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Kamen Twintail walked toward me, lending one of her shoulders to Aika, whose transformation had cancelled like mine. In her right hand, she was holding some kind of spray, probably the thing she had used to put out the fire.
 
Kamen Twintail walked toward me, lending one of her shoulders to Aika, whose transformation had cancelled like mine. In her right hand, she was holding some kind of spray, probably the thing she had used to put out the fire.
   
With a terrible scene like this, even if people realize there’s been a fight they shouldn’t get close for a while longer. I didn’t think the masquerade had been broken.
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With a disaster scene like this, even if people realize there’s been a fight none of them should get close to this place for a while longer. I don't think the masquerade had been broken.
   
 
“Aika, are you all right?”
 
“Aika, are you all right?”
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“...Are you trying to say it’s as flat as my forehead, you―――――――!!”
 
“...Are you trying to say it’s as flat as my forehead, you―――――――!!”
   
“Why, you are already full of energy~~~~~~! Then please help me put out the fires―!!”
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“Why, you are already full of energy[[User:Contradiction|Contradiction]] ([[User talk:Contradiction|talk]])! Then please help me put out the fires―!!”
   
 
“I can blow out the flame of your life if you want!!”
 
“I can blow out the flame of your life if you want!!”

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