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In the eyes of that soldier who had crossed many worlds in his long history, the sight that made the scales balance even when his life was on the other pan was―was it a hairstyle?
 
In the eyes of that soldier who had crossed many worlds in his long history, the sight that made the scales balance even when his life was on the other pan was―was it a hairstyle?
   
Drag Guildy's strength was finally exhausted, and he sank to the ground on his knees.
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Drag Guildy had finally exhausted his strength, and he sank to the ground on his knees.
   
“U, ku... was the first sword a trap from the start...?”
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“U, ku... the first sword was a trap from the start...?”
   
 
“No, I thought of this on the spot... I’ve never tried it before. I can’t do this fiddling little strategy stuff, but, you know―I’m protecting two people, I have to have two swords, don’t I?”
 
“No, I thought of this on the spot... I’ve never tried it before. I can’t do this fiddling little strategy stuff, but, you know―I’m protecting two people, I have to have two swords, don’t I?”

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