
   
“Barrier…what’s that, Ais?”
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“Barrier… what’s that, Ais?”
   
 
“That’s right, if I were to put it simply, it’s something placed using the blood of the witches against any attempt of enemy search, or you could call it an anti-detection device against humans? More or less like that.”
 
“That’s right, if I were to put it simply, it’s something placed using the blood of the witches against any attempt of enemy search, or you could call it an anti-detection device against humans? More or less like that.”
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“No, regarding that, we only apply a bit of our blood, energy, and mana. Apart from that, there’s no danger whatsoever.”
 
“No, regarding that, we only apply a bit of our blood, energy, and mana. Apart from that, there’s no danger whatsoever.”
 
“Then, is that not a handy thing?”
 
“Then, is that not a handy thing?”
“Doesn’t it give you the creeps? Or maybe….. frighten you? After all, we hold abilities that are considered abnormal by humans.”
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“Doesn’t it give you the creeps? Or maybe….. frightens you? After all, we hold abilities that are considered abnormal by humans.”
 
“Don’t say weird things. People who have powers are much more useful than ordinary ones. Being able to run faster than normal people or having inhuman strength are probably convenient things. Having powers doesn’t make you any different. In the end, you’re just people who can use them.”
 
“Don’t say weird things. People who have powers are much more useful than ordinary ones. Being able to run faster than normal people or having inhuman strength are probably convenient things. Having powers doesn’t make you any different. In the end, you’re just people who can use them.”
 
*sigh of astonishment*
 
*sigh of astonishment*
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Ais’ eyes, which were gazing at Naga, became somewhat moistened. She was a bit moved by his words.
 
Ais’ eyes, which were gazing at Naga, became somewhat moistened. She was a bit moved by his words.
Lela, too, watched him with a face filled with admiration. Nonoeru, Selena, and Kay had strange, yet amazed, expressions as well.
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Lela, too, watched him with a face filled with admiration. Nonoeru, Selena, and Kei had strange, yet amazed, expressions as well.
 
Naga suddenly felt uncomfortable.
 
Naga suddenly felt uncomfortable.
   
(What, what’s wrong with these guys’ reaction? Even though I said something obvious, they got this emotional?)
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(What, what’s wrong with those guys’ reaction? Even though I said something obvious, they got this emotional?)
   
 
Naga still couldn’t grasp what the outside of this world looked like. The inhabitants of this world would consider his eccentric way of thinking as peculiar and unique.
 
Naga still couldn’t grasp what the outside of this world looked like. The inhabitants of this world would consider his eccentric way of thinking as peculiar and unique.
Should the humans call themselves and the witches as separate beings? Assuming they do, the witches would be considered as evil beings that try to invade the humans’ territory. For them, the witches weren’t “just peculiar beings with unique abilities”. The witches were, after all, witches, and could only be perceived as “the enemies of humans”.
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Should the humans call themselves and the witches as separate beings? Assuming they do, the witches would be considered as evil beings that try to invade the humans’ territory. For them, the witches weren’t “just peculiar beings with unique abilities”. The witches were, after all, witches, and could only be perceived as “the nemesis of humans”.
   
 
Continuing to fight with the humans ruled by that common sense and being chased away by them, for Ais and the rest, Naga’s words were a fresh, strange, and pleasant experience.
 
Continuing to fight with the humans ruled by that common sense and being chased away by them, for Ais and the rest, Naga’s words were a fresh, strange, and pleasant experience.
   
“More importantly, Ais. It’s probably better to set up that barrier as fast as possible. After all, it requires a certain amount of time, right? There’s no telling when the enemy’s scouting unit will come.”
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“More importantly, Ais. It’s probably better to set up that barrier as fast as possible. After all, it requires a certain amount of time, right? There’s no telling when the enemy’s scouting troop will come.”
   
 
Being urged by Naga, Ais came back to her senses.
 
Being urged by Naga, Ais came back to her senses.
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Naga looked around the room.
 
Naga looked around the room.
   
“How about Yuuki?”
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“How about Yuki?”
 
“That girl, she’s resting in a separate room because she had constantly been working today.”
 
“That girl, she’s resting in a separate room because she had constantly been working today.”
 
“Then that means that she’s not going to help with setting up the barrier, right? If that’s the case, is it fine for me to tag along?”
 
“Then that means that she’s not going to help with setting up the barrier, right? If that’s the case, is it fine for me to tag along?”
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“I don’t mind, bu-t…”
 
“I don’t mind, bu-t…”
Nonoeru, Selena, and Kay, also nodded.
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Nonoeru, Selena, and Kei, also nodded.
   
“Well then, shall we go? Selena and Kay will remain here and stand watch. If Yuuki wakes up only to find nobody around, it will be troublesome. The same applies for Nee-sama’s arrival. Now that Yuuki is taking a rest, can I have you watch from the side of the cliff?”
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“Well then, shall we go? Selena and Kei will remain here and stand watch. If Yuki wakes up only to find nobody around, it will be troublesome. The same applies for Nee-sama’s arrival. Now that Yuki is taking a rest, can I have you watch from the side of the cliff?”
 
Selena, who appeared to be the youngest among them, replied while stiffening up.
 
Selena, who appeared to be the youngest among them, replied while stiffening up.
 
“Yes, Ais. I’ll do the care-taking.”
 
“Yes, Ais. I’ll do the care-taking.”
   
As for Kay,
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As for Kei,
 
“Yeah, got it. If anything happens, we will immediately give a smoke signal.”
 
“Yeah, got it. If anything happens, we will immediately give a smoke signal.”
 
She answered lazily.
 
She answered lazily.
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Even though the room was said to be the biggest among the rest in the house building, it’s wooden floor and walls weren’t even furnished with decorations. However, all of the members could gather inside.
 
Even though the room was said to be the biggest among the rest in the house building, it’s wooden floor and walls weren’t even furnished with decorations. However, all of the members could gather inside.
Having already heard from Selena and Kay, who were taking care of the place, Harrigan also received a detailed report from Ais and agreed with Naga’s opinion of not having to be vigilant about the enemy’s next onslaught.
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Having already heard from Selena and Kei, who were taking care of the place, Harrigan also received a detailed report from Ais and agreed with Naga’s opinion of not having to be vigilant about the enemy’s next onslaught.
 
Furthermore, Lela and the rest had just mentioned about putting up a barrier. Even if the enemy’s scouts get lost in the darkness after the end of the day and planned to approach the fort in secret, they would almost certainly be detected.
 
Furthermore, Lela and the rest had just mentioned about putting up a barrier. Even if the enemy’s scouts get lost in the darkness after the end of the day and planned to approach the fort in secret, they would almost certainly be detected.
 
With that, Harrigan assembled all the members in order to discuss the plan going forward.
 
With that, Harrigan assembled all the members in order to discuss the plan going forward.
Not just Selena and Kay, but also Naga, Ais, Yuuki, and Nonoeru hadn’t eaten anything since the morning. Because of that, Harrigan ordered them to bring the emergency food from the storehouse, and they tried to talk while lightly eating.
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Not just Selena and Kei, but also Naga, Ais, Yuki, and Nonoeru hadn’t eaten anything since the morning. Because of that, Harrigan ordered them to bring the emergency food from the storehouse, and they tried to talk while lightly eating.
   
 
Following Harrigan, the witches sat in a circle on the folding stools, with a small, folded table placed in front of them. There were wooden plates with dried bread and dried meat lined up on it.
 
Following Harrigan, the witches sat in a circle on the folding stools, with a small, folded table placed in front of them. There were wooden plates with dried bread and dried meat lined up on it.
 
The complete list of attendance consisted of:
 
The complete list of attendance consisted of:
Ais, Yuuki, and Nonoeru, who had carried the wooden doll.
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Ais, Yuki, and Nonoeru, who had carried the wooden doll.
Lela, Selena, and Kay, who had been stationed at the fort.
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Lela, Selena, and Kei, who had been stationed at the fort.
Dee, Cu, the Linne and Linna sisters, Eleonoza, and Mimone, who had been brought by Harrigan.
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Dee, Cu, the Rinne and Rinna sisters, Eleonoza, and Mimone, who had been brought by Harrigan.
   
Adding Harrigan and Naga, there was a total of 14 people present.
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Adding Harrigan and Naga, there was a total number of 14 people present.
   
 
Naga looked out over the girls who were sitting in a circle
 
Naga looked out over the girls who were sitting in a circle
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“What, why are you so formal?”
 
“What, why are you so formal?”
   
Lifting herself off of the folding stool, she kneeled down on one knee before Naga. Yuuki, who was next to her, frowned angrily with a displeased face.
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Lifting herself off of the folding stool, she kneeled down on one knee before Naga. Yuki, who was next to her, frowned angrily with a displeased face.
   
 
“However much I say it, the words can’t express my thanks for what you did, but at least let me convey my gratitude.”
 
“However much I say it, the words can’t express my thanks for what you did, but at least let me convey my gratitude.”
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“I’m thankful to you for saving my daughters.”
 
“I’m thankful to you for saving my daughters.”
“I didn’t do anything big. Actually, the ones who made a great effort were Lela, Yuuki, Ais, Nonoeru, Kay, and Selena. Before paying me gratitude, you should probably praise them first.”
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“I didn’t do anything big. Actually, the ones who made a great effort were Lela Yuki, Ais, Nonoeru, Kei, and Selena. Before paying me gratitude, you should probably praise them first.”
   
“Eh?” – Yuuki’s expression shifted suddenly.
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“Eh?” – Yuki’s expression shifted suddenly.
   
 
Raising her face, Harrigan gazed at Naga in front of her eyes and continued to speak.
 
Raising her face, Harrigan gazed at Naga in front of her eyes and continued to speak.
 
“Those girls are persons related to these matters. It’s only natural for them to fight for themselves. However, it’s different in your case. You arrived from a different world, in other words, you’re an outsider. There’s no reason for you to fight for us. For you, who is in such a position, to lend us your wisdom and to rescue us from distress, isn’t expressing our gratitude an obvious thing?”
 
“Those girls are persons related to these matters. It’s only natural for them to fight for themselves. However, it’s different in your case. You arrived from a different world, in other words, you’re an outsider. There’s no reason for you to fight for us. For you, who is in such a position, to lend us your wisdom and to rescue us from distress, isn’t expressing our gratitude an obvious thing?”
   
“Ah, that’s why, it’s…. right, that’s my thanks for having you rescue me. I probably mentioned it before, didn’t I? About me certainly repaying your favor for a night’s lodging and a meal. This would be equivalent to repaying that favor. Even if you consider yourself to be saved by me, there’s no need for you to say thanks. It should be fine as long you accept it as something natural.”
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“Ah that’s why, it’s…. right, that’s my thanks for having you rescue me. I probably mentioned it before, didn’t I? About me certainly repaying your favor for a night’s lodging and a meal. This would be equivalent to repaying that favor. Even if you consider yourself to be saved by me, there’s no need for you to say thanks. It should be fine as long you accept it as something natural.”
   
Yuuki suddenly stood up.
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Yuki suddenly stood up.
 
“That’s right. Repaying one’s received favor is an obvious thing. Still, you’re far from repaying it! That’s why, work for us from now on.”
 
“That’s right. Repaying one’s received favor is an obvious thing. Still, you’re far from repaying it! That’s why, work for us from now on.”
“Oi, Yuuki, what are you…..”
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“Oi, Yuki, what are you…..”
   
Harrigan glared at Yuuki as if trying to scold her, but, despite Yuuki slightly averting her eyes from Naga, Harrigan couldn’t sense any malicious intentions coming from her. She swallowed her words of reprimand.
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Harrigan glared at Yuki as if trying to scold her, but, despite Yuki slightly averting her eyes from Naga, Harrigan couldn’t sense any malicious intentions coming from her. She swallowed her words of reprimand.
   
 
“I-If you do so, we won’t abandon you, instead, we are going to raise you properly. Also, about the time when you saved me…. th-thank you.”
 
“I-If you do so, we won’t abandon you, instead, we are going to raise you properly. Also, about the time when you saved me…. th-thank you.”
   
Yuuki said this and quickly sat back down and faced in another direction. Somehow, her cheeks seemed to be flushed. Was it due to the embarrassment caused by expressing her gratitude to a man? Or perhaps……
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Yuki said this and quickly sat back down and faced in another direction. Somehow, her cheeks seemed to be flushed. Was it due to the embarrassment caused by expressing her gratitude to a man? Or perhaps……
Be that as it may, Harrigan was surprised and greatly pleased. That’s because Yuuki, who used to detest men, tried to acknowledge Naga’s presence.
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Be that as it may, Harrigan was surprised and greatly pleased. That’s because Yuki, who used to detest men, tried to acknowledge Naga’s presence.
   
 
(Somehow, it feels like a wind of change has come. I can’t tell whether or not it will blow in the right direction, but at least, there’s a sign of something starting to shift. If it goes well, we may be even able to change this desperate situation.)
 
(Somehow, it feels like a wind of change has come. I can’t tell whether or not it will blow in the right direction, but at least, there’s a sign of something starting to shift. If it goes well, we may be even able to change this desperate situation.)
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Being thanked, Naga gave a broad smile.
 
Being thanked, Naga gave a broad smile.
   
“Indeed, I can’t completely repay your debt at once. Therefore, I’ll be repaying it diligently from now on. Are you fine with that, Yuuki?”
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“Indeed, I can’t completely repay your debt at once. Therefore, I’ll be repaying it diligently from now on. Are you fine with that, Yuki?”
Yuuki replied while desperately avoiding eye contact with him.
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Yuki replied while desperately avoiding eye contact with him.
   
 
“I-it’s not like it’s not alright”
 
“I-it’s not like it’s not alright”
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“Of course. Ask? however much you want.”
 
“Of course. Ask? however much you want.”
 
“Ah, no. Before that, first, I’d like to confirm this place’s topography.”
 
“Ah, no. Before that, first, I’d like to confirm this place’s topography.”
Naga looked at Yuuki.
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Naga looked at Yuki.
   
 
“W-What? You still have something you want to say?”
 
“W-What? You still have something you want to say?”
   
“Rather than wanting to say, I’d like to check something, but, you can see the terrain of the enemy’s fort from above, can’t you?”
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“Rather than wanting to say, I’d like to check something, but, you can see the terrain of the enemy’s fort from the above, can’t you?”
 
“T-That’s right, I can. What about it?”
 
“T-That’s right, I can. What about it?”
 
“Are you able to draw a map?”
 
“Are you able to draw a map?”
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Once she nodded with a vague expression, Naga requested Lela to bring her a paper and a pen.
 
Once she nodded with a vague expression, Naga requested Lela to bring her a paper and a pen.
 
Unfortunately, because there was no spare paper inside the fort, she came and brought a parchment instead.
 
Unfortunately, because there was no spare paper inside the fort, she came and brought a parchment instead.
Recalling her own memory, Yuuki drew with the pen on the parchment.
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Recalling her own memory, Yuki drew with the pen on the parchment.
 
And shortly after that, she finished a simple drawing of a map.
 
And shortly after that, she finished a simple drawing of a map.
   
“Heh? Aren’t you quite skillful there?”
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“Heh? Ain’t you quite skillful there?”
 
“O-Of course!”
 
“O-Of course!”
 
“I see. So there’s a wasteland between the mountains and the river….? It seems like we can do something with this.”
 
“I see. So there’s a wasteland between the mountains and the river….? It seems like we can do something with this.”
   
Naga, who nodded, leaned his body forward and pointed out at the map.
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Naga, who nodded, leant his body forward and pointed out at the map.
   
“Yuuki, the enemy’s fort, how long do you think will it take for the enemy’s forces to march the distance between Ein fort and this cliff?”
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“Yuki, the enemy’s fort, how long do you think will it take for the enemy’s force to march the distance between Ein fort and this cliff?”
   
 
“Ah…. ehm….”
 
“Ah…. ehm….”
   
Yuuki desperately began to estimate the distance it took to fly there.
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Yuki desperately began to estimate the distance it took to fly there.
   
 
“Probably one day if they’re running fast on their feet. I wonder if they wouldn’t reach it by evening were they to set out in the early morning. And if they walk slowly, perhaps they would reach the next day, but…”
 
“Probably one day if they’re running fast on their feet. I wonder if they wouldn’t reach it by evening were they to set out in the early morning. And if they walk slowly, perhaps they would reach the next day, but…”
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(Hm? It feels like she’s not awfully confident in her answer)
 
(Hm? It feels like she’s not awfully confident in her answer)
   
As soon as he looked at her with astonishment surfacing on his face, Yuuki’s face was dyed red and it seemed as if steam was about to explode out the top of her head.
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As soon as he looked at her with astonishment surfacing on his face, Yuki’s face was dyed red and it seemed as if steam was about to explode out the top of her head.
   
 
“I-I-I-Is there anything you want to say? If so, say it without that grin on your face. It gives me a bad feeling!”
 
“I-I-I-Is there anything you want to say? If so, say it without that grin on your face. It gives me a bad feeling!”
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Harrigan nodded with a grave seriousness.
 
Harrigan nodded with a grave seriousness.
 
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“Yes. If we are pushed away from this place, we won’t be able to prevent the soldiers of the Cassandra Kingdom from penetrating the black forest. It will mean the same as us being unable to remain inside of it.”
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“Yes. If we are pushed away from this place, we won’t be able to prevent the soldiers of the Kasandora Kingdom from penetrating the black forest. It will mean the same as us being unable to remain inside of it.”
“Is that so? In that case, in order to protect this place let’s go out and defeat them.”
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“Is that so? In that case, so as to protect this place, let’s go out and defeat them.”
   
 
(H-how blunt!?)
 
(H-how blunt!?)
   
Not just Harrigan, but also all the witches around stared at Naga in astonishment.
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Not just Harrigan, but also the witches all around stared at Naga in astonishment.
   
 
Finally breaking the silence, Harrigan gasped.
 
Finally breaking the silence, Harrigan gasped.
   
“Going out and defeat them, is what you said? Are you serious about that?”
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“Going out and defeat them, is what you say? Are you serious about that?”
 
“I am. In order to protect the inside, you have to win outside. I think it’s quite an obvious thing.”
 
“I am. In order to protect the inside, you have to win outside. I think it’s quite an obvious thing.”
 
“You…. surely have a plan, right?”
 
“You…. surely have a plan, right?”
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Naga responded definitively and calmly to Harrigan, whose face was filled with confusion, doubt, and hope.
 
Naga responded definitively and calmly to Harrigan, whose face was filled with confusion, doubt, and hope.
   
“Obviously I have a plan. If you leave the leadership to me, I can and will defeat the army of Cassandra so thoroughly that they won’t want to approach this place ever again. How about that?”
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“Obviously I have a plan. If you leave the leadership to me, I can and will defeat the army of Kasandora so thoroughly that they won’t want to approach this place ever again. How about that?”
 
“Leave the leadership to you…..?”
 
“Leave the leadership to you…..?”
 
“That’s right.”
 
“That’s right.”
   
 
Naga replied seeming neither flustered nor boastful.
 
Naga replied seeming neither flustered nor boastful.
Harrigan shot a glimpse at Yuuki.
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Harrigan shot a glimpse at Yuki.
Even though she would usually raise an objection or express her disapproval in loud and abusive words, it appeared that she was at a loss to Naga’s impudent suggestion.
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Even though she would usually raise an objection or express her disapproval in loud and abusive words, it appeared that she was at a loss at Naga’s impudent suggestion.
   
 
“Would you mind if we make the decision after…..we hear you plan?”
 
“Would you mind if we make the decision after…..we hear you plan?”
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==Translator's Notes and References==
 
==Translator's Notes and References==
 
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