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Harrigan manipulated the wooden puppets, and arranged them into four rows on either side of the road. Naga and the others picked up the wooden flat-tipped hoes they’d brought along and started digging.
 
Harrigan manipulated the wooden puppets, and arranged them into four rows on either side of the road. Naga and the others picked up the wooden flat-tipped hoes they’d brought along and started digging.
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After Naga dug a shallow trench, just big enough for one person to lie inside, he set his flat-tipped hoe aside.
 
After Naga dug a shallow trench, just big enough for one person to lie inside, he set his flat-tipped hoe aside.
   
 
“Will this do?”
 
“Will this do?”
   
Aside from the armour he looted from a dead enemy, Naga was also wearing the clothes the witches gave him. That’s why he didn’t really want to go into the trench, but war wasn’t that pleasant. No matter how unwilling, one had to strive on. That’s what Harrigan said, so he had to pretend he didn’t mind the dirt and lie down in it.
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Aside from the armour he looted from a dead enemy, Naga was also wearing the clothes the witches gave him. That’s why he didn’t really want to go into the trench, but war wasn’t that pleasant.
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No matter how unwilling, one had to strive on. That’s what Harrigan said, so he had to pretend he didn’t mind the dirt and lie down in it.
   
 
“Anyway, just lie down, it will be good enough if you are just below ground level.”
 
“Anyway, just lie down, it will be good enough if you are just below ground level.”
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Lela asked. She was digging just like Naga, but she stopped and looked at him.
 
Lela asked. She was digging just like Naga, but she stopped and looked at him.
   
“… No problem. After covering the top with earth, it's hard to see you from afar.”
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“… No problem. After covering the top with earth, it is hard to see you from afar.”
 
“Is that so? Then mine should be good eno-ugh.”
 
“Is that so? Then mine should be good eno-ugh.”
   
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Lela looked down at her breasts.
 
Lela looked down at her breasts.
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Today, once again, she was wearing clothes which exposed much of her skin, and the talismans she used as a skirt hung down from her waist.
 
Today, once again, she was wearing clothes which exposed much of her skin, and the talismans she used as a skirt hung down from her waist.
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This was a dangerous attire for battle, but armour would affect the witches’ magic if they wore it, so they had no other choice. The other witches also wore revealing clothing. No matter how Naga looked at it, such attire didn’t make sense.
 
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This was a dangerous attire for battle, but armour would affect the witches’ magic if they wore it, so they had no other choice.
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The other witches also wore revealing clothing.
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No matter how Naga looked at it, such attire didn’t make sense.
   
 
Well then, what does your common sense tell you, Naga, you who has lost your memory? If someone asked him that, he wouldn’t be able to answer either.
 
Well then, what does your common sense tell you, Naga, you who has lost your memory? If someone asked him that, he wouldn’t be able to answer either.
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Naga spread his arms with a smile.
 
Naga spread his arms with a smile.
   
*Donk!*
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Donk!
   
 
“That hurts!!”
 
“That hurts!!”
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The other four witches looked as if they had eaten something rotten and averted their face awkwardly, then returned to their digging quietly.
 
The other four witches looked as if they had eaten something rotten and averted their face awkwardly, then returned to their digging quietly.
   
“Ara? You can’t take a joke?”
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“Ara? You can’t take this joke?”
 
“I know you are a smart man, but you don’t have any talents in telling jokes.”
 
“I know you are a smart man, but you don’t have any talents in telling jokes.”
 
“Ughh, what a harsh critique.”
 
“Ughh, what a harsh critique.”
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Naga thought to himself.
 
Naga thought to himself.
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In the end, no clear images came to mind.
 
In the end, no clear images came to mind.
   
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“Hmm?”
 
“Hmm?”
   
After checking the depth of the hole under his feet, He lifted his head and looked at Harrigan’s breasts.
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After checking the depth of the hole under his feet, He lift his head and looked at Harrigan’s breasts.
   
 
“L-Like I said! Don’t look at my chest with such eyes!”
 
“L-Like I said! Don’t look at my chest with such eyes!”
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“True, this should be good enough.”
 
“True, this should be good enough.”
   
Naga stepped out of the shallow pit, and Selena interrupted,
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Naga stepped out of the shallow pit, and Selena interrupted:
   
 
“Naga, mine’s done too.”
 
“Naga, mine’s done too.”
   
 
Selena’s hole was right next to Naga’s
 
Selena’s hole was right next to Naga’s
She had to observe the movement of the enemy and relay them to Naga, so their holes need to be within earshot. And since they were hiding, they couldn’t be too loud. That’s why Selena dug her hole right beside Naga.
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She had to observe the movement of the enemy and relay them to Naga, so their holes need to be within earshot.
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And since they were hiding, they couldn’t be too loud.
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That’s why Selena dug her hole right beside Naga.
   
 
“Alright, give it a try.”
 
“Alright, give it a try.”
   
 
After Naga said that, Selena stepped into the hole and laid face up.
 
After Naga said that, Selena stepped into the hole and laid face up.
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Naga and the others will be lying prone, but Selena had to lie face up in order to use Heaven’s Eyes.
 
Naga and the others will be lying prone, but Selena had to lie face up in order to use Heaven’s Eyes.
   
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Selena answered and the glow in her eyes became brighter.
 
Selena answered and the glow in her eyes became brighter.
   
“I can see the other side of the river, the Cassandra Kingdom has set up camp there. There are about five or six hundred people. There are groups heading towards the camp. The numbers… It’s hard to tell, there should be more than a thousand. However, there is no sign of the enemy on this side of the river.”
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“I can see the other side of the river, the Kasandora Kingdom has set up camp there. There are about five or six hundred people. There are groups heading towards the camp. The numbers… It’s hard to tell, there should be more than a thousand. However, there is no sign of the enemy on this side of the river.”
   
 
“Oh? Thank you for your hard work.”
 
“Oh? Thank you for your hard work.”
   
In response to Naga’s voice, Selena’s pupils reverted to their original colour.
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In response to Naga’s voice, Selena’s pupils reverted to their original colours.
   
 
“No problem.”
 
“No problem.”
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Cu couldn’t hide her nervousness when she first met Naga. But after chatting with him a few times, she could talk with him easily, like old friends who had known each other for years.
 
Cu couldn’t hide her nervousness when she first met Naga. But after chatting with him a few times, she could talk with him easily, like old friends who had known each other for years.
   
(Everyone has their own unique character, how interesting. Painting these girls to be the incarnation of evil that needs to be purged, the people from the Church are twisting the truth.)
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(Everyone has their own unique character, how interesting. Painting these girls to be the incarnation of evil that needs to be purged, the people from the church are twisting the truth.)
   
 
But Naga learned about all of this from Harrigan.
 
But Naga learned about all of this from Harrigan.
Humans should have their own opinions too. But the Church’s opinion that Harrigan and her witches are the sworn enemies of humanity was hard for Naga to accept. Or rather, Naga found it hard to accept religion influencing politics. Humans affiliated with religion just need to worry about religious matters.
 
   
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Humans should have their own opinions too. But the Church’s opinion that Harrigan and her witches are the sworn nemesis of humanity was hard for Naga to accept. Or rather, Naga found it hard to accept religion influencing politics. Humans affiliated with religions just need to worry about religious matters.
But why did he think this way? Naga couldn’t understand.
 
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But, why did he think this way? Naga couldn’t understand.
 
Sympathy for the witches? Resistance against the forces of the Church?
 
Sympathy for the witches? Resistance against the forces of the Church?
 
What Naga was thinking right now would deeply affect his beliefs and ideas in the future. But right now, he hadn’t noticed.
 
What Naga was thinking right now would deeply affect his beliefs and ideas in the future. But right now, he hadn’t noticed.
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“I had been thinking after seeing you carry the logs, those things on you,”
 
“I had been thinking after seeing you carry the logs, those things on you,”
   
Naga stopped and pointed to Cu’s belts.
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Naga stopped and pointed to Cu’s belt.
   
“…Can they carry heavy loads, too?
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“…Can carry heavy loads, too.
 
“If I can maintain balance, it doesn’t matter how heavy the thing is.”
 
“If I can maintain balance, it doesn’t matter how heavy the thing is.”
   
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Naga urged them, and everyone got into their trenches.
 
Naga urged them, and everyone got into their trenches.
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Naga stretched his legs out in the trench and covered his body with a cloth. After piling earth from around the hole on top of the cloth, he laid there prone. Only his face was uncovered, facing forward. Because of the thick clouds, light from the moon and the stars didn’t reach the ground and the surroundings were pitch dark. Even Naga, who had good night vision, couldn’t see clearly.
 
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Naga stretched his legs out in the trench and covered his body with a cloth. After piling earth from around the hole on top of the cloth, he laid there prone. Only his face was uncovered, facing forward.
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Because of the thick clouds, light from the moon and the stars didn’t reach the ground and the surroundings were pitch dark. Even Naga, who had good night vision, couldn’t see clearly.
   
 
(Now, I can only see how things play out. I hate putting all my eggs in one basket, but that’s the only viable strategy this time. Besides the execution of the plan, luck will play an important part too.)
 
(Now, I can only see how things play out. I hate putting all my eggs in one basket, but that’s the only viable strategy this time. Besides the execution of the plan, luck will play an important part too.)
   
 
Naga’s body shivered inside the trench.
 
Naga’s body shivered inside the trench.
He shivered, not only from the cold before dawn, but also from the excitement of a battle about to start. Naga and the witches hid in their dark trenches and waited silently for the battle to begin.
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He shivered, not only from the cold before dawn, but also from the excitement of a battle about to start.
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Naga and the witches hid in their dark trenches and waited silently for the battle to begin.
   
 
The sounds of battle finally started.
 
The sounds of battle finally started.
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The ambush by the wooden puppet mob succeeded perfectly, the entire scouting unit that crossed the Schweiz river was wiped out.
   
The ambush by the wooden puppet mob succeeded perfectly, the entire scouting unit that crossed the Schwein river was wiped out. After Naga and the others confirmed this, they got out of their holes and moved the wooden puppets forward. At the same time, they kept their distance from wooden puppets and advanced towards the river.
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After Naga and the others confirmed this, they got out of their holes and moved the wooden puppets forward.
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At the same time, they kept their distance from wooden puppets and advanced towards the river.
   
 
[[File:Naga02 map 2.png|200px|thumbnail|right]]
 
[[File:Naga02 map 2.png|200px|thumbnail|right]]
   
Harrigan, who was controlling the puppets, walked in front along with Naga, followed, in order, by Lela, Selena, and Kay while Cu turned back to retrieve her's and Naga’s horses.
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Harrigan, who was controlling the puppets, walked in front along with Naga, followed, in order, by Lela, Selena, and Kay.
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While Cu turned back to retrieve Naga’s and her horse.
   
Out of the five witches here, Cu and Ikushina from the 3rd group were more proficient in horsemanship, so Naga assigned the task to her.
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Out of the five witches here, Cu and Ixine, from the 3rd group, were more proficient in horsemanship, so Naga assigned the task to her.
 
However, though she might be more proficient, she was actually ‘not that good after all’ (According to Naga).
 
However, though she might be more proficient, she was actually ‘not that good after all’ (According to Naga).
   
 
Naga moved cautiously as Harrigan watched the sides carefully.
 
Naga moved cautiously as Harrigan watched the sides carefully.
In order to not leave any wooden puppets out, she had to focus on watching them. All the wooden puppets could move at the same time, but one or two puppets would mess up their movements and fall out of ranks occasionally.
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In order to not leave any wooden puppets out, she had to focus on watching them. All the wooden puppets could move at the same time, but one or two puppets would mess up their movements and fall out of the ranks occasionally.
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That’s why Harrigan had to identify the puppets that moved strangely as early as possible, and return them to formation.
 
That’s why Harrigan had to identify the puppets that moved strangely as early as possible, and return them to formation.
   
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(However, the next phase will be the critical point. The second stage of a two stage shot, or rather, whether the second arrow can hit the target perfectly. That will decide the battle.)
 
(However, the next phase will be the critical point. The second stage of a two stage shot, or rather, whether the second arrow can hit the target perfectly. That will decide the battle.)
   
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Shortly after, the 2nd battalion of Kasandora’s kingdom entered the river and started crossing it.
Shortly after, the 2nd battalion of Cassandra’s army entered the river and started crossing it. According to the observation of Heaven’s Eyes by Selena, they numbered about four hundred, and must not be allowed to all cross at the same time. There were 260 wooden puppets that could still move, and even if they committed this entire force, the opponents were fully equipped soldiers. Their morale was high and they outmatched Naga and the others even if they relied on numbers alone.
 
   
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According to the observation of Heaven’s Eyes by Selena, they numbered about four hundred, and must not be allowed to all cross at the same time.
But Naga’s second arrow was to weaken the units crossing the river and separate them. Yuuki, who left the battlefield earlier on the air board, finally unleashed the second arrow. If the plan proceeded smoothly, Naga would be able to cut off part of the Cassandra kingdom’s army and rout the units crossing the river. It would be difficult to predict how their main force would react after this. But after suffering heavy losses, it was unlikely they would continue their march towards the great cliff, in order to avoid further losses. That was Naga’s aim.
 
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There were 260 wooden puppets that could still move, and even if they committed this entire force, the opponents were fully equipped troops.
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Their morale was high, and they outmatched Naga and the others even if they relied on numbers alone.
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But Naga’s second arrow was to weaken the units crossing the river and separate them.
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Yuuki, who left the battlefield earlier on the air board, finally unleashed the second arrow.
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If the plan proceeded smoothly, Naga would be able to cut off part of the Cassandra kingdom’s army and rout the units crossing the river.
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It would be difficult to predict how their main force would react after this. But after suffering heavy losses, it was unlikely they would continue their march towards the great cliff, in order to avoid further losses. That was Naga’s aim.
   
 
(I’m counting on you, Yuuki.)
 
(I’m counting on you, Yuuki.)
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Ais shouted as she stared at the sky, the other witches also looked up.
 
Ais shouted as she stared at the sky, the other witches also looked up.
The black dot became larger, and came close enough to distinguish Yuuki’s face. Waving her hands on the air board, she yelled,
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The black dot became larger, and came close enough to distinguish Yuuki’s face. Waving her hands on the air hoverboard, she yelled:
   
 
“Success success success!”
 
“Success success success!”
   
Ais and Nonoeru, who were watching Yuuki’s air board intensely, showed cheerful expressions. Yuuki, who was heading straight for the river dam, shouted once more,
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Ais and Nonoeru, who were watching Yuuki’s hoverboard intensely, showed cheerful expressions.
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Yuuki, who was heading straight for the river dam, shouted once more:
   
 
“Do it!”
 
“Do it!”
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Ais was standing on the river bank and had thick ropes coiled several times around her waist.
 
Ais was standing on the river bank and had thick ropes coiled several times around her waist.
   
The ropes extended out behind her, and were tied to the logs used to block the river flow and build the dam. Ais used her strength to take a step forward. According to the plan, the ropes would shift the logs, and unleash the water that was held back, and the water pressure would break the dam… That was how it should go. However, despite using all her strength and her entire face turning red, Ais couldn’t move forward.
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The ropes extended out behind her, and were tied to the logs used to block the river flow and build the dam.
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Ais used her strength to take a step forward.
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According to the plan, the ropes would shift the logs, and unleash the water that was held back, and the water pressure would break the dam… That was how it should go. However, despite using all her strength and her entire face turning red, Ais couldn’t move forward.
   
 
“A-Ais?”
 
“A-Ais?”
   
The moment Nonoeru looked at Ais worriedly, the ropes tied to Ais and the dam snapped loudly.
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The moment Nonoel looked at Ais worriedly, the ropes tied to Ais and the dam snapped loudly.
   
 
“Hyaa?”
 
“Hyaa?”
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Ais who was leaning forward with all her strength fell forward just like that. She steadied her footing with some effort and avoided falling onto her face, Ais saw that the ropes tied to her body had snapped and had a troubled face.
 
Ais who was leaning forward with all her strength fell forward just like that. She steadied her footing with some effort and avoided falling onto her face, Ais saw that the ropes tied to her body had snapped and had a troubled face.
   
“To think the ropes would snap. We made the dam too sturdy.”
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“To think the rope would snap. We made the dam too sturdy.”
   
Yuuki, who was flying on the air board, landed hastily.
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Yuuki, who was flying on the air hoverboard, landed hastily.
   
 
“Wait, what happened, Ais!?”
 
“Wait, what happened, Ais!?”
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Ais looked at her with a troubled expression.
 
Ais looked at her with a troubled expression.
   
“As you can see, the ropes snapped.”
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“As you can see, the rope snapped.”
   
“The ropes snapped, what should we do!? If we don’t break the dam soon, all the enemy forces will cross the river!”
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“The rope snapped, what should we do!? If we don’t break the dam soon, all the enemy forces will cross the river!”
 
“G-get the backup rope.”
 
“G-get the backup rope.”
   
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She stopped her comrades.
 
She stopped her comrades.
   
“We won’t make it even if we retie it with the backup ropes. If the ropes have the same toughness, it is very possible that they will snap again. If they snap again, we definitely won’t make it.”
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“We won’t make it even if we retie it with the backup ropes. If the ropes have the same toughness, it is very possible that it will snap again. If it snaps again, we definitely won’t make it.”
 
“T-then what should we do!?”
 
“T-then what should we do!?”
   
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Ais winked.
 
Ais winked.
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She might lose her life, but now was the crucial moment between victory and defeat. Ais acted as if she was at ease, forcing Nonoeru to make her decision.
 
She might lose her life, but now was the crucial moment between victory and defeat. Ais acted as if she was at ease, forcing Nonoeru to make her decision.
   
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“Yuuki, return to the battlefield immediately after the dam breaks. Everyone else stay put and wait for Onee-san and Naga’s instructions. Understand?”
 
“Yuuki, return to the battlefield immediately after the dam breaks. Everyone else stay put and wait for Onee-san and Naga’s instructions. Understand?”
   
The rest of the witches─ Yuuki, Jiiniasu, Eleonortha and Mimone nodded stiffly.
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The rest of the witches─ Yuuki, Genius, Elenortha, and Mimone nodded stiffly.
   
 
“Well then, let’s begin.”
 
“Well then, let’s begin.”
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The still lake water in the dam started rippling.
 
The still lake water in the dam started rippling.
Bubbles appeared and a wave surged. A flow could be seen, which turned into a whirlpool. The water around Ais seemed to have a will of its own, flowing rapidly downstream and slamming into the dam. Riding this wave, Ais bent her knees and straightened them explosively, her feet kicking the logs heavily. The logs cracked, and large amount of water flowed through the opening. Cracking noises could be heard all over the dam, and with a tremor, it collapsed under the weight of the water. Unable to resist the pressure of the water's flow, the dam broke into pieces.
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Bubbles appeared and a wave surged. A flow could be seen, which turned into a whirlpool. The water around Ais seemed to have a will of its own, flowing rapidly downstream and slamming into the dam.
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Riding this wave, Ais bent her knees and straightened them explosively, her feet kicking the logs heavily. The logs cracked, and large amount of water flowed through the opening. Cracking noises could be heard all over the dam, and with a tremor, it collapse under the weight of the water. Unable to resist the pressure of the water flow, the dam broke into pieces.
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With an ominous cracking noise, pieces of wood and splinters gushed downstream together with the wave. The water surging through the dam engulfed the shattered logs along with Ais’ body, flowing downstream mightily.
   
With an ominous cracking noise, pieces of wood and splinters gushed downstream together with the wave. The water surging through the dam engulfed the shattered logs along with Ais’ body, flowing downstream mightily. The sound of logs colliding with each other and the roar of the river flowing reverberated throughout the area. No matter how tough Ais’ body was, if she got caught in the stream with those logs, she wouldn’t come out of it unharmed.
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The sound of logs colliding with each other and the roar of the river flowing reverberated throughout the area. No matter how tough Ais’ body was, if she got caught in the stream with those logs, she wouldn’t come out of it unharmed.
   
 
“A-Ais!”
 
“A-Ais!”
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“I understand!”
 
“I understand!”
   
Yuuki ran towards the place she left her air board, jumped onto it, and began chanting her spell. Her air board floated straight up.
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Yuuki ran towards the place she left her air hoverboard, jumped onto it, and began chanting her spell. Her air board floated straight up.
   
 
“I’m leaving Ais to you─!”
 
“I’m leaving Ais to you─!”
   
Yuuki waved from the air, Mimone, Jiiniasu and Eleonortha waved in response.
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Yuuki waved from the air, Mimone, Genius, and Eleonortha waved in response.
   
 
“Leave it to us!”
 
“Leave it to us!”

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