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His fighting aura flowed in the shape of twintails from his head, fluttering softly in the wind. It had the radiance of the Elemera Orbs, the light of his life itself.
 
His fighting aura flowed in the shape of twintails from his head, fluttering softly in the wind. It had the radiance of the Elemera Orbs, the light of his life itself.
   
Numberless rays of light became two bunches, and lit up the great figure I was staring up at with color.
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Numberless rays of light had become two bunches, and lit up the great figure I was staring up at with color.
   
 
“Drag Guildy――in twintails!?”
 
“Drag Guildy――in twintails!?”
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I... was told I had the greatest Twintail Element under this star. I was told it was an element that didn’t by nature bud strongly in men. And then I put on the Tailgear, and became a twintail myself.
 
I... was told I had the greatest Twintail Element under this star. I was told it was an element that didn’t by nature bud strongly in men. And then I put on the Tailgear, and became a twintail myself.
   
But have I ever felt any pride in that? Haven’t I been ashamed of it?
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But did I ever feel any pride in that? Haven’t I been ashamed of it?
   
 
We have the same Twintail Element, but there’s such a difference in what we are ready to do. It might not be prudent right now, but I have so much respect for him I wouldn’t hesitate to bow.
 
We have the same Twintail Element, but there’s such a difference in what we are ready to do. It might not be prudent right now, but I have so much respect for him I wouldn’t hesitate to bow.

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